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学年高中英语写作第15课时如何写非谓语动词教案doc
2019-2020学年高中英语写作第15课时如何写非谓语动词教案
辅导科目:
英语年级:
高中学科教师:
课时数:
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授课类型
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教学目的
在实际写作中正确运用非谓语动词
教学重、难点
授课日期及时段
教学内容
Ⅱ.同步讲解
如何写好非谓语动词
众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味,句子与句子之间的关系显得松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。
恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不仅句型多样,句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑,言简意明。
一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句
1.我为那事感到非常遗憾,开始考虑做些什么来帮一下。
Ifeelquitesorryforthat.Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.
→Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.(2013·陕西卷满分作文)(现在分词作状语)
2.另一方面,我将帮着建立英语角,提供给我们学生一个练习英语口语的平台。
Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner.IwillprovideusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.
→Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner,providingusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.(2013·天津卷满分作文)(现在分词作状语)
3.这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。
Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.
→AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.(过去分词作定语)
4.我们应该多讲英语。
我们认为这是很重要的。
WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.
→WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.(it作形式宾语,不定式作真正宾语)
5.我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平?
这是个问题。
HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish?
Itisaquestion.
→HowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion.(不定式短语作主语)
→ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish.(不定式短语作表语)
[练一练] 运用非谓语动词转换简单句
1.Weweretouchedbytheteacher’swords.Wedecidedtoworkhard.
Touched_by_the_teacher’s_words,we_decided_to_work_hard.
2.Ididn’treceiveherletter.Ihadtowriteagain.
Not_having_received_her_letter,I_had_to_write_again.
3.Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryangry.
The_boy’s_coming_to_school_late_again_made_the_teacher_very_angry.
4.Theboysweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier.
The_boys_were_making_the_most_of_time_(so_as)_to_finish_the_work_earlier.
5.Isawanoldgranny.Shelayontheground.Iwentovertohelpher.
Seeing_an_old_granny_lying_on_the_ground,I_went_over_to_help_her.
二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句
1.惊诧于他们的熟练程度,我决心要像他们一样好。
BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.
→Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.(2013·浙江卷满分作文)(过去分词作状语)
2.看到一辆车朝她而来,我伸出手把她拉了回来。
WhenIsawacarrunningtowardsher,Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.
→Seeingacarrunningtowardsher,Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.(2013·安徽卷满分作文)(现在分词作状语)
3.练习了接近两个月后,我们强烈渴望获得一场胜利。
Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.
→Havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.(2013·湖南卷满分作文)(现在分词作状语)
4.这里曾有一家化肥厂,位于城市的南边。
它每天释放出大量有毒气体,污染环境。
Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,whichpollutedtheenvironment.
→Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,pollutingtheenvironment.
简析:
“原句”中分别由which引导两个定语从句,重复且单调,将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后,不仅表达多样,而且言简意明。
5.由于老师的帮助,我的英语进步很大。
因为我的英语进步很大,我确信我能考上更好的大学。
Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I’msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.
→Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I’msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.
简析:
“原句”两处重复出现由because引导的从句,读起来很别扭。
换用“with+现在分词的复合结构”后,读起来给人的感觉大不一样。
[练一练] 运用非谓语动词转换复合句
1.Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.
→On_seeing_a_few_people_still_in_the_burning_house,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.
2.Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.
→Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkit_possible_for_them_to_master_one.
3.Itookpartinthemeeting,whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday.
→Itookpartinthemeetingheld_in_BeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagercoming_to_our_companyyesterday.
4.Motherwenttoworkinahurry,andshedidn’thavebreakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate.
→Motherwenttoworkinahurrywithout_having_breakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays,coming_back_home_very_late.
三、运用非谓语动词转换短文(根据一般表达写出该短文的高级表达)
北京市有大量的出租车司机,他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务,为北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。
他们起早贪黑,赚钱养家糊口。
有一次,我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上,但当我和司机同志联系上之后,他立即开车把手机送到了我家门口,让我感动不已。
一般表达:
TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome.Iwasveryexcited.
高级表达:
TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies,theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiItook.Onhearingwhathadhappened,thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome.Seeingmycellphoneagain,Iwastooexcitedtosayaword.
[练一练] 运用非谓语动词转换短文
大城市里高楼大厦林立,房价越来越高。
一方面,很多人无房居住,另一方面,大量房子却卖不出去。
不少人即使买了一套住房,恐怕也要一辈子辛辛苦苦工作来还银行贷款。
我们希望政府采取措施,关心这些收入不高的人群。
一般表达:
Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities.Theirpricesaregoingupdaybyday.Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeople.Theyhavenohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyoubuyanapartment,I’mafraidyouhavetopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank.Youwillworkharddayandnightallyourlife.Idohopeourgovernmenttakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblemandtakecareofthepeople.Theirincomesarelow.
高级表达:
Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities,withtheirpricesgoingupdaybyday.Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeoplehavingnohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyouhaveboughtanapartment,I’mafraidyouhavetotrytopayoffthemoneyborrowedfromthebank,workingharddayandnightallyourlife.Idohopeourgovernmentcantakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblem,showinggreatconcernforthepeoplewhoseincomesarenothighenough.
第四课时 如何运用高级词汇与高级句式
写作时,“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处,也会为你的作文增添色彩。
一、使用高级词汇
1.标新立异
写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩,别人有可能想不到的词汇,恰当地求新求异。
AsfarasI’mconcerned,parents’muchprotectionwilldomoreharmthangoodtochildren’sfuturedevelopment.
→AsfarasI’mconcerned,parents’limitlessprotectionwilldomoreharmthangoodtochildren’sfuturedevelopment.(2013·福建卷满分作文)
Ireceivedyouremaillastweek,butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam,whichisimportantforme,soIdidn’treplytoyouwithoutdelay.
→Ireceivedyouremaillastweek,butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam,whichisvitalforme,soIdidn’treplytoyouwithoutdelay.(2013·山东卷满分作文)
2.短语优先
多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。
Toachieveone’sdream,onemusttrytoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach.
→Toachieveone’sdream,onemustmakegreateffortstoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach.(2013·北京卷满分作文)
What’smore,wecanpouroutthetroublesweface,andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects.
→What’smore,wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith,andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects.(2013·重庆卷满分作文)
3.避免重复
尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。
Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.
→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.
[练一练] 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语。
1.Weallhavethesamechance.
possess
2.Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.
_endless
3.Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.
put_up_with
4.Hedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.
turned_a_deaf_ear_to
5.We’lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.
promote
6.Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.
challenging
二、使用高级句式,让句子靓起来
1.恰当使用被动语态
①WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2015.
→AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2015.(2013·广东卷书面表达)
②I’mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition,whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.
→I’mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition,whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.(2013·上海卷满分作文)
2.使用强调句
①Asasayinggoes,thelittlethingmattersmost.
→Asasayinggoes,itisthelittlethingthatmattersmost.(2013·上海卷满分作文)
②Ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous,whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward.
→It’sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous,whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward.(2013·重庆卷满分作文)
3.使用倒装句
①Thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway.
→Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy.(2013·福建卷满分作文)
②Ididn’trealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativewaysuntilthen.
→NotuntilthendidIrealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativeways.(2013·湖北卷短文写作)
4.使用省略句
①Ifitisso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.
→Ifso,Ihopeyou
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