FiveParagraph Essay Sample五段式论文实例.docx
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FiveParagraphEssaySample五段式论文实例
Five-ParagraphEssaySample
TheHazardsofMoviegoing
ByJohnLangan
FromCollegeWritingSkillswithReadings
Introductoryparagraph
(Thesis)
Iamamoviefanatic.WhenfriendswanttoknowwhatpicturewontheOscarin1980orwhoplayedthepolicechiefinJaws,theyaskme.Myfriends,though,havestoppedaskingmeifIwanttogoouttothemovies.Theproblemsingettingtothetheater,thetheateritself,andthebehaviorofsomepatronsareallreasonswhyIoftenwaitforamovietoshowuponTV.
Firstsupportingparagraph
Firstofall,justgettingtothetheaterpresentsdifficulties.LeavingahomeequippedwithaTVandavideorecorderisn'tanattractiveideaonahumid,cold,orrainynight.Eveniftheweathercooperates,thereisstillathirty-minutedrivetothetheaterdownacongestedhighway,followedbythehassleoflookingforaparkingspace.Andthentherearethelines.Afterhookingyourselftotheendofahumanchain,youworryaboutwhethertherewillbeenoughtickets,whetheryouwillgetseatstogether,andwhethermanypeoplewillsneakintothelineaheadofyou.
Secondsupportingparagraph
Onceyouhavemadeittotheboxofficeandgottenyourtickets,youareconfrontedwiththeproblemsofthetheateritself.Ifyouareinoneoftherun-downoldertheaters,youmustadjusttothemustysmellofseldom-cleanedcarpets.Escapedspringslurkinthefadedplushorcrackedleatherseats,andhalftheseatsyousitinseemlooseortiltedsothatyousitatastrangeangle.Andwhetherthetheaterisoldornew,itwillhavefloorsthatseemtobecoatedwithrubbercement.Bytheendofamovie,shoesalmosthavetobepriedoffthefloorbecausetheyhavebecomesealedtoadeadlycompoundofspilledsodaorhardeningbubblegum.
Thirdsupportingparagraph
Someofthepatronsareevenmoreofaproblemthanthetheateritself.Littlekidsraceupanddowntheaisles,usuallyingigglingpacks.Teenagerstrytoimpresstheirfriendsbytalkingbacktothescreen,whistling,andmakingwhattheyconsidertobehilariousnoises.Adultsactasiftheywereathomeintheirownlivingroomsandcommentloudlyontheagesofthestarsorwhymoviesaren'tasgoodanymore.Andpeopleofallagescrinklecandywrappers,stickgumontheirseats,anddroppopcorntubsorcupsofcrushediceandsodaonthefloor.Theyalsocoughandburp,squirmendlesslyintheirseats,fileoutforrepeatedtripstotherestroomsorconcessionstand,andelbowyououtofthearmrestoneithersideofyourseat.
Concludingparagraph
Afterarrivinghomefromthemoviesonenight,IdecidedthatIwasnotgoingtobeamoviegoeranymore.Iwastiredoftheproblemsinvolvedingettingtothemoviesanddealingwiththetheateritselfandsomeofthepatrons.ThenextdayIarrangedtohavecableTVserviceinstalledinmyhome.Imaynowseemoviesabitlaterthanotherpeople,butI'llbemorerelaxedwatchingboxofficehitsinthecomfortofmyownlivingroom.
OutlineforaFive-ParagraphEssay
Title:
____________________
I.Introduction
A.Introductorystatement
B.Thesisstatement:
____________________
II.Body
A.FirstSupportingIdea(TopicSentence):
____________________
1.____________________
2.____________________
3.____________________
B.SecondSupportingIdea(TopicSentence):
____________________
1.____________________
2.____________________
3._________________________
C.ThirdSupportingIdea(TopicSentence):
____________________
1.____________________
2.____________________
3.____________________
III.Conclusion
A.Closingstatement
B.Restatethesis:
____________________
SampleOutlineforaFive-ParagraphEssay
Thisisinrelationto"TheHazardsofMoviegoing"
Title:
TheHazardsofMoviegoing
I.Introduction
A.Introductorystatement
B.Thesisstatement:
IlikewatchingmoviesbutIpreferwatchingthemathome.
II.Body
A.FirstSupportingIdea(TopicSentence):
justgettingtothetheaterpresentsdifficulties
1.badweather
2.longdriveandlimitedparkingspace
3.longwaitingtobuyticket
B.SecondSupportingIdea(TopicSentence):
facingtheproblemsofthetheateritself
1.oldtheater'sproblemssuchassmellycarpet,worn-outseat,etc
2.newtheater'sproblemssuchassmallersize,noisefromnextmovietheater,etc
3.bothfloorswillberubber-likedirtyattheendofthemovie
C.ThirdSupportingIdea(TopicSentence):
Someofthepatronsareannoying
1.badbehaviorsuchasrunning,talkingloud,etc
2.humannoiseanddisturbance
III.Conclusion
A.Closingstatement
B.Restatethesis:
Iprefertowatchmoviesathomewhereitiscomfortable,cleanandsafe.
MyJobinanApplePlant
ByJohnLangan
FromEnglishSkillswithReadings
Introductoryparagraph
(Thesis)
Inthecourseofworkingmywaythroughschool,IhavetakenmanyjobsIwouldratherforget.Ihavespentninehoursadayliftingheavyautomobileandtruckbatteriesofftheendofanassemblybelt.Ihaveriskedthelossofeyesandfingersworkingapunchpressinatextilefactory.Ihaveservedasawardaideinamentalhospital,helpingcareforbrain-damagedmenwhowouldbreakintoviolentfitsatunexpectedmoments.Butnoneofthesejobswasasdreadfulasmyjobinanappleplant.Theworkwasphysicallyhard;thepaywaspoor;and,mostofall,theworkingconditionsweredismal.
Firstsupportingparagraph
Firstofall,thejobmadeenormousdemandsonmystrengthandenergy.Fortenhoursanight,Itookcartonsthatrolleddownametaltrackandstackedthemontowoodenskidsinatractor-trailer.Eachcartoncontainedtwelveheavycansorbottlesofapplejuice.Acartonshotdownthetrackabouteveryfifteenseconds.IoncefiguredoutthatIwasliftinganaverageoftwelvetonsofapplejuiceeverynight.Whenatruckwasalmostfilled,Iormypartnerhadtodragfourteenbulkywoodenskidsintotheemptytrailernearbyandthensetupaddedsectionsoftheheavymetaltracksothatwecouldstartroutingcartonstothebackoftheemptyvan.Whileoneofusdidthat,theotherperformedthestackingworkoftwomen.
Secondsupportingparagraph
Iwouldnothavemindedthedifficultyoftheworksomuchifthepayhadnotbeensopoor.Iwaspaidtheminimumwageofthattime,twodollarsanhour,plustheminimumofanickelextraforworkingthenightshift.Becauseofthelowsalary,Ifeltcompelledtogetasmuchovertimepayaspossible.Everythingovereighthoursanightwastime-and-a-half,soItypicallyworkedtwelvehoursanight.OnFridayIwouldsometimesworkstraightthroughuntilSaturdayatnoon--eighteenhours.Iaveragedoversixtyhoursaweekbutdidnottakehomemuchmorethanonehundreddollars.
Thirdsupportingparagraph
Butevenmorethanthelowpay,whatupsetmeaboutmyappleplantjobwastheworkingconditions.Ourhumorlesssupervisorcaredonlyabouthisproductionrecordforeachnightandtriedtokeeptheassemblylinemovingatabreakneckpace.DuringworkIwaslimitedtotwoten-minutebreaksandanunpaidhalfhourforlunch.Mostofmytimewasspentoutsideonthetruckloadingdockinnear-zero-degreetemperatures.Thesteelfloorsofthetruckswerelikeice;thequicklypenetratingcoldmademyfeetfeellikestone.IhadnosharedinterestswiththemanIloadedcartonswith,andsoIhadtoworkwithoutjobcompanionship.
Concludingparagraph
Istayedonthejobforfivemonths,hatingallthewhilethedifficultyofthework,thepoormoney,andtheconditionsunderwhichIworked.BythetimeIquit,Iwasdeterminednevertodosuchdegradingworkagain.
The3KeystoSuccess
Peoplearoundtheworldhavemanydifferentgoalsthattheywanttoaccomplishduringtheirlifetime,butallthesegoalsrelatetoonething:
tohaveahappyandsuccessfullife.Ofcourse,thisgoalisnoteasytoachieve,butifyoudevelopthefollowingqualities,youwillhaveaneasiertime:
havingapositiveattitude,alwaysbeingrespectfulandbeingactiveinthesociety.Withthesethreecharactertraits,youaremostlikelytoaccomplishwhatyouwantto.
Havingapositiveattitudeisprobablythemostimportantofthethreetraits.Theessenceofhavingpositiveattitudeisoptimism.Oneofthemostimportantthingsinlifeistostayhappy.Thismayseemsomewhatdifficult,butyouwillsoonrealisethatitisworthwhile.Whenfacedwithadifficultsituation,optimisticpeoplewillneverpanic,makingiteasiertothinkupsolutions.Supposesomeoneisdiagnosedwithamortaldiseaselikecancer.Normallythiscertainpersonwouldpanicandhewouldbedepressedfortherestofthetime.Optimisticpeoplewouldalwayslookonthebrightside,andmighteventrytoignorethefactthattheyaresick.Thatway,theycouldjustgoonwiththeirordinarylife.Determinationisanotherpartofhavingapositiveattitude.Itmayhaveaconnectiontobeingoptimistic,buttheyareactuallyentirelydifferentcharactertraits.Beingdeterminedwouldmeanthatonceyousetyoursightsonaccomplishingagoal,thereisnothinganybodyoranythingcandotostopyou.Thelastpartofhavingapositiveattitudeistoencourageothers.Ifyourfriendhasanopinionaboutsomethingyouaretalkingabout,andyouthinkitdoesn’tmakeanysense,don’trejecttheiropinion.Afterall,everyonehasadifferentpointofview.Also,ifyourfriendwantstoaccomplishagoal,encouragethemandtellthemthatyoubelieveinthem.Giventhesefewreasons,youcanseethathavingapositiveattitudeisanimportantqualitytohave.
Respectisanotheroneofthekeytraitsthatcanhelpyouleadasuccessfullife.Thereisanunlimitedamountofwaysofbeingarespectfulperson.Beingrespectfulcanme
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