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3雅思点题班写作移民类补充
08年3月雅思点题班写作移民类补充讲义
书信作文:
Introductionandtone
Thewayyoubeginthefirstparagraphandthestyleyouusewilldependon:
●theoverallpurposeoftheletter
●thetoneofthemessageyouwanttogetacross
●yourrelationshiptothepersonreceivingtheletter.
Lookattheseopeningsentences.Canyoutellwhetherthewriterknowsthepersonreceivingtheletter?
Whatisthepurposeoftheseletters?
a.Thankssomuchforyourletterandthelovelyphotosofthewedding,whichareabsolutelymarvelous.
b.IamafirstyearstudentintheFacultyofScience.IamwritingtoaskpermissiontotransferfromBiochemistrytoBiology…
c.I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhospitalityonSaturday.Itwasverykindofyoutogiveusdinnereventhoughwearrivedunexpectedly.
d.IamaresidentatFlat4,43WestbridgeRoad,Newport.IwouldliketoreportthatagreenToyotavanhasbeenabandonedoutsideourblockofflats…
e.Followingourtelephoneconversation,thisistoconfirmthat,unfortunately,Iwillbeunabletoattendthemeetingon3rdMarch.
f.On15thMarch,IpurchasedanewcarthroughyourPerthshowroom.SincethenIhaveexperiencedaseriesofdifficultieswhichIwishtooutline…
Key:
a.Yes.Toexpressthankstoafriend.
b.No.Toaskforpermission.
c.Yes.Tothanksomeoneforsomething.
d.No.Toprovideinformation.
e.Yes.Togiveanofficialapology.
f.No.Tomakeanofficialcomplaint.
Salutationsandendings
DearSir,/Sirs,---Useonlywhenyouarewritingaformalorofficialletterandyoudonotknowthepersonyouarewritingto,ortheirname.(Yoursfaithfully,)
DearMrSmith,/MsPark,/DrYang,---Usethetitlewiththefamilynamewhenyouarewritingaformallettertosomeoneyouknoworwhosenameyouhavebeengiven.Usethissalutationforpeopleyoudon’tknowverywellorwhereyouneedtoshowrespect.(Kindregards,Yourssincerely)
DearRosemary,/Tom,---Usegivennamesonlywithpeopleyouknowquitewell.Inbusinessthisissometimesacceptable,butifindoubt,usethefamilyname.Alwaysusegivennameswhenwritinganinformallettertoafriendorrelative.(Kindregards,Bestwishes,Lotsoflove,)
Openingandclosingletters
Matchtheopeningsentenceswiththeclosingsentencesbelow.
Openingsentences:
a.Itwaslovelytohearfromyouafteralltheseyears.
b.IwasreallysorrytohearaboutAuntMary’saccident.
c.IamastudentatyourcollegeandIamwritingtoaskafavour.
d.Thankyouforyourletterregardingthepositionofofficeassistant.
e.Thisisjusttothankyouforyourmarveloushospitalitylastweek.
Closingsentences:
i.Givemyregardstoyourmotherandbestwishesforherspeedyrecovery.
ii.IhopeyouareabletohelpmeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
iii.Ihopeonedaytobeabletoreturnthewarmwelcome.
iv.Welookforwardtoseeingyouattheinterview.
v.Pleasestayintouch.
Key:
a-v;b-i;c-ii;d-iv;e-iii
Reasonsforwritingaletter:
1-Givingadvice;
2-Apologising;
3-Explaining;
4-Requesting;
5-Persuading;
6-Complaining;
7-Introducingyourself;
8-Thanking;
9-Suggesting;
10-Expressingafeeling;
11-Inviting
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InGeneralTrainingWritingTask1,youmustcoverallthreeofthebulletpointsinyourletterandendyourletterappropriately.Youalsoneedtowriteinparagraphsandusetherighttone.
Yourhaverecentlyheardthatafriendofyourshashadsomeproblemsasaresultofsomeunusualweather.Writealettertoyourfriend.
Inyourletter
●expressconcern
●tellthemaboutasimilarexperiencethatyouoncehad
●givesomeadviceorofferhelp.
Step1---Readthetaskanddecidewhattypeofletterisrequired(e.g.formalorinformal,)andwhatthepurposeoftheletteris.Underlinethekeywordsthathelpyoudecide.
Step2---Brainstormsomeideasaboutunusualweatherandthedamageitcancause.Noteusefulvocabulary.
e.g.storm/roofblownoffthehouse;wet,flood;fires;dry,drought;cold,ice/snow…
Step3---Makenotesforeachparagraph.
Step4---Expandthenotesintoacompleteletter.
Step5---Readyourlettercarefullytocheckthegrammar,spellingandorganization.
DearAnnaandLeo,
WewereshockedtohearfromLaraaboutthestormthathityourcityrecentlyandthedamagedonetoyourhouse.Howawfultocomehomefromyourholidaytofindtheroofblownoffthehouse!
Iunderstandhowyoumustfeel,aswehadasimilarexperienceafewyearsagowhentherewassuddenelectricalstormhereinSydney.Icamehomefromworktofindthatatreehadfallenontopofthehouseandallthewindowswerebroken.Fortunatelytheinsurancecoveredthecostoftherepairs,butitwasstillveryupsetting.
Isupposeyouhavetothinkpositivelyinsituationslikethisandlookattheopportunityyouhavetoimproveyourhouse---giveitanewlook.Ifwecandoanythingforyouintheholidays,we’dbehappytohelp.
Dropusalineandletusknow.
Bestwishes,
Directions:
YouarepreparingforanEnglishtestandareinneedofsomereferencebooks.Writealettertothesalesdepartmentofabookstoretoaskfor:
1)detailedinformationaboutthebooksyouwant,
2)methodsofpayment,
3)timeandwayofdelivery.
分析:
第一段:
Iamwritingtocomplainabout…
Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionof…
Iamwritingtothankyoufor…
Iamwritingtoapologizefor…
Iamwritingtoinformyouof…
第二段(主体段落)的拓展方法:
1.并列式
2.具体化
例如:
写一封投诉信,投诉学校食堂的饭菜(food)
ComplainaboutthefoodintheStudents’Cafeteria
并列式:
foodquality---foodprice
具体化:
Thefoodqualityisfarfromsatisfactory.---Actually,itissohardtoeatthatitisachallengingexperiencetofinishamealinthestudents’cafeteria.
Itisnotdifficulttofindtheremainsofdeadfliesorbeshockedbyawholedeadmouse.
对于1)的拓展:
(询问你所想要的书籍的详细信息)---detailedinformationaboutthebooksyouwant
询问常用表达:
●Iwanttobuy…
●Iintendtopurchase…
●Iwouldliketohave…
●Couldyoupleasetellme…
●Couldyouletmeknow…
●Iamwonderingifyouhave…
详细信息:
1.同时问数本书;
我想问贵书店有没有考研英语完型填空,考研英语阅读,考研英语新题型,考研英语翻译和考研英语写作?
我想问贵书店是否有涵盖了雅思考试所有单词的词汇书以及附有答案和范文的历年真题集?
IamwonderingifyouhaveavocabularybookcoveringthewordsrequiredforIELTS,aswellaspastexaminationpaperswithkeysandmodelessays.
2.详细询问一本书
我想问一下贵书店有没有05年7月高等教育出版社出版的王教授主编的《如何准备考研英语》?
IamwonderingifyouhaveHowtoPrepareforNETEMwrittenbyProf.WangandpublishedbytheHigherEducationPressinJuly,2005?
对于2)的拓展:
(付款方式)methodsofpayment
付款方式的种类:
现金,支票,信用卡(cash,cheque/check,creditcard)
拓展方式:
除了并列式和具体化以外,自问自答:
我应该怎么为我想要购买的书籍付款呢?
是用现金,支票,还是其它什么方式呢?
如果可能的话,我希望使用信用卡。
Besides,howshouldIpayforthesebooks---bycash,check,oranyothermeans?
Ifpossible,Iwouldliketousemycreditcard.
注意上下文的链接方式:
1)代词---these…
2)关联词---besides…
对于3)的拓展:
(书籍送达的时间和方式)timeandwayofdelivery
最后,我打算买的这几本书会怎么寄过来呢?
我大概能够在什么时间收到呢?
如果额外费用不是太过昂贵的话,我希望是特快专递。
Finally,howwillthesebooksbeshippedandwhenistheapproximatetimeIcanreceivethem?
Theexpressmailispreferableiftheadditionalchargeisnottoomuch.
注意改写:
delivery可以换词性,写成howwillthesebooksbedelivered?
也可以用动词deliver的同义词mail,post,ship等等。
结尾套话:
焦急地等待着您的来信。
Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.
如果您能够尽早给我回信的话,我将不胜感激。
Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendmeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.
例文:
DearSirorMadam,
IamwritingforinformationabouttestpreparationmaterialsfortheIELTStest.
IwonderifyouhaveavocabularybookcoveringthewordsrequiredforIELTS,aswellaspastexaminationpaperswithkeysandmodelessays.Besides,howshouldIpayforthesebooks---bycash,cheque,oranyothermeans?
Ifpossible,Iwouldliketousemycreditcard.Finally,howwillthesebooksbeshippedandwhenistheapproximatetimeIcanreceivethem?
Theexpressmailispreferableiftheadditionalchargeisnottoomuch.
Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldsendmeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
Task1
Youwerehurtinaminoraccidentinsideasupermarket,andyouwishtocomplaintothesupermarket.
Writealettertothemanagerofthesupermarket.Inyourletter
●saywhoyouare
●givedetailsabouttheaccident
●suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents.
范文:
DearSirorMadam,
IamwritingthislettertoinformyouoftheaccidentIhadat3:
45pmyesterday.
IwaspushingmyshoppingcartdowntheaislebythefrozenmeatswhenIslippedonthewetfloorandbrokethescaphoidboneinmyrightwristasItriedtostopmyfall.Yourstaffwereveryhelpful,andyourassistantmanagerdrovemetoSt.Martin’sHospital,wheremyarmwasputinacastthatwillstayonforaboutsixweeks.
Iamaself-employedcanteenowner,andwillnotbeabletoworkforatleasttwomonths.Myinsurancewillonlycovermymedicalcosts,notmylostearnings,which,asyoucanseefromtheattachedphotocopies,average450poundsaweek.Giventhattheaccidentwasduetothedangerousconditionofthefloor,ItrustyouwillarrangeformetobecompensatedwithanamountequaltomyaverageweeklyearningsforthetimethatIamunabletowork.
MayIsuggestthatyouinstructyourstafftopaybetterattentiontosafety,andhaveasignthatclearlywarnscustomersofsuchdangersasaslipperyfloor.
Yourssincerely
JohnSmith
分析:
这是一封投诉信。
题目分两部分。
第一部分是背景交待:
你在超市受了轻伤,要向超市投诉。
第二部分是题目要求,需要表明作者身份,具体说明投诉的原因,并且提出建议。
在这里,考生只能写在超市发生的问题,而且受轻伤是因为超市某方面问题所引起。
理由需要考生自己编,只要基本合理即可。
本文作者写的是在超市推购物车的时候由于地板湿滑导致右手腕骨折。
既然是投诉,就需要提出要求对方加以解决,比如医药费误工费之类的。
其次,可以对超市提些建议,以避免今后发生类似问题。
考生还需要注意的是语言要礼貌得体。
虽然是投诉,但依然要坚持礼貌,以反映事实为主,不要进行抒情或是控诉。
用词和句型上最好尽量正式。
Youwanttosellsomeofyourfurniture.Youthinkafriendofyoursmightliketobuyitfromyou.
Writealettertoyourfriend.In
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