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北京中考英语作文范文分类精华
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中考作文集锦
1.作文写作思路
中考常考问题及形式:
1.中考作文常见文体:
夹叙夹议
2.中考作文常见形式:
写回信;中英提示写作,话题类作文。
写作原则:
1231原则(1句问候,2句概括来信中的问题,3条建议及建议原因,1句祝福)
3.写作能力之外的得分因素:
字迹、分段
4.写作注意以下几点:
避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
注意长短句交错,几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用(注意:
应突出主题句;长句子并非越长越好)。
【阅卷关注】
阅卷关注哪几点——
一、要点:
全部图片或问题(要点决定分/语言准确);
二、单词:
提示词语全用上+单词拼写(字数达标/标点符号和大小写/fourteen等数字);
三、语法:
高级(多用句型/适当加点谚语)+语法出错(三单、时态、避免Chinglish);
四、卷面:
书写规范(过渡词可使上下文连贯)+不要求漂亮但要求工整。
作文分类击破
【一、写人记事类】
(感恩/感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等)
【01参考范文----适用于感恩/感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等:
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Mylifeinmiddleschoolwillcometotheendsoon.Duringthepastthreeyears,myEnglishteachergavemesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforgether.
IwasnotgoodatEnglish,ItriedmybesttolearnitbutIcouldn’tgetgoodgrades,soIdecidedtogiveitup.MyEnglishteacherknewthat,shenotonlyencouragedmetogoonlearningbutalsohelpedmewithmyEnglishafterclass.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogress.
IwasmovedbyherandIwasreallythankfultoher.NowIfeelmoreconfidentthanbefore.I’msureIcanlearnEnglishverywellinthefuture.
【02参考范文----适用于难忘的学校活动,、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等:
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Duringthethreeyears,ourschoolhasheldvariousactivities,amongwhichtheactivityofclimbingXiangshanleavesmethedeepestmemory.
Lastterm,myclassmatesandIhadaschooltriptoXiangshanPark.There,weweredividedintogroupsandthefirstgroupthattoppedthemountainwouldwinabigprize.Ourgrouptriedourbesttoclimbasquicklyaspossible.ButsoonIfeltdizzyandwasoutofbreath.Noticingthis,myteammatescametomeimmediately.SomeofthemgavemecandiessothatIcouldgetmoreenergy.OtherscarriedthebagformesothatIcouldclimbthemountaineasily…“Youcandoit!
”everyoneencouragedme.Atthatmoment,Ifeltdeeplymovedandreallypowerful.Atlast,wewerethefirsttotopthemountain.
Thisactivitynotonlygaveusachancetokeepourbodyfitandenjoythebeautifulscenery,butalsoletmefeelthepowerofteamwork.Aunitedgroupcanbringuswarmthandstrengthandcanleadustosuccess.
【03参考范文----感恩父母:
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There’snodoubtthatparentshavegivenmealotsinceIwasborn.Withtheircare,Igrowuphappily.SoIthinkitisnecessarytodosomethingspecialforthemtoshowmygratitude.
Bothofmyparentslovemusic.SoitwouldbeagreatideatobuyawonderfulCDforthem.LastSunday,Iwenttoabookstoreandchoseoneamongthetop10.Whilewewerehavingdinnertogether,IplayedtheCD.Itwasbeautiful.Withgreatjoy,theygavemeawarmhugandabigsmile.Ifeltverysweet.
IwasreallyproudthatIdidsomethingformyparents.Theirsmileswerethebestencouragementforme.Imadeupmymindtodothingslikethismoreoften.
【04参考范文----帮助他人、志愿活动:
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Ithinkhelpingothersisimportantandnecessary.Takingpartinvolunteerworkisoneofthegreatestwaystogiveahandtothosewhoneedhelp.AndIlikeitverymuch.
IrememberIhelpedtheoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shomelastSaturday.First,Icleanedtheroomandthewindowsforthembecauseitwasnotconvienientforthemtodosuchthins.What’smore,Itoldthemsomeinterestingstories,sangsomeEnglishsongsforthemandtheymovedtotears.Whenitwastimetosaygoodbye,Ihuggedthemandpromisedtoseethemagain.
Everyonemayhavetroubleinlifeandourlittlekindactcanmakeabigdifference
intheirlife.Infact,helpingothersishelpingourselves.Iwilldothesameinthefuturebecauseitcanbringmeandotherpeoplehappiness.
【05参考范文----喜欢的hobby、活动:
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Itisgoodtolearnaboutyourschoolactivities.NowI’lltellyouaboutmine.
Atmyschoolwehavemanyfunactivitiestotakepartin.Wehaveswimming,basketball,badminton,andpingpong.Myfavoriteactivityisbasketball.Iplaywithmyfriendseverydayafterschool.Basketballisateamsportwhereteam-matespasstheballtoeachothertothrowitintoahoopforpoints.Theteamwiththemostpointsattheendofthegamewins.Inbasketballitisgoodtobetallbecauseitiseasiertoscorepoints.
Iliketoplaybasketballbecauseitisateamsportanditisalsoagoodwaytogetexercise.Basketballisalsoagoodgametolearnhowtoworkwellwithothers.
【06参考范文----Hobby、读书类:
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IhavegreatinterestinreadingmagazinesbecauseIlikereadingmanykindsofarticlesinthem,suchstories,news,science,jokesandsoon.Thestoriesgivemelifelessons,thejokesmakemelaughandthenewskeepmeknowingwhathapensaroundme.Icangetlotsofinformationaswellasenjoyalotofbeautifulpicturesinthemagazines.
Ienjoyreadingmagazinesbecausetheycannotonlyhelpmestudybetterandbutalsomakemerelaxedandhappyeveryday.
【二、给予建议类】
(一句问候、两句问题)
第一段:
很高兴收到来信
针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受
主动提出给别人建议
第二段:
3条具体建议及原因
第三段:
提出希望和祝愿
开头句:
表达同情理解+主动提建议
IunderstandyourfeelingsbecauseIoncehadthesimilarproblemasyoudonow.
It’sverycommonforstudentstodosth.andmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.
Letme offer you some useful advice.
Here’smyadvice.
Mysuggestionsareasfollows.
建议类句型:
•Youaresupposedtodo....
•You'dbetterdo....
•Whynot/don'tyoudo....
•It'sagoodideatodo....
•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...
结尾句:
•IhopewhatIsaidcanbeofsomehelptoyou.
•Justhaveatry.I’mlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou!
•Tryyourbest,andyou'llmakegreatprogress!
【07学习类----参考范文:
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DearLucy,
I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.Don’tworrytoomuch.It’sverycommonforstudentstodislikememorizingandmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.Here’smyadvice.
Firstofall,youhadbetterpreviewthenewlessonsandwritedownthedifficultpointsbeforelessons,whichcanmakeyoubecomeinterestedinwhattheteacherssayinclass.What’smore(Besides),youshouldlistencarefullyandtrytotakepartintheclassactivities.You’llfindthatEnglishandhistoryarenotasboringasyouthink.Lastbutnotleast,youalsoneedtoreviewthelessonsregularlyafterclass.Inthisway,youcanunderstandbetterandmemorizemorequickly.Ifyoustillfeelunhappy,whynothaveatalkwithyourteacherandaskforhelp?
Ireallyhopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakegreatprogresswithyourstudy.
Yours,
ZhangFang
【08解决与父母矛盾----参考范文:
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DearAlice,
Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangeton/alongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.
Firstofall,whenfacingthiskindofsituation,it'sveryimportantforyoutokeepcalminsteadofarguingwithyourparents,whichcanonlymakethingsworse.What'smore,tosolvetheproblems,you'dbettermakeaschedule,setupagoalforeachdayandshowthemtoyourparents.Besides,wearesupposedtotrytohaveaheart-to-heartcommunicationwithourparentsinordertogettheirunderstandingandsupport.Lastbutnotleast,whynotaskyourteacherforhelpinsteadofarguingwithyourparents?
Yourteachermayhavesomegoodideas.
IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.
【09运动/健康类----参考范文:
】
Allofuswanttobehealthy.Butsomeofthestudents/peopleoftenhaveacold.Wesometimeshaveafeverandfeeltired.Inordertohaveahealthybody,wecandomanythings.
Firstofall,weshouldpayattentiontoourdietormeals.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetabletokeepourselveshealthyandstrong.What’smore,weshouldoftenwashourhandsandopenthewindowstokeeptheairintheroomfresh.Then,weneedenoughsleeporrest.Stayinguptoolateisbadforourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,it'salsoagoodhabitforustodomoresports,suchasplayingballgames,running,swimmingandsoon.Becauseitcannotonlyhelpuskeepfitbutalsoimproveourhealthagainstillness.
Inaword,ifwealldothesethings,Ibelievewewillhaveastrongbody.Sowhynotfindsomefriendstodoexerciseandhavefuntogether?
Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife.
【三、环保类】
【10治理空气污染----参考范文:
】
Theairpollutionisworseandworsetoday.Notonlydoesitaffecttheplacewelive,italsohasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.Therefore,it’stimeforustopaymoreattentiontoit.
Thefirstthingwecandoistotakebusesorridebikesinsteadofdrivingprivatecars.Ithelpstoreducethedirtygasproducedbythecars.What’smore,wecanplantmoretreesandflowersbecausetheycanprovideuswithmorefreshair.Lastbutnotleast,ourgovernmentcanalsotakeactionstopreventfactoriesfromproducingtoomuchsmoke.
Infact,eventhesimplesteverydayactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.Ibelieveaslongaswetryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment,wecanmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.
【11低碳生活----参考范文:
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Nowadays,anewlifestylecalledlowcarbonlifeisspreadingeverycornerofourcountrywhichmeansthereislowenergyandnowaste.
Low-carbonlifeisgoodforeveryone.Tohelpwiththeenvironment,Ihavesomeideas.First,wehadbetterwalkorrideabiketoschoolinsteadoftakingacar.Second,wehadbetternotuseplasticbagsanymore.Noonecanstandthe"whitepollution".So,itiswisetousebagswhichcanbereusedagainandagain.Third,weshouldtrytousethingsthatcanberecycledandweshouldreusebooksaslongaspossible.What'smore,weshouldneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroomandturnoffthetapintime.
Ithinkit’sourdutytolivealow-carbonlife.Andeventhesimplestactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.Allinall,ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment,Ibelievetheearthwillbeabetterplace.Let‘sdoitnow.
【四、介绍北京类】
【12介绍北京旅游----参考范文:
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