简式商务报告bec中级写作.docx
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简式商务报告bec中级写作
商务报告的结构及常用句型
1.Introduction
介绍写作背景,阐明报告要讨论的问题。
常用句型
Theaim/purpose/objectiveofthisreportisto…
Thisreportsetsoutto/aimsto…
Mr.Xhasaskedmetoreporttoinvestigate/evaluate/study/recommend/analyze/givefeedback/estimate/assess…
Asrequestedby/Uponrequestof某人/某部门,Iamsubmittingthefollowingreporton…
As某人/某部门requestedonNovember12,Iamsubmittingthefollowingreporton…
2.Findings
常用句型
Accordingtotherecentmarketresearchundertaken/investigation/surveyundertaken/thechartabove/thetable,…….
Therecentvisit/investigation/surveyshowedthat……
Thetable/chartabovetellsusthat……
Fromthechartshown,wefind/learn/noticethat……
Thetable/chartaboveshowsthat……
3.Conclusion
常用句型
Itwasdecided/agreed/feltthat…
Noconclusionswerereachedregarding…
Accordingto/Basedonthefindingsabove,itcanbeconcludedthat……
Fromthetableshown,itcanbeconcludedthat……
Therefore,itcanbeconcludedthat
也可直接陈述结论。
4.Recommendations
1)写作中注意事项
建议必须是建立在结论的逻辑基础上,是结论的合理引申。
注意建议的合理性与层次性
言之有据,前后呼应。
言之有理,言之可行。
数码标段,层次分明。
2)常用句型
注意:
recommendation以及recommend后面要用动词原形(虚拟语气)。
Wewouldrecommendthat…
Itissuggested/recommendedthat…
Thefollowingaretherecommendations……
Basedontheconclusion/analysisabove,werecommendthat/itcanbeconcludedthat……
Withreferencetothefacts/advantagesstatedabove,thefollowingrecommendationscanbemade…
Somethingisrecommended.eg,Achangeofattitudeisrecommended.Amoreprofessionalattitudewillneedtobeencouragedthroughtraining.
Onthebasisoftheresults,Ihavethefollowingrecommendations:
Onthebasisoftheanalysis,itisreasonabletohavethefollowingrecommendations:
如果需要进一步拓展,可以描述一下建议实施后可预期的进展或者景象。
解读商务图表信息
I.写作注意事项
在看图表作文写作时,作者要仔细分析图表的文字说明和数字表述,在完全理解的基础上,对其进行归纳总结,从中发现要说明的问题。
语言表达要准确、精炼,用词要恰当,文章要有较强的逻辑性。
对图表中给予的繁多的资料数据勿需全部予以描述,而是要选择有典型性,代表性的重点。
II.概括图表信息的常用词组和表达方式
1.上升趋势
toincrease/anincreasetogouptogrow/agrowth
tojump/ajumptoleap/aleap
toreachapeak/apeak
tosoar/asoartoskyrocket
torise/arise
toupsurge/anupsurgetoupswing/anupswing高涨
2.下降趋势
tocollapse/acollapse
todecline/adeclinetodecrease/adecreasetoreduce/areduction
todrop/adrop tofall/afalltogodown
toreachalowpoint/alowpoint
3.程度
升降程度较大
agreatdeal/big/alotmuch
clear/clearlyapparent/apparentlyobvious/obviously
considerable/considerably
important/importantly
dramatic/dramatically
great/greatly
drastic/drastically
marked/markedly
fast
quick/quickly
rapid/rapidly
remarkable/remarkably
sharp,/sharply
significant/significantly
strong/strongly
sudden/suddenly
升降程度较小
abit
alittle
fractional/fractionally
gentle/gently
gradual/gradually
hardly
little
slight/slightly/marginally
slow/slowly
small
steady/steadily
4.平稳状态
tobehardlychanged
tohavelittlechange
tokeepsteady
toleveloff/out
toremainconstant
toremainunchanged
例句
TrucksalesrosesteadilyfromOctobertoDecember.
AsteadyfallinsalesduringNovemberandDecemberfollowedthesharpincreaseinOctober.
TrucksalesdroppedduringNovemberbutincreasedagaininDecembertoexceedOctobersales.
Trucksaleshardlychangedthroughouttheperiod,exceptforaslightincreaseinNovember.
Aslowbutsteadyincreasewasfollowedbyasharpfallandanincreasetowardstheend.
TrucksalesdroppeddowninOctober,butremainedunchangedfortherestoftheperiod.
5.描述饼图的句型模版
比较主体中的一部分is/occupies/constitutes/accountsfor%inthewholepiechart.
做出比较
The比较主体doubled/tripledin时间comparedwiththosein时间.
A在XX期间增长了一倍/两倍。
The比较主体in地点in时间is……incontrastto……in地点in时间.
A在XX期间的数量是XX,然而/同时,B在XX期间的数量是XX
AisindirectproportiontoB.AB成正比
(AisdirectlyproportionaltoB.)
Aisininverse/reciprocalproportiontoB.AB成反比。
(Aisinversely/reciprocallyproportionaltoB.)
Ahas倍数asmany/much比较主体asB.A是B的多少倍
Ahasthesame比较主体asB.AB相同/相等
6.其它参考句型
1.Ataslowerrate…
2.Itreflectsthegreatdifferencesthatexistbetween…
3.Thesefigureswereoverwhelminglygreaterthanthecorrespondingfigureof…
4.Itcanbeseenfromthechartthatsignificantly…~er…than…
5.Inalllocations,AoutnumberedB…
6.Thesetwopiechartsshowthedifferencesbetweentwogroupsof…
7.Thefirstpointtonoteisthehugeincrease(inthenumberof)…
8.Aismorethan***times(bigger)thanB
9.ThebiggestlosswastoA,whichdecreasedfrom***to***ofthewhole.
10.Thebiggestgains(ingraduatenumbers)weremadebyAwhich,asagroup,haveincreasedbyover**%
11.Tosumup,…
12.Thisbarchartdisplaysthenumbersof…
13.Thechartreflectsseveraltrends.
14.But……Weseeadifferenttrendemerging.
15.Whenwecompare…,wesee…
16.Thissuggestsincreasededucationalopportunitiesforwomeninhighereducation.
17.Accordingtothegraph,…
18.Theproportionof…
19.Therewasaslightrecovery…
20.……hasdroppeddramatically
21.Thegeneraltrendappearstobeincreases.
22.Therewereapproximately…
23.…hadjumpedfourfoldto**
24.…rosesharplyfrom**to**
25.Remainedconstantat**
26.Theoveralltrendfor…
27.Thegraphshowsthepercentageof…
28.Wecanseethat…swell膨胀/增大duringthe…hours,peakingat**am.
29.Althoughtherawdatadoesnotprovideanexplanationforthesetrends,
30.Whencoupledwiththegraphicinformation,leadstosomepossibleconclusions.
31.Thismayservetoexplain,atleastinpart,themirrorimageofthetwolines.
32.Perhapsthemosttelling显着的featureofthechartisthedominanceof…
33.Thegraphrelatesthepercentageof…
34.Risegraduallytoabout10%
35.Afteraslightdroparoundlunchtime,audiencesbeginafairlysteadyclimbtowardsthepeakviewershipinthehoursform6pmto10pmatsome40—45%.
36.Asharpdeclinefollowsto…
37.Listenershipdropssteadilyfromthispeak,crossingthelinefortelevisionviewsataround2pm.
38.Itcontinuestodeclinethroughouttheeveninguntilreachingalowpointat2am.
39.Thegraphprovesthedominanceof…
40.Duringthepeakperiodof…,Butduringthepeakperiodof…
41.Thediagramunfoldsaclearcomparisonbetween…
42.TheUnitedStatesasawholeinfouraspects,namely,***,***,***,***,
43.Obviously,ineveryaspect,
44.…hadamuchhighergrowthratethan…asawholeduringthatperiod.
45.Thenumberof…increasedby%
46.Themostrapidincreaseofallthefouraspects…Astotheotherthree,thoughthegrowthrateswerenotsohigh,theywereindeedremarkableandimpressive.
47.Thenumberof…droppedby%
48.Fromthediagramitcanbesafelyconcludedthat(intheyears)…
49.Thereweremanysignificantchanges(inmodesoftransport)
50.Thefollowingparagraphswillidentifyanddiscussthetrendsintheaccompanyinggraph.
51.Averynoticeabletrendwasthesteadydecreasein…
52.Duringthesameperiod,therewasalargeincrease…
53.Thisincreasedagain…
例题
例题
YouworkforMarks&Spencer,Britain’sleadingretailer.Yourcompanyplanstoinvestinalocalretailmarket.Youareaskedtoassessthelocalpurchasingpower.
Readthefollowingpiechartwhichdemonstratesthelocalfamilyincomeaftertaxes.
Usetheinformationinthecharttowriteareportinterpretingthechart,discussingtheprospectsofyourcompany’sinvestmentinthelocalretailmarket,andexplainingtheconclusionyoureachfromtheinformationinthechartandhowthechartsupportsyourconclusion.
LocalFamilyIncomeAfterTaxes
【范文】
ReportonAssessmentoftheLocalPurchasingPower
Introduction
Asrequested,Iamsubmittingthefollowingreportontheassessmentofthelocalpurchasingpower.Asisknown,thepurchasingpoweriscloselyrelatedtothefamilyincome.Soitissensibletolookintothelocalfamilyincomeaftertaxesfirst.
Findings
Fromthechartshown,wecanfindthatabout70%ofthefamilieshaveanincomeover$5000,whileonlyabout30%ofthefamilieshaveanincomeunder$5000.
Conclusion
Thereforeitcanbeconcludedthatthelocalfamilyincomeisfairlyhigh,andaccordinglythelocalpurchasingpowermustbepotential.
Recommendations
Onthebasisoftheanalysis,Ibelievethatthelocalretailmarketispromisingandtheinvestmentinthismarketwillhavebrilliantprospects.Sinceuptonowthereisn’tmuchinvestmentintheretailmarket,Irecommendthatweinvestinitasquicklyaspossible.
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