TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路.docx
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TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路
TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路
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托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:
有助儿童成长的礼物
托福写作难点话题一览
Whatgiftwouldyougivetohelpachilddevelop?
Agift(suchasacamera,asoccerball,orananimal)cancontributetoachildsdevelopment.Whatgiftwouldyougivetohelpachilddevelop?
Why?
Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyourchoice.写作思路展开结构分析
帮助孩子成长发展应该送什么礼物?
这个问题其实问的比较大的,因为在不同人眼里怎样才是好的发展本来就有很大差异,假如大家没思路又或是想法太多不知道挑哪个,的建议是干脆采取比较保险的itdepends策略,比如不同年龄的孩子可能需要不同的礼物等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
Childsdevelopmentisoftensupplementedbythegiftstheyreceivefromimportantadultsintheirlife.Itisimportanttochoosethesegiftscarefully,andfostergrowthintherightareas.IfIweretogiveagifttoachild,itwouldbethegameofchess.Chessoffersanumberofadvantagestoachild.Chessbuildssocialskills,itencouragesthechildtodevelopthehigherfunctionsofthebrain,anditisagoodhobby.Aswithmostgames,chessencouragesachildtobesocialwithothers.Aschessisatwo-persongame,anytimechildrenplaythegametheywillbeinteractingwithothers.Aschessisacompetitivegamewithawinnerandaloser,childrenwillhavetolearnhowtolosegracefullyiftheyhopetokeeptheirchesspartners.Buildingsocialskillswhenoneisyoungisveryimportantforfuturesuccessesthroughoutoneslife.Playingchessisalsoanexcellentwaytoincreaseonesthinkingabilities.Chessisagameofstrategy.Whenplayingchess,achildwillbuildimportantskillssuchaspatternrecognition,strategicthinking,andanalyticalthinking.Alloftheseskillsareveryimportant,especiallywhengoingthroughschool.Manysubjectsayoungpersonmusttakeinschoolutilizealloftheseskills,andworkingonthemearlyinlifecanbenothingbutbeneficial.Finally,chessisanexcellenthobbyforayoungperson.2019-08-2120:
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Playingchess,oranyothertime-intensivegame,keepschildrenoutoftrouble.Iftheyarespendingtheirtimeworkingonbuildingtheirchessstrategies,theyarenotoutonthestreetscausingtrouble.Manychildrendevelopbehavioralproblemsbecauseofsimpleboredom.Chessisanexcellentremedyforthis,asitisfuntospendonesfreetime.Thus,Ithinkchessisanexcellentpresenttogivetoayoungchild.Chessencouragesbothpersonalityandmentaldevelopment,whichareveryimportantinachildsearlyyears.Whilemanygiftswillencouragethematurityofoneofthesetypesofdevelopment,therearefewgiftsthatfosterthedevelopmentofboth.
托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:
学生需要上体育课吗
托福写作难点话题一览
Shouldwespendallschooldaystudyingorsetasidesometimeforexercising?
Somepeoplesaythatphysicalexerciseshouldbearequiredpartofeveryschoolday.Otherpeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldspendthewholeschooldayonacademicstudies.Whichopiniondoyouagreewith?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
同意前者更容易写一些。
身体健康对每个人都很重要,并且是学习进步的前提。
体育训练可以使学生学到很多东西,比如团队精神。
合理的课程设置是学校的责任,学校应该想办法保证学生的健康。
本话题高分范文赏析
Somepeoplebelievethatitisimportanttohavephysicalactivitiesaspartofachildseverydaycurriculumatschool.Othersdisagree,andarguethatstudentsshouldspendalloftheirtimeonacademicstudies.personally,Ibelievethatphysicaleducationisavitalpartofaneducationasitteacheschildrentotakecareoftheirbodies,howtoworkasateam,andgivesthemamethodofreleasingtensionandaggression.Humanshavealwaysknownabouttheimportanceoftakingcareofourbodies,butitseemsthatinrecentyears,wehavegraduallyforgottenthisimportantfact.Itisabsolutelynecessarytogetsomephysicalactivityatleastafewtimesaweek,andengrainingthisideaintochildrenwhentheyareyoungisthebestwaytoensuretheirhealthforlife.Physicalexerciseusuallyinvolvesteamworkofsomesort.Muchoftheexercisethatyoungpeoplegetinvolvesgamessuchasbasketball,volleyball,orfootball.Allofthesesportsteachchildrenhowtoworktogethertoachieveacommongoal,inthiscase,winning.Ialsobelievethatallowingthechildrentoworktogetherinafunenvironment,ratherthanonlyonacademicprojects,bringsastrongersenseofcamaraderie,whichhelpsthechildrentohavehealthyrelationshipswithothers.Finally,physicalexerciseisanexcellentwaytoreleasetensionandaggression.Ifoneisparticularlystressedaboutschoolorlife,gettingexercisecanhelpthepersontorelax.Asforlettingoutaggression,itismuchhealthiertokickafootballthanitistohitsomeonewhohasmadeyouangry.Exerciseshoulddefinitelybeapartofastudentseducation.Exercisehasmuchmoretoofferthansimplygetting"abreak"fromacademics.Physicalexercisecanbalanceoutastudentshecticlife,andmakeitmuchmorepleasurable.
托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:
雕像为谁而塑?
托福写作难点话题一览
Whominyourcountrywouldyouchoosetobuildastatuefor?
Yourcityhasdecidedtobuildastatueormonumenttohonorafamouspersoninyourcountry.Whowouldyouchoose?
Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyourchoice.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目的考点有两个,一个当然是选择哪一位名人来进行展开,另一个则是你对自己的城市到底有多少了解,换句话说,考生不仅要详细说明这位名人的事迹,同时也要把名人和当地的关联性写出来,比如名人是这个城市出身的,或者名人为这个城市做出了哪些贡献等等。
这其实就相当于杜绝了很多同学随便扯大旗找一些外国名人来写的思路。
Ifmycityhasdecidedtobuildastatuetohonorafamouspersoninmycountry,Iwouldchoosealatesinger,TeresaTeng.Shewasbornin1950s,anddiedofasevereasthmaattackatage41inMay1995whileholidayinginChiangMai,Thailand,triggeringanoutpouringofgriefamongherlegionsoffansinAsiaandelsewhere.Duringherbrilliantstagecareer,favoredbyfansalloverAsia,shemovedmillionsofpeople.Herfamoussongsinclude"sweet","storyofsmalltown",and"themoonrepresentsmyheart",etc.ItwassaidthatitwasherwhointroducedseveralgenerationsinChinatoacertainfieldofpopularmusic.
HersongshaveaccompaniedthegrowthanddevelopmentofmanypeopleinChina.Inthehomeofthesegenerationssoul,hersweetvoicehasbecomeimmortalbeautyandmemory.Althoughshesgone,hersoundofsinginghasnevervanished.Sheisconstantlycommemorated;fromBeijingtoTaipei,HongKongtoSingapore,herubiquitousfansobservehercommemorationfromtimetotime,cherishingherincrediblebeauty,andhervoicethatsoundstocomefromheaven.Hersweetsongsmadeheralegend,andarestillregularlyheardonradio,andcontinuetohaveafollowinginChinesecommunitiesallovertheworld.
Sheshouldberememberednotonlybecauseofherbeautyandvoice,butalsobecauseofhergreatcharity.Shefounded"TeresaTengfoundation"duringherlifetime.Thepurposeofthefoundationistocultivateandsupportgiftedartists,andatthesametimethefoundationincludesatrusttodistributescholarshiptomakesurethatartstudentshaveopportunitiestoaccomplishwhattheyactuallycan.Everyyear,TheTeresaTengFoundationalsosendagreatamountofmoneyasacharitytohelphomelesschildren.Andtheseactivitiesaresupportedbyherfansallovertheworld.
托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:
为何参加危险运动
托福写作难点话题一览
Theattractionsofdangerousactivities
Whydoyouthinksomepeopleareattractedtodangeroussportsorotherdangerousactivities?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目可能不太好展开,危险运动的定义可能很多同学都不是特别清楚,大家不妨按照极限运动来进行联想,就是那种对人身安全可能有危险性,非常规性质的运动项目,比如跳伞蹦极之类的运动。
而这类运动能够吸引人参加,原因多半是体验刺激、金钱利益之类的因素,大家可以从这些点着手论述。
本话题高分范文赏析
Peopleengagethemselvesindangerousactivitiesforvariousreasons,whichprobablyincludesmoney,pleasure,andperhapsironically,nescience.Perhapsthemostdirectdrivemightcomefrommoney,whichisneededforeveryone,anytimeandeverywhere.Peoplehaveenoughwittobalancetheircertainchoices,especiallywhentheyfadangerandmoney.ThosestuntmenorwomeninHollywoodmovies,photographerswhoshootsharksorcrocodiles,orthosewhoparticipateinstockcarracing,arealwayssophisticatedenoughcalculatewhethertheoutcomeoverweightherisk.Iftheyarewillingtotaketherisk,theymusthaveevaluatedwell.Theyknowexactlytherule:
themoreriskstheytake,themoretheymightget.Therealsoisanotherkindofpeopleinthisworld.MoneyisofalmostnoimportancetothemTheyperformdangerousactivitiesjustfortheirownpleasure.Perhapsthemostappropriateexampleinvolvessports.Actuallyeverykindofsportsisdangerous,andevencanbedeadly.Dangeralwaysexists,butpeopletendtosimplyignoreit.Takeparachutingforexample,whocanrefusethefascinationofflyingintheskylikeabird?
Ontheotherhand,itseemsthatdangeritselfmakestheactivitysofascinatingastoohardtorefuse.
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