托福写作高分满分范文点评.docx
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托福写作高分满分范文点评
托福写作高分满分范文点评
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托福写作难点话题一览
Isittruethatmediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeople?
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Television,newspapers,magazines,andothermediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyouropinion.
写作思路展开结构分析
这个观点是比较片面的,当中忽略了一个大众的需求问题,所以选择不能同意这个观点。
有些媒体(大众传媒massmedia)表现得过于关注名人。
但是真正的起因(therealcause)却是大众(thepublic;thebroadmassesofthepeople)本身——大众过于关注名人以及名人的私生活。
媒体不过是在迎合大众(catertotheneedsofcustomers;过去几年里,电视一直迎合大众的口味。
Inthepastseveralyears,televisionhasbeenplayingtothegallery.),因为媒体也是商业机构(mercialorganization),也要盈利(profit-driving)。
不是所有媒体都在一味迎合大众,也不是所有的televisionprogram,newspapercolumn都在关注名人。
本话题高分范文赏析
Itistruethattelevisionprogramsconcerningpersonallivesofcelebritiesalwaysreceivethehighestaudiencerating.Itisalsotruethatnewspapersandmagazinesareconstantlyreportingstories,whichareusuallybeyondconfirmation,aboutfamouspeople,andthatautobiographieswrittenbypublicfiguresarealwaysonthetop10best-sellers'list.Itseemsthatweliveinaworldwhereafewindividualsaredrawingnearlyallattentions.Nevertheless,itisnotexactlyprecisetocriticizethemassmedia,includingtelevision,newspapers,magazinesandsoforth,forpayingtoomuchfocusonthepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Infact,itisthepublic,toalargeextent,ratherthanmassmedia,thatispayingtoomuchattentiononpersonallivesofcelebrities.
Mostorganizationsofmassmediaindustry,beinginherentlymercial,aredrivenbybusinessmotivations.Televisionprogramproducers,aswellascolumnistsandwriters,arealwaysawareofwhatthepublicwanttosee,thereforetendtopandertotastesofthepublic.Toputinanotherway,themassmediaisaudience-oriented,andthephenomenoniswellinterpretedandmanipulatedthatwhenfamouspeoplesuchasactors,athletesandrockstarsgivetheiropinions,manypeoplelisten.Itisthenatureofthepublic,whoarecuriousenoughaboutpersonallivesoffamouspeople,sincetheycanneverbefamous.
Ontheotherhand,itisholisticallydetrimentalforthesocietyifthemassmediapaytoomuchfocusonfamousfewsoastoignoretherestoftheindividuals.Afterall,themissionofthemassmediaisnotmerelytocatertotheneedsofcustomers,buthasamuchwiderscope,suchasto___thetruth,todefinewhatisgoodandwhatisbad;topromoteculturalvalues,andthelistcouldbeendless.Morepopularscienceprogramsshouldbeproducedbytelevision,morereportsonpoorrurallivesshouldbepublicized,morebooksconcerningnotfamousbutrespectablepeoplesuchas,nurseswhoarefightingSARSfearlessly,teacherswhoareperformingtheirdutiesregardlessofpovertyofremotevillages,journalistswhopublicizetheirpiecesunderpoliticalmenace,andthisisanotherendlesslistshouldbewritten.
托福写作难点话题一览
Thebestwaytheschoolspendsagiftofmoney
Yourschoolhasreceivedagiftofmoney.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwayforyourschooltospendthismoney?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.
写作思路展开结构分析
大家要注意审题,站在学生和老师的不同立场上,对于学校做法怎样才是best肯定是有所区别的,一般来说选择增设或是改善学校的设施会是比较好的展开角度,比如新建或者扩建一下图书馆就是很不错的选择。
本话题高分范文赏析
Itisaveryfortunateourrencewhenaschoolreceivesasizablegrant.Schoolofficialsmustmakethedifficultdecisionofwheretoallocatethefunds,andIwanttoproposethatspendingthemoneyonputerswouldbethemostutilitariandecision.
Computersarerapidlygrowinginpopularity,tosuchanextentthattheyaffectallaspectsofmodernlife.Itisrarethatonefindsstimulatingemploymentthatdoesnotrequireatleastbasicputerskills.Ifchildrenaretobeesuessfulintoday'ssociety,theymusthaveunderstandinginthisfield.Asputersarethefuture,itisimportantforstudentstobeeadeptusersearlyinlife.Notallchildrenhaveequalopportunitiestolearntheimportantskillsofusingaputer.Manylow-inefamiliescannotaffordtopurchasesuchanexpensiveitem,thuscontinuingacycleofsocialimmobility.Purchasingputersforpublicschoolsgiveschildrenfromlow-inefamiliestheopportunitytobreakoutofthiscycle.
Finallyputersallowstudentstoaessawealthofinformationthatcouldnotpossiblybestoredinalibrary,orefficientlybekeptuptodate.Oneofthemostmonactivitiesonaputeris"surfing"theInter.TheInterisupdatedbyliterallybillionsofpeopleeveryday,andthereforeoffersupanyinformationthatonecoulddreamof.TheInterisalsoanexcellentsourceofinspiration,assomanypeoplethatupdateithaveincredibleideas.
Inconclusion,Ithinkthatspendingthegrantmoneytobuynewputerswouldbemostbeneficialfortheentireschool.Withtheadditionofnewputers,studentswillbeabletogetanedgeontheirpeersatdifferentschools,andbereadyforuniversityandtheworkforce.Thisisespeciallytrueforlow-inestudents.
Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthispersonwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?
Why?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.
写作思路展开结构分析
这是一道关系到大家实际情况的题目,但同时这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。
因此美征建议大家可以尽量展开想象。
注意:
不要只说mycity,要指出你所在城市的名字,比如:
Bei___g,Shanghai等等。
一般来说,人们会喜欢城市的原因有:
女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围。
而人们会讨厌的原因有:
交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly)等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
IfmyfriendJoeywantstomovetoBei___g,Ithinkeventhoughshemightfindsomethingshedislikes,shewillultimatelylikethisgreatestcityinourcountry.Theweathermightbeonethingthatshedislikes.TheweatherinBei___gischaracterizedbydryclimateanditismuchwindyanddustythanthatofGuangzhoucity.Joeyisverysensitiveaboutherskin,soshewilldefinitelyhatedustywindsinBei___g.Moreover,Bei___g'swinterisfartoomuchcolderthanthatofGuangzhou,itmighttakeJoey,asmanyotherpeoplecamefromtheSouth,averylongtimetogetaustomedto.Nevertheless,shemightwellenjoywinterintheNorth,sinceshehasneverseensnowflakesinrealitybefore.IrememberedtheshiningofyearningandeagerinhereyeswhenIoncetoldherwhatthewinterintheNorthlookslike.
ShemightbealwaysirritatedbyheavytrafficinBei___g,thoughtaxisinBei___gcostmuchlessthaninGuangzhou.WhenIwasinGuangzhou,seldomwasItrappedbytrafficjams.Itmustberidiculousforhertohavespentmorethantwohoursandstilldidn'tarriveatthedestinationwhichismerely10kilometersaway.Andthemostludicrousthingis,evenifyoupossessaprivatecar,itismorelikelytobeuseless,forparkinglotsarealwayscrowded,whichmeansmoretimeistobewasted.GoodnewsforheristhatthebussystemandthatofsubwayinBei___garewelldevelopedandmoreconvenient,andshewon'thavetobearthatodorofbromhidrosisowingtoburningweatherassheonceexperiencedinbusesofGuangzhou.Whatshewilldefinitelyloveistheculturalethosofthecity.Bei___ghasahistoryprobablylongerthananyotherbigcityinChina.TovisitallhistoricallandscapesinBei___g,shewillneedatleastthreeyears,nokidding!
Bei___ghasthemostfamousandexcellentuniversities,thelargestlibraries,therichestmuseums,yetmostimportantofall,herbestfriend!
Amazingly,inthisagedcity,peoplearesometimesmoreinternational.Joeyisespeciallyfondofart,andBei___gistherightplaceforher,inwhichconcertsofinternationalsingersorothermusiciansaremuchfrequent,andshewillevenbeabletoattendCuiJian'scasualprivateconcertinacoffeeshoponarainyautumnweekend.
托福写作难点话题一览
Shouldschoolsaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers?
Schoolsshouldaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers.Doyouagreeordisagree?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
有保留地同意(agreewithreservations)。
学生在评判教师时,是否全部学生都可以客观评价(objectiveevaluation)?
是否有足够的能力(包括academicknowledge等等)去进行客观评价?
如果采取了这样的方式,就会出现老师迎合(caterto/panderto/playuptostudents'taste)学生而不是引导(guide;lead)学生,违背了教育的原则。
保留意见/这种方式:
允许学生进行评价,但是应该作为一个参考,同时要有其他的评判方式。
本话题高分范文赏析
Teachershaveaverydifficultjobinsociety.Theynotonlyhavetolearnhowtoteachmaterialeffectively,butalsomustlearnhowtodealwithawidevarietyofpersonalities.Whileteachingisadifficultjob,Ithinkitisimportantforschoolstoaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers.Ithinkthisistherightthingtodobecauseitencouragesteacherstotrytheirbest,itgivesstudentstheopportunitytochooseeffectiveteachers,anditallowstheschoolstohavethebestteacherspossibleteaching.Ifateacherknowsthatattheendoftheterm,thestudentswillbeevaluatinghis/herwork,thentheteacherwillbedriventodoaverygoodjob.Ifthereisnopressurefromevaluation,ateachermightbepronetodoingalessthanperfectjob.Ibelievethateveryoneneedsanoasionalevaluationtoensuretheyaredoingtheirjobcorrectly.Inthecaseofateacher,thestudentswillgivethemostimportantevaluations.Iftherewasapublicsummaryofwhichteacherscoredthehighestonhis/herevaluations,thenstudentswouldbeabletotakecoursesbasedonwhichteacherwasthebestatthejob.Thiswouldallowstudentstoexcelintheirstudies,andachievebettergrades.Finally,ifschoolsaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers,theschoolsthemselveswouldbeabletohavethebestteachersworkingoncampus.Ifateacherscoredtoolowonanevaluation,areplacementcouldbefound.Thisisamuchbettermethodthan
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