高一二短文改错(外研版)Word格式.docx
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ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:
beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.
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Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:
“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead.“Doyouneedatypist?
”askedRose.“Yes!
”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!
Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?
”Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!
Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.
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Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.
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Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!
However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.
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OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,theyfeltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.
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OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman,whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years.Sheisalwaysworkinghard.Foramodelteacherformanyyears,sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass,shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible.Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting.InherspareSheIntime,sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays.Shelovesusso10muchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus.Inthefact,sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend.Weallrespectandlovehim.
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ThedayismyDad’sbirthday.ThisafternoonIwenttotheshoppingcenterdowntown,andboughtpresentforhim.ThenItookthesubwaytraintohome.Sittingonthetrain,Ithoughtmydadwillbeveryhappywhenshesawthepresent.Atthenextstation,anoldladywithtwoheavybaggotintothetrainandstoodinfrontofme.Shelookedtiring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthenofferedmyseattoher.Theoldladythankedmealotandsatdown.Seenhersmile,Ifelthappily.Iwillalwaysreadytohelpothersinthefuture.
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IjustcomebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to28.Wepaidavisittomanyplaces,likeLondon,OxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondon,wherewasmyfavorite.IalsolikedOxford,inwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautiful,butitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.
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Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?
First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder.Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat.Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone’shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they’llgreatimprovetheirhealth.
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OnedayTomandIwerewalkingdownthestreetwhilewesawanoldmanfalloffhisbike.Hewasbadlyhurt.Manypeoplecrowdedaroundus.Someonesuggestedcarryingtheoldmantotheroadside,soTomdisagreed.Hehaslearnedfirstaid.Hesaidthattheyoughttoleavehimwherehewasandcheckedhimfirst.Atthattimetheoldmanwasn'
tbreathing.TomaskedmetocallintheFirstAidCenteratonceandhebegantostarttheoldman'
sbreathing,usethemouth-to-mouthway.Withinfiveminutes,theoldmanbegantomovelittleanddoctorsalsoarrived.Theysaidthatwehaddonewascorrect.Ihavelearnedfromthisexperiencethataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakeareallydifference.
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LikemanyteenagersinChina,mostofmysparetimewasspentdoingmyhomework.Asaresult,Idon’thaveenoughtimestodothatI’minterestedinevenonweekendsoronholiday.ThefirstthingwhichIenjoywhenIhaveafewspareminuteistolistentomusic.It’sthebestwayformetoescapethestressoftheirstudy.WhenIlistentomusic,itislikegotoanotherworld.Sometimes,thewordsofthesongsseemtoexpressexacthowI’mfeeling.Besides,I’malsointerestedinafashionandI’malwayssearchingsomethingspecialthatcanreflectmypersonality.
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Thewaterwedrinkandusewasrunningshort.Weallhavetolearnwhattostopwastingwater.Oneofthestepthatweshouldtakeistofindwaysofreusingit.Todayinthemostlargecities,freshwaterisusedonlyonceandthenitrunsinwastesystem.Butthatispossibletopipetheusedwatertoapurifyingfactory,theretheusedwatercanbetreatedwithchemicalmaterialsbytheworkerssothatitcanreused.Butevenifeverylargecitypurifiedandreusedit’swater,westillwouldhaveenoughwater.
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Oneday,Iwenttotherailwaystationtobuyatickettomyaunt.WhenIgotthere,Itoldthatthetickethadallbeensoldout.JustthenamancameupandsaidwithastronglyZhejiangaccentthathehadaspareticket.Ididn’tknowthatifIcouldbelievehimornot.Afterhesitateforawhile,Idecidedtotakeit.Soassoonasthemanleft,Ibegantoregret.Ifhewasnothonest,whatshallIdo?
Onathirdday,Iwenttothestationtoseemyauntaway.AsIwaswavinggoodbyetoher,Isawthemansittingnexttomyaunt,smilingatme.
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Inrecentyears,thevolunteeringspirithasspreadamongtheChinesepeople,especiallyamongyoungsters.MoreandmoreschoolinChinarequirestudentstotakepartcommunityserviceduringthevocations.Studentsareoftenseeingtosweepthestreets,planttreesandvisitorphanages.Communityserviceisofthegreatbenefittoboththoseinneedandsociety.Moreover,communityserviceishelpfultocultivateoursociallyresponsibility.Asmodernmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldgetactiveinvolvedincommunityservice.Byparticipating,wecanlearnwhattoworkwellinateam,howtoimproveourinterpersonalskillandorganizingability.Undoubtedly,bothoftheseareimportanttoourdevelopment.Therefore,theyshouldtreasureallsuchchances.
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Afterwatch“EnglishTV”lastSundaymorning,Iphonedtomyclassmateandaskedhimtogotoseeafilmintheafternoon.Beforethefilmwasover,wereturnedtoschooltodoourlessons.Whilewearehavingarestinthecorridor,IsawMr.Liu,myheadteacher.HetoldmethatwehadmadesomeprogressesinEnglish,butmyChineselaggedbehind,especiallymyChinesecomposition.HesuggestedImustreadmoreandkeepingadiaryeveryday.Intheeveningmyfathertoldmethatreadingnewspaperswoulddomewelltoimprovingcompositionwriting.Thatwasreallygoodidea!
Whattheysaidwasquiteright,andIshouldfollowtheiradvice.
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NevershallIforgetthefirstEnglishlessongivingbyMissLiu.OneMondaymorning,whensheenteredintheclassroom,wefoundthatshewasyoungandbeautifullady.Thensheintroducedherselfandsaidtheyshouldn’tcallherTeacherLiubutMissLiu.Late,sheletusgotheblackboardandsaidsomethingaboutourselvesinEnglishinturn.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttooshythatIdidn’tdaretosayanythingbeforetheclass.Shewentuptomeandsaidkind,“Don’tbeafraid.Ibelieveyoucandoitwell.”Atlast,Iwenttotheblackboard.ShepraisedmeforthatIhaddone.
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Aftershopping,motherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.Inoticemotherl
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