The Way to Success六级作文解析Word格式文档下载.docx
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Thewaytosuccessisverylongandbesetwithbrambles.You’dbetterbepreparedforthefactthatthesuccessisseldomwonwithoutsometoughfightingalongtheway.Onthewaytosuccess,strongwill,perseveranceanddiligenceareessential.Amanofstrongwillandperseverancealwayshasaninflexiblespirit.Hestickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.Lifeisshortandwehavetoomuchtodo.Withoutdiligencenoonecanachieveanything.
Allthementionedabovetellsus,successisnoteasyandweshouldsticktoourgoalsandcanfacethemusic.Asforstudentslikeus,weshouldattempttoabsorballtheknowledge.Knowingnothingisimpossibletosucceed.
Thewaytosuccess(文都版)
Whatissuccess?
Infact,successisapositivefeeling,itisastateofconfidenceafterweachieveouridealsSoallofuswilltryourbesttogetsuccess."
IfAisasuccessinlife,thenAequalsxplusyplusz..Hardworkingisx;
yisgoodmethodsandzisstoptalkingandgetdowntowork."
ItissaidbyEinstein,whoisusedtobeawinneroftheNobelPrize.AccordingtothisWisdom,weknownthatifwewanttodoeverythingsuccessful,wemustfollowtheseways.
Whenwebegintostudy,ourparentsandteachersalwaystoldustostudyhard.Hardworking,whichisanusefulwaytosuccess,isnecessaryforus.Hardworking,whichmeansweshouldtryourbesttodothethings.Besides,ifyouwanttogetsuccess,wenotonlyneedhardworking,butalsohavesomeusefulmethods.Ifyouhavesomeusefulmethods,youwillfeelthatitiseasiertoachieveyourgoals.What'
smore,wemuststoptalkingandgetdowntowork.Successisbaseontheactions.Actions,maynotletwegetsuccess.Butifwenotaction,itcanneverbesuccessful.Regardlessofthedreamisbigorsmall,thegoalishighorlow,fromnowon,swingitintoaction.
Inmyopinion,ifyoufollowtheseimportantwaystodoeverythings,youwillgetsuccessatlast.
TheWaytoSuccess
Justastheoldsayinggoes“Goodbeginningishalfdone”,illustratingtheimportanceandnecessityofthepreparationworkontheconditionthatyouhavethelongingforthesuccess.Agreatproportionofindividualsholdtheviewthatpreparationmakesanessentialpartofintheprocessofachievement;
onthecontrary,theotherpartsofpersonsareinfavoroftheideathatthepreviousarrangementisaminorfactorforsuccess.
Theessentialityofthepreparationworkisabletobeaccountedbythefollowingexample.Asamatteroffact,themethodaccountsmorethantheresultsforthemajorityofsituations,Forinstance,astudentwhowantstowinoutstandingacademicperformanceoughttolearntheeffectiveandreasonablemethodsandapproachesformemoryandcomprehensionofthesubjectssuchasphysics,chemistry,mathematicsandsoon.Theworkersinthefactoriesshouldlearntomasterthetechniqueofoperatingthemachinesbeforehandandinthiswaycantheyproducethequalifiedgoodsandmerchandises.
Generallyspeaking,Lincoln’sremark“givemesixhourstochopdownatreeandIwillspendthefirstfourhourssharpeningtheaxe”revealstheimperativeofmakepreparation.Undoubtedly,onlybyarrangingbeforehandcanweachievesuccesswheneverwefacetheperplexingandtoughsituations.
Everyonetriestoachievesuccessinhiscareer.However,someonefirmlyattainshisgoalwhileanotherfails.Why?
Theonecontinueshiscausetotheendthroughlongperiodsofhardstruggling,buttheotheriseasilydisappointedorstopshalfway。
Goodpreparation,perseveranceanddiligencearethethreeessentialsofsuccess.Amanofsolidpreparationandperseverancealwayshasaninflexiblespirit.Hestickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.Dr.SunYat-senwassuchaman.Manyofhisattemptsfailed,butheheldtohispurposewithfirmnessandfinallysucceededinoverthrowingtheQingDynasty.Diligencemeanssteadinessinone’sworkandstudy.SuQinstabbedhimselfinordertokeephimselfattentivetostudies.Marxoftenworked15hoursaday.Lifeisshortandwehavemanythingstodo.Withoutdiligencenoonecanachieveanything。
Ibelievethatwherethereisapreparationthereisaway,andthatsuccessbelongstothosewhocansufferlongyearsofpatienttoilandconstantefforts。
模板一:
对立观点作文3段共9句话
第一段:
陈述现状段
文章的第1、2句主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势;
共有5种开篇写法,没有固定的标准选哪种,选择一种容易下手的去写文章第一句话:
1)第一句的第一种写法:
就某事,人们又热烈讨论
Thereisaheateddiscussionwhether(通常用在选择性话题:
是否年纪小出国,是否有必要参加…)
theyshouldliveoffcampusorlivetogetherwithotherroommates.(住在校外,还是和同学共住)
studentsshouldbeaskedtogradetheirteacher(是否学生应该要求给老师打分)
studentsshouldtakeapart-timejobinschool(是否学生在校期间应该找兼职)
2)第一句的第二种写法:
某事引发人们关注(不用写事情的经过,用一个词儿代替事情过程)
Recently,theproblemof“...”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic
Currently,thephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousewideconcernamongthepublic(酒后驾驶)
Currently,thefrequentjob-hoppingofgraduateshasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.(跳槽)
Currently,theproblemof“foodsafety”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.(食品安全)
3)第一句的第三种写法:
社会现象变成某个“词”(这种写法最大的魅力也是,将事件过程压缩成一个词!
)
Thenewly-coinedword/phrase“”maybynomeanssoundstrangetomostpeopleinthisdayandage.
(“”中填进的词有:
nudepicturescandal艳照门丑闻;
watershortage缺水;
onlineeducation网络教育;
fakediplomas假证书;
crazefortalentshows选秀狂热)
4)第一句的第四种写法:
社会趋势(一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”这样的社会现状)
Thereisagrowingtendencynowadaysthat…
graduatesinmountingnumberscanhardlyfindanidealjob(就业难)
peopleinmountingnumbersshowgreatenthusiasmforvolunteerworks/varioustalentshows(选秀热)
studentsinmountingnumbersshowgreatenthusiasmforstudentsleadersselection(竞选班干部热)
peopleinmountingnumbersparticipateinthetestfornationalcivilservants.(公务员热)
undergraduatesingrowingnumberstakethepostgraduateentranceexamination(考研热)
peopleinmountingnumberstrytheirlucktobuylotterytickets(买彩票热)
peopleinmountingnumbersusecreditcard.(信用卡热)
注:
peopleinmountingnumbers都表示“越来越多的人”,切忌写:
moreandmore
people
5)第一句的第五种写法:
某个现象人尽皆知(一般写比较大的,比较严重的社会问题)
NooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethephenomenonthat…
thatgoodsinmountingnumbersarewrappedinflaringboxesorbags(过度包装问题)
thattherehasbeenasteadyriseinthenumberofrurallaborerswhoswarmintobigcities.(农工进城)
Theeconomyhasbeendevelopingataconsiderablyhighspeedattheexpenseoflivingenvironment.
(经济发展以牺牲环境为代价)
文章第二句话:
陈述正反观点;
你只要说,针对某个事情,人们看法存在不一样就行,不要在第一段就开始具体论述双方的观点各是什么!
Doesanyoneholdthesameattitudetowardsthisissue?
Definitelynot,actually,opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.
第二段:
对立观点论述段
文章的第3,4,5,6四句话,都写在第二段;
这是字数最多,内容最丰满的一段
文章第三句话:
提出正方观点,比如说他支持什么;
总体来说,有两种表示支持的说法)
Somemaintainthat(表示“认为”的单词,打死都不写“think”;
maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写)
1)某物是有好处的:
somethingisbeneficialtosth.(练习:
跳槽对学生有利)
2)某物优点大于缺点:
Themeritsofsth.faroutweighitsdemerits.(练习:
用手机的优点>
缺点)
文章第四句话:
上句提出了论点,这句就必须要用论据来证明,论据可以写一个,也可若干个;
个数的标准是字数达标
Firstly,…secondly,…lastbutnotleast,….
文章第五句话:
既是正反对立观点作文,第三句提出正方观点,那么这句当然要提出对立观点啦!
However,quiteafewpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthat(反方观点),
1)某物是有坏处:
somethingisdetrimentaltosth.
2)某物缺点大于优点:
Thedemeritsofsth.faroutweighitsmerits.(merits代替advantages)
文章第六句话:
Foronething,…foranother,…
第三段:
个人观点段
文章的第7,8,9句;
四六级作文,包括考研作文,都要求写essay-议论文,短评,所以,写了上述对立观点的目的,其实就是为了最后提出自己的观点!
文章第七句话:
Tomywayofthinking,…Frommyperspective,+个人观点句(参见第三、五).
文章第八句话:
个数的标准是字数达标)Inthefirstplace,…inthesecondplace,…(万能理由)
文章第九句话:
再次重申自己的观点,和第七句话正好构成“总分总结构
GivenallthefactorsIhaveoutlined,Istronglycommittothenotionthat(观点句)
或者是:
Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththeideathat…
模板二:
问题解决作文
全文写3段共9句话;
第一段提出问题,第二段分析问题,第三段解决问题——亚里士多德三段论!
文章的第1、2句;
主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、
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