高考作文指导PPT文件格式下载.ppt
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3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
DearMr.Hurst,Yours,LiHua,2,第一步:
一审(审题)1.审体裁:
书信格式(电子邮件)2.审人称:
第一,二人称3.审时态(现在时、过去时):
一般现在时、将来时4.审结构(段落):
Para.1开头:
Para.2正文:
Para.3结尾:
3,02第二步:
二列(列提纲/要点,适当增加细节)Para.1开头:
(1)你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校“英语文化节”话剧drama比赛。
OurperformanceHamletwilltakepartintheDramaCompetitioninourschoolsEnglishCulturalfestivalnextmonth.
(2)写信给外教并附上节目录像,请他给予你相关的指导(建议)Iamwritingtoyou.Ihopethatyoucangiveussomeguidance(advice).,4,Para.2正文:
(1)为什么要他指导(建议)YouknowitismyfirsttimetotakepartintheEnglishDramaCompetition
(2)希望指导的内容Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaregoodenough.Iamfacingwiththeproblems.Iameagertogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceaboutthem?
(3)希望得到他的指导,相信指导后的成果同时说明附上的视频。
Isincerelyhopethatyoucangivemesomeguidance.Ihavetheconfidencethatwecanimproveourperformancewithyourguidance(advice).Pleasefindthevideoontheattachment.,5,6,ChongRenNo.1MiddleSchool,Para.3结尾:
结束语(谢意,意愿)Thankyouforyourkindnessandlookingforwardtoyourreply.,03第三步:
三连(连句成篇),7,8,Para.1:
OurperformanceHamletwilltakepartintheDramaCompetitioninourschoolsEnglishCulturalfestivalnextmonth.Iamwritingtoyou.Ihopethatyoucangiveussomeguidance(advice).InordertotellyouthatourperformanceHamletwilltakepartintheDramaCompetitioninourschoolsEnglishCulturalfestivalnextmonth,Iamwritingtoyouandhopethatyoucangiveussomeguidance(advice).,Para.2:
YouknowitismyfirsttimetotakepartintheEnglishDramaCompetition.Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaregoodenough.Iamfacedwiththeproblems.Iameagertogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceaboutthem?
Isincerelyhopethatyoucangivemesomeguidance.Ihavetheconfidencethatwecanimproveourperformancewithyourguidance(advice).Pleasefindthevideoontheattachment.Asyouknow,itismyfirsttimetotakepartintheEnglishDramaCompetition.Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaregoodenough.Iamfacingwiththeproblems,SoIameagertogetyourhelp.wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceaboutthem?
Finally,IsincerelyhopethatyoucangivemesomeguidanceandIhavetheconfidencethatwecanimproveourperformancewithyourguidance(advice).Pleasefindthevideoontheattachment.,9,10,Para.3:
Thankyouforyourkindnessandlookingforwardtoyourreply.,第四步:
四润(润色修正的方式)1.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力
(1)Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaregoodenough.Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaresuitable.
(2)Iamfacedwiththeproblems,soIameagertogetyourhelp.Facedwiththeproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.Encounteredwiththeproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.,11,2.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Iamfacedwiththeproblems,soIameagertogetyourhelp.Facedwiththeproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.,12,3.尝试多样化表达方式,如:
强调句,名词性从句,定语从句等
(1)强调句ItismyfirsttimetotakepartintheEnglishDramaCompetition.ItistheEnglishDramaCompetitionthatismyfirsttimetotakepartin.
(2)宾语从句Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaresuitable.Isincerelyhopethatyoucangivemesomeguidance(3)同位语从句Ihavetheconfidencethatwecanimproveourperformancewithyourguidance(advice).,13,05第五步:
五定(定稿)DearMr.Hurst,InordertotellyouthatourperformanceHamletwilltakepartintheDramaCompetitioninourschoolsEnglishCulturalfestivalnextmonth,Iamwritingtoyouandhopethatyoucangiveussomeguidance.Asyouknow,itistheEnglishDramaCompetitionthatismyfirsttimetotakepartin.Iamnotsurewhetherthelanguage,clothing,lightandsoundeffectaresuitable.Facedwiththeproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.Sowouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceaboutthem?
Finally,IsincerelyhopethatyoucangivemesomeguidanceandIhavetheconfidencethatwecanimproveourperformancewithyourguidance.Pleasefindthevideoontheattachment.Thankyouforyourkindnessandlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,14,五步法:
第一步:
一审(审题)审体裁、审人称、审时态、审结构第二步:
二列(列提纲/要点,适当增加细节)第三步:
三连(连句成篇):
使用必要第四步:
四润(润色修正的方式)第五步:
五定(定稿),15,再啰嗦几句,16,1.必须分段分层。
一般为三段,第一段引题,一般两至三句。
第二段为主体,一般六至七句。
第三段为收尾段,一般一至两句。
(三段十句百词),2.需要用一些必要的过渡词或短像tobeginwith(首先),besides/whatsmore/inaddition/additionally(此外),lastbutnotleast(最后但不是不重要),asfarasIamconcerned(在我看来).foronething,foranother.,18,3.要合适地运用句型,好的句型4个左右,多了无用,少了过于简单,得不到高分。
像itisadjforsbtodosth,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoutakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Iholdthefirmbeliefthat从句only+状语(部分倒装),定语从句,强调句,非谓语等。
19,4.注意时态和人称一定要正确,否则会降档次,RenNo.1MiddleSchool,20,5.力争用英语的表达方式,避免changlish(中式英语),尤其在行文语序上,大纲要求用纯正正确的英语表达如:
在过去的十年里,我们国家发生了巨大的变化。
切不可翻译成:
Inthelasttwentyyears,ourcountryhastakenplacegreatchanges.应该翻译为:
Inthelasttwentyyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountry.,6.要用恰当的词汇或短语,这样更专业更能打动老师,如环境一词environment,这样的词较长,但更专业,容易打动老师。
这样的词和短语有Benefit(利益,好处),awareness(意识)beofbenefittosb/sth,beneficial,bebeneficialtosb,haveabetterunderstandingoftraditionalChineseculture,broadenourhorizon,ChongRenNo.1MiddleSchool,22,7.卷面一定要整洁,干净,字迹要清楚,摆整齐。
ChongRenNo.1MiddleSchool,23,
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