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六级写作要领
六级写作要领:
旅游文化与翻译鉴赏
1个写作方法(重复否定法),4个段落(4句口诀),7个简单句式,11个写作角度,若干的推荐替换词汇
11个万能角度:
1.角度一:
物质角度(吃穿住行)
主题hastheabilitytoprovidepeoplewithnotonlydelicious/tastyfoodbutfashionableclothesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingandhandsomeautomobiles.
…有能力给人们提供不仅是美食和美衣,还有舒适的住宿和实用的汽车。
2.角度二:
时间角度
(Learningwesternculture)occupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredomandhelpsthemachieveamorebroadenhorizon.
…非常建设性利用好时间,从而让一个人感到满足,没有时间去无聊,从而帮助他们获得更广阔的视野。
浪费时间:
wastethedays,lavishthemonthsandevensquandertheyears
角度三:
效率角度
主题(AddictiontotheInternet)makespeoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,andfinallytheylosetheirinterestinlearning,whichleadstotheirunderachievement.
主题(网瘾)会让人对重要的事情感到厌烦,让他不能学习更多地内容,最后对学习丧失兴趣,最终一事无成。
角度四:
方便和快捷
主题(Wechat,QQ,MSN)canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents,smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.
….会缩短城市甚至各大洲间的距离,使人们之间的交流变得畅通,从而消除人与人之间的障碍
角度五:
安全角度
主题(高科技产品,high-advancedfacilities)canshield(prevent)peoplefromvariouskindsofhazards,rangingfrominjury,robbery,assaults攻击;伤害totrafficaccidents.
可以帮助人们免遭各种伤害,包括受伤,被盗或来自交通的伤害。
角度六:
身心健康
It主题cultivatesanoptimisticviewtowardtheworld,andextendspeople’slifeexpectancyspanandimprovethequalityoflivingstandards.
它能让我们养成乐观的世界观,从而延长人们的寿命和提高生活的质量
角度七:
生活娱乐
Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyourseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.
它给我们提供了一系列休闲娱乐活动,帮助我们恢复精力,重获激情和增加魅力。
它丰富了我们看起来那么无聊,一成不变的空洞的生活。
角度八:
有助成长和成功
Throughsth’s/somebody’sassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishthecareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.
通过某人/某事的帮助,他们不仅能积累财富,而且能奠定职业,融入社会,最终获得社会地位。
角度九:
文化价值观
好:
ItwillexertmorepositiveinfluencesonthesustainabledevelopmentofChineseculture.
它将对中国文化的可持续发展带来积极的影响。
坏:
Itwillintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations.Itwouldputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.Itwouldnotpromotemutualunderstanding,butwouldbreachthefriendlytiesandwidenthegapbetweenpeople.
它将加剧民族间的矛盾和紧张态势。
它将让人类和谐的关系陷入危险。
它不能促进人们之间相互理解,反而破坏友谊的连接,加大加深误会。
内容:
有话说;别离题
形式:
四段
表达:
用词多样;用语多变
写作推荐替换词汇:
lesscommon
Aboutapproximately
Helpsb.Dobenefitfromdoingsth.
Trytodoattemptto/endeavortodo.
Showexhibit;demonstrate
Givecontribute
Don’t/didn’t/doesn’tfailto/failureto
Canhavetheabilitytodosth.
Ifprovidedthat
Sothus,hence,therefore,consequently,accordingly
Alotofloadsof
Importantsignificant;crucial
Opinionperspective;standpoint
Lonelysolitary
Hard-workingstudious;assiduous
Difficultarduous;formidable
Fragilevulnerable
Alwaysinvariably
Boringtedious
Dangeroushazardous
Nowadayscurrently
Puzzleperplex
Famousdistinguished
范式:
竞争
首段
题眼:
至少写2-3个分句状语(时代的发展thedevelopmentoftheera;科技的进步theprogressofthescienceandtechnology;地球村的出现theemergenceoftheearthvillage;网络化的进步thewidespreadoftheInternet;知识爆炸theexplosionoftheknowledge;信息全球化theglobalizationoftheInformation;经济一体化theintegrationoftheeconomy;文化多元化Withthediversityoftheculture)theimportanceofcompetition;修饰主题词成分:
运用形容词,最好用定语从句来修饰名词
第一段:
用时间背景来强调主题。
1.Lifeischerishedbyeveryone,buttimebyfew.
2.Now,weareenteringabrandnewera,fullofopportunitiesandinnovations,andgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’sattitudetowardssometraditionalpractice.
3.直接进入主题
Currently,theissueof_题目/主题_hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.
一段背景加题目
二段理论用否定
三段举例论中心
四段建议加举措
Withthedevelopmentofthetimesandtheadvancementofthescienceandtechnology,thecompetitionbetweenpeople/1invariouscirclesandindustries/2thatgrowfast/3playsacrucial/vital/essential/significantroleinourlife/thatpushesusmoveforward.Thecompetition,Ithink,istheonlyimpetustohelpusmakeasignificantprogress,bycommentingonthefamousremark,“survivalofthefittest.”
题释:
题眼的核心词+插入语(Ithink,inmyopinion,frommyperspective)+thesurvivalofthefittest+改写成句子
次段:
理论论据:
至少写2-3点
Ontheonehand,onlythroughthecompetition,canthecountrymakeagreatprogressandcantheindividualsachieveadvancedcapabilities.Itisthecompetitionthatenablesustorealizetheimportanceofmakingagoodliving.
提供参考的句型或句式:
1.主谓宾结构Iloveyou.
2.以v-ing为主语。
LovingyouisthehappiestthingI’vemet.
3.以todo结构为主语Tostudywithyouisveryhappy.
4.以when引导的从句
5.Itisadj.forsb.Todosth.
Itisexcitingtostudywithyou.
6.强调句:
Itis+强调部分+that。
。
。
7.倒装句:
Onlythrough…,canwe…
Ontheotherhand,否定重复式写作withoutthecompetition,Ibelieve,people’slifewillbelostinapuzzlingcircumstance.Withoutthecompetition,theanimalswon’tgetevolvedontheearth.
1.用自己的知识来解释题眼,为什么?
2.否定重复性写作!
分段:
事实论据(举例)
Iftherewerenocompetition主题,JackMa,thefounderofAlibabaGroup,wouldnevermakesuchanachievementinE-businessworld.
NelsonManda,agiantandagreathero,tellsuswithhislifestory,that,thefortitudeinthefaceofadversityandtheperseveranceonthepursuitofdreams,whenever,whereverandhowever,arethegoldenrulestothesuccess.
末端:
自己的做法或建议,至少2-3点
Tomaintainuscompetitive,wearedemandedtoobtainfruitfulknowledgeandexperience.Skills,inmyopinion,isalsoanelementtomakeuscompetitive.
Throughcompetitionwithothers,weareexpectedtoachievegreatercooperationandbenefits.
末端建议范句:
1.Itishightimethatwetookeffectiveinitiativestoaddressthisurgentissue.解决问题的迫切性
2.Itisimperativethatthecorrespondinglawsandregulationsbeintroducedandenforcedtocurbandharnessthisissue.法律法规来解决
3.倒装句结尾
Neverinanyeraofournationhavethestakes意图;目的;作用ofeducationbeenhigherthannow.
Ofallchangeswitnessedbythepastdecadesonouruniversitycampus,thefairlyfar-reaching影响广泛的onemaybe…
六级作文:
内容:
有话说,别离题
形式:
四段
语言:
用词多变;用语多样
范式:
第一段:
题眼句
写出2-3以上的与题眼相关的大背景状语部分(介宾短语)(时代的进步thedevelopmentofthetimes,科技的发展theadvanceofthescienceandtechnology,经济一体化/全球化economicintegration/theglobalizationoftheeconomy,文化多样性thediversityoftheculture,地球村的出现theemergenceoftheearthvillage,知识爆炸theexplosionoftheknowledge,信息和网络的快速发展therapiddevelopmentoftheinformationandInternet),把题眼改成一个句子,对句子中的名词进行修饰(形容词,介宾短语who,when,where或定语从句);把题释改写成一句话,运用否定性进行写作。
Withthedevelopmentofthetimesandtheadvanceofthescienceandtechnology,thefierce/drasticcompetitionbetweenpeople/1invariouscirclesandindustries/2/playsacrucial/vital/significant/dramatic/fabulousroleinourbustlinglife,bycommentingonthefamousremark,“survivalofthefittest”.Iftherewerenocompetition,thehumanbeingeventheanimalswon’tmakeagoodsurvival.
+题释句
第二段:
用理论论据来解释题眼.第一句话解释题眼,问自己到底为什么?
(否定性写作+正反对比写作,强调句+介词开头)
过渡句:
NowIwouldliketostatethepointsoftheimportanceofthecompetition.Ontheonehand,itisthefiercecompetitionthatpromotestheprogressofhumanbeing.Onlythroughthecompetition,thesocietywillmoveforward.Ontheotherhand,withoutthecompetition,wewilllosethepositivepowertoachieveourambitiousgoalsthatarehardtoseekfor.
第三段:
用事实论据来解释题眼
Now,Iprefertogiveyouanexampletoillustratetheimportanceofthecompetition.Iftherewerenocompetition,JackMa,thefounderoftheAlibabaGroup,wouldnevermakeagoodsurvivaline-businessworld.
Thepassionofreading
ZhuZiqing,oneofthegreatestwriters,ifthereisnopassioninhisreading,wouldneverwritesomanyfabulousworksforChinese.
TheharmsofmisleadinginformationonInternet虚构例子
Oneofmyfriends,whoisinterestedinsurfingonInternet,wascheatedandlostthousandsYuanbythemisleadinginformationonInternet.Intheoppositeside,
第四段:
写与题眼相关的看法、建议或做法。
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