专题15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落.docx
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专题15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
专题15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
一、读后续写收尾的方式:
1.画面定格
2.对话收尾
3.主题升华
4.结尾留白
5.首尾呼应
二、画面定格
1.人物动作的画面定格
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如:
(2020杭州高级中学等五校联考)Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.
如:
Hishardworkpaidoff!
Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.
如:
Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid,“Tomorrowyoucanbecomehumanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
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(1)Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.
天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起,脚下是青草,仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。
黎明已经来临。
(黎明到来的画面)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(2)Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线,留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。
(黎明到来的画面)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
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(3)ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时,日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。
(美好日落时的画面)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(4)Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight,resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除,就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。
(日落时的画面)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(5)Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.
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被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜,带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。
无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。
(描写夜空的画面)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(6)Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.
抬头一看,我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。
我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光,发出柔和的光辉。
我的意识随着热度而衰退。
我眨了眨眼,然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中,恢复了知觉。
(特殊寓意)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(7)Dottedwithglitteringstars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.缀满星光的天空,午夜的蓝色,给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。
(神话般美丽的夜空画面)
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2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(8)Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷,被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。
一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起,把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
(雨后清新的画面)
Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光告别。
(雨水来临的画面)
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
(9)TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步时,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。
偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉下来,轻轻地摇晃,缓缓落到到地面。
(描写落叶的画面)
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三、对话收尾
(1)Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.“Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe’sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”
(2)WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina’sfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.“I’veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs’loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus,”saidNina,“Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneedourloveandcare.”
(3)HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth.Soonsheofferedhimajobworkingforthecompany.Shesaid,“Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitudeandisdefinitelythetypeofemployeewearelookingfor.Iwastold,‘Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehisjobsifhewasbeingpaid.’Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteyoungmanandhehasalreadystartedworkingforus.”
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(4)…TheyhungallthethingsbacktotheaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,“Yes!
Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive.”
四、主题升华
(1)Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehasbeauty,brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbea_famous_dancer.Someday,when_I_am_olderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.(母爱的深远影响)
(2)….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn’tequalhappiness.Andfreelifestylealsodoesn’tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyiseverything.Inmyopinion,moneycan’ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表达自己的价值观)
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(4)“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,”theteacheranswered.“First,you’vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays,‘Everycoinhastwosides.’Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题)
五、结尾留白
(1)Whileshewrappedthem,ItookadeepbreathandaskedJoy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans”IexplainedthatI’dliketowaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothehospital–gaveGraceandherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby.“Wouldyoubeinterestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat”Iasked.“I’dloveto,”shereplied,hereyessparklinglikediamonds.And,thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreakfollowingBetsy’sdeath.(故事结尾留白,给予读者想象空间)
(2)Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedtoopenit.Hedeclaredaloud,“WhocaresHewantedmetohaveitanyway.Imightaswellenjoyitnow.”Withthat,heunwrappedthewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise,therewasnohardrockcandyinside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdollars.
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六、首尾呼应
(1)2017年浙江高考题
开头:
Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsuprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefaimlytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.
结尾:
Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,
shewasstillakindandnicemom.
(2)2018年浙江高考题
开头:
Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.
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结尾:
NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.
(3)2016年浙江高考题
开头:
AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.
结尾:
Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious搞笑的experience.
附:
名言警句升华主题
1. Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事竟成。
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2. Wellbegunishalfdone.好的开端是成功的一半。
3. East,west,homeisbest.金窝、银窝,不如自己的草窝。
4. Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.学无坦途。
5. Lookbeforeyouleap./Firstthink,thenact.三思而后行/摸着石头过河
6. Itisnevertoolatetomend.亡羊补牢,犹为未晚。
7. Lightcome,lightgo.来得容易,去得快。
8. Timeismoney.时间就是金钱。
9. Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真交。
10. Greathopesmakegreatman.远大的希望,造就伟大的人物。
11. Afterastormcomesacalm.雨过天晴。
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12. AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。
13. Artislong,butlifeisshort.人生有限,学问无涯。
14. Sticktoit,andyou'llsucceed.只要人有恒,万事都能成。
15. Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.
早睡早起,富裕、聪明、身体好。
16. Agoodmedicinetastesbitter.良药苦口。
17. Itisgoodtolearnatanotherman'scost.前车之鉴。
18. Keepingisharderthanwinning.创业不易,守业更难。
19. Let'scrossthebridgewhenwecometoit.船到桥头自然直。
20. Morehaste,lessspeed.欲速则不达。
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21. Nopains,nogains.不劳则无获。
22. Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。
23. Wherethereislife,thereishope.生命不息,希望常在。
24. Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
25. Wemustnotliedown,andcry,"Godhelpus."求神不如求己。
26. Aplantmayproducenewflowers;manisyoungbutonce.
花有重开日,人无再少年。
27. Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者,天助之。
28. Whatmaybedoneatanytimewillbedoneatnotime.明日待明日,明日不再来。
29. AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
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30. Diligenceisthemotherofsuccess.勤奋是成功之母。
31. Truthisthedaughteroftime.时间见真理。
32. Takecareofthepence,andthepoundswilltakecareofthemselves.
积少自然成多。
/小事留意,大事顺利
33. Nomaniswiseatalltimes.智者千虑,必有一失。
34. Neverputofftilltomorrowwhatyoucandotoday.今天能做的事绝不要拖到明天。
35. Liveandlearn.活到老,学到老。
36. Killtwobirdswithonestone.一石双鸟。
37. Itneverrainsbutitpours
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