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四级辅导班作文
2011年北京林业大学外语学院
四级辅导班资料
写作(Writing)
一、全国大学英语四、六级考试作文题评分原则及标准
(一)评分原则
1.CET检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。
2.CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。
阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(AwardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。
内容和语言是一个统一体。
作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。
要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
4.避免趋中倾向。
该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分给低分,包括零分。
一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
5.所发样卷一律不得翻印,严禁出版,一经发现,必予追究。
(二)评分标准
1.本题满分为15分。
2.阅卷标准共分五等:
2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。
各有标准样卷一份。
3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。
但不得加或减半分。
4.评分标准
2分—条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分—基本切题。
表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
8分—基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11分—切题。
表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分—切题。
表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
[注:
白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。
]
5.字数不足应酌情扣分:
累计字数CET-4110-119100-10990-9980-8970-7960-6950-59<49CET-6140-149130-139120-129110-119100-10990-9980-89<79扣分12345679
[注:
1.如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句,均不得计入所写字数。
2.规定的内容未写全者,按比例扣分。
3.如果扣为0分,要慎重处理。
]
(三)官方范文
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye-witnessaccountofatrafficaccident.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸,就此写一份见证书。
见证书须包括以下几点:
1.车祸发生的时间及地点
2.你所见到的车祸情况
3.你对车祸原因的分析
以下为各得分档次英语作文范文,全面体现了评分标准的区别
AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident
2points
IsawtheTrafficAccidentinTianjinRoad.TheTrafficAccidenthasbeenatthemorning,May1.Twochildrenbybikewenttoschool.Acarissofast,thestreel.Andthecartouchedtwochildrenbybike,andtheTrafficAccidenthashappened.Oneistouchedsofarwayandtheotherisputdown.Marypeoplecomehere,andtheysenttotwochildrenwhogotoHospiton.Waitatime,TheploiemenarriverdintheAccidentplace.
Myopiontoin:
Thecardriverissofastbycar,andHedidn’tattendationtothechildrenbybikeasidetheroad.Twochildrenbybikedidn’thearedthecarcome.Allofabove,IthinkthecardrivermustbeseriertheTrafficAccident.
5points
Itwas8:
00thismorning,Iwentonmywaytoschool.WhenIjustattheschoolgate,Isawtheterribletrafficaccidenthappend.
Astudentridehisbikeinahighspeed,andjustwhenhearrivedtheschoolgate,alargetrucktraveledoutofthegateandhithimdown.Hefliedover3mbeforehisbikehithimontheground.Surely,thepoorboywashurtverybad.
Ithinktherearetworeasonsfortheaccident.First,itwasjustthetimewebeganourfirstclass,thebikeriderperhapsdidnotwanttobelate,heridehisbikesofast,evendidn’tlowdownhisspeedatthegate.Secend,thetruckistoolarge,andatthattime,thereweretoomanypeoplewalkthroughthegate,sothebikedriverhavenootherwaytochose,buttorideinthemiddleoftheroad.
8points
ThetraficaccidentwastakenplaceatthejunctionoftwohighwayswhenIwasdrivingmycarhomeatabout4o’clock.
Theyellowcarinvoledintheaccidentwasrunningatahighspeedalongtheright-handwhenithappened.Hardlyitreachedthejunctionwhenitcrackedwithatruckrunningfromanotherdirection.Therewasnotimeforthedriverstochangethedirections.
Ithinktheaccidentmostlyattributedtosuchreasons:
Firstlyandtheforemost,itwasthecarelessnessofbothofthedriversthatmostlymadetheaccidentshappen.Itwasnottoocarefulforthemwhenrunningacar.Secondly,theweatheralsoshouldberesponsibleforit.Thefogmadethevisionofdriversvague.Lastbutnottheleast,theconstructureoftheroadswasunreasonable.Thetraficlightsareneededatanyjunctions.
11points
ItwaslastFridaymorning.TheaccidenthappenedwhenIwasonmywaytoschool.ItwassoterriblethatIwouldneverforgetit.
Iwaswalkingalongtheroad,andtherearenotsomanycarsontheroad.Then,withabigsound,theaccidenthappened.Theredcarstopedsuddenlyontheroadsothatthedriveroffollowingcarcouldn’trespondimmiditely.Thebackoftheredcarwasbadlydamaged,butfortunatelytherewasnopeopleinjuredinthisaccident.
Ithinkthemainreasonsareasfollows:
Firstofall,theredcarshouldn’tstopsuddenlywithoutanysignals.Secondly,thefollowingcarshouldkeepacertaindistancefromthefrontcarsothatthedrivercouldhaveenoughtimetotakemeasurswhenanybadlysituation.Finally,thesetwodriverswerecareless.Iftheyhadpaidmoreattentiontodriving,thisaccidentwouldn’thavehappened.
14points
ItwasthemorningofApril6th,2003.Atabout7:
30,Iwenttoschoolbybikeasusual.Itwasarainydayandtheroadwasslippery.Ontheway,Inoticedaboyridinginfrontofme,talkingloudlywithhisfriends.Hedidn’tweararaincoat;insteadheheldanumbrellainonehand,androdewithanotherhand.AsheturnedlefttoGuangmingRoad,hefailedtoseeacarcomingfrombehindatruckparkedonthecorner.SuddenlyIheardabignoiseandsawanumbrellathrownaway.Theboywasknockeddownbythecar.Iwascompletelyshocked.
Ithinktheboy’sabsent-mindednessaccountedmuchfortheaccident.Hewastalkingallthetimeanddangerouslyusedanumbrellawhileridingabike.Theweatheralsoplayedaroleinthetragedy.Thethirdcausewastheunproperlyparkedtruck,whichwasbigenoughtomaketheroadconditionsinvisibletothestudentswhoweregoingtomakeaturn.Allthesecontributedtothisaccident.
二、近年四级真题作文举例
(注:
下列范文并非满分作文,课上可根据上文评分标准予以不同评定)
1.2010年12月大学英语四级考试试题
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
[参考范文]
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Itisnothingunusualtofindoverprotectiveparentswhohelptheirchildreninallaspectsoflife.Thequestionis,aretheysuretheirheartloadedwithlovewillbringgoodtotheirchildren?
Let’slookattherealsituationofthesecond-richgeneration.Someofthem,ratherthanbecomingthesecond-stronggeneration,havebecomethedefeatedgenerationwhichisnotoriousfortheirlifefocusedonconsumptionratherthancreation.
Becauseofthechangesofeducationinhistory,mostChineseparents,thoughsuccessfullyaccumulatewealth,don’tknowmuchabouttherightvaluetheyshouldpassontothenewgeneration.Theyhavetriedallthattheycantobegoodparentswhileneglectingthecorevaluetheyshouldaddress,whichisINDEPENDENCE.
Howshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependent?
Theyshouldgivetheirchildrenthefreedomtomakechoicesforthemselves.Childrencannotbehappyiftheydon’thavecontrolovertheirlife,whichindailylife,meanstheymakechoicesforthemselves,like,whattoeat,whattowear,whatcareertotake,whatkindofspousetheyaregoingtomarry.Someparentsmaybeopen-mindedenoughtolettheirchildrentomakethesetinydecisionsaboutfoodandclothes,butwhenitcomestothebigones,theyaretooanxioustolettheirchildrenhaveatry.Theyusedtobeyoungandtheymademistakesandnowitistheirsonsanddaughters’turntobeyoung—thedeeploveandcareissointensethatitbecomesevensuffocating--theyarereluctanttogivetheirchildrenopportunitiestostarttoberesponsiblefortheirownlives.
2.2010年6月大学英语四级考试试题
1、如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写;
2、出现这个现象的原因是
3、为了改变这种状况,我认为…
[参考范文]
DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling
Theysay“mindbreedsphysiognomy”,whichimpliestheimportanceofone’sappearance.Similarly,acorrectandneatspellingofacompositioncannotonlyreflectasuccessofthecompositionbutembodiethedecentdispositionofthewriteraswell.Unfortunately,agreatnumberofstudentspaylittleattentiontotheirspellingthoughtheircompositionturnsoutquitegoodeitherincontentorinlogic,thusleavingtheteacherinadilemmawhethertogiveahighscoreornot.
Tracingthereasonshiddenbehind,wecaneasilyfinditismainlybecausesomestudentsareunawareoftheimportanceofthespelling.Intheirminds,thecontentabsolutelyoutweighstheformsotheattentiontospellingcanbepleasantlyspared.Objectivelyspeaking,intheexamination,thelimitedtimeandurgentsituationmakestudentshavenomoreefforttocareabouttheirspellingandthefactisthattheyhavetowriteasquicklyaspossibletofinishitontime,leavingsomecharactersvagueorincorrect.
Justasissaidabove,spelling,inasense,mirrorsthecontent,soadirectresultofthebadspellingisthelowacademicscoreintheexamforitishardtoexpectatextfullofundistinguishablewordstoreceiveagoodappreciation.Further,oncethehabitoflaxspellingwasformed,inalongrunthequalityofbeingnegligencecouldalsobegraduallyshaped,whichwouldundoubtedlyexertnegativeimpactforourfutureworkandlife.
3.2009年12月大学英语四级考试试题
1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
[参考范文]
CreatingaGreenCampus
Nowweareenteringabrandnewerafullofopportunitiesandinnovations,andgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople'sattitudetowardssometraditionalpractice,especiallyintheareaofEnglishlearning,oneofwhichislessattentionhasbeengiventospellingbycollegestudents.Thisissuehasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.
Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.First,informationisexpandingatsuchanincreasingratethatoursocietyiscalledtheoneofinformation.Theinformationissoimmensethatstudentshaven'tampleenergyandtimetodealdeeplywithspelling,andsomecomputerprograms,suchasword,havedonethespellingcheckingworkforus
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