浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题三概要写作.docx
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专题三概要写作
Writing1
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
YesterdayMattwassick.IpickedupArchiefromthesitterandEloisefromschoolanddecidedtoruntoTargetforafewthings.Ihadhopedtobeinandoutquickly.
Ifoundalinewithjustonepersonaheadofmeandbeganorganizingmyitemsontheconveyor.Afterplacingmyitems,Ilookeduptoseethatthepersonaheadofmewasanelderlywoman.Shewaspayingforheritemswithchangeandwantedtopurchaseeachseparately.Iwasfrustratedwiththiswomanandtheinconvenienceshehadplacedonme.
ButthenIwatchedtheyoungemployeewiththiswoman.Iwatchedhimhelphercountherchange,eversosoftlytakingitfromhershakinghands.Whensheaskedifshehadenoughtobuyareusablebag,hetoldhershedidandwenttwolinesovertogetoneforherandthenrepackagedheritems.Neveroncewasthisemployeeangry.Hewasnothingbutpatientandkind.
AsIwaswatchinghim,IsawthatEloisewastoo.Shewasstandingnexttothewoman,watchingtheemployeecountthechange.IrealizedIhadn’tbeeninconveniencedatall.Thatmydaughterwasinsteadwitnessingkindnessandpatienceandbeingtaughtthisvaluablelessonbyacompletestranger.
Whenthewomanwasfinished,theemployeebeganringingupmyitemsandthankedmeformypatience.Ithenthankedhimforteachinguspatienceandkindnessbyhistreatmentofthatelderlywoman.WhenhewasfinishedIpushedmycartthroughthestoretryingtofindthemanager.Iwantedhertoknowoftheemployee’skindnessandpatienceandhowmuchitmeanttome.Aftertrackingherdownandsharingthestorywithher,weleftTargetwithacartfullofconsumableitems,butwhatismore,aheartfullofgratitudeforsuchaninvaluablelesson.
IfyouareeverintheGlendaleTarget,giveIshmaelasmileandanod.Theworldcouldusemorepeoplelikehim.
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【写作指导】
要写好记叙文的概要,先要找到以下两个问题的答案:
(1)谁做了什么?
(2)结果如何?
如果是夹叙夹议文,还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。
就该题而言,本文的概要应该包含:
作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示,最后用自己的语言串联起来。
【参考范文】
Thepassagetellsusanexperienceofshopping.(要点1)Oneday,theauthorwithtwochildrenwenttoTargetforshopping.(要点2)Whilewaitinginline,shefoundanoldladywastroublesome,buttheyoungemployeetreatedherpatiently.(要点3)Seeingthat,theauthorwastouchedbyhiskindnessandpatienceandshethoughtherchildrenwouldlearnalotfromthisexperience.(要点4)
Writing2
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Sugarsarepopularintheprocessedfoodindustrybecausetheyaddtaste,colourandthicknesstofoodproducts.Thestudieshaveshownthatsugarscanprovideasourceofenergy.Thebodybreaksdownthesugarintosimpleformsthatcanbereadilyusedinthebody.Buttoomuchsugarcancontributetohealthproblemslikeobesityandtoothdisease.
Havingtoomuchsugarisnottheonlyreasonforobesityorbeingoverweight,butitdoesaddtotheamountofkilojoulesinfood.Eatingtoomuchofanyfood,withoutdoingenoughexercise,willcauseyoutobecomeoverweight.
GovernmentsintheUnitedStatesandUnitedKingdomarewagingawaronsugarintheinterestsofpublichealth.Bothcountriesclaimthattheoverconsumptionofsugarbymuchofthepopulationisharmfultopeople’shealth.OnThursday,theU.S.governmentissuednewdietaryguidelinesthatstronglyrecommendpeoplereceivelessthan10percentoftheirdailycalorieintakefromaddedsugar.Onthesameday,BritishPrimeMinisterDavidCameronsaidhehasnotruledouttheideaofataxonsugartoencourageconsumerstobuyfoodwithreducedlevelsofthesweet.PoliticiansintheU.K.aredebatinghowareductionintheintakeofsugarcouldhelpreduceBritain’srisingratesofobesity.
TheAmericanandBritishgovernmentsbothrefertoastudyconductedinMexicothatshowedataxonsugary,carbonateddrinksledtoareductioninconsumption.ThetaxwascarriedoutonJanuary1,2014andpurchasesofthetaxeddrinkswentdownby12percentbyDecemberofthatyear.Salesofmineralwaterincreasedby4percentoverthesameperiod.Analternativetotaxingsugareddrinksistoreducethelevelofsugarinthem.ResearchersatQueenMaryUniversityinLondonsaythatreducingthesugarcontentinsugar-sweeteneddrinksby40percentoverfiveyearscouldpreventonemillioncasesofobesityintheU.K.Researcherssaypeoplemightnotevennoticethechanges.
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【写作指导】
本文是一篇说明文,讲述了人体摄入过多糖分会影响健康。
英国和美国政府都号召人们不要摄入过多糖分,甚至考虑通过增收糖税来减少糖的食用。
读懂原材料是写好概要的关键,在理解原文的基础上,用尽可能简洁的语言集中概括原文的主要观点及思想,但不能简单重复原文,同时,对各要点的概括要详略得当,结构严谨,表达明确,语义准确简练,避免空泛、含混之词。
【参考范文】
Sugarisusefulforourbody,buttoomuchsugardoesharmtoourhealth,whichprobablyleadstohealthproblems.(要点1)Asforthis,governmentsintheUnitedStatesandUnitedKingdomcallonpeoplenottotakeintoomuchsugar.(要点2)BritishPrimeMinisterevenplannedtoputataxonsugar.(要点3)Astudyshowedthatthetaxonsugarhelpedreducetheconsumptionofsugar.(要点4)Researchersalsothinkreducingthesugarcontentslightlywouldnotbenoticed.(要点5)
Writing3
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Dietershavelongswornthatgrapefruithelpsthemloseweight.TheGrapefruitDiet,alsocalledtheHollywoodDiet,datesbacktothe1930sandhasahostofcelebrityfansincludingsingerKylieMinogue.Itinvolveshavinggrapefruitorgrapefruitjuicewitheverymealwhilecuttingbackoncalories.
Now,scientistsarebeginningtobelievethem.
Astudyhasfoundthatdrinkinggrapefruitjuicewheneatingfattyfoodlowerstheamountofweightputonbyuptoafifth.
Theresearchalsosuggestedthatgrapefruitcouldbeasgoodasprescriptiondrugsatkeepingbloodsugarlevelsundercontrol—akeypartofmanagingdiabetes.
Theexperimentswereconductedonmice—butresearcherssaytheresultsjustifystudiesonhumans.ProfessorJosephNapoli,oftheUniversityofCalifornia,Berkeley,said,“Weseeallsortsofscamsaboutnutrition.Buttheseresults,basedoncontrolledexperiments,warrantfurtherstudyofthepotentialhealth-promotingpropertiesofgrapefruitjuice.”
Theresearchersfoundthatwhenthemicewerefedfattyfoodforthreemonths,thosegivengrapefruitjuicetodrinkgainedupto18percentlessweightthanthosegivenwater.
Theyalsohadlowerbloodsugarandinsulinlevels—despiteeatingthesamenumberofcaloriesanddoingthesameamountofexerciseasthemicewhodrankwater.Infact,grapefruitjuicewasasgoodatcontrollinginsulinasthewidelyuseddiabetesdrugmetformin,thejournalPLOSONEreports.
However,thefruitjuiceonlyhadaneffectonweightwhentheanimalsatefattyfood.Theresearcherssaidtheydidnotknowhowgrapefruitstopsthepoundsfrompilingon.
SpokesmanMarietteAbrahams,adietician,saiduntilthenitistooearlyforpeopletotrygrapefruitdiets.“Grapefruitshouldbepartofahealthybalanceddiet,butitshouldn’tbethefocusofthediet,”shesaid.
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【写作指导】
本文是一篇科普类说明文,主要介绍了葡萄柚的减肥功效。
第一段介绍了葡萄柚用于减肥的历史背景;第二至七段的内容是:
研究表明,葡萄柚对人的身体健康有很多好处;第八段介绍了葡萄柚汁减肥的局限性;最后一段对葡萄柚饮食提出了不同的意见。
考生在作答时,应注意条理清晰,避免混乱性语句;语言简洁,要点全面,可将原文中涉及的人名、地名等非重要信息忽略,以节约词数。
另外,考生在作答时应注意语言的准确性和语句间的衔接性。
【参考范文】
DietersthinkgrapefruitjuicehelpsloseweightandtheGrapefruitDietortheHollywoodDietwasapopularwayoflosingweightinthe1930s.(要点1)Theexperimentsconductedonmice,whichcanalsoapplytohumans,showsthatgrapefruitjuicebenefitsthelossofweightandthecontrolofbloodsugarandinsulinlevels.(要点2)However,thefruitonlytakeseffectwhentheanimalseatfattyfood.(要点3)Theoppositeviewdoesn’tthinkeatinggrapefruitcanbethefocusofthediet.(要点4)
Writing4
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Infact,greatwhitesharksarenotwhite.Thenameisthoughttohavecomeaboutbecausethesesharksarewhiteinonecircumstancewhentheyarelyingdeadonthedeckofaboat.
Itwouldbemorepropertocallthisspeciesthe“blackshark”.Theyhaveadarkuppersurface,whichmeanstheirprey(猎物)aredifficulttospotthemapproachingfromthedarkdepths.
Speakingofprey,theyhavebeenrecordeddiningoutonawiderangeofspecies,includingwhales,squid(鱿鱼),turtlesandoccasionallypenguins.
“Ifyoumakealistofeverythingthat’sbeenfoundinawhiteshark’sstomach,you’dgetavarietyofthings,”saysmarinebiologistGeorgeBurgessoftheUniversityofFloridainGainesville.Butwhat’sclearisthattheirtasteschangeastheyage.
“Theyarealmostjustfish-eatersuntiltheyare7,8,9feetlong,”saysBurgess.“Astheygetbigger,theywillbegintostarteatingmammalpreyiftheygettheopportunity.”
Theseoldersharkspreferseals,sealionsandwalruses.Whentheystrikefrombelow,atspeed,whitesharkscanclearthesurfacebyasmuchas3m.
Tolocatetheirprey,whitesharksusealmosteverytrickinthebook.“Theyhaveaseriesofsenses,”saysBurgess.
Ina1963study,researchershungaspeakerovertheedgeoftheirboatoffMiamitoseeiftheycouldattractsharkswithsound.
Nogreatwhitesharkswerespottedinthisstudy,butit’sreasonabletoassumetheyhavegoodhearingtoo.
Asagreatwhitesharkgetsclosertoitsprey,itssenseofsmellbeginstokickin.Astudyofthebrainsofdifferentspeciesofsharksshowsthatthegreatwhite’solfactorybulb(嗅球)isespeciallylarge.
Theirvisionisnotbad,either.“Theyseeparticularlywell,”saysBurgess.
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