写作大小作文练习版本四Word文档格式.docx
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(因果)
(利弊)
重申结论
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MayI…
Sorry
Please
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Comeon
Shutup
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3.化平淡为修辞
Conceivedinthepictureisasimpletruththat……Arenotthefollowingcasessufficienttoprovethispoint?
Haven’tyoueverfound…?
Haven’tyouevernoticed…?
Why….?
Why…?
Aren’tthey….?
【第三段】
结合上文论调,进行针对评论。
1.社会弊病(生态环境)
给大众的建议或策略
控制:
外控;
内控
Correspondinglawsandregulations(schoolregulations)shouldbecarriedoutto….
Officialinterventionshouldbeputonthematterof…to…
Finesandpenaltiesshouldbeactivatedtodirectthesituationtoapositiveone.
Newsocialnormshouldbeestablishedto…
Mediasupervisionshouldbecastonthematterof…..
self-discipline
self-control
self-restrict
Theabilityofself-restrainshouldbecultivatedamongthosewho…..
Rightattitudetoward…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho…
Awarenessof…shouldbeadvocatedamongthosewho…
从外控走向内控:
【版本一】
Howcanweputtheproblemofenvironmentaldestructionundercontrol?
Itoccurstomanythatweareinneedofapackagedeal,involvinginterventionfromenvironmentorganizations,legislationfromdepartmentconcerned,andsupervisionfromthemassmedia.Butisthatdealcomprehensiveenough?
Actually,wealsoneedtheawarenessthattheplanetearthisouronlyhome,andwemaybehomelessifwemistreatit,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthisproblemtoanend.
【版本二】
Suchmisconductsof…shouldbeputundercontrolimmediately!
Buthow?
Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicmayinvolve…,…,or….Buttheseproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulrewards.Isthatenough?
Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat…….
《狗镇》
Grace
2.社会风尚
表明自己的态度和决心
支持:
理由:
惠及自身与他人
惠及当下与未来
决心:
Askedaboutmyattitudetoward…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asitisasocialwealth,wearewillingtodeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoanother.Asacollegeman,Iamdeterminedtobearolemodelinthisaspect.(Ascollegemen,wehavethedutytojointhecampaignof….)
3.箴言哲理
提出针对个人的建议
求助:
长者、老师、朋友、书刊
自助:
具体问题具体分析
Howtostepoutoftheshadowofindecisiveness?
IfIwereconfrontedwiththesituation,Iwouldbesuggestedtoseekencouragementsandsuggestionsfromteachers,seniors,orinspiringbooks.Thatisaway,butapassiveone.Helpfromthemisnotalwaysavailable,andnotnecessarilysuitsme.Therefore,Iamdeterminedtomakeclearmyinnermostneeds,tobeawareofthesituation,toworkoutreasonableplans,topersistonmydecision,sothatIcanstepoutofthedelicatesituation.
《冬吴相对论》
《爱的序位》
……
按照环节拆分
Exercise1
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
学生的对联
图片基调ironic
Couplet,thefirstline,thesecondline,horizontalscroll
引向主题dishonest
Emergingfromthecartoonisanironicscenethatthecoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirundesirableattitudetocollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads“therewillbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexams”,whilethesecondlinebears“successintestsispreferabletodignityintheirminds.”Thehorizontalscrollsummarizestheiridea:
regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,theyaretopassexamsbyanymeans.
Sb.betodo…
Bad|undesirable|unfavorable
Sb.preferAtoB
AispreferabletoBinone’smind
AoutweighBinone’smind
Personality
Dignity
大众观点honest
Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…..
Itisconventionallyholdthat…..
Itissharedbythegeneralpublicthat….
Itisdeeplyrootedinthemindofthepublicthat….
质疑大众反问
详实论据作弊:
手势、小抄、手机、耳语、无线耳机
得出结论自身、教育、社会
Itiswidelysharedthatnoothergroupsintheworldcanbeashonestyascollegestudents.However,isthatstillthetruth?
Illustrationsagainstthepublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Fromcollegeexaminationsalone,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomecandidatesdeliveringkeysbywhispering,bygesture,orevenbymobilephones.Evidently,anexpandingamountofstudentsnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty,whichmaybedetrimentaleithertotheirlife-longdevelopment,ortothequalityofeducation,nottomentionsocialatmosphere.
Anincreasingnumberof…
Amountingnumberof….
Anexpandingamountof….
Doharmto
Bepoisonousto
Bedetrimentalto…
Exercise2
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
ThedreamofaBird
图片基调alarming
Abirdisholdingagun
Heishidinginthebush
Heisstaringatthesky
inwhichHumanbeingsaresoaring
Hewantstoshootpeopleforrevenge.
引向主题whatpeopleoncedidwithhim
Undertheamusingappearanceofthecartoonliesanalarmingscenariothatabird,holdingagunandhidinginthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Heintendstoshootpeopleforrevenge.Evidently,his“dream”comesfrom/takesrootsin/isinducedby/isprovokedby/isevokedby/issparkedbywhatpeopleoncedidwithhim.
Itiswidelysharedthatnootherdecadesplacesomuchemphasisonenvironmentalprotectionastoday.However,isthatthetruth?
Illustrationsagainstthepublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Specifically,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomeofusshootingwildlifeforfun,cookingitforfood,orevensellingitforhugeprofit.Equally,itisnotuncommontofindsomeenterprisesemittingtoxicgaseswithlocalatmospherepolluted.Evidently,anexpandingamountofindividualsandgroupsnolongertakecareofourenvironment,whichmaybedetrimentaleithertothequalityofourlife,ortothesecurityofliving,nottomentionthefutureofourdescendants.
Itistheobligationforhumantogetonwellwiththenature.
Thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.
Asafamousthinkeronceputit,“…”
Nevereasilyletgoofthemotto,“…”
Nevereasilywaveasidethesimpletruth,“…”
Nevershrugoffthedoctrine,“…”
Theextendedmeaningofthecartooncanbesummarizedasamotto:
……
1.idioms600.docinformation
2.山寨谚语transformation
Thatis,….
Putitanotherway,….
Simplystateit,….
Inotherwords,…..
(正反)inthepast…currently…
Theimplicationofthecartooncanbesummarizedasaphilosophictopicindailylife:
thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.Inotherwords,itmayrewardusfruitfullyonconditionthatweareongoodtermwithit;
otherwise,punishusifwemistreatit.Specifically,inthepast,naturalresourceswereavailableanywhere,anytime,andanyhow,becauseourancestorneverwenttoofarinexploitingthem.Onthecontrary,currently,ourgreedinessthreatenstheseresources,puttingthemtotheedgeofrunningout.Nowonderthebirdinthepicturedesiretorevengeonhumans.Heiswarningusthatwemaypayaheavypriceforwhatwedidwiththenature.
Beongoodtermwith
Endanger
threaten
put…totheedgeof….
Runoutof…
…istobeansweredfor.
Wemaypayaheavypricefor….
Wemaybepenalizedfor….
Intendto….
Profits
Asset
Wealth
Financialsupport
【版本三】
Exhibitedinthepictureisasimpletruththatitisourdutytotakecareofourenvironment.However,domostofusbearthistruthinmindanymore?
Haven’tyoueverfoundsomeofushuntingwildlifeforfun,forfood,orevenforprofit?
Haven’tyouevernoticedsomeenterpriseslettingoutwastedwateratlargeamountwithwaterbodypolluted?
Wherehastheirsenseofsocialresponsibilitygone?
Wherehastheirconsciencegone?
Wherehastheirinsightoffuturegone?
Aren’tthevirtuesswallowedbytheirgreediness,sacrificingeco-balanceforinstantprofits?
Wherehasalltheflowersgone?
BrotherFour
instant
Insightoffuture
Sacrifice…for….
Seek…atthecostof….
Pursue…attheexpenseof….
Exercise3
图片基调instuctive
相关细节
Amanisfacingseveraldirections
Heiswalkingbackandforth
Hefeelsperplexedandconfused
Hedoesnotknowwheretogo.
Caption
Haveyoueverbeencaughtinadilemma?
Ifso,youmayfeelthesameawkwardnessasthemaninthepicturedoes.Inthedrawing,theman,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,feelingperplexedandconfusedandwonderingwheretogo.Thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatpredicamentsarealwayscausedbyindecisiveness.
Remindsb.ofsth.
Remindsb.that….
Difficulty
Barrier
Predicament
Betterlatethannever.
Bettertryingthancrying
decisivenessisthefirststepleadingtosuccess/justdoit,andanythingispossible/bettertryingthancrying.Inotherwords,we,facingdelicatesituation,mayfailtograspopportunitiesifwehesitateallthetime.(opportunities,ifwekeepponderingandwondering,mayescapeourattention)Specifically,hesitatingmaygrindoffou
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