TPO115综合写作满分范文.docx
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TPO115综合写作满分范文
TPO1综合写作高分考生范文
Thelecturerclaimsthatthenewpolicy,whichallowspeopletoworkfourdaysaweekinsteadoffive,willbringsideeffectstoboththecompaniesandthesociety.Thisdoesnotagreewiththereadingpassage,whichsuggeststhatsuchapolicywouldbebeneficial.
Tobeginwith,accordingtothelecture,acompanythatallowsemployeestohavefewerworkinghoursislikelytohiremorepeopletoensuretheirnormalproductivity.Asaresult,expensesfortrainingandmedicalinsurancewillinevitablyrise.Thereadingpassage,bycontrast,suggeststhatemployeeswhoenjoymoreleisuretimewillhavefewermistakesandworkmoreefficiently,leadingtotheincreaseofprofitfortheenterprise.
Thesecondpointofdifferenceisregardingimpactonunemploymentrate.Thelecturerassertsthatforthesakeofsavingmoney,theemployersmightraisetheirexpectationon4-dayemployees,ratherthanrecruitmorepeople.Consequently,theemployeeswhowork4dayswillbeforcedtofinishwhattheydidin5dayspreviously,andthereforenoadditionaljobswillbecreated.
Finally,thelecturerarguesthatnotonlythequalityoflifewilldeclineifanemployeeworksshorterhoursandreceiveslesspay,butalsotheyhavelesschancetobepromotedtoasupervisoryposition.However,thereadingpassagecontendsthatmoreleisurehourscancreateopportunitiestostrengthenfamilytiesandallowemployeestodevelopprivateinterests,makingthemfeelmoresatisfiedaboutlife.
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Thelecturerclaimsthatthenewpolicy,whichallowspeopletoworkfourdaysaweekinsteadoffive,willhavenegativeeffectsforcompaniesaswellassociety.Thisclaimisnotinagreementwiththatofthereadingpassage,whichsuggeststhatsuchapolicywillbebeneficial.
Accordingtothelecture,acompanythatallowsemployeestohavefewerworkinghoursislikelytohiremorepeopletoensurethatitmeetsnormallevelsofproductivity.Ifthisoccurs,expensesfortrainingandmedicalinsurancewillinevitablyrise.Thereadingpassage,bycontrast,suggeststhatemployeeswhoenjoymoreleisuretimemakefewermistakesandworkmoreefficiently,leadingtoincreasedprofitsfortheenterprise.
Thesecondpointofdifferencebetweenthelectureandthereadingpassageconcernstheimpactofthepolicyontheunemploymentrate.Thelecturerassertsthatforthesakeofsavingmoney,employersmightraisetheirexpectationsof4-dayemployeesratherthanrecruitmorepeople.Consequently,employeeswhowork4dayswillbeforcedtofinishwhattheydidin5dayspreviously,andnoadditionaljobswillbecreated.
Finally,thelecturerarguesthatunderthenewpolicy,employeeswillexperiencenotonlydecreasedqualityoflife(asshorterworkinghourswilltranslateintolesspay),butalsofewerchancestobepromotedtosupervisorypositions.However,thereadingpassagecontendsthatmoreleisurehourscancreateopportunitiestostrengthenfamilytiesandallowemployeestodevelopprivateinterests,makingthemfeelmoresatisfiedwiththeirlives.
SampleanswerforTPO2Integratedwritingtask(level5)
Thelecturertalksaboutresearchconductedbyafirmthatusedthegroupsystemtohandletheirwork.Hesaysthatthetheorystatedinthepassagewasverydifferentandsomewhatinaccuratewhencomparedtowhathappenedinreality.
First,somemembersgotfreerides.Thatis,somedidn’tworkhardbutgotrecognitionforthesuccessnonetheless.Thisalsoindicatesthatpeoplewhoworkedhardwerenotgivenrecognitiontheyshouldhavegotten.Inotherwords,theyweren’tgiventheopportunityto“shine”.Thisdirectlycontradictswhatthepassageindicates.
Second,groupswereslowinprogress.Thepassagesaysthatgroupsaremoreresponsivethanindividualsbecauseofthenumberofpeopleinvolvedandtheiraggregatedresources.However,thespeakertalksabouthowthefirmfoundoutthatgroupswereslowerthanindividualsindecisionmaking.Groupsneededmoretimeformeetings,whicharenecessaryproceduresindecisionmaking.Thiswasanotherplacewhereexperiencecontradictedtheory.
Third,influentialpeoplemightemergeandleadthegrouptowardsgloryorfailure.Iftheinfluentpeoplearegoingintherightdirectiontherewouldbenoproblem.Butincaseswheretheygointhewrongdirection,thereisnobodythathasenoughinfluencetocounterthedecisionmade.Inotherwords,thegroupmightturnintoadictatorship,withtheinfluentialpartyastheleader,andmightbecomelessflexibleinitsthinking.Theymightbecomeone-sided,andthusfailtosucceed.
TPO-3integratedwritingsampleanswer(满分范文)
Thelecturerevisestheideapresentedinthetext,thatRembrandtwasnottheartistwhopaintedthefamouspainting"PortraitofanElderlyWomaninaWhiteBonnet”.
Theinconsistencybetweenthewhitecap,whichidentifiesthewomanasaservant,andtheexpensivefurcollarshewearsdissolvesastheProfessorexplainsthatthefurcollarwasapparentlypaintedovertheoriginalpaintingtoincreaseitsworthbydisplayinganaristocraticwoman.
Inaddition,theassumptionthatlightandshadowinthepaintingdonotfittogetherisrefutedbythefactthatintheoriginalpainting,thewomanwearsalightcloththatilluminatedherface.Thusthepresentationoflightandshadowwasindeedveryrealisticandaccurate,asitischaracteristicofRembrandt’spaintings.
Finally,themysteryofthepanelconsistingofpatchesgluedtogetherisalsosolvedinthelecture.Actually,thewoodpanelwaslaterenlargedtomakeitmoregrandandvaluable,buttheoriginalpaintingwaspaintedonasinglepanel,asRembrandtwouldhavedoneit.Furthermore,thewoodisofthesametreeusedinotherRembrandtpaintings,likethe"Self-PortraitwithaHat”.
AllthisinformationpointstoRembrandtasthepainterofthecontroversialpainting.
下面这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作(关于恐龙是否是恒温动物)写的,虽然有一些小错误,但ETS评分为满分。
SampleResponse
Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate.
Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbeingendothersbasedontheavailabilityoffossilsbeingavailableinthwepolarregions,shesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Durinharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions.
Theissueoflegpositionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclasifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbodiestosupporttheirhugebodiesi.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystructurelikeendotherms(whichisactuallysuitedforrunning).
Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresenceofhaversiancanalsbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresenceofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaurswere'ntactuallygrowingcontinuouslybutwereexperiencingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuccesion.Thispattern.shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicanimals.
Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm.
DescriptionofResponse:
Despiteinitialappearances,thisresponselargelysucceedsinclearlyandaccuratelypresentinghowthelecturepointstakeissuewiththepointsinthereadingpassagethatdinosaurswereendotherms.Thefirstpointregardingdinosaursinpolarregionscouldbeabitclearer.Otherwise,theresponsemainlysuffersfromtypographicalerrors,butthesearenotregardedasmajorproblems;itisobviousthatthewriterhasgoodcontrolofstructureandvocabularyandtheabilitytousethesetoconveyinanorganizedandlogicalmannerwhathasbeenunderstoodandasked.
SampleanswerforTPO5Integratedwritingtask
Theauthorofthereadingpassageproposesthreetheoriesaslikelyexplanationsoftheprimaryfunctionofchacoconyonhouses,giantstructuresbuiltinthe12thcentury.Thelecturer,however,pointstotheinaccuraciesineachofthesetheories.
Thelecturerarguesthatthemodestnumberoffireplaceintherestructuresisincontradictionwiththehugesizeofthesehouses,indicatingthatthesestructurescouldnothavebeenusedforresidentialpurposes.Thereading,however,drawscomparisonsbetweenthechacohousesandothersimilarlargeresidentialstructuresinsupportofthe"residential"theory.
Thesecondtheory,thatthehouseswereusedforfoodstorage,isalsorejectedbythelecturer.Heexplainsthataplacethathadbeenusedforstoringmaizewouldhavemanytracesofscatteredmaize,whichisnotthecaseintheareaofthechacocanyonhouses.Thisprovesthatthe"foodstoragetheory"isunlikely.
Finally,regardingthethirdtheory,the"ceremonytheory",thelecturercontendsthatthepresenceofbrokenpotsclosetothegreathousesdoesnotoffersufficientproofthatthiswasaplaceforceremonialactivities.Hearguesthatthereareothermaterialssuchaspiecesofconstructiontrashfoundalongwiththebrokenpots,whichsuggestthatthesepotswereprobablynotusedforceremonialpurposesbutinsteadwerediscardedbyconstructionworkersuponcompletionofthegreathouses.
本篇范文可以借鉴的模板
Theauthorofthereadingpassageproposesthreetheoriesaslikelyexplanationsof__________.Thelecturer,however,pointstotheinaccuraciesineachofthesetheories.
Thelecturerarguesthat_________________.T
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