7 score model essays.docx
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Somepeoplethinkthatstudentswhodon’ttakeabreakinstudiesbetweenahighschoolandauniversityareatdisadvantagecomparedtostudentsthattravelandworkafterhighschoolbeforefurtheringtheireducation.Doyouagreeordisagree?
Nowadays,inourcompetitiveworld,tosucceed,knowledgefromschoolanduniversityisnotenough.Therefore,thestudentwhostudyfromtheschooltouniversitygetbenefitlessandcontributelesstoo,thanthoseofstudentwhogototravelorjobandgetexperienceandskillsbeforegoinghighereducation.Therearetwofollowingreasonstoproveformyopinion.IcallthegroupofpeoplewhostudyfromschooltouniversityisgroupAandtheothergroupisgroupB.
Firstly,atschoolanduniversity,whatgroupAgainisalmosttheory,theoryandtheory.Ofcourse,theoryisveryneccessary,however,youcan’tdoeverythingwiththeory.Youmusthavepraticalexperience.ThisiswhatgroupAlackverymuch.Althoughinthethirdofforthyearatuniversity,groupAcanbeapprenticesinsomecompanies,tohelpthemapproachtheirfuturejobs,theyaren’ttrainedwellbecauseofshorttime.Andtherealjobisstillverystrangefor/to/withthem.Aftergraduating,withoutexperience,groupAcan’taccomplishtheirworkperfectly.Ontheotherhand,ittakethemtimeandmoneytokeepupwithotherexperiencedonesandmaybescorned.Therefore,groupAcancontributelessthangroupBwhohavethemosttwoimportantthings:
skillsandexperience.
Secondly,asgroupAiscontributeless,theysurelygetlessbenefit.Moreover,manycompanieswhichemploypeopleingroupAhavetotrainthemfromtheback-ground.ThesecompaniestakethiscostfromgroupA’ssalarytogetridofthefactthattheiremployeesmayleaveafterbeingtrainedtoothercompanies.So,lessbenefitisunavoidableandcertain,WhereasgroupBaremoreloyalandeffectiveworkers.Theyalsohaveusefulexperienceandskills.Besides,theireducationisthesameasorevenhigherthangroupA.Astheresult,groupBgetmorebenefitabsolutely.
Inconclusion,Ithinkstudentshouldgototravelorjobbeforegoinghigh.Therefore,theycan’tonlyhavebasicknowledgebutalsoskillsandexperiencewhichareusefulforthemtogetagoodjobandabrilliantfuture.
Thisessayistoolong(350wordsinsteadof250).Tofightthisproblem,trytowritemoreingeneralandprovidefewerdetails.Thelanguageandideasaregoodandsoistheessay?
sstructure.LookslikeBand7tome.
Wearebecomingincreasinglydependentoncomputers.Theyareusedinbusiness,crimedetectionandeventoflyplanes.Whatthingswilltheybeusedforinfuture?
Isthisdependenceoncomputersagoodthingorshouldwebemoresuspiciousoftheirbenefits?
Todaycomputersareusedalmosteverywhere,itisimpossibletoimagineourlifewithoutPCs,Internet,handphonesandothercomputerdevices.Itisreasonablethatpeoplelooktothefutureofcomputers.Inwhatfieldwillbecomputersusedforandwhatrolewillhumanhasinthisworldinfuture?
Besides,computersmakeourlifeeasier,wecaneasilygetinformationaboutanyproductweplantobuyorplaceweplantovisitoverasecondusingpersonalcomputerandInternet.ScientistspredictthatinthenearestfutureitwillbepossibletosmellanewperfumeusingInternetandwatch3Dscenesathomelikewedointhetheater.AccordingtoforecastsofHRagenciesmachineswillreplacejobofcashiers,civilandmilitarypilots.SomecorporationsinJapanalreadysellinghousewife-robots,whichhelpoldpeopletokeeptheirhomeclean.
Despitethefactthatcomputershelpus,theymakeusdependent.Apparently,peoplespendmoretimebehindmonitorsthateverbefore.Andsomeofthemfeelaneedformoretimetobespentwithpeopleinlivecontact.Inaddition,falloutofoneoftheimportantmodulesofspecificcomputercanentailseriousconsequences.Sufficetomentioncomputerproblem,occurredintheendof1990s,problemconcernedwithcomingyear2000(Y2K)andcatastrophesthatwerepredicted.Fortunatelyimminentdisastersdidnothappen.However,itisdifficulttoimaginewhatcouldbeifallthepredictionshadoccurred.
Weliveintechnologicalera,computerspenetratedeverywherewithallbenefitstheyprovideandalldangerstheyhide.Howeverwearesatisfiedwiththemandsometimesweeventhankthembecausetheyhelpusincommunicating,studying,doingbusiness,entertainingandsavinglivesincriticalsituations.
Greatessay,allthetaskpointsarecovered,goodlanguageandstructure.LookslikeBand7tome.
Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatisyouropiniononthis?
Nowadays,manychildreninvolvedindifferenttypesofjobstohavesomekindoffinancialassuranceforthemselves.However,whetherthisisgoodfortheirdevelopmentandpersonalityisamuchdebatableissue.Ipersonallybelievethatpaidworksisharmfulforchildrenforseveralreasons.
Itissaidthatchildrenlearnvaluableexperienceintheworkplace.Thismaybetrue.However,Iwouldarguethatchildrenaremainlyemployedforjobsthatrequiremanualworkandarelowpaid.Therecentstatisticrevealsthecommontasksthatchildrenareassignedarewashingdishes,cleaningfloorsorservingfoodinrestaurants.Meanwhile,thiskindofjobsactuallydonotprovidechildrenwithnecessaryandusefulskillssothattheycanapplyintheirfuturecarrer.
Thisbringsmetothesecondpoint.Defendersofchildworkarguesthatitisaneffectivemethodoflearning.Thepointischildrenshouldbeabletoapplyknowledgetaughttotheminareallifeworkingenvironment.Althoughthisisundoubtedlytrue,italsomeansthatchildrenmayneglecttheclassroomstudyandevenfailtheclass.Theworstthingisyettocome.Theymaybecomesooccupiedwiththebenefitsaheadofthemlikesmallsalaryandleaveschool.
Finally,supporterssaidthatithelpsthemtobuildresponsibilityinthefamily.Theywillunderstandhowitisdifficulttoearnmoneyandthereforehaveacompassionateviewwiththeirparents.Thisistruetoacertainextent,butmayhaveatotallyadverseeffectonchildren.Aschildrencanmakemoneyatanearlyage,theywouldfeelthatitisappropriatetospendonluxurythingsbytheirownmoney,whichcouldberecoveredlater.
Inconclusion,Ithinkthatparentsshouldtakemeasurestorestricttheirchildtowork,otherwiseitwouldhaveanegativeconsequencesontheirfutures.
Thisisagreatessay,Band7+candidate.Myonlysuggestionistodivideyourargumentssothatyouhave2paragraphscoveringarguments?
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Somesaythattheinternetismakingtheworldsmallerbybringingpeopletogether.Towhatextentdotoyouagreethattheinternetismakingiteasierforpeopletocommunicatewithoneanother.
Aglobalvillage,thatiscertainlywhattheworldfeelslikenowadays.Withthehelpoftheworldwideweb,youcanreachoutandgettoknowpeopleyoumightnevermeetinperson.Articlescanbecoauthored,businessdealscanbefinalized,degreescanbeearnedandattimesevenmedicaladvicecanbegiven?
andallofthisisjustaclickaway.
Electronicmail,instantmessages,webcamerasandmicrophones;allthesegadgetsandprogramsmakethepresenceoftheotherthepersonmorereal.Whoknows;withthehelpofvisualrealityyoumightevengeta3-Dimageofthespeaker!
Ibelievethattheinternetisonethebestinventionsofthelastcentury,youcanhardlygettomissanyoneandnobodyisreallyoutofreach.Youwillgettokeepthechannelspatentwithyourfriends,andwillbeabletodoyourworkfromyourbedroominyourpajamas!
However,theinternetcanalsobeamajorsourceofharassment.Spammersandhackerscaninvadeyourprivacyandgetpersonal/confidentialinformation,whichotherwisetheywillnevergetaccessto.Youareneveroutofanybody’sreach,unlessyoumakeaconsciousdecisionofnotcheckingyouremail,therecanbealwaysmoreworkwaitingforyouinyourinboxandyoumightneverhaveamomentforyourself.Worse,ifyouwereaworkaholic,youmightneverexperiencethatstress-freevacationeveragaininyourlife?
Simply,becauseyouhaveyourmobileworkplacewithyou.
Asaromantic,Iwillalwayslookforwardtogettinganoccasionalletterinthesnailmail.Apersonalletter,whereIcansensethemoodofthewriterbytheslantsinhis/herhandwritingandgettoknowhim/herbetter.ButasatypeApersonalityperson,theinternetgivesmeallwhatIdreamofincommunication?
speed,reliability,andconvenienceoftimeandplace.Icancertainlytolerateitsshortcomingsanyday,aslongasitkeepsmeclosetomylovedones.
Thisisagreatessay,atleastband7andmaybeeven8.Itislongerthanrequired(340wordsinsteadof250)whichmeansthatittookyoumoretimetowriteandlesstimetocheckyourwork.
Newseditorsdecidewhattobroadcastontelevisionandwhattoprintinnewspaper.Whatfactordoyouthinkinfluencetheirdecisions?
Dowebecomeusedtobadnews?
Woulditbebetterifmoregoodnewswasreported?
Newseditorsdecidewhattobroadcastontelevisionandwhattoprintinnewspapers.Therearetwofactorsthatinfluencetheirdecisions.Thefirstisthekindofcustomerstheytendon.Becauseeachkindofreadersandwatchershasitsownfeatures.Ifyourcustomersarealmostteenagers,forexample,youhavetoconcentrateonsomethingattractingthemsuchasstories,photographsaboutsi
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