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2对比观点
实例二99年6月真题
ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?
Outline:
1.有人认为读书要有选择
2.有人认为应当博览群书
3.我的想法
①11分
Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.
But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat"toknowmore,toreadmore".Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.
②5分
Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedineverybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.Butthosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsandsoon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwasteourtimewhichitislimited.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhandreadingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.
失分原因:
分段太少,语法错误太多
③2分
Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselective.Butothersbelievedreadingextensivelywascorrection.
Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?
Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,
ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweinterested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.
Onanotherhand.Someone'sinterestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwecouldn'treadingatonlyonelevel.
Iconfirmedalloftheseideasweregoodbutweren'twise.
Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsomewhichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don'ttreatthesebookswithrecklessabandon.
Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.
失分原因:
分段太多,语法错误太多
④14分
Howshouldweread?
Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?
Everyonehashisownview.
Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What'smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'treadthem.Sincewecan'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.
Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.
Who'sright?
Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.
⑤8分
Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechosen.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohumanbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.
Somepeoplethinkthatmenshouldreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.
Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.Wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.
失分原因:
结构失调,表述方式单一
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
四段比较好
(启)ParagraphI:
(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;可以用问句开头Howshouldpeople……
(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
(承)ParagraphII:
(1)提出一种观点或优点;
(2)本段的支持性分论点;
(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
(转)ParagraphIII:
(1)承上启下的过渡句;
(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;
(3)本段的支持性分论点
(4)本段总(可以省略)。
(合)ParagraphIV:
(1)平衡两种看法;
(2)给出自己的观点。
④14分
Howshouldweread?
Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?
Everyonehashisownview.(启)
注:
1.第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解
Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What'smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'treadthem.Sincewecan'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.(承)
注:
1.本段总分总结构
2.theyarguethat=theythinkthat
3.withthedevelopmentof...
4.what'smore递进关系,moreover
Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.(转)
注:
1.But转折词
2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat
3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比
4.许多知识awiderangeof/alargescopeof/much;获取知识acquire/getknowledge
5.knowsnothing→little;hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉
Who'sright?
Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.(合)
Thereisalottobesaidforbothsidesontheargument.ButIholdtheopinionthat……
①11分
Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.
注:
1."people,who"应去掉逗号,改为非限制定语从句。
2.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat
3.touch碰,闪光点词汇,如教材P7:
shouldertheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩负起责任
But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat"toknowmore,toreadmore".Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.
历届CET6试题
2002.12
Directions:
Writeacompositionabout120/150wordsbasedonthefollowingoutline:
1)当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2)诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实
2002.6
Topic:
StudentUseofComputers(atleast150words)
Averagenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek
1、上图所示为1990、1995、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述其变化;
2、请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);
3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。
2002.1
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:
ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampusYoushouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:
假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
LiMing
2001.6
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.
SupposeyouareZhangYing.WritealettertoXiaoWang,aschoolmateofyourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringtheweek-longholiday.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesuggestionsgivenbelowinChinese.
1.表示欢迎
2.提出过度假安排的建议
3.提醒应注意的事项
ALettertoaSchoolmate
June23,2001
DearXiaoWang
2001.1
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?
Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:
1.面试在求职过程中的作用。
2.取得面试成功的因素:
仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……
2000.6
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?
Thefirstsentencehasalreadybeenwrittenforyou.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbasyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:
1.很多认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……
2.也有人持不同意见,……
3.我的看法和打算
2000.1
Direction:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.
1.上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可以通过多种途径解决
2.哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)
1999.6
Direction:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?
Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyoucompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1.有人认为读书要有选择。
2.有人认为应当博览群书。
3.我的看法。
1999.1
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic.Don'tHesitatetoSay"No"
Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们说"不"。
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