雅思大作文写作.pptx
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IELTSWriting,SunnyGao,Chapter1预备知识,WorkinpairstodecidewhetherthesestatementsaboutIELTSaretrueorfalse.1.Grammaristhemostimportantassessmentcriteriainwriting.2.IELTSExaminerscantellwhensomeoneisgivingamemorizedanswer.3.IELTSandTOEFLbothuseexaminerstoassesswritingandspeaking.4.YourIELTSscoreinChinawillvarydependingonwhichcityyoutakethetest.5.IELTSscoresarecarefullymonitoredandmanyaredoublechecked.,F,T,T,F,T,Chapter1预备知识,学术类雅思写作考试内容,Task2议论文两种形式Argumentation80%1.题目给出一方观点(反方观点隐含),问Doyouagreeordisagree?
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
例:
Inordertolearnalanguagewell,weshouldlearnaboutthecountryaswellastheculturesandlifestylesofthepeoplewhospeakit.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
2.题目中给出双方观点,要求分析正反方观点后做出结论SomesayOthersarguethatWhatisyouropinion?
Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Expresssomereasonsforbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Doyouthinkitsadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?
Task2中报告Report,出现概率为20%题目中没有观点,只给出一种现象,让考生分析该现象的causes,solutions,effects.通常题目的标志词为Whatare?
例子:
Today,therearemoreimagesofdisastersandviolenceinthemedia.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?
雅思写作评分标准,TRTaskresponseTA-TaskachievementCCCoherenceandCohesionLRLexicalresourceGRGrammaticalrangeandaccuracy,雅思写作评分标准,IELTSTASK2Writingbanddescriptors,TaskAchievement,CoherenceandCohesion,LexicalResource,GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy,CommentsonSampleScript2(InternationalTourism),Band7TA:
Thecandidateaddressesbothaspectsofthetaskandpresentsaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse.Mainideasaregenerallyclearandrelevant,althoughsomesupportingideaslackfocus(asintheopeningofparagraph2).CC:
Ideasaregenerallywell-organised,andthereisaclearoverallprogressionwithonlyminorlapseswherepointsarenotwell-integratedintotheargument.Arangeofcohesivedevicesisusedeffectively,althoughthereissomeunder-useofconnectivesandsubstitution,andsomelapsesintheuseofreferencing.LR:
Agoodrangeofvocabularyisusedwithsomeflexibilityandprecision.Thecandidatehasagoodawarenessofstyleandcollocation,althoughoccasionalawkwardexpressionsorinappropriaciesinwordchoiceandwordformlimittherating.GRA:
Likewise,agoodrangeofsentencestructuresisusedwithahighlevelofaccuracyresultinginfrequenterror-freesentences.Minorsystematicerrorspersist,however,andpunctuationisunhelpfulattimes,CommentsonSampleScript3(InternationalTourism),Band5TA:
Theinputmaterialisdirectlycopiedasanintroductiontothisresponse,andoncethisisdeductedfromthewordcount,theresponseisunder-lengthat194wordsandsolosesmarks.Nevertheless,thetopicisaddressedandarelevantpositionisexpressed,althoughtherearepatches(asinthirdparagraph)wherethedevelopmentisunclear.Otherideasaremoreevidentlyrelevant,butaresometimesinsufficientlydeveloped.Theseideasareclearlyorganisedandthereisanoverallprogressionwithintheresponse.CC:
Thereissomeeffectiveuseofarangeofcohesivedevices,includingreferencing,butthereisalsosomemechanicalover-useoflinkersinplaces.Paragraphsaresometimesrathertooshortandinappropriate.LR:
Arangeofvocabularyisattemptedandthisisadequateforagoodresponsetothetask.However,controlisweak,andtherearefrequentspellingerrorswhichcancausesomedifficultiesforthereader,thuskeepingtheratingdownforthelexicalcriterion.GRA:
Thecandidateusesamixofsimpleandcomplexstructureswithfrequentsubordinateclauses.Controlofcomplexstructuresisvariable,andalthougherrorsarenoticeable,theyonlyrarelyimpedeunderstandingofthemessage,Practice,剑桥雅思7P169请判断考官是怎样给这份试卷打出5分的?
其他预备知识,1.格式:
不用抄题目,齐头格式2.缩写:
不要使用were,cant,dont等缩写,应使用正式文体,可以使用全球通用首字母缩写,如NBA,KFC,WTO等,国内通用的不可以写,如CET-43.数字:
十以下数字用英语单词表示4.标点符号:
、“Avatar”,,andsoon5.I,My,We,You的使用,6.美式和英式拼写-re与ercentercentretheater-theatre-our与orcolorfulcolourfullaborlabour-ise,-isation与ize,-izationrealizerealiseorganizationorganisation-ce与-selicenselicencedefensedefence英式在美式拼写中被简化programme-programtraveller-traveler,其他预备知识,雅思写作流程,5+33+25分钟构思,写提纲(写作观点,2个主要论据,1个例子)33分钟写作2分钟检查语法:
主谓一致,标点词汇:
用同义词和代词(it,them)替换重复过多的单词逻辑:
是否需要在句子中添加therefore,moreover,incontrast等linkingwords,练习:
请利用在本节课学到的内容找出下面句子的错误。
1.下面的句子从写作风格看存在什么问题?
Mobilephonesaresoimportanttoourlives.Everyoneshouldusemobilephones!
2.请在下面的两个句子中间加上一个恰当的连接词将其改写为复杂句:
Airpollutionisincreasinglyserious.Measuresshouldbetakentotacklethisproblem.3.请迅速找出下面句子里的拼写错误:
Thecolorschemeofthisdesignisnotveryorganised.4.请找出下面句子的非正式词汇并替换:
Lotsofriversandlakeshavebeenseverelypolluted.5.请改写下面句子中的词汇使其用词更正式:
Thecrimerateincitiesishigherandhigher,sotheadvantagesofthesesecuritymeasuresaremorethandisadvantages.,Chapter2语法与从句,考官最敏感的三大语法错误可数名词单数孤立出现。
请判断下列翻译是否正确:
“狗是朋友。
”Dogisfriend.Dogsarefriends.Adogisafriend.Thedogisafriend.,主谓不一致Thegrowinguseofcomputers_causingenormouschangesinwork.(be)WatchingTVandplayingcomputergames_oneofthemostimportantchildrensleisureactivities.(be)Howwecancopewiththeseproblems_aninterestingissue.(be)逗号不能连接两个独立的句子。
is,is,are,练习:
请找出下列句子的语法错误(每句仅有一个错误),1.Allowemployeestoworkfromhomecanhelpemployerstoreducecosts.2.Becausemanyparentsdonotspendenoughtimewiththeirchildren.3.Somecompanieshaveplanstoreplacefortheirhumanworkerswithrobots.4.TheInternetisausefuleducationaltool,spendingtoomuchtimeonlineisharmfultochildren.,Allowing-Allowing,删掉Because,删掉for,Althoughthe,5.Theresultsofspaceresearchhasalsoincreasedourknowledgeaboutourownplanet.6.Anageingpopulationmeansanincreasedtaxburdenforworkedadults.7.Studentsareexpectedtositquietlyandpayattentionontheirteacher.8.Theyarguethat,largecitiesofferahigherstandardofliving.9.Theseactivitiescanimprovestudentsforeignlanguageskills.,has-have,worked-working,on-to,删掉,,studentsstudents,复合句的写作,1.什么是复合句?
Iloveyou.Iloveyou,andyouloveme.Iloveyouthatyouloveme.,简单句并列句and/or/but复合句,复合句是不是越多越好?
剑桥雅思考官范文平均每篇12句话简单句2句并列句2句从句8句,高分复合句,1.宾语从句Manypeoplebelievethatwehavedevelopedintoa“throw-awaysociety”.Thismeansthatchangeisnotalwaysapersonaloption,butaninescapablefactoflife.Whiletherearebothbenefitsanddrawbackstoamulticulturalsociety,itissafetosaythattheprosoutweighthecons.Traditionally,theapproachhasbeentopunishcriminalsbyplacingtheminprisonstopayforwhattheyhavedone.,2.状语从句If引导的条件状语从句如果学生想知道具体的职业信息,他们无需坐在教室里就可以得到。
如果一个人失去工作仍能获得帮助,或者一个少数民族仍能够获得和其他人一样的成功机会,那我们才可以说这个国家是进步的。
Ifastudentwantstolearnaboutjob-specificinformation,theydonotneedtositinaclassroomtogetit.,Ifapersonlosesajobbutgetassistance,oraminoritystillhasanequalopportunityofsuccess,thenwecansaythiscountryisadvanced.,While引导的让步状语从句尽管经济的进步使我们的生活变得舒适,但同时也使社会在财富分配中产生了两极分化。
尽管传统建筑外观美观,但通常内部使用起来却并不是很方便。
Whiletheeconomicdevelopmenthasmadeourlifemorecomfortable,ithasalsopolarizedthesocietyinthedistributionofwealth.,Whiletraditionalbuildingsmightlooknicefromtheoutside,theyareoftennotveryuser-friendly.,3.定语从句who引导,修饰“人”Thosewhofeelthatsportsstarssalariesarejustifiedmightarguethattheprofessionalswithrealtalentareveryfew.Studentwithoutteacherswillsurelybelost;butstudentswhosimplyrelyonteachersforknowledgearenotreallylearning.Childrenwhoenterschoolatanearlyagearegenerallymoreconfidentandindependentthanchildrenwhostayathomewiththeirparents.,that引导,修饰“物”如何处置罪犯是所有国家和社会都需要面临的问题。
原本需要人工花费数月时间完成的工作现在可以由机器人在几分钟内毫无瑕疵的完成。
Howtohandlecriminalsisaproblemthatallcountriesandsocietiesface.,Theworkloadthatcouldtakemonthstofinishbymanuallabornowcouldbedoneflawlesslybyrobotsinminutes.,逗号加which引导非限制性定语从句Iffuelpricesgoup,eitherfewerpeoplewilldriveorpeoplewilldriveless,whichmakessenseforreducingpollution.Demandforvariouscommoditiescreatesahugemarketforthelocalandinternationalbusinesses,whichinturnincreasesdemandforthelabormarket.,4.主语从句whether引导的主语从句Whetherisacontroversialissue/hascausedaheateddebate.it引导的主语从句Itisobviousthatwhat引导主语从句+notbutWhatmostcompaniesandworkforcesneedarenotrobots,butcreativepeoplewhocancontributeideas.Whatthepoorcountriesneedmostisnotmoney,butadvancedtechnologiesandtalentinsomekeyareas.,5.同位语从句Thefactthatwehavedifferentlanguagesdemonstratesthatwehavedifferentcultures.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthatourkidsarespendingmoretimewatchingTV.6.表语从句Thisisbecauseitistherichandpowerfulpeopleinoursocietywhoareabletoimposechanges.Anotherreasonforthisisthatoldbuildings,likenativelanguages,formaculturalidentityandkeepauniquerecordofacountry.,作业:
语法改错练习易错词选择练习判断练习定语从句练习宾语从句练习,Chapter3写作思路哪里来?
无话可说没有思想具体分类法举反例法关键词法,1.具体分类法-itdepends,Manypeopleusedistance-learningprograms(studymaterialpost,TV,Internet,etc.)tostudyathome,butsomepeoplethinkthatitcannotbringthesamebenefitsofattendingcollegeoruniversity.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
Individualscandonothingtoimprovetheenvironment;onlygovernmentsandlargecompaniescanmakeadifference.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
2.举反例法,only/-est/always/never/ban/stopTheonlywaytoimprovesafetyontheroadistoimposeseverepunishmentondrivingoffenders.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Somepeoplesaythatthebestwaytoimprovepublichealthisbyincreasingthenumberofsportsfacilities.Others,however,saythatthiswouldhavelittleeffectonpublichealthandthatothermeasuresarerequired.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.,3
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