研究生学术英语写作教程Unit 10Submitting Paper.docx
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研究生学术英语写作教程Unit10SubmittingPaper
UnitTenSubmittingPaper
Objectives
-Knowthepaperprocessingprocedures
-Becomeawareofpolitenessinletterwriting
-Writeasubmissioncoverletterandreplytothedecisionletter
Contents
-Readinganddiscussion:
Asubmissioncoverletterandadecisionletter.
-Languagefocus:
politeness
-Writingpractice:
submissioncoverletter;replytoadecisionletter;inquiryletter
1.ReadingActivity
Yourresearchpaperisfinished.Thenextstepistosubmitthepapertoasuitableacademicjournal.Thisunitaimstoshowyouthereviewprocedure,hopefullybringyouanawarenessoftwolanguagefeaturesofacademicwriting,andfinallyhelpyoucorrespondwiththeedit-in-chiefonyourown.
1.1Pre-readingTask
Beforeyoulearnthedetailedinformation,pleasediscussthefollowingquestions.
Whatshouldyouconsideraboutthejournalyouaregoingtosubmitthepaperto?
Whatshouldyoudotoyourpaperbeforesubmission?
WhatshouldbeincludedinyoursubmissionE-mail?
Howcanwesoundpolitewhenwewritethesubmissioncoverletterandreplytothedecisionletter?
1.2ReadingPassages
Letter1--Asubmissioncoverletter
DearDr.JamesJoyce,
Thisisamanuscriptentitled"ANOVELROOT-ENDFILLINGMATERIALBASEDONHYDROXYAPATITE,TETRACALCIUMPHOSPHATEANDPOLYACRYLICACID"byLingHuchongandQiaoFengfromStateKeyLaboratoryofBioelectronics,SchoolofBiologicalScienceandMedicalEngineering,SoutheastUniversity,Nanjing,China.Itissubmittedtobeconsideredforpublicationasan"OriginalArticle"inyourjournal.
Noconflictofinterestexitsinthesubmissionofthismanuscript,andmanuscriptisapprovedbyallauthorsforpublication.Iwouldliketodeclareonbehalfofmyco-authorsthattheworkdescribedwasoriginalresearchthathasnotbeenpublishedpreviously,andnotunderconsiderationforpublicationelsewhere,inwholeorinpart.
Inthiswork,wedevelopedanovelfillingmaterialhydroxyapatite/tetracalciumphosphate/polyacrylicacidcement(HA/TTCP/PAA),andfurtherexamineditschemicalcomposition,physicalpropertiesandcytotoxicityincomparisonwithglassionomercement(GIC)andPortlandcement(PC).Ihopethispaperissuitablefor“INTERNATIONALENDODONTICJOURNAL”.
Thefollowingisalistofpossiblereviewersforyourconsideration:
1)ProfessorDuanYuE-mail:
duanyu@
2)ProfessorShiTaiE-mail:
shitai@
Wedeeplyappreciateyourconsiderationofourmanuscript,andwelookforwardtoreceivingcommentsfromthereviewers.Ifyouhaveanyqueries,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactmeattheaddressbelow.
Enclosedpleasefindthepaper.
Thankyouandbestregards.
Yourssincerely,
LingHuchong
Correspondingauthor:
Prof.Dr.QiaoFeng
StateKeyLaboratoryofBioelectronics
SchoolofBiologicalScienceandMedicalEngineering
SoutheastUniversity
Nanjing210096
P.R.China
Tel:
(+8625)12345678
Fax:
(+8625)12345678
E-mail:
qiaofeng@
1.3ReadingComprehension
1.3.1Listthecontentsthatshouldbeincludedinletter1.
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Letter2----Adecisionletter
From:
iejeditor@cardiff.ac.uk
To:
QiaoFeng@
CC:
LingHuchong@
Subject:
ManuscriptIDIEJ-12-00123,InternationalEndodonticJournal
Body:
DearDr.Qiao,
ManuscriptID:
IEJ-12-00123
ManuscriptTitle:
Hydroxyapatite/TetracalciumPhosphate/PolyacrylicAcidCement:
Chemical-PhysicalPropertiesandCytotoxicity
Ihavereceivedthecommentsofthereferees(s)anddecidedthatyourmanuscriptrequiresmajorchangesandthengothroughtherefereeingprocessagain.However,pleasenotethatresubmittingyourmanuscriptdoesnotguaranteeeventualacceptance.
Shouldyouwishtoreviseandresubmityourmanuscript,pleasereviseyourpapertakingintoaccountanypointstheyhaveraised-theircommentscanbefoundattheendofthisemail.AlsodoublecheckthatinthebodyofthetextandintheReferencesectionthenamesofauthorsarespeltcorrectlyincludinganynon-Englishcharacterswhereappropriate.
Youwillbeunabletomakeyourrevisionsonlineusingtheoriginallysubmittedversionofthemanuscript.Instead,reviseyourmanuscriptonyourPC/MACusingyourwordprocessingprogrammeandsaveitonyourcomputer.Pleasehighlightthechangestoyourmanuscriptwithinthedocumentbyusingthe"trackchanges"modeinMSWordorequivalent.
Touploadyourrevisedmanuscript,logontoandenteryourAuthorCentre,whereyouwillfindyouroriginalmanuscripttitlelistedunder"ManuscriptswithDecisions".Under"Actions,"clickon"CreateaRevision".Yourmanuscriptnumberhasbeenappendedtodenotearevision.
Whensubmittingyourrevisedmanuscript,youwillbeabletorespondtothecommentsmadebythereferees(s)inthespaceprovided.Youcanusethisspacetodocumentanychangesyouhavemadetotheoriginalmanuscript.Pleasebeasspecificaspossibleinyourresponsetothereferee(s).
Ilookforwardtoreceivingyourrevisedmanuscript.
Kindregards
PaulDummer
Editor-in-Chief,InternationalEndodonticJournal
iejeditor@cardiff.ac.uk
Editorcommentstoauthors:
Editor
CommentstotheAuthor:
(Therearenocomments.)
Referee(s)commentstoauthors:
Referee:
1
CommentstoAuthor
Title:
Hydroxyapatite/TetracalciumPhosphate/PolyacrylicAcidCement:
Chemical-PhysicalPropertiesandCytotoxicity
Thismanuscriptintroducesthereadertoanewretrogradefillingmaterialanddescribestheteststhatwereconductedandthecomparisontocurrentlyusedmaterials.
ThesectionDiscussionwaswelldoneanddiscussedtherelevanceofeachtesttopublishedresearchaswellasrelevantclinicalapplications.
Itwouldbehelpfulifthetitlewouldreflectthatthisreportisonarootendfillingmaterial.
Generalcomment.TheentiremanuscriptneedstobeeditedforproperuseoftheEnglishlanguageandsyntax.
Introduction
Thesentence:
“However,itsdefectsprohibitclinicalapplications…..”.Theword“defect”isanoddchoice.“shortcomings”wouldbemoreappropriate.
Thesentence:
“Toovercomethesedisadvantages,anewmaterial,hydroxyapatite/tetracalcium
phosphate/polyacrylicacidcement(HA/TTCP/PAA),withoptimumproperties,hasbeendeveloped.”
AuthorsyouarereportingonyourfindingsofyournovelcementbutalreadyconcludeinthisIntroductionthatithas“optimumproperties”.Atbestyoucanstatethatitwasyourintenttodevelopamaterialwithoptimumorimprovedproperties.
Authors:
Checkinstructionsforauthorsfortherequiredjournalformatforreferringtothepublishedliterature.
MaterialsandMethods
Thesentence:
“TheHA/TTCP/PAApastewasmixed….andthemixedwithdistilledwater…”Authors,afteryouhavecrushedthepowdersitmakesnosensetodescribetheHA/TTCP/PAAasapaste.
“ThepasteofHA/TTCP/PAA,GICandGPCwereplacedintoaplasticplate…37°Cin100%”Authors,usebetterdescriptionthan“plasticplate”.
“Thefinalsettingtimewastheaverageresultoffivesamplespecimens.”Thewordssampleandspecimensaresynonymous.
“Compressivestrengthwascalculatedfromthemeanvalueoffivesamplesofeachgroup”.Youprobablymeantosaythatthemeanvalueforeachgroupwasderivedfromthe5samples.
“Thematerialsweresetinthemoldsfor24hat37°Cin100%humidity”.Themeaningthematerialsweresetisnotclear.Pleaseexplainthismethodbetter.
“TheHA/TTCP/PAA,GICandGPCpastesweremanuallyshapedseparatelyintoan8mmdiameterballwithin1min….”Authors,itwouldbebettertodescribethisasfollows:
Atstandardliquid/powderratioseachmaterialwasmixedandimmediately,butwithin1min,manipulatedintoaball.
Althoughthetestthatwasdescribedlacksanyscientificfoundation,thefigureswereconvincing.
“Theunreactivesupernatantsinthewellwerecarefullysuckedoff,and600μL….”Authors,useabetterwordthan“suckedoff”toremovethesupernatants.
Washoutresistancetest
“ThewashoutresistanceresultfortheHA/TTCP/PAAshowednonoticeabledisintegration(figure4);however,GICpasteballshadalargeamountofdebris…”Replacetheword“debris”.TheactualreleaseofparticlesordissolutionoftheGICcannotbecalleddebris.
“DifferentfromHA/TTCP/PAA,GICwaswatersensitiveduringsettingphase,whichwassupportedinthepresentstudybyalargesumofdebrisarounditspasteballinPBS,andsuggestedinEarlandIbbetson’sstudybyitseasydamageintheearlymoistsetting(Bodrumlu2008)”.ThisreviewerdoesnotunderstandtheconnectionbetweenEarlandIbbetson’sstudyandthereferencemadetoBodrumlu.Pleaseclarify.
Thefigureshavenonumbers.Seepages19-23ofthepdf.
Referee:
2
CommentstoAuthor
March24,2012
Title:
Hydroxyapatite/TetracalciumPhosphate/PolyacrylicAcidCement:
Chemical-PhysicalPropertiesandCytotoxicity
Ms.#:
IEJ-12-00-00123
GENERALCONSIDERATIONS:
Writing:
Worduseandgrammarareatjournalstandardsandneedtobeimprovedthroughout.
Organization:
Good
Other:
Avoidtheuseof+/-toexpressvariation.Thepreferredmethodismean(stdev).Forexample:
11.0(0.8)min.Thediscussionistoolongandover-zealousrelativetotheexperimentaldata(seespecificsbelow).
CONTENT
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