六级作文全部讲解.docx
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六级作文全部讲解
六级作文精讲
四六级作文阅卷标准分五等:
2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分——基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语言错误。
8分——基本切题,表达思想比较清楚,文字尚连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有少量的严重错误。
11分——切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分——切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本无语言错误。
高分作文三大要素
I结构清晰structure------bone
II句式多样sentences----flesh
III语言亮点vocabulary---soul
I结构清晰:
1、文章整体结构完整
2、段与段,句与句衔接要自然:
段落层次连接词+过度词(句、段逻辑关系)
3、每个段落必须要保持完整
4、各段祥略要得当
1、文章整体结构完整:
请审题并确定下面的文章写几段?
Example1SayNotoPiratedProducts
1)目前盗版现象比较严重
2)造成这种现象的原因
3)我们应该怎么做
Example2howtosucceedinajobinterview
1)面试在求职过程中的作用
2)取得面试成功的因素:
仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是......
Example3HowIfinancemycollegeeducation
1)上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可以通过多种途径解决
2)哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)
Example4OnStress
1)有人害怕压力
2)有人认为压力并不是坏事
3)你的观点
关于文章整体结构总结:
最少不能少于两段
最多不能多于四段
2、段与段,句与句衔接要自然
Howtoquitthehabitofsmoking?
1)吸烟有害身体健康
2)戒烟很难
3)如何戒烟
1)Itisalmostknowntoallthatsmokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.2)Smokingcanleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.3)TheWorldHealthOrganizationsaysdiseasescausedbysmokingkillatleasttwomillionandfivehundredthousandspersonseachyear.
1)However,stillmanypeoplefinditdifficulttostopsmoking,whichisduetothefollowingreasons.2)Foronething,itisbecausetheeffectofnicotinemakesithardforsmokerstoquitit.3)Foranotherthing,manyofthemhavenodeterminationtogiveupthebadhabit.4)Therefore,itishightimethatmoreattentionwaspaidtohowtogiveupsmokingsuccessfully.
1)Someeffectivemeasureshavebeentakentohelppeoplekeepawayfromtheharmofsmoking.2)Firstly,nowadays,smokingisforbiddeninpublicplacesandinadvertisementsofanykind.3)Inaddition,theworld“NoTobaccoDay”isobservedeveryyearasthebiggestcampaigntoraisepeople’sawareness.4)Ifwefollowthemeasuresmentionedabove,theimpactfromsmokingcouldbeminimizedgreatly.
Somescientists/doctors/researchers/
psychologists/professors…inchina/from
ChinaandUSA/aroundthewholeworldsay….millions….
Theresearch/statisticfigurefrom….showsthat…..
段与段,句与句衔接:
保证1)意义连贯2)形式连贯.
即要有1)逻辑性2)连接手段.
段落层次连接词:
1)first,second,third,last
2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally
3)thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast
4)inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly
5)tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally
6)tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally
7)firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast
8)mostimportantofall,moreover,finally
9)ontheonehand,ontheotherhand
10)foronething,foranotherthing
连接过度词(句、段逻辑关系):
1.总括过渡词:
AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Generallyspeaking,Onalargerscale,Practicallyspeaking,Totaketheideafurther
2.同类过渡词
Equallyimportant,Namely,Similarly,Thatis
3.对比过渡词
Conversely,Incontrast,Onthecontrary,Otherwise,Whereas,While
4.举例过渡词
Acaseinpointisthat,Forinstance,Forexample,Suchas,Asanillustration
4.列举过渡词
Firstofall,First,second,third,Inthefirstplace,Initially,Tostartwith,Firstandforemost
Furthermore,Inaddition,Moreover,What’smore,Finally,Lastbutnotleast
6.原因过渡词
Dueto,Considering,Asaresultof,Given,Inthat,Intheviewof,Onaccountof,Onthegroundsof,Owingto,Seeingthat
7.让步过渡词语
Although,Inspiteof,Eventhough,Admittedly,Certainly,Indeed,True
8.转折过渡词
Nevertheless,However,Onthecontrary,Ontheotherhand,Yet,Whereas,although,but,inspiteof,yet,otherwise,despite
9.强调过渡词
Anyway,Chiefly,Evenworse,Mostimportantofall,Needlesstosay,Nodoubt,Particularly
10.目的过渡词
Withtheaimof,Forthesakeof,Withtheviewto,Forthepurposeof
11.承接过渡词
Sotospeak,Asamatteroffact,Assoonas,Asitwere,Yearinandyearout
12.条件过渡词
Given,Aslongas,Providedthat
13.结论过渡词
Accordingly,Aninall,Asaresult,Consequently,Hence,Inbrief,Inconclusion,Ingeneral,Inshort,Onthewhole,Toconclude,Tosumupinaword,Insummary,finally,therefore,accordingly,inshort,thus,inconclusion,so,inbrief,inaword
3每个段落必须要保持完整
1stparageneraltopic
supportingidea/details
(1)
supportingidea/details
(2)
2ndparasub-topicsentence
supportingidea/details
(1)
supportingidea/details
(2)
supportingidea/details(3)
3rdparaconclusion
supportingidea/details
(1)
supportingidea/details
(2)
II句式多样:
1长短句错落有致
2.主动变被动
3.强调句和倒装句的适当运用
1长短句错落有致
eg.1Hisfatherisasalesman.Hisfatherbecameamillionaireovernight.
Hisfather,asasalesman,becameamillionaireovernight.
Eg.2Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersresorttosmoking,thoughsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
eg.32)Smokingcanleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.
Smoking,whichhasbeenadoptedbymanypeople,canleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.
Smoking,asahabitadoptedbymanypeople,especiallyman,canleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.
2.主动变被动
1)被动语态体现论证的客观性.(theyyouwe不要随便使用,切忌交错使用)
Weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheenvironment,whichisbeingdestroyedseriouslybyhuman.
Moreattentionshouldbepaidtotheenvironment,whichisbeingdestroyedseriouslybyhuman.
Somanymeasureshavebeentakenby…...
2)保持陈述对象的一致,以求行文通顺。
WhenthePrimeMinisterarrivedattheairport,hundredsofreporterssurroundedhimimmediately.
WhenthePrimeMinisterarrivedattheairport,hewassurroundedimmediatelybyhundredsofreporters.
3.强调句和倒装句的适当运用
Wecanbetterourenvironmentonlythroughallourefforts.
Onlythroughalloureffortscanwebetterourenvironment.
Itisthroughalloureffortsthatwecanbetterourenvironment.
Onlyinthiswaycanwe……
Undernocircumstancescanwegiveuptheconfidence……(innoway/innocase)
III语言亮点
1、副词的使用
2、积累并使用高档词汇与表达
3、积累常用句型
4、适当使用修辞以及名言警句
1.副词的使用
Theforestisbeingdestroyed.
Theforestisseriouslydestroyed.
Herunsfast.
Herunsincrediblyfast.
Heisanamazingprofessor.
Heisanabsolutelyamazingprofessor.
TheU.S.isdefinitelyatelephonecountry.
2.积累并使用高档词汇与表达
Consequently(so),weworkhardatthetaskofsavingtime.(NHCE-2unit1Pg3)
However,peoplearemeetingincreasingly(moreandmore)ontelevisionscreens.(NHCE-2unit1Pg3)
WhenitcomestoLeiFeng’sspirit,differentpeoplewilloffer(give)differentopinions.
However,stillothersadvocate(support)thelatteropinionbecause……
40个高档词汇:
六级写作经典的替换词:
1failtodo替换Didn’t
2concerning/involving/approximately替换About
3dueto/thankstothefactthat替换Because
4accountfor替换Explain
5Cover替换Go
6present/extend/offer替换Give
7considerable/tremendous/substantial替换Great
8Agreatvarietyof替换Manykindsof
9Boom替换Rapidgrowth
10Beinvolvedin替换Takepartin
11.individuals,characters,folks替换(people,persons)
12:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
13:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive替换
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyrecordsarelessimpressive.
14.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost)替换many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
15:
asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
16:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,
holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,
itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think
(因为是书面语,所以要加that)
17:
affair,business,matter替换thing
18:
shared代common
19.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits)
20:
formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
21:
Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
popularwiththeadvancementofsth.
22.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
23..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
24.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
25.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very
26.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
27.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
28.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
29.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
30.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
31.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
32.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
33.desire替换want.
34.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto
35.bearinmindthat替换remember
36.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
37.interaction替换communication
38.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
39.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
40.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
3.积累一些常用句型
Thisispartlyduetothefactthatthetelephoneissuperbhere.(NHCE-2UNIT1)
Thisattituderesultsinanationofpeopletoresearching,experimenting,andexploring.
Thegovernmenthaswagedamassivead.campaigntoencouragebirthcontrol.(unit2)
Thecountrymuststillconvertmillionsmoretotheideaofbirthcontrol.
分项精品句:
1.表示原因
1)Therearethreereasonsforthis.
2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.
3)Thereasonforthisisobvious.
4)Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek.
5)Thereasonforthisisthat...
6)Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat...
2.表示好处
1)Ithasthefollowingadvantages.
2)Itdoesusalotofgood.
3)Itbenefitsusq
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