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谢老师教你如何起承转合完成严谨作文
举例雅思与托福类似真题:
男女合校对分校的立场冲突。
雅思IELTSTopic>Whataretheprosandconsofco-educationalschooling?
Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Providereasonsandexamplesfromyourknowledgeandexperience.
托福TOEFLTopic>Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Boysandgirlsshouldattendseparateschools.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer
>起段开头三句话--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
I.申论主题--中学男女合校制度利少弊多
--Statingyourthesis
Theefforttointroducefemalestudentsintomalesecondaryschools,orviceversa,mustberegardedasundesirablebecausethe
practicehasnotbeenworkingwell.
II.集中焦点--立场的冲突
--Narrowingyourthesisintoyourfocus
Beyondthereligiousandculturalgrounds,thereareotherissuesaboutco-educationthatneedtobeanalyzed.
III.一分为二--道德败坏,学业退步
--Organizingyourfocusintopointsofconflict
Ofalltheobviousdrawbacksaboutmixed-sexeducationalsystem,thedeclineofmoralprinciplesandthefallofacademicperformancehaveraisedparticularconcern.
>合段结尾三句话--Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
I.二合为一--道德败坏,学业退步
--Summarizingpointsofviewintoyourfocus
Notsurprisingly,fromthemoraloracademicpointofview,voicesareincreasinglybeingheardtoescalatesupportforsingle-sexschooling.
II.还原焦点--立场的冲突
--Wideningyourfocustothescopeofyourthesis
Ithasbeenmoreevidentthattosacrificephysicalandmentaldifferencesforartificialgenderequalityisprobablynottherightpolicytorunteenageeducationingeneral.
III.重申主题--男女合校坏处多
--Restatingyourthesis
Ascanbeimagined,sendingimmatureboysandgirlstoattendtheco-edschoolsislikelytocausehiddencoststosociety.
雅思真题举例:
开头与结尾
IELTS--5WritingTopics
》雅思:
经济利益与环境保护的冲突
ExampleA>Todayfoodtravelsthousandsofmilesfromfarmstoconsumers.Whyisthis?
Isitapositiveornegativetrend?
开头三句话Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
申论主题=真题加立场
集中焦点=立场的冲突
一分为二=分别的议论
Thefoodtraveldebateisinevitablyintertwinedbetweeneconomicinterestsandenvironmentalconcerns.Whilefoodistravelingbecausetransporthasbecomesocheapinaworldofglobalization,themannerbywhichfoodisbeingcarriedisnotdoingthenaturalenvironmentanyfavors.Thequestioniswhethertomeethumanfooddemandortoreducepollution?
结尾三句话Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
二合为一=论点的归纳
还原焦点=立场的冲突
重申主题=立场加真题
Inviewofboththepositivesideandnegativesideaboutlong-distancefoodtransportation,thereseemsnoeasyanswertothequestion.Nevertheless,itisuptoconsumerstomakechoices,knowingwherefoodcomesfrom.Buyinglocalproducenotonlysupportslocalfarmersbutalsoprovidesdinnertableswiththefreshestandmostnutrient-packedoptions.
》雅思:
工作满意与工作保障的冲突
ExampleB>Somepeoplearguethatjobsatisfactionismoreimportantthanjobsecurity.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourknowledgeandexperience.
开头三句话Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Noemployeecouldpossiblyfeelhappyaboutasmallchanceoflosingthecurrentjobanytimesoon.Nextonlytopay,jobsecurityiscertainlytheNo.1factorleadingtojobsatisfactioninthemodernworkplace.Inviewofincreasingunemploymentratesthesedays,notbeingabletokeepajobmaymeantheabsenceofhemonthlyincomeonwhichmuchofjobsatisfactiondepends.
结尾三句话Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
Forworkersingeneraltofeelhappyandsecure,itisimportanttomaintainasenseofjobsecurityandjobsatisfaction.Sincemoneyisbyfarthemostimportantfactorthatpeoplework,jobsecurityiswhatmatterstomostworkers.Nevertheless,thosewhocantakejobsecurityforgrantedmaybeginplanninghowtopasstheirhappyyearsafterretirement.
》雅思:
收入与支出的冲突
ExampleC>Peopleindevelopingcountriesarehappierthanbeforewhilepeopleindevelopedcountriesarenohappierthantheyusedtobe.Why?
Whatlessoncanyoulearnfromit?
--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Financiallyspeaking,peoplearesupposedtobehappierwhentheirincomesexceedexpenses,butthereverseishappeningtomanypeopleinsomedevelopedcountries.Incomparison,peopleinsomedevelopingcountrieswithamuchlowermeasureofpercapitaincomeappeartobehappierinwhattheyactuallyareabletobuywithintheirearnings.Thelessonseemsclearenough:
higherlivingstandardsdonotnecessarilyaddtohappinessbutexcessivespendingcancertainlyundermineit.
--Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
Tosumup,theonlywaytoavoidbeingunhappyinlife,whetherreferringtoadevelopedcountryoradevelopingcountry,istohavehappythoughtsaboutlivingwithintheirmeansandhavingsomethingtohopefor.Percapitaincomecannolongerbetheonlymeasureforeconomichappiness,judgingfromthefactthatpeopleindevelopedcountriesarenotashappyastheyusedtobe.Withoutanydoubt,thelessonaboutbeinghappyisforanindividualaswellasforacountrytoperformabalancingactbetweenincomesandexpenses.
》雅思:
男人与女人工作机会的冲突
ExampleD>Somepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenhavedifferentqualities.Therefore,somecertainjobsaresuitableformenandsomejobsaresuitableforwomen.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
开头三句话--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Itisgenerallyagreedthatmenandwomenarecreatedequalbuttheyhavedifferentmissionsinlifeduemainlytodifferentbiologicalinclinations.Thisleadsonetobelievethatsomespecificjobsbetterfiteithermalesorfemalesonly,withpeopleofbothsexesdoingwhattheydobest.Althoughthegenderissueintermsofworkopportunitiesandincomedisparitiesstillexiststoday,nooneshouldeverimaginechangingthecharmthatbelongstowomenandthestrengthtomen.
结尾三句话--Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
Otherthingsbeingequal,theparadoxseemstobethatjustascharmcanbewomen'sstrength,men'scharmcanbestrength.Besides,oneshouldacceptthefactthatthequalityofemploymentdependsasmuchonbiologicaldifferencesasonqualificationsimilarities.Inreallife,neithergenderistheweaksex.
》雅思:
禁止与不禁止的冲突
ExampleE>Filmsandcomputergameswithviolenceareverypopularintheworld.Somepeoplebelievethatthesehavenegativeeffectsonsociety.Otherpeoplesaythesearejustharmlessrelaxations.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
开头三句--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Violentfilmsandcomputergamesshouldbeputoutofbusiness,ifpossibleatall,becausetheycanemotionallyaffectviewers,particularlychildren.Itcanbeseenthatviolenceremainsoneofthemostproblematicareasforcensorshipinmanycountries,especiallywhenitisinconjunctionwithsexanddrugs.So,thequestionisnotwhybuthow?
结尾三句--Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
Inconclusion,giventhatviolentfilmsandcomputergamescanhaveadverseinfluenceonsociety,itisprobablynottherightthingtooutlawsuchproductscompletely.Itisappropriatethatpubliccensorshipshouldbeeffectivelyapplied,wherenecessary,soastopreventyoungcriminalminds.Consequently,theonlysolutionleftfornowseemstobearatingsystemthatdrawsalineforR18:
restrictedforage18andover.
TOEFL--5WritingTopics
》托福:
个人与团队的冲突
Example1>Isitimportanttobeabletoworkwithagroupofpeopleonateamortoworkindependently?
Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.
开头三句--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Ajobworthdoingisusuallyworthdoingtogether.Althoughsomepeopledosucceedinlife,workingindependently,moreindicationstendtoshowthatteamworkmakespeopleachievemore.Inmoderntime,workingismoresimilartoplayinggameslikefootballinthatwearingthesameshirtsdoesnotmakeplayersateambuttheabilitytoworktogethertowardacommongoalcanmakeadifference.
结尾三句--Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
Again,themeaningofteamworkislikeafootballclubbecauseitisonethinggettinggoodplayers,butitisquiteanothergettingthemtogetherwithacommonvision.Thelogicisthatnoneofthemisbetterthanallofthem,asifeveryoneisneededbutnooneisindispensable.Doingajobtogethermayaswellbelikeanorchestrasincenoonecanwhistleasymphonyandittakesawholeteamtoplayit.
》托福:
人心满足与不满足的冲突
Example2>Doyouagreeordisagreewithhefollowingstatement?
Peopleareneversatisfiedwithwhattheyhave.Theyalwayswantsomethingmoreorsomethingdifferent.Usespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer.
开头三句--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Ifyouthinkthatpeoplecanbesatisfiedwithwhattheyhave,thinkagain.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatwhatmainlymoveshumanactivitiesareneedandpride.However,inthepursuitofsomethingmoreorsomethingdifferenttherearedangersofsuchneedbecominggreedandpridebecomingvanity.
结尾三句--Conclusion:
fromspecifictogeneral
Inmanycases,thewordsprideorvanity,andneedorgreed,areusedsynonymouslytoanextentthattherearerisksaboutdefiningthewordsatisfaction.Althoughitisgoodtobelievethatprideandneedarebehindhumanmotivationstomakesuccesshappen,therearechancesthatvanityandgreedunderdisguisecanbackfireatheendoftheday.Therefore,noonehastodoubtthatpeoplealwayswantsomethingmoreorsomethingdifferentbecausetheyareneversatisfiedwithwhattheyhave.
》托福:
工作与不工作的冲突
Example3>Peopleworkbecausetheyneedmoneytolive.Inyouropinion,whatareotherreasonsthatpeoplework?
开头三句--Introduction:
fromgeneraltospecific
Workingpeoplearesupposedtobelargelyhappybecausehavingajobmeansmoretha
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