雅思范文分类及点评.docx
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雅思范文分类及点评
教育类Somepeopleholdtheviewthatnowadayshistoryisoflittlemeaning,whileothersarguethathistorystillplaysasignificantroleinourlife.Whatisyouropinion?
Discussbothviews,andgiveyours.
Itisquiteunderstandablethateveryonelooksathistoryinauniqueway.Somesayhistoryisoflittleimportanceasitisaccidentalanddated,andthatonlythepresentandfuturereallycount.Othersmaintainthatregularreviewinghistorywillteachustobewiserandfar-sightedtothefuture.InthisessayIwillmakeatentativeanalysisofbothviewsbeforepresentingmyownperceptionsofhistory.
Peopleclingingtotheformeropinionarguethatfirstly,everythinghappensbychance.Whathappenedyesterdaymeanssimplythepast,andishighlyunlikelytorepeatitself.Asafamousphilosopherputit,“Youcanneverstepinthesamerivertwice.”Moreover,ascircumstanceschangeconstantly,itfollowsthatthepastpracticeandknowledgearedatedandcansaynothingmeaningfulaboutadifferentworld.Whenpaperbillsandcreditcardsarewidelyaccepted,noonewillinsistonusingancientcurrenciessuchasshellsandheavymetalcoins.
However,aseriesofcounterreasonsarealsofoundwiththeoppositeside.Tobeginwith,knowledge,oldandnew,isunexceptionallybasedonpastexperience.Withouthistory,humanbeingsprobablystillremainininfantages.Onecanhardlyimaginetheconveniencesofcarsandcomputerswithoutearlyinventionsofhorse-drawncartsandcalculators.Moreimportantly,historyenlightenshumanmindbyofferingrecordedcasesforreferencebeforemakingcrucialdecisions.“Historyisamagicmirror,inwhichyouseetherelationshipbetweenthepastandthefuture.”Historiansoftensay.Lastbutnotleast,historyalwaysarousesgreatinterestamongscholars,whichleavesitaninexhaustibletreasureforstudy.
Fromtheabovecomparison,wecansafelysay,historyisnotonlyanimportantsubjectofstudyforsocialsciences,butalsoisusefulandessentialforhumanevolution.
UsefulExpressions
1.maintain:
认为
2.far-sighted:
有远见的
3.bychance:
偶然,凑巧
4.paperbills:
纸币
5.insistondoing:
坚持做某事
6.aseriesof:
一系列
7.tobeginwith:
首先
8.bebasedon:
建立于
9.lastbutnotleast:
最后
10.arousesinterest:
引起兴趣
AdvancedPhrases
1.inauniqueway:
以独特的方式
2.beoflittleimportance:
不重要
3.accidentalanddate:
偶然的、过时的
4.count:
是重要的
5.atentativeanalysisof:
试探性的分析
6.perceptionsof:
对…的理解
7.clingto:
坚持
8.Youcanneverstepinthesamerivertwice:
没人能两次踏入同一条河
9.horse-drawncarts:
马拉车
10.inexhaustibletreasure:
无尽的宝藏
教育类Unemploymentratebecomesincreasinglyhighinmanycountries.Somepeoplethinkthatonlyprimaryschoolingshouldbeofferedtothepublicandthereisnopointinofferingsecondaryeducationtothosewhohavenohopeoffindingajob.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Itotallydisagreewiththeopinionthatsecondaryschoolingshouldleaveoutthosewhohavenohopeoffindingajobaftergraduation.Thisisnotonlyoutrageousdiscriminationagainstintellectuallydifficultstudents,butwilleventuallyworsentheissueoflowemploymentrate.
Primarily,whendifferentiatedtobe“suitable”ornottoreceivesecondaryeducation,allstudentswillfirstbelabeledas“hopeful”or“hopeless”foremployment.Leavealonethefeasibilityofselectingtherightcandidatesyearsbeforetheyactuallyenterthejobmarket,studentswhoarelabeled“hopeless”andthushavetoquitschoolwillexperiencebitterpsychologicalfrustrationanduntolddesperationabouttheirfuture.Manyofthemmaybearthisunfavorablelabelintheirmindforyearsorevenforlife.
Tomakethingsworse,denyingsecondaryeducationtotheyoungpeopleequalsdeprivingthemofmanyvaluablejobskillsandcareeradvancementopportunities,andleadtodeteriorationofthejobmarket.Themainpurposeofsecondaryschoolingistoprovidegeneralknowledgeindifferentsubjectstostudentspreparingthemforhighereducationortechnicalandvocationaltrainings.Alackinsecondaryeducationmayrendertechnicalandvocationaltrainingsdifficultforyoungsterstodigest,causemoreilliteracyintechnologyaswellasskills,andconsequentlyactivatetheviciouscircleofhigherunemploymentrate.
Consideringtheaboveanalysis,wemustequallyofferopportunitiesofsecondaryschoolingtothepublic,toprotecttheyoungpeople’sbasiceducationrights,andbuildtheirconfidenceaswellasskillsforfuturecareer.
UsefulExpressions
1.secondaryschooling:
中级教育
2.leaveout:
把…排除在外
3.worsentheissueof:
使…问题变得更糟
4.Leavealone且不说
5.thefeasibilityofdoing:
做…的可行性
6.enterthejobmarket:
求职
7.bare…inmind:
记住
8.Tomakethingsworse:
使事情变得更糟的是
9.vocationaltrainings:
职业培训
10.buildtheconfidencefor:
树立信心
AdvancedPhrases
1.outrageousdiscriminationagainstintellectuallydifficultstudents:
对于智障学生的令人愤慨的歧视
2.belabeledas:
被视作
3.differentiate:
分化,区别
4.quitschool:
辍学
5.bitterpsychologicalfrustration:
痛苦的心理挫折
6.deprivesomebodyof(rights):
剥夺某人的(权利)
7.careeradvancementopportunities:
职业晋升机会
8.deteriorationof…:
…的恶化,退化
9.illiteracyintechnology:
科技文盲
10.activatetheviciouscircleof:
刺激…的恶性循环
教育类SomepeoplebelievethatitisbeneficialforchildrentospendtimeonTV,videoandPCgames,whilesomeholdtheoppositeview.Talkaboutthesetwoviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
WhenitcomestowhetherchildrenshallspendtheirsparetimewatchingTV,videoandplayingPCgames,people’sopinionsdiversegreatly.Somesayitisbasicallyawasteofchildren’stime,whileothersarguethatchildrencanbenefitalotfromsuchactivities.
Itisfirmlymaintainedbymanyparentsandteachersthatchildren’smainpurposeistopursueoutstandingacademicachievementsatschool.Tobeattheircompetitors,theymustmakethebestuseofeverypreciousminute.Therefore,theycannotaffordtoindulgethemselvesbeforethe“idiotbox”asTVorinplayingthesenselessvirtualgames.Moreover,watchingTVandplayingPCgamesareaddictiveformanypoorly-disciplinedchildren,consumingtheirinterestinstudyanderodingtheiracademicaspirations.
However,manyotherpeopleholddifferentviews,arguingthatifproperlyguidedandsupervised,childrencanexpandvisionandknowledgeaswellasfostertheircreativityfromthosefunactivities.TherearemanyeducationalprogramsonTVsuchasDiscoverywhichfeedchildrenextensiveknowledgeinscienceandarts.Bysparkingchildren’sinterestandimaginationinvarioustopics,theseprogramsareoftenmoreenlighteningthantextbooks.Furthermore,whenplayingPCgames,childrencanfosterastrongersenseofcooperationaswellascompetition,andsharpeningtheirmindagainstpossiblerisksintherealworld.Lastbutnotleast,watchingcartoonsandsciencefictionmoviesdefinitelystimulateschildren’simaginationandcreativity.Manyyoungstershavebeeninspiredtocomeupwithnovelinventionsofbecomeengineeringelitesinlaterlifeexactlywiththeinspirationsfromthosesources.
Fromtheabovediscussion,itisevidentthatifchildrencanbalancetheirstudyandfuntimeproperly,watchingTV,videoprogramsandplayingPCgameswillunquestionablybringthemmorebenefitsthanharm.Afterall,booksarenottheonlysourceofusefulknowledge;inordertogrowhealthilyinmoderntimes,childrenneedtoaccumulateknowledgeandskillsfromvariouschannels,andsuitabletimeforrelaxationandinspirationissurelymorewelcomethannot.
UsefulPhrases
1.awasteof(time/energy):
对(时间/精力)的浪费
2.benefitfrom:
v.从…中获益
benefit:
n.利益,收益gainbenefitsfrom=benefitfrom,
Somethingbringsbenefitstosomebody
beneficial:
a.对…有益的somethingisbeneficialtosomebody.某事对某人有益
beneficiary:
n.受益人somebodyisthebeneficiaryofsomething.某人从某事中获益
3.makethebestuseof:
充分利用
4.affordtodo:
能够承担做某事
5.addictive:
a.使人上瘾的,somethingisaddictivetosomebody
addicted:
a.上瘾的,somebodyisaddictedtosomething
6.educationalprograms:
教育节目
7.enlightening:
a.具有启发性的
8.lastbutnotleast:
最后
9.sciencefictionmovies:
科幻电影
10.stimulate/trigger/inspire/enhance:
刺激促进
1.pursueoutstandingacademicachievements:
追求杰出的学术成绩
2.indulgeoneselfin:
沉迷于
3.idiotbox:
指电视
4.expandvisionandknowledge拓展视野和知识
5.feedchildrenextensiveknowledgein(science):
使儿童充分吸收(科学)知识
6.fostertheircreativity/asenseofcooperation:
培养创造力/合作精神
7.comeupwithinventions/newideas:
做出发明/产生新想法
8.sparkchildren’sinterestandimagination:
激发儿童的兴趣和想象力
9.sharpenthemind:
使头脑敏锐
10.accumulateknowledgeandskillsfromvariouschannels:
通过多种渠道积累知识和技能
犯罪类Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthebestwayofreducingcrimesistoprolongthecrimesentence.Others,however,thinkthattherearebetteralternativestoreducethecrimerate.Discussbothsidesandstateyourownopinion.
Theriseofcrimerateoftengoeswiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomy,whichisespeciallytrueintoday’sChina.Incombatingcrimes,peoplearethinkingofdifferentwaysofsolution,oneofwhichistoprolongthepenaltyterms.
Proponentsofthisideastressthatincreasedpenaltytermsagainstcrimeswilleffectivelydeterpotentialcriminals,whowouldthinktwiceorchangetheirmindbeforeanyboldactioniftheyconsidertheprolongedimprisonmentmightbeinflictedonthem.Arecentnationalcrimesurveyhasrevealedthatabout70%ofpoliceofficerscomplainthatthe“cost”forcommittingcrimesisatahistoricallylowlevelandthatthismayinsomesense“encourage”boldandviciousactions.
However,manycriminologistsdonotsharethistheory,criticizingthisideaas“cowards’solution”,andpointingoutthatitwil
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