初中英语中考作文指导(公开课).ppt
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,中考英语书面表达,萍钢中学,中考英语作文8个话题,一、介绍人(自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等)二、介绍地点(旅游等)三、校园生活(春游、校规、科目、学习困难等)四、课外生活(家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等)五、假期安排(计划、过去经历等)六、节假日活动(志愿者活动、过去经历)七、环境、健康(环保、疾病、食品健康等)八、个人观点建议(提建议、劝告等),写作指导Letsgoforit!
basicstructure(基本结构的安排),DearMr.Know,Impleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First,someofusarentinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenitssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.SolotsofusdonthaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.Whatsmore,therearesomanynewwordswehaventmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idontknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecantunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?
HowcanweimproveourEnglish?
Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.,Letsgoforit!
Mary,(thebeginning),(theending),thebody(正文),basicrules(写作考试规则),search(审)list(列)add(加:
开头和结尾)connect(连)beautiful(美:
谚语/例子),牛刀小试,健康很重要。
在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。
人们是如何度过假期的呢?
国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。
根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
审(search),travel,stayathome,visitfriendsorparents,work,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,stayathome,work,visitfriendsorparents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。
Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,列(list),加(add),加首尾,使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。
Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?
Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.(thebeginning)Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.(theending),加(addbeginningandending),Writingskills(“写”的技巧),方法一:
善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇,Whichisbetter?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.,Whichisbetter?
我希望你能帮助我。
AIwishyoucanhelpme.BImlookingforwardtoyourhelp.,Whichisbetter?
他们很早就到了。
ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.,Whichisbetter?
最后,他的狗得救了,他感到很惊讶。
AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.,AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.,我认为学英语很有趣。
我们应该保护环境。
AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BItsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.,方法二:
活用多种句型,Writingskills(“写”的技巧),她还小,搬不动这么重的箱子。
ASheisveryyoung.Shecantcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecantcarrytheDSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe,方法三:
妙用关联词,Writingskills(“写”的技巧),1.表示并列或递进:
and,aswellas,bothand,whatsmorenotonlybutalso,neithernor2.表示选择:
or,eitheror3.表示转折:
but,however,althoughthough,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:
because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:
if,unless6.表示对比:
instead,notbut,while,inthesameway,ontheonehandontheotherhand7.表示解释:
forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:
tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:
also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:
allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort,关联词(connectionwords),用适当的连词连接文段,MynameisTom.Iam15yearsold._myappearances,Iamtall_Iwearglasses._mypersonalities,Iamshy_friendly.Ihaveahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.Ihavelotsofhobbies._,Ienjoy_singing_collectingstamps.Now,IstudyinClass1,Grade3,BayiHighSchool.Myfavoritesubjectismath._,IaminterestedinEnglish,Chinese,physics_.Ilivefarfromschool_Iusuallygetupat6:
00andgotoschoolbysubway._,Ihaveabusy_wonderfullife.,Asfor,and,Asfor,but,Forexample,notonly,butalso,Besides,andsoon,so,Inaword,but,Letstry,_Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidntgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_.Welikedoingkindsofsports_swimming,runningandhiking._,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._,hewentback._,hesmiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAtlast,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?
Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连(connect),Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,美(beautify),Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.,Proverb(谚语)/saying,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”,多用后者。
锻炼对学生有好处,Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise,Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.,集中注意力于学习,Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.,Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾,多是结尾。
加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”,多用后者。
加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.,Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾,多是结尾。
加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”,多用后者。
Enjoysomeproverbs,1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.,三思而后行。
熟能生巧。
有志者事竟成。
入乡随俗。
早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
失败是成功之母。
5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.,3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.,6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.,Enjoysomeproverbs,7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.,覆水难收。
一天一个苹果,医生远离我。
条条大路通罗马。
活到老,学到老。
方法四:
妙用引文和例子(多用于“thebody”),Writingskills(“写”的技巧),青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。
Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.,Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.,加例子,加例子,在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。
Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.,结尾:
提出倡议或号召,LetsDoitnow!
/Dontdoitagain!
Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.,Dontwait.Joinusnow!
Starttojoinusnow!
Dontputitoff!
Becomeavolunteertoday!
Howamazing!
Icantwait!
Saveanimals!
SaveOurselves!
Saveourplanet!
Donthesitate(犹豫).Itwillbegreatfun!
练练笔,写作文,First,someofusarentinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenitssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.SolotsofusdonthaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.Whatsmore,therearesomanynewwordswehaventmetbeforeinthepassage.Idontknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecantunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.,Letsgoforit!
DearMary,IheardyoudidntdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.,Yours,_,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”_,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.,Yourturntogoforit!
(试填一填),DearMary,IheardyoudidntdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.,Yours,_,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”_,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.,Tobeginwith,Ofcourse,Infact,Then,Yourturntogoforit!
(check),TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!
NowIminGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowImasbusyasabee.Theresalotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:
ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!
Theresanoldsaying:
Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idontwanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.Illspendtheresttimeefficiently.Astheresnoelevatortosuccess,Illtrymybesttodoeverythingstepbystep!
IbelievethatIcandoit!
Itsyourturn!
(请分析以下的文章),Yourturntogoforit!
Goodwords:
Goodsentences:
Connectionwords:
随着人口的增多,人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住,而且需要越来越多的食物。
人类把森林变成了耕地;新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地;许多动物遭到猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。
然而动物是我们人类的朋友,我们有责任去保护他们,而不是伤害或猎杀它们。
请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求:
1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整;2.提示的内容要全部用上。
Itsyourturn!
(练练笔),LetsHelpOurFriendsWiththeincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimalshabitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?
Do
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