写作大小作文练习版本三.docx
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写作大小作文练习版本三
【第一段】
简要描述图片,略微引向主题;
图片基调
相关细节
引向主题
【第二段】
点明图片寓意,进行充分拓展;
TDDC
1.化立论为驳论
大众观点
质疑大众
详实论据
结论观点
HuanYucheng
1999
GRE2400
2350
1950/42
800
2.化苍白为哲理
哲理引入
主题阐释
详实论据
(举例)
(利弊)
(因果)
(正反)
观点结论
3.化平淡为修辞
Conceivedinthiscartoonisamottowhichnoonecanwaveaside,that……..However,casesagainstthisprincipleareabundantandwithineasyreach.Haven’tyouevernoticed…?
Haven’tyoueverseen…?
Why…?
Why…?
Why…?
Arenot…?
【第三段】
根据上文论调,进行有效评论。
1.社会弊病(生态环境)
控制:
外控,内控;
Correspondinglawsandregulations(schoolregulations)shouldbecarriedoutto….
Officialinterventionshouldbeactivatedto….
Finesandpenaltiesshouldbeputonthismatterof…todirectittoapositivesituation.
FINEFORPARKING
Newsocialnormshouldbeestablishedto…
Mediasupervisionshouldbecaston….to…..
Rightattitudetothematterof…shouldbecultivatedamongthosewho….
Awarenessof…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….
Theabilityofself-disciplineon…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….
Self-discipline
Self-restrict
Self-control
Self-restrain
Howcanweputtheproblemofdestructingournaturalenvironmentundercontrol?
Itoccurstomanythatweneedapackagedeal,involvinginterventionfromdepartmentconcerningecologicalenvironment,legalmeansaboutthismatter,andseverepenaltiesonthosewhocommitsuchmisconducts.Butisthatdealcomprehensiveenough?
Actually,wealsoneedakeyprogram,plantingtheideaintoeverymindofusthatwemaybe“homeless”ifwemistreatouronlyhome–theplanetearth,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthisproblemtoanend.
Suchmisconductsmustbeputundercontrolimmediately!
Buthow?
Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicinvolves…,…,and….Suchproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulreward.Isthatenough?
Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat…….
2.社会风尚
支持:
理由:
惠及自身与他人;
惠及当下与未来;
决心:
Askedaboutmyattitudeto…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,suchanescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asitisasocialwealth,wearewillingtodeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoanother.Asacollegestudent(Ascollegemen),Iamdeterminedto(wearesupposedto…)….
3.箴言哲理(个人建议)
求助:
他人,长者,书籍,影视;
自助:
具体拓展(环节分解);
Howtostepoutoftheshadowof…?
Thesignificantnumberofusmayputforwardthesuggestionthat……Thatisaway,butapassiveone.Assistanceorsuggestionsarenotalwaysavailable,andnotnecessarilysuittheoneinneed.Actually,infaceof…,oneshould…,…,…,and….
Exercise1
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
学生的对联
图片基调ironic
相关细节
Couplet,thefirstline,thesecondline,horizontalscroll
引向主题dishonesty
Describedbythiscartoonisanironicscenethatthecoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirundesirableattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads“therewillbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexams”,whilethesecondlinebears“successinexamsoutweighsdignityintheirminds.”Thehorizontalscrollsummarizestheiridea:
regardlessofhonesty,theydeterminetopassthesetestsbyanymeans.
PreferAtoB.
AispreferabletoB.
AoutweighBinhismind
Personality
Dignity
大众观点:
最诚信的群体;
质疑大众:
反问
详实论据:
仅仅“作弊”,纸条、手势、手机、交谈、无线耳机……
结论观点:
不诚信:
危害个人、教育、社会
Itisgenerallyacceptedthat….
Itisimaginedbymanythat…
Itisconventionallyholdthat….
Itissharedbythegeneralpublicthat
Itisdeeplyrootedinthemindofthegeneralpublicthat…
Butisthatstillthetruth?
However,weshouldshrugoffthisbelief.
Butisthattrueanylonger?
Arethereanycasesagainstthepublicview?
Arenotthefollowingcasessuffienttocriticizethepublicconvention?
Itiswidelysharedthatnoothergroupsinthisworldcanbesohonestascollegestudents.Butisthatthetruthanymore?
Examplesagainstthispublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Fromcheatinginexaminationsalone,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomecandidatestransmittingbywhispering,bygesturing,andevenbyforwardingshortmessagesonmobilephones.Evidently,anincreasingnumberofstudentsnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty,whichisdetrimentaltoeithertheiroveralldevelopment,orthequalityofcurrenteducation,nottomentiontheatmosphereofsociety.
Bedetrimentalto…
Amountingnumberof…
Anexpandingamountof….
Sendanemail
Forewarding
From…alone,
Numerous
Verymuch
Exercise2
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
ThedreamofaBird
图片基调alarming
相关细节
Abirdisholdingagun
Heishidinginthebush
Heisstaringatthesky
Humanbeingsaresoaringwhere
Hewantstoshootpeople
引向主题
Whatpeopleoncedidwithhim
Emergingfromthecartoonisanalarmingscenethatabird,holdingagunandhidinginthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Clearly,heintendstorevengeonhumansbyshootingthem.Evidently,hisdreamcomesfrom/derivesfrom/takesrootsin/istriggeredby/isevokedby/isprovokedby/issparkedby/isrootedinwhatpeopleoncedidwithhim.
Spark:
ICQ:
26
Itiswidelysharedthatnootherageslaysomuchemphasisonenvironmentalprotectionastoday.Butisthatthetruthforanyone?
Examplesagainstthispublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Itisnotsurprisingtoseesomeofusshootingwildlifeforfun,forfood,andevenforhugeprofit.Itisalsonotuncommontofindsomefactoriesemittingtoxicgaseswithatmospherepolluted.Nowonderthebirdinthepicturedesiretoattachhumans.Evidently,whatwedidwiththenatureistobeansweredfor(peoplemaypayaheavypriceforwhattheydidwiththenature).
哲理引入
Idioms600.doc
Thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.
Wastingnaturalresourcesisahigh-pricebehaviorthatnoonecanafford.
Asagreatthinkeronceputit,“…”
Wecannevershrugoffthemotto,“…”
Themottocanneverbewavedaside,“…”
Underthedeliberatelydepictedcartoonisasimpletruth:
……
Theintendedmeaningofthecartooncanbesummarizedasaphilosophictopicindailylife:
……
主题阐释
Thatis,…..
Putitanotherway,…
Simplyputit,….
Inotherwords,…..
Tostateitinotherspeech,…
详实论据Inthepast…Currently…
(举例)
(利弊)
(因果)
(正反)
观点结论
Conceivedinthisdeliberatelydepictedcartoonisatruth“thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.”Thatis,thenaturemayrewardusfruitfullyitweareongoodtermwithit,whereaspunishusifwemistreatit.Inthepast,naturalresourceswereavailableanytime,anywhereandanyhowasourancestorneverwenttoofarinexploitingthem.Currently,ourgreedinesshasdrivenustotheedgeofrunningoutoftheserecourses.Evidently,peopleinmountingnumbershaveshruggedoffthemottothatitwouldbeahigh-pricedbehaviortoabusethegiftsfromthenature.
Runoutof…
Greediness
Takegoodcareof…
Beongoodtermwith…
Getonwellwith…
Conceivedinthiscartoonisamottowhichnoonecanwaveaside,thatitisourdutytobeongoodtermwiththenature.However,casesagainstthisprincipleareabundantandwithineasyreach.Haven’tyouevernoticedsomeenterprisesover-miningwithgeographicdisastersrecurring?
Haven’tyoueverseenotherslettingoutwaste-waterinhugeamountwithwaterbodypolluted?
Wherehastheconsciencegone?
Wherehastheinsightoffuturegone?
Wherehasthesenseofsocialresponsibilitygone?
Arenotthesevirtuesswallowedbytheirgreediness,sacrificinglong-termecologicalbenefitforinstantprofits?
Sacrifice….for….
Instant
swallow
Wherehasalltheflowersgone?
Conscience
Insightofthefuture
Senseofsocialresponsibility
Waterbody
Letout
Mine
Occur
Recur
Exercise3
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
3)giveyourcomments.
图片基调instructive
相关细节
Amanisfacingseveraldirections.
Heiswalkingbackandforth.
Hefeelsperplexedandconfused.
Heiswonderingwheretogo.
引向主题
是机遇而非困难
Emergingfromthecartoonisaninstructivescenethataman,facingseveraldirectionsandfeelingperplexed,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Meanwhile,thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatoptionsshouldbeviewedasopportunitiesratherthanadversities.
Informsb.of….
Informsb.that…
Remind
Warn
Haveyoueverbeentrappedinadilemmaoradelicatesituation?
Ifso,youmayfeelthesamesorrowasthemaninthepicturedoes.Asthepicturedescribes,facingseveraldirections,amaniswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Meanwhile,thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatoptionsshouldbeviewedasopportunitiesratherthanadversities.
Betterlatethannever.
Bettertryingthancrying.
Conceivedinthisdeliberatelydepictedcartoonisatruth“optimismanddecisivenessisthefirststepleadingtosuccess(bettertryingthancrying).”Thatis,one,ifviewchoicespessimisticallyorindecisively,mayfailtograspopportunities.Over-sadnessmaygrindoffone’swisdomandjudgment,leadingtoimproperdecisions.Ontheco
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