高中英语写作小作文批改邀请信Word文档格式.docx
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Sincerelyyours,
LiMing
修改意见:
DearBob,
Therewillbeheld(删除)awonderfulmusic(音乐会是concert)concernfor(改为concerning)pianoandviolinintheMusicalHalloftheCentreConservatoryOfMusiconJunuary(拼写错误,改为January)15st.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
00PMontime.ThiswillbefollowedbyaticketthatwehavetogivenyoubyExpressEmailSurvicebeforetheconcern.(理解有误,本意是让你写在这个occasion后面是另外一个活动)Ataround6:
2分
微点评:
你对模版的理解不透彻,还不清楚每部分要写的内容,建议你看看论坛上别的同学的作文,了解一下每部分具体要写什么内容。
第二篇
DearMark,
TherewillbeavolunteeractivitiyintheChildren'
sWelfareInstituteOfNanjingonthisweekend.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat08:
00.Thiswillbefollowedbyonemorearrangement.Ataround10:
00,therewillbeanotheractivityaftertheperformance.AllofusaregoingtoZhongshanparktohaveaPicnic,whilehelpingLily,theyoungestgirlinourgroup,tocelebrityherbirthday.Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforethedeadlineforSeptember15th.
Therewillbeavolunteeractivitiy(拼写错误,改为activity)intheChildren'
00.Thiswillbefollowedbyonemorearrangement(此处应该写一个具体的活动).Ataround10:
00,therewillbeanotheractivityaftertheperformance(删除).AllofusaregoingtoZhongshanparktohaveaPicnic,whilehelpingLily,theyoungestgirlinourgroup,tocelebrity(改为celebrate)herbirthday.(给某人过生日,不要用help)Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforethedeadlinefor(删除,RSVPbefore的意思就是在…之前通知我)September15th.
加Sincerelyyours,
你的名字
3分
要注意书信的写作格式,你对模版的理解不透彻而且英语基础比较薄弱,建议你多看看满分作文。
第三篇
DearXiaohui,
TherewilladinnerpartyatmyhouseonApril12,2013.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartatsixo’clockintheevening;
withthetakingphotos.Thiswillbefollowedbyadinnerparty.Ataroundteno’clock,wewillhavefaceparty.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit,RSVPbeforeApril12,welookforwardtothepleasureofyourcompany.
Yourssincerely,
Therewill(加be)adinnerpartyatmyhouseonApril12,2013.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
withthetakingphotos.(删除)Thiswillbefollowedby{adinnerparty}.Ataroundteno’clock,wewillhavefaceparty.(假面舞会是amasqueradeball)
考研的小作文要写到100词,写的太少是要被扣分的,这个模版只是给你提供了一个思路,很多内容还是需要自己填充的,另外,你开头说有一个dinnerparty,那么第二段的occasion指的就是这个party,因此Thiswillbefollowed后面要加一个新的活动,不能还是dinnerparty了。
第四篇
Wewilltoholdaschool-widepartyforChineseculturalexchangeonSaturdaynextweekinSchoolClub.Iamsureyouwouldlikeit,asweallknowitforyouwondertohearanyregardingcultureofChina.
Thereoccasionwillstartingonseveno'
clockinevening,withadinnerpartyforconvenientweunderstandotherperson.Ataroundnine,freeexchangewillbegin.
IfyoudonotanyprimayappointmentatSaturdaynextweek,welookforwardtothepleasureofyourcompany.
YoursTrulyLIMing
Wewilltoholdaschool-widepartyforChineseculturalexchangeonSaturdaynextweekinSchoolClub.Iamsureyouwouldlikeit,asweallknowitforyouwondertohearanyregardingcultureofChina.(不能理解你的意思)
There(改为The)occasionwillstarting(will后面加动词原形)on(改为at)seveno'
clockin(加the)evening,withadinnerpartyforconvenientweunderstandotherperson(不能理解你的意思).Ataroundnine,freeexchangewillbegin.
Ifyoudonot(加have)anyprimay(改为prior)appointmentat(改为on)Saturdaynextweek,welookforwardtothepleasureofyourcompany.
YoursTruly(t写,加逗号)
LIMing
你的英语基础比较薄弱,建议你多背一些满分作文,积累一些好词好句。
第五篇
TherewillbeaNewYearpartyholdedbytheStudents'
UnionofChineseLanguageandLiteratureDepartmentatschoolstadiumonJanuary1st.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartat6:
00o'
clockintheevening.Thiswillbefollowedbyahotdancingfarewellwithallstudentsthere.Ataroundonehourlater,thegameconcerningnotonlydareortruthbutalsotablegameswillstart.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeitandcelebratethefestivalwithus.RSVPbeforeDecember27th.
YoursfaithfullyLiMing
TherewillbeaNewYearpartyholded(改为held)bytheStudents'
clockintheevening.Thiswillbefollowedbyahotdancing(改为dance)farewellwith(用词不当,farewellwith是和…挥别的意思,而在hotdance后面还有活动)allstudentsthere.Ataroundonehourlater(ataround后面加具体的时间点),thegameconcerningnotonlydareortruthbutalso(改为dareortruthand)tablegameswillstart.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeitandcelebratethefestivalwithus(makeit就有后面和我们一起庆祝节日的意思了.)RSVPbeforeDecember27th.
Yoursfaithfully(加逗号)
4分
你对模版不熟悉,建议你多看看满分作文,熟悉一下这类作文的写作思路。
对于不熟悉其词义或用法的词,尽量不用。
5-7分
DearKate,
TherewillbeaChristmaspartyatEnglishcorneronDec.25th.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat6p.m.Thiswillbefollowedbyagame.Ataround7p.m.ameetingwillbeheld.Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforeDec.24th.
CampusEnglishCorner
October22,2012
(加Sincerelyyours,)CampusEnglishCorner
October22,2012(删除)
5分
考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右,你的作文虽然没有大问题,但是包含的内容太少,句型变换等也太少了。
另外,要注意书信的格式。
DearMissYuan,
TherewillbeacelebritypartyforthenewyearintheactivityroomonthenextSaturday.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartat6o’clockintheevening.Thiswillbefollowedbyaseriousofwonderfulperformancesplayedbyourclassmates.Ataround8o’clock,weprojectsomeinteractionactivitiestoanimatetheatmospheresoastopromotetherelationshipsofclassmates.What’smore,wepreparedsomegiftstobepresentedtothewinners.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforethenextWednesday.
Therewillbeacelebrity(改为celebration)partyforthenewyearintheactivityroomonthenextSaturday.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartat6o’clockintheevening.Thiswillbefollowedbyaserious(拼写错误,改为series)ofwonderfulperformancesplayedbyourclassmates.Ataround8o’clock,weprojectsomeinteractionactivitiestoanimatetheatmospheresoastopromotetherelationshipsofclassmates.What’smore,wepreparedsomegiftstobepresentedtothewinners.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforethe(删除)nextWednesday.
7分
写作文的时候再细心一些,注意单词的拼写。
背单词时要把词义背牢。
DearProfessor,
TherewillanAcademicExchangeofEastAsiaInternationalLawatNo.1lecturetheatreonApril19,2012.Weshouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartat14:
30.ThiswillbefollowedbyacommunicationaboutapplicationoflawofEastAsiaeconomictradewithotherprofessorsandexpertscomefromJapan,Koreaandothercountries.Ataround19:
30,adancingpartywillbeholdinginuniversityauditorium.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforeApril12,2012.
LawSchoolPKU
April5,2013
30.ThiswillbefollowedbyacommunicationaboutapplicationoflawofEastAsiaeconomictradewithotherprofessorsandexpertscome(改为coming)fromJapan,Koreaandothercountries.Ataround19:
30,adancingpartywillbeholding(改为held)inuniversityauditorium.
加Yourssincerely,
April5,2013(删除)
注意书信的格式以及被动语态的问题。
一句话里不能有两个谓语动词。
TherewillbeasummercelebratepartyforteenagersattheplaygroundofBeijingForginUniversityonthisweekend.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartat9:
00to11:
00inthemorningoftheWeekend.Thiswillbefollowedbyamusicgatheringwhichyoucancommunicatewithothers,alsoyoucaneatvariouskindsofdeliciousfood.Ataroundthenexttimeto5:
00pm,itisthefreetimeforustotakeaseriesofactivities,suchasplayingcards,singingsongsandsoon.
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbeforethefinaldatethatIhaveinformedtoyou.
Therewillbeasummercelebratepartyforteenager
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