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读后续写专题08读后学写专题训练全国通用015篇
读后续写专题训练(全国通用01)
第1篇 校外闲逛
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
WhenIwastenyearsold,Iwasagradefourprimaryschoolstudentinasmalltown.IhadahappytimeatschoolbecauseIhadafewgoodfriendsthere.Weusuallyspentoursparetimetogether,doingourhomework,goingtotheamusementpark,playingwithourpets,andsharingourhappinessandsorrowstogether.Buteverythingchangedwhenmyparentsdecidedtochangetheirjobsandmovedtoabiggercity.Ievenhadnotimetosaygood-byetomyoldfriendsandteachers.
AsImovedtothenewcity,Ibeganmyschoollifeinatotallynewschoolwithnewsurroundings,newteachersandnewclassmates.Duringthefirstweek,IfeltlonelywhenIwasatschool.Myclassmateskneweachother,buttheydidn’tknowme,whichaddedtomylonelinessandsadness.Thatweekdayafterday,Iwassittingonmyseat,pretendingtobereading.HowIsecretlywishedthatsomeonewouldcometomeandintroducehimselftomeorevenplayatrickonme,butdisappointingly,nobodycame.
Thenoneday,whenmyparentssentmetothebusstationandsaidgoodbyetome,Ididn’tgetonthebustoschoolasusual.Instead,Iwalkedandwalkedonthestreet,lookingatthebeautifulwindowdisplaysandforgettingeverything,withnoworryaboutthenewschool,newteachersandnewclassmates.ThenmyemptystomachstoppedmeandIusedmypocketmoneytohaveabowlofnoodlesinasmallrestaurant.Itwasnoonatthetime,butstillIdidn’twanttogotoschoolorgohome.SoIwenttoaparkandsatonthebench,staringatthesky.AndthenIhadanap.WhenIwokeup,Idecidedtogobacktomyhometown,wheremyformerteachersandfriendslived.SoIwenttotherailwaystation.ThereIwasstoppedbyapoliceman,whoaskedformyIDcard,whichIdidn’thaveatthetime.ThenthepolicemancalledsomeoneandIwasaskedtostaywithhim.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Anhourlater,Ifoundmyparentsrunningtowardsme.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextday,whenIwassenttoschoolbymyparents,IwasafraidIwouldbepunished.
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【答案解析】
Anhourlater,Ifoundmyparentsrunningtowardsme.Theylookedworriedandexhausted.“Wherehaveyoubeenallday?
”demandedmyfatherangrily,“Youareplayingtruantnow,aren’tyou!
”Hiseyeswerefumingwithrage.Ifeltaggrieved,tearsinmyeyes.Imuttered,“There’snobodyIcantalktointhiscity.”Mymotherhuggedme,kissingmycheeks,andsaid“Iamsorry,mydear.It’sourfaultnottohavenoticedthisandgivenyouourtimelyhelp.Butnexttimeyoumeetanyproblems,turntousfirst.”Hearingthis,thoughalittlebitupset,Ifeltbetterwithmyparents’comfort.
Thenextday,whenIwassenttoschoolbymyparents,IwasafraidthatIwouldbepunished.Insteadwhentheclassbegan,theteachertoldthewholeclassthatIwaspermittedadayofftohangaroundthecitythedaybeforeandaskedmetosharewhatI’dseen.Surprised,Iwasgladtotalkaboutthosewindowdisplaysandbeautifulscenesinthepark.WhenIfinished,theapplauseshooktheclassroom.Later,Imadefriendswithquiteafewclassmates,whichmademereallyhappy.Ilearnedfrommyteacherlaterthatitwasmydadwhoaskedhertodothat.Thewhiteliestartedanewlifeforme.
【分析】本文以人物为线索,讲述了作者搬到大城市后,新的学校,新的环境让他感到很孤独和悲伤。
以至于有一天,作者没有去学校而是在街上闲逛,想乘火车回到家乡,但由于没有身份证而被警察拦截下来。
父母听到消息后,连忙赶过来询问缘由。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一个小时后,我发现我的父母朝我跑来。
”可知,第一段可描写爸爸生气询问作者去了哪里,而妈妈则关心安慰作者。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天,当我被我的父母送去学校,我害怕我会受到惩罚。
”可知,第二段可描写作者在回到学校后老师让他分享在城市闲逛的经历并且交了很多朋友。
2.续写线索:
生气——眼泪夺眶而出——有点难过——分享——掌声轰动教室——开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①生气询问:
demandedangrily/saidmadly
②眼泪夺眶而出:
tearsinmyeyes/tearsstartedfrommyeyes/eyeswerefilledwithtears
③分享:
sharesth./talkaboutsth./tellsb.sth.
情绪类
①难过的:
upset/sad
②开心的:
happy/pleased/glad
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Insteadwhentheclassbegan,theteachertoldthewholeclassthatIwaspermittedadayofftohangaroundthecitythedaybeforeandaskedmetosharewhatI’dseen.(由when引导的时间状语从句,that引导的宾语从句作told的宾语和what引导的宾语从句作share的宾语)
[高分句型2]Later,Imadefriendswithquiteafewclassmates,whichmademereallyhappy. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
第2篇 火灾救人
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
Acouple,whomweshallcallJohnandMary,hadanicehomeandtwolovelychildren.Oneday,JohnandMarydecidedtogoonatriptoanothercity,sotheyfoundakindwomantolookafterthechildrenandleft.
Severaldayslater,theyreturnedhomealittleearlierthantheyhadplanned.Astheydrovebacktotheirhometown,JohnandMarynoticedsmokeandwenttoseewhatitwas.Theyfoundahousewasonfire.“Oh,well,itisn'tourhouse.Let'sgohome,”Marysaid.
ButJohndrovecloserandscreamedinsurprise,“That'sJordan'shome.Heworksinafactory.Hewouldn’tbeoffworkyet.Maybethereissomethingwecandotohelp.”
“Ithasnothingtodowithus,”criedMary.“Youhaveyourgoodclotheson,solet'snotgetanycloser.”
Johndidn'tlistentoMary.Hedroveupandstopped.Theywerebothshockedtoseethewholehousewasonfire.Awomanwascryingintheyard,“Thechildren!
Getthechildren!
”
Johnseizedherbytheshoulderandshoutedtoher,“Don'tcry!
Tellmewherethechildrenare!
”“Inthebasement(地下室),”criedthewoman,“downthehallandtotheleft.”
Johnusedwatertogethisclotheswetandputawettowelonhisheadbeforerushingtothebasement.Thehousewasfullofsmokeandfire,anditwasverydifficultforhimtofindthechildren.Buthemadeit.Heheldoneundereacharm.Asheleft,hecouldhearsomemorecrying.Hetookthetwokidsoutofthehouseandintothefreshair,andthenaskedthewomenhowmanymorechildrenwerestilldownthere.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好,请按照如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答;
Paragraph1:
Thewomantoldhimthereweretwomore.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:
Ashetookthemout,hefeltsomethingstrangelyfamiliaraboutthelittlebodies.
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【答案解析】
Paragraph1:
Thewomantoldhimthereweretwomore.Marygraspedhisarmandscreamed,"John!
Don'tgobackin!
It'sdangerous.Thehousecouldfalldownatasecond!
"Hedidn'tlistentoherandwentbackintotheburninghouse.Hewentbacktothebasementbyfeelinghiswaydownthesmokeandintotheroom.Itseemedlikeacenturybeforehefoundthetwochildren.Theywereallcoughing.Sohetriedtowalkclosertothegroundtogetthecleanerairthere.
Paragraph2:
Ashetookthemout,hefeltsomethingstrangelyfamiliaraboutthelittlebodies.Asheclimbeduptheendlesssteps,thefeelingbecamemuchstronger.Consideringtheemergency,hesetasidehisthoughts.Fortunately,theyfinallycameoutintothefreshair.Tohisgreatsurprise,thechildrenhehadjustrescuedwerehisownkids.Knowingwhathadhappened,Maryrantothemintearsandthewholefamilyhuggedtogether.Itturnedoutlaterthatthebaby-sitterhadleftthematthishousewhileshewasshopping.Fortunately,whenJohnsavedothers,healsosavedhisownchildren.
【分析】本文以火中救人为线索展开,讲述了男主人翁约翰从火中救出了四个孩子的经过。
当约翰和妻子玛丽旅游回来的路上发现邻居乔丹家的房子失火,约翰要去救火,妻子玛丽害怕危险不让约翰去救,约翰没有听她的话。
约翰幸亏这样做了,因为最后救上来的两个孩子竟是约翰和玛丽自己的孩子。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“那位女士告诉他还有两个。
”可知,第一段可描写玛丽坚决不让约翰再去冒险救人,而约翰义无反顾的去救了以及救人的艰难过程。
②由第二段首句内容“当他把他们带出来的时候,他对这些小身体有一种奇怪的熟感。
”可知,第二段可描写约翰救出孩子后竟然发现救出的竟然是他们自己的孩子以及了解了孩子在这所房子里的原因。
2.续写线索:
阻止救人——回到地下室——找到孩子——带出地下室——发现是自己的孩子——了解原因——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.走进:
gobackin/gobackinto
②.救:
rescue/save
③.感觉:
seemlike/feel
情绪类
①.幸运地:
fortunately/luckily
【点睛】[高分句型1].Itseemedlikeacenturybeforehefoundthetwochildren.(由连接词before引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2].Asheclimbeduptheendlesssteps,thefeelingbecamemuchstronger.(由连接词as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型3].Consideringtheemergency,hesetasidehisthoughts.(现在分词短语在句中作状语)
[高分句型4].Itturnedoutlaterthatthebaby-sitterhadleftthematthishousewhileshewasshopping.(运用了连接词while引导的时间状语从句)
第3篇 家庭新成员
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
Iwasinmyroom
unwillingtoperformonthestageofcommunitywith“mybrother”Bob.Hewasjustadoptedbymyparentsrecently.
“Grace,comehere,"mymomcalled.Followinghervoice,Ifoundheroutsidethebathroom,holdingawetbook.Shegavethebookashake."Bob'sbookwasinthebathtub.Didyouputitthere?
”Sheglaredatme,somethingsheneverdidbeforeBobcametoourhome.Ididn'twethisbookonpurpose.Tearsofhurtcloudedmyeyes.Worsestill,shepromisedtobuyhimanewcopy.Myheartached.Bobwasstealingmymother'slove.Hewasruiningmylife.
Meanwhile,Bobwasjustnearby,absorbedinworkingonacomplicatedropeknot(绳结)asusual.Whydidaboylikehimdothegirlywork?
Farfrommanly!
Soon,itwastimetohavetosetofftothecommunitytheatre.AsBobwalkedaheadofustothecar,mymomtookmeasideandsaidinalowvoice,"It'sthefirsttimeforBobtobeonstage.Bekindtohim,Honey.Inoddedbutsighed.Beingkinddidn'tusetobehard.ButafterBobmovedin,everythingfeltdifferent.Thetheatreusedtobeaspecialplaceformyparentsand
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