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建议信
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Sample:
假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。
信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。
请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。
第一步:
审题目
思考的问题
样题分析
第几人称?
(person)
第一人称
文章的题材是什么?
(type)
建议信
要写的文章主题是什么(topic)
对英语学习给出建议
怎样安排信息点的顺序?
(order)
说理的逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的?
(tense)
一般现在时
第二步:
找结构
结构三部分
1.Heading
点题——一两个句子;概括性
2.Body
陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由;层次分明
3.Ending
总结全文,表明希望;呼应主题
第三步:
列要点
1.readEnglishaloudeveryday/spendoneorhalfhourinreadingEnglishbooks
2.WatchEnglishmovies/films.
3.listentoEnglishsongs/learntosingEnglishsongs
4.practiceyourspokenEnglishwithanative-speaker.
第四步:
写作文
Howtobeginanrecommendationletter?
第一段:
开头是成功的一半…
Dear….:
(开门见山,点明意图)
(1)IknowyouhavesometroublesinlearningEnglishafterreadingyourletters.Therearesometipsforyou.
读了你的信后,我知道你在学习英语上有困难….
(2)IamgladtohearyouwanttolearnEnglishwell.Inmyopinion,..
我很高兴听到你想要学好英语.在我看来,…
(3)IamwritingtosharemyadvicewithyouonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Itwillbewiseofyouifyoutakethefollowingactions.
我写信和你分享如何学好英语方面的建议。
如果你能采取以下措施,将是明智的选择。
建议信重点
第二段:
⑴说明建议的内容;(是什么)
⑵提出具体建议的原因;(为什么)
⑶指出采纳建议的益处。
(怎么样)
注意事项:
语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。
Tolistyoursuggestions
ØFirst,…Secondly,…Finally,…
ØOntheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…
Whatismore/besides/moreover/furthermore
ØTobeginwith,…Inaddition,…Lastbutnotleast
注意连贯和逻辑,合理使用连接词或短语
第三段:
完美的Ending
Inaconclusion/inaword(结论简洁,指明观点)
(1)Practicemakesperfect!
NothingisdifficultIfyouputyourmindintoit.
(2)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.
(3)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovements.
第五步:
该错误、美文章
适当运用模板
DearLiHua,
I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到的问题.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.
Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,youshould________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter
___________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.
Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.
Bestwishes.
Yours,xxx
其他模板
模板1
Dear___,
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto____./Iknowthat____from____.
Hereareafewsuggestions/Hereissomeadvicethat/on_____.First,itisimportantto_____.Then/Second/Also,____.Besides/Inaddition/Furthermore,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Iamsurethat/Ihopethat____.
Thanksforyourconsideration.I’mlookingforwardto/Lookingforwardto_____.
Yours,
模板2
Dear_____,
I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).
Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.
Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I'mlookingforwardto(表达愿望).
Yourssincer
LiHua
模板3
Dear____,
Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto...,andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.
Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:
First,...Ifyoudothis,...Second,...Thisway,...Andlast,...Bydoingthis,...
Ihopeyou'llfindtheseideasusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.
Goodluckwithyou.Yours,
XXX
建议信常用句式
A.建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明意图)
1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…
2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…
3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.
4.Iamwritingtoyouinreplyto...
5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.
6.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…
7.It'smypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...
B.建议信正文常用句式(详述建议,合情入理)
1.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?
2.Don'tyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould…
3.Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…
4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…
5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.
6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou(should)…
7.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...
8.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…/Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth...
9.How/Whataboutdoing...?
10.Whatif...?
11.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...、
C.建议信结尾常用句式(归纳总结,提出希望)
1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.
2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.
3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard(在这一点上).
4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.
5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindtheseideasuseful.
6.Iwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthismatter/discussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail.
7.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
8.Let’skeepintouch.Ihopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.
9.Ihopewhat'smentionedabovemightbehelpful.
10.Iwillappreciateyourconsiderationofmyadvice/suggestions/tips.
11.Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.
12.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureof...
常见连接词
表时间关系:
when/after/before/until/not…until
assoonas/later/afterwards/soon/lately/recently/since/eventually/fromthenon/inthemeanwhile(meantime)/then/finally/atlast/allofasudden/afterawhile/sincethen/immediately/instantly/everytime/eachtime/thefirsttime
罗列观点:
●Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith/
Aboveall/Inthefirstplace/Ononehand
Foronething,
●Secondly/Besides/Apartfrom…/What’smore,/Inaddition,/Furthermore,/Moreover,/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse,/aswell/Ontheotherhand/Foranotherthing,/Next,
●Finally/Intheend/Atlast/Lastbutnot
least,
常见连接词
表列举:
forexample(instance)/suchas/
take…forexample/that’stosay/
inotherwords/asfollows
表条件关系:
if/unless/aslongas/onconditionthat…/
表因果关系:
since/as/because/for/thanksto/dueto/
owingto/asaresultof/forthereasonthat/nowthat/therefore/so/asaresult
表陈述事实:
infact/actually/asamatteroffact/
totellyouthetruth/tobehonest/
honestlyspeaking
onlyif…
表让步转折关系:
however/but/onthecontrary/nevertheless/
instead/despite/inspiteof(thefactthat)/whereas/though/although/as/
evenif(though)/while/incontrast/afterall
表目的:
Forthisreason/purpose,…
Forthepurposeof…
……sothat……
inorderto/soasto……
表总结:
AsIhaveshown,……/Inshort,/Inbrief,/In
conclusion,/Inaword,/Onthewhole,/
Allinall,/Ingeneral,/Insummary,/
Ashasbeenstated,……
表换种方式表达:
inotherwords/thatistosay/
toputitanotherway
Practice:
第1篇建议信:
对于我的朋友花大量时间上网,耽误学习的建议信
建议内容:
1)和他面对面地交流、沟通;
2)给她发邮件或短信;
3)告诉他学习的重要性。
DearLiHua,
I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses.Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudon’tknowwhattodowithit/howtohelphim.Well.Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou.
Myadviceareasfollows.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely.Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses,heisnotgoingtodowellatschool.
Secondly,youcane-mailhimorleaveamessage.Thirdly,youshouldtellhimtheimportanceofstudy.Becauseeveryoneofusjusthasonechancetogotohighschool,heshouldstudyhardandnotwastetimeinindulgingontheInternet.
Inaword,Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.
Bestwishes.Yours,Editor
第2篇建议信:
假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。
信中李华提到自己是高一的学生,在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。
请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。
建议:
1.课堂上认真听老师讲课;
2.多和同学和老师用英语交流:
3.坚持每天记单词,读英语课文;多练、多问等。
4.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。
DearLiHua,
I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.
Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What’smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.
Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.
Bestwishes.
Yours,xxx
第3篇建议信:
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。
请你根据下列要点写回信。
要点:
⑴参加中文学习班;
⑵看中文书刊、电视;
⑶学唱中文歌曲;
⑷交中国朋友。
注意:
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。
DearPeter,
I'mgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell.____
Bestwishes,
LiHua
DearPeter,
I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsonhowtolearnChinesewell.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.
Mysuggestionsareasfollows.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,becauseyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.Second,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinese.Third,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingit,you'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanmakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.
TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.
Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.
Bestwishes.
LiHua
第4篇建议信:
假设你是的李华,最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。
请给英语读写园地(EnglishReadingandWritingSpace)的编辑投稿反映该现象,并提出自己的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
美德virtue;提倡advocate
Deareditors,
IamLiHua,astudentinclassOne,GradeOne.
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