高考英语作文的润色与提高课件PPT文档格式.ppt
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高考英语作文的润色与提高课件PPT文档格式.ppt
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第一个要点,主体:
第二个要点,结尾:
第三个要点,句式多变,长短变化,主、被动变化,主语变化,同义词变化,同功能句型变化,横向比较变化,亮点若干,高中词汇,高中常见短语,高级句型,各种复合句,倒装句,强调句型,虚拟语气句型,非谓语动词结构,巧妙串联,起:
firstofall,tobeginwith,aboveall.,承:
inaddition,besides.,转:
however,ontheotherhand.,合:
inmyopinion,allinall,inaword.,蠢错不犯:
初中二年级学生就应该掌握的基本语言表达能力。
1.Iverylikethebook.2.Hewasveryangrily.3.Therehavemanystudentintheclassroom.4.Thecarisyellowcolor.,整洁卷面,英文书写大方、圆润、自然,词与词间距适当,字母大小适当,无大面积涂改,不影响交际,专题二肃清基础语言错误,中学生英语写作中常见的14种语言错误:
1.主谓不一致,MyfatherandIlikesgoingfishingbythelake.Largequantitiesofsoilhasbeenwashedaway.,2.时态、语态混用,Lastnight,Ihadenjoyedaparty.Thepaintingonthewalldamagedseriously.,was,3.句子成分残缺,Istoodupandsawthereaboy.Theyoungmanrunninginthestreet.,was,was,4.习惯搭配误用,Ionceheardfromtheanimallikethis.Wepassedawaythebuilding.,of,by,5.名词单、复数不分,Imademanyfriendinthesummercamp.WecangetsomeinformationsfromtheInternet.,6.动词单、复数不分,Ourteacheroftensaythatsuccesslieinhardwork.Mr.Smith,togetherwithsomestudents,arecomingtoourschool.,7.赘词现象多发,Ihopeyoucanreturnbacktoourschoolsoon.WellholdapartyonnextSunday.,8.近义词的误用,Theschoolrequeststhatallthestudentsshouldweartheschooluniform.Iquarreledwithmyteacheraboutmygrades.,9.基本词汇拼写错误,IfliedtoNewYorkdirectlyfromBeijing.Thiswillbedoneimmediatly.,10.前后人称不一致,Theboywasborninapoorfamilybutsheworkshard.Wewatchedafewmoviesandwelovedit.,11.动词原形作主语/宾语,Takeawalkafterdinnerisverygoodforyou.Atthatmoment,Ididntfeelliketakeawalk.,12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致,Preparingdinner,thedoorbellrang.Walkinginthestreet,acarhitanoldman.,13.一个简单句出现两个谓语,Therewasnoworktodo,hewentbackhome.Ireceivedyouemail,Iwasveryexcited.,being,When,and,14.中式英语,Nextweekhaveaparty.IsorryyouIcantwithyougoBeijing.,有则改之,无则加勉;
用心则易,无心则难。
专题三:
第一反应与克制第一反应,他是个好人。
第一反应测试:
Heisagoodman.,generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitable,easy-going,devoted,open-minded,modest,friendly,对不起,我不能和你一起去北京了。
ImsorrythatIcantgotoBeijingwithyou.,WouldyouacceptmyheartfeltapologythatIcantmakeittoBeijingwithyouaswehaveplanned.,IsorryyouIcantwithyougoBeijing.,英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西,1.一般中学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构;
2.恰到好处的名言、谚语等;
3.一语中的的修辞手法。
很多,alotofagoodnumberof(C.n.)alargeamountof(U.n.)agreatdealof(U.n.)amountainofhomeworkaseaofpeopleabundant/adequate,takepartinjoininparticipateincompeteinsignupfor,参加,fitinadapttoadjusttocopewithbeusedtobeaccustomedtofeelathome,适应,followmydream/passionpursuemygoalseekaftermydestination/objective,追求梦想,about/around/someroughlyapproximatelymoreorless,大约,so/thereforeasaresultasaconsequenceconsequently,因此,importantcrucialcriticalsignificantofmuchvalue,重要的,恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色,1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.5.Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.6.Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.7.Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.,8.Morehaste,lessspeed.9.Itsnevertoooldtolearn.10.Allthatglittersisnotgold.11.Lookbeforeyouleap.12.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.13.Greatmindsthinkalike.14.wellbegun,halfdone.15.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.,大胆使用基本的修辞手法,比喻,Allthestudentsareasbusyasbeespreparingforthecomingexams.,所有学生都在忙着准备考试。
Allthestudentsarebusypreparingforthecomingexams.,夸张,我感觉压力很大。
Ifeelgreatpressure.,IfeltasifIwereunderamountainandIcantevenbreathe.,拟人,我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。
Ifeelallmyclassmateslaughingatme.,Ifeltasifeventhebirdsonthetreesarelaughingatme.,亮点的任务:
使你的作文从千万篇作文中脱颖而出。
谢谢!
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