高考英语写作提升修改后.ppt
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2016届高考英语二轮书面表达提高、升格及分类训练,一、快速升格你的作文,使用高级表达whatsmoreinthesameway(同样地)howeverbecauseof,Inaddition,furthermore,similarly,equally,incomparison,incontrast,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,dueto,owingto,onaccountof,thanksto,asaresultof,because,inthat,forthereasonthat,thereasonforwhichliesinthefactthat,though/althoughinaword/inshort/allinalltoday/nowshould,despiteinspiteofthefactthat,while,inbrief,insummary,tosumup,tosummarize,toconclude,inconclusion,nowadays,currently,atpresent,besupposedto,beexpectedto,sometimesverygoodmostof.if,occasionally,fromtimetotime,attimes,fantastic,awesome,amazing,wonderful,excellent,themajorityof.,onconditionthat,as/solongas,suppose,providedthat,onlyif(句首倒装),asweknowsth.isveryimportantIthink,ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatItisgenerallyacceptedthat,sth.shouldbeputinthefirstplace.sth.shouldbeattachedgreatsignificanceto.Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofsth.toomuch.,Personally,Frommypointofview,AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Ifyoustudyhard,youcanmakeprogress.,Studyhardeverydayandyoucanmakerapidprogress.Studyhardeverydayoryoumayfailtoachieveyourgoal.Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.Sparenoefforttostudy,inwhichcaseyoullmakegreatprogress.Sparingnoefforttostudy,youllmakegreatprogress.,growfasttryonesbesttodo.Thankyouverymuchforyouhelp.PlentyofhardworkishelpfultoEnglishstudy.,increaserapidly/growamazinglyfast,Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch.Weowemanythankstoyourhelp.,AlargequantityofhardworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.,sparenoefforttodo.,doeverythingonecantodo.,goallouttodo.,makeeveryefforttodo.,cantdosth.well为了todo.Thedayiscoming.,inordertodo.,forthepurposeofdoing,Thedayisdrawingnear.Thedayisaroundthecorner.Thedayisontheway.,havetroubledifficultyahardtime(in)doingsth.bepooratsth.,Thedayisapproaching.,verynothingbutThefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.,behelpful/usefulbeofgreathelp/use;contributetoPlentyofmemoryworkishelpfultoEnglishstudy.PlentyofmemoryworkisofgreathelptoEnglishstudy.PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.,havetodocannotbut/cannothelpbut/havenochoicebuttodoIhadtogohomeforitwasdark.Icouldnotbutgohomeforitwasdark.,Ihavenochoicebuttogohomeforitwasdark.,usually/oftenmoreoftenthannot;asisoftenthecaseUsually,themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.Moreoftenthannot,themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.,Asisoftenthecase,themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.,beinterestedinbecaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedtoHeisveryinterestedincollectingstamps.Heiscaughtupincollectingstamps.,helpdosba/thefavorWouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndowntheradio?
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duringinthecourseofDuringthemountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.Inthecourseofthemountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.,使用复杂结构1.改变语态Peoplesuggestthatweshouldprotecttheenvironment.(一般)2.使用不定式Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般)Sokindishethathecandomeafavor.(高级)3.使用过去分词Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般),Itissuggestedthattheenvironmentbeprotected.(高级),Heissokindastohelpme.(高级),Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Shewalkedoutofthelabwithmanystudentsfollowingher.(高级),使用复杂结构4.使用Ving形式Whenyouarrive,pleasegivemeanemail.(一般)5.使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidntturnup.(一般)6.使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般),Onarriving/yourarrival,pleasegivemeanemail.,Thefactthathedidntturnupdisappointedeverybody.(高级),Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(高级),7.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(一般)Notuntil1920didregularradiobroadcastsbegin.(高级)ThoughImweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(一般)Iamgladtoseethesmileonmyteacherface.(一般),Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan.(高级),Weakas/thoughIam,Illmaketheeffort.(高级),HowgladIamtoseethesmileonmyteacherface!
(高级),8.Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters.(状语从句)(独立主格结构),Everyday,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters.(状语从句)Withsomuchhomeworktodoeveryday,theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters.(独立主格结构),Everyday,somuchhomeworkdotheyhavethattheyfailtorememberthecharacters.(倒装),9.Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.,Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.(高级词汇)ItwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudentsChineselearning.(高级词汇),Itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue,butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudentsChineselearning.(合并),二、单句练习,翻译下列句子1不用说早睡早起是值得的。
_2我深信预防胜于治疗。
_3在各种运动中,我尤其喜欢慢跑。
_4时间最珍贵,这是很容易证明的。
_5就我所知,下列方法对我帮助很大。
_,Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.,Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.,Amongvariouskindsofsports,Iamfondofjogginginparticular.,Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime.,Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,thefollowingwaysareofgreathelptome.,6毫无疑问,近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。
_7根据我个人经验,微笑已带给我许多好处。
_8在我的求学过程中,我忘不了学习英文所遇到的大困难。
_9随着经济的快速发展,许多社会问题产生了。
_,Thereisnodoubtthatnearsightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.,Accordingtomypersonalexperience,smilehasdonemealotofgood.,Inthecourseofmyschooling.IwillneverforgetthegreatdifficultyIencounteredinlearningEnglish.,Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,largequantitiesofsocialproblemshavecomeout.,10在这信息的年代,计算机扮演非常重要的角色。
_11世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴的。
_12我们保持公共场所清洁是应当的。
_13每当我想到那个时刻,我就忍不住感到激动。
_,Intheageofinformationandcommunication,computerplaysanextremelyimportantrole.,Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchashavinghamburgersinfastfoodrestaurants.,Itisproperthatwearesupposedtokeepthepublicplacesclean.,WheneverIthinkoftheverymoment,Icannotbutfeelexcited.,14人们相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。
_15青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日益败坏。
_16俗话说得好:
诚实为上策。
_17人们学外语有三个理由。
_18为了维护健康,我们每天至少可做三件事。
_,Itisgenerallyconvinced(that)readingincreasesourknowledgeaswellasbroadensourmind.,Themainreasonwhytheteenagerscommitcrimesisthatsocialenvironmentisbecomingworse.,Asanoldsayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy.”,Peoplelearnaforeignlanguageforthreemajorreasons.,Inordertokeephealthy,thereareatleastthreethingswecandoeveryday.,19相反,多数学生似乎还是对课外活动感兴趣的。
_20政府应严格执法,另一方面,大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。
_21换言之,我会尽最大的努力完成我的目标。
_22从此之后,我已发现微笑是日常生活中避免冲突的最好办法。
_,Onthecontrary,amajorityofstudents,itseems,arestillkeenonafter-classactivities.,Thegovernmentisexpectedtoenforcethelawstrictly.Ontheotherhand,thepublicalsoshoulddevelopthegoodhabitofreducingpollution.,Toputitdifferently,Iwillsparenoefforttoattain(achieve,liveupto,accoplish)mygoal.,Eversincethen,Ihavefoundsmileisthebestwaytoavoidanypossibleconflictsinourdailylives.,23更严重的是,我们不珍惜野生动物。
_24做这些简单之事,我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。
_25唯有通力合作,我们才能期望情况不久有新的改观。
_,Whatismoreseriousisthatwedonotcherishwildlife.,Bydoingthesesimplethings,wesurely/definitelycangooutofthedoorhappyandcomebackhomesafeeveryday.,Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectthesituationtotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture.,26最后但并非最不重要,教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。
_27总而言之,好公民应该遵守交通规则。
_28因此我们可以得出结论,那就是世上自由最珍贵。
_,Inconclusion,agoodcitizenissupposedtoobserveobeyfollowtrafficregulations.,Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld.,Lastbutnoleast,thedeficiencyineducationisthecausecontributingtothecrimeoftheyoung.,29如果我们能做到如上所述,毫无疑问,我们就能精通英语。
_30目前根据一项调查,中国学生半数以上患有近视,位居世界第一。
_31中国在世界上人口最多,占到了20%,其次是印度,占到17%。
_,Chinahasthelargestpopulationoftheworld,whichaccountsforabout20%,followedbyIndia,makingupabout17%.,Currently,accordingtoasurvey,morethanhalfofChineseschoolchildrenareshortsighted,rankingfirstintheworld.,Onconditionthatwecandoasmentionedabove,therecanbenodoubtthatwecanacquireagoodknowledgeofEnglish.,写作练习一假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。
注意:
1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.词数120左右;3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:
文科:
arts;理科:
scienceGoodafternoon,everyone.Welcometoourschool!
_Thanks!
短文改错Goodafternoon,everyone,Welcometoourschool!
Ifeelextremehonoredhere,onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool,toaddressyourguestsfromAmerica,sharewithyoumyexperienceofchoosingthemainsubjectbetweenscienceandarts.Atpresent,highschoolstudentsfacedwithachoicebetweenartsandscience.Intermsofme,itwasnotaeasychoicetomake.Aftercarefulconsideration,though,Idecidedonscienceasmymainsubjectofstudy.Myreasonsareasfollow.,Tostart,sciencegraduatesareingreatdemandthanartsonesinChina.Additionally,thesciencemajorcanhelpmeachievemychildhooddreamofbecomingascientist.Furthermore,myparentswishmetostudyscienceatcollegebecausetheybelieveIwillhaveabrighterfutureasasciencestudent.Lastbutnotleast,myphysicsteacherismyrolemodel,hisinfluenceonmehadalotoftodowithmydecision.ItisforthereasonsmentioningabovethatIfinallymademychoice.Thanks!
Goodafternoon,everyone,Welcometoourschool!
Ifeelextremelyhonoredhere,onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool,toaddressyouguestsf
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