美国大学英语写作第六版partfour.docx
- 文档编号:1138031
- 上传时间:2023-04-30
- 格式:DOCX
- 页数:11
- 大小:21.86KB
美国大学英语写作第六版partfour.docx
《美国大学英语写作第六版partfour.docx》由会员分享,可在线阅读,更多相关《美国大学英语写作第六版partfour.docx(11页珍藏版)》请在冰点文库上搜索。
美国大学英语写作第六版partfour
23SubjectsandVerbs
Activity,410
1.Theripeningtomatoesglistenedonthesunnywindowsill.
2.Acupuncturereducesthepainofmyheadaches.
3.Elenatwistedastrandofhairaroundherfingers.
4.Mybrotherbuilthisbookshelvesfromcinderblocksandplanks.
5.Ajackrabbitboundsuptofifteenfeetinoneleap.
6.Thesinger’sdiamondearringssparkledinthespotlight.
7.Myroommatecrashedhiscarontheicyhighway.
8.OnSt.Patrick’sDay,ourneighborhoodtavernservesgreenbeer.
9.Mysix-year-oldbrothersurvivesonadietofpeanutbutterandjelly.
10.Duringmyparents’divorce,Ifeltlikearagdollbeingtornbetweentwopeople.
Activity,412
1.Athicklayerofdustcoversthetopofourrefrigerator.
2.InJune,saggingChristmasdecorationswerestillhanginginthewindowsoftheabandonedhouse.
3.Thepeopleintheall-nightcoffeeshopseemedwearyandlost.
4.Everyplantinthedimroombenttowardthesmallwindow.
5.Aglaringheadlineabouttheconvictionofalocalcongressmanattractedmyattention.
6.Twoofthebiggeststoresinthemallaregoingoutofbusiness.
7.Themodem’stinyredlightssuddenlystartedtoflicker.
8.AneighborofminedoesallherworkathomeandE-mailsittotheoffice.
9.Thejarofpeppercornstumbledfromthespiceshelfandshatteredonthefloor.
10.ThescarinthehollowofBrian’sthroatistheresultofanemergencyoperationtoclear
hiswindpipe.
ReviewTest,413
1.Withonegracefulmotion,theshortstopfieldedthegrounderandthrewtofirstbase.
2.Likehumanmothers,sheepandgoatmothersdevelopclosebondswiththeirbabies.
3.Beforeclass,AntoniettaandJorgerushedtothecoffeemachineinthehall.
4.Ishifteduncomfortablyonthelumpymattressbeforefallingintoarestlesssleep.
5.Waitinginthelongticketline,Mattshiftedhisweightfromonefoottotheother.
6.AncientEgyptianswerebrandingcattlemorethanfourthousandyearsago.
7.Dogsandcatscrowdedtheveterinarian’sofficeonMondaymorning.
8.ThedriverabruptlyhaltedherJeepandbackeduptowardanarrowparkingplace.
9.DuringtheAmericanRevolution,somebridesrejectedwhiteweddinggownsandworeredasasymbolofrebellion.
10.Thelittlegirl’sfranticfamilycalledapsychictolocatethechild.
24Fragments
Note:
Foreachitemthefragment,orthatpartoftheoriginalfragmentnotchangedduringcorrection,isunderlined.
Activity2(Dependent-WordFragments),417–418
1.WheneverIspraydeodorant,mycatarchesherback.
2.Wehadagreattimeplayingfootballinthehouseuntilhecamehomefortheweekend.
3.IfKimtakestoolongsayinggood-byetoherboyfriend,herfatherwillstartflickingtheporchlight.
4.Scientistsarestudyingmummifiedremainsthatarethousandsofyearsold.
5.BeforeIturnonthemicrowaveoven,Ihavetoturnofftheoverheadlightinthekitchen.
Activity1(-ingFragments),419
1.Marble-sizedhailstonesfellfromthesky,flatteningtheyoungplantsinthecornfield.
2.Theycametoastopatmyhouse.
3.ThereasonforthisisthatIampartiallydeaf.
Activity2(-ingandtoFragments),420
1.Lookingatthewormonthetable,Shelbygroaned.
2.Iputaboxofbakingsodainthefreezertogetridofthemustysmell.
3.Staringattheclockonthefarwall,Inervouslybeganmyspeech.
4.Fantasizingabouttheupcomingweekend,Jeromesatquietlyathisdesk.
5.Togettothebusstationfromhere,youhavetowalktwoblocksoutofyourway.
Activity1(Added-DetailFragments),421-422
1.Forexample,heseesthenewmoviesfirst.
2.Andhisfingertipsarealwaysblack,likeinkpads.
3.Electronicdevices,suchasvideocamerasandcellphones,keepgettingsmaller.
Activity2(Added-DetailFragments),422
1.Left-handedstudentsfaceproblems.Forexample,theymustsitatright-handeddesks.
2.Mrs.Fieldsalwayswearsherluckyclothes,suchasablouseprintedwithfour-leafclovers,tobingo.
3.Hundredsofmothswereswarmingaroundthestadiumlightslikelargeflecksofsnow.
4.Forinstance,hebuysandsellscomicbooksandmovieposters.
5.IwondernowwhyIhadtolearncertainsubjects,suchasgeometry.
Activity(Missing-SubjectFragments),423–424
1.Thenshedoesfiftysit-ups.
2.Ilikeallkindsofpizzabutrefusetoeatfrozenpizza.
3.Theybreakoutinhiveswhentheyeatit,andtheycanevenhavetroublebreathing.
4.Todistractme,thedentisttuggedatacornerofmymouth.Thenhejabbedaneedleintomygumsandinjectedapainkiller.
5.Lastsemester,Itooksixcoursesandworkedpart-timeinadiscountdrugstore.
Reviewtest1Corrections(methodsofcorrectionmayvary):
p425
2.I’mstartingtothinkthereisnosafeplacelefttorideabicycle.
3.WhenItrytorideinthehighway,inordertogotoschool,Ifeellikearabbitbeingpursuedbypredators.
6.Driverswhippastmeathighspeedsandtrytoseehowclosetheycangettomybikewithoutactuallykillingme.
7.Whentheypullontotheshoulderoftheroadormakearightturn,driverscompletelyignoremyvehicle.
11.Regardlessofanapproachingbikerider,street-sidecardoorswillunexpectedlyopen.
14.Frustrateddriverswhoarestuckintrafficwillmakenastycommentsorshoutoutobscenepropositions.
16.Whilejaywalkingacrossthestreet,thepedestrianwilltreatme,alaw-abidingbicyclist,toawitheringlookofdisdain.
19.Pedestriansmayevencrossmypathdeliberately,asiftoprovetheirhigherpositioninthepeckingorderofthecitystreets.
ReviewTest2,P426
1.Webothbegantotireaswepassedthehalfwaymarkintherace.ButwheneverI’dhearReggie’sfootstepsbehindme,Iwouldpumpmylegsalittlefaster.
2.Ihaveafewphobias,suchasfearofheightsandfearofdogs.Myultimatenightmareistobetrappedinahot-airballoonwiththreeGermanshepherds.
3.Punchingallthebuttonsontheradioinsequence,Philkeptlookingforagoodsong.Hewasinthemoodtocruisedownthehighwayandsingatthetopofhisvoice.
4.Mychildrenjokethatwecelebrate“Hanumas”withourJewishneighbors.WeshareHanukkahandChristmasactivities,includingmakingpotatopancakesattheirhouseanddecoratingourtree.
5.Inoticedtwocartonsofcigarettesstickingupoutofmyneighbor’strashbag.Irealizedthathehadmadeuphismindtogiveupsmokingforthefifthtimethisyear.
6.I’vedecidedtoleavehomeandrentanapartmentwithmybestfriend.Bybeingawayfromhomeandonmyown,Iwillgetalongbetterwithmyparents.
7.Thealleybehindourhousewasflatexceptforawidegrooveinthecenter.Weusedtosailpaperboatsdownthegroovewheneveritrainedhardenoughtocreatea“river”there.
8.Donpassedthecomputerschool’saptitudetest,whichqualifieshimforninemonthsoftraining.Donkiddedthatanyonecouldbeacceptedifheorshehad$4000.
32MisplacedModifiers
Activity,469–470
Note:
Theunderlinedpartineachofthecorrectionsbelowshowswhathadbeenamisplacedmodifier.
1.Thepatientonthepsychiatrist’scouchtalkedabouthischildhood.
Or:
Onthepsychiatrist’scouch,thepatienttalkedabouthischildhood.
2.Withswivelingheads,thecrowdwatchedthetennisplayers.
3.Vonnieputfourhamburgerpatties,whichshewascookingfordinner,onthecounter.
4.Stevecarefullyhunginthebedroomclosetthenewsuitthathewouldweartohisfirstjobinterview.
5Annerippedonacardoortheshirtthatshemadeinsewingclass.
Or:
Annerippedtheshirtthatshemadeinsewingclassonacardoor.
6.ThelatestTomHanksmoviehasopenedinalmost2,200theatersacrossthecountry.
7.Wearingabulletproofvest,thenewscasterspokesoftlyintoamicrophone.
Or:
Thenewscaster,wearingabulletproofvest,spokesoftlyintoamicrophone.
8.Owingtwomonths’rent,thetenantslefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.
Or:
Thetenants,owingtwomonths’rent,lefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.
Or:
Thetenantswhoowedtwomonths’rentlefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.
9.Thewomanwitharthritispickedupaheavyfryingpan.
10.Inthegreenhouse,Idiscoveredanunusualplantthatoozedamilkyjuice.
ReviewTest2,471
Note:
Theunderlinedpartineachofthecorrectionsbelowshowswhathadbeenamisplacedmodifier.
1.HenryWadsworthLongfellowwroteinapoemthatrainbowsareflowersthathavediedandgonetoheaven.
Or:
Inapoem,HenryWadsworthLongfellowwrotethatrainbowsareflowersthathavediedandgonetoheaven.
2.Ifilledalmostanentirenotebookwithbiologylabdrawings.
3.Withenviouseyes,theapprenticewatchedthemastercarpenterexpertlyfitthedoor.
4.Thephotographerpointedthecameraequippedwithaspecialnight-visionscopeattheshydeer.
Or:
Thephotographerpointedattheshydeerthecameraequippedwithaspecialnight-visionscope.
5.Withtiredfaces,thepeopleonthebusstaredattheceilingorreadnewspapers.
33DanglingModifiers
Activity,473–474
1.Theaudiencecheeredwildlyastheelephants,dancingontheirhindlegs,paradedby.
Or:
Theaudiencecheeredwildlyastheelephantsparadedby,dancingontheirhindlegs.
2.Thepolicespokespersonsaidthesuspect,lastseenwearingdarkglassesandablondwig,wasstillbeingsought.
3.AsIwaspouringoutthecereal,acouponfellintomybowlofmilk.
4.Iknewthelimousine,whichwasescortedbydozensofpolicemotorcycles,carriedsomeoneimportant.
Or:
Becauseitwasescortedbydozensofpolicemotorcycles,Iknewthelimousinecarriedsomeoneimportant.
5.Tiredandexasperated,wehadafightthatwasinevitable.
Or:
Becauseweweretiredandexasperated,thefightwehadwasinevitable.
6.Franhaddifficultyremovingtheanchovies,whichwerepackedtig
- 配套讲稿:
如PPT文件的首页显示word图标,表示该PPT已包含配套word讲稿。双击word图标可打开word文档。
- 特殊限制:
部分文档作品中含有的国旗、国徽等图片,仅作为作品整体效果示例展示,禁止商用。设计者仅对作品中独创性部分享有著作权。
- 关 键 词:
- 美国 大学 英语 写作 第六 partfour