雅思英语作文 overweight children 发达国家儿童超重日益增多的原因.docx
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雅思英语作文overweightchildren发达国家儿童超重日益增多的原因
Thenumberofoverweightchildrenindevelopedcountriesisincreasing.Somepeoplethinkthisisduetoproblemssuchasthegrowingnumberoffastfoodoutlets.Othersbelievethatparentsaretoblamefornotlookingaftertheirchildren'shealth.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththeseviews?
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.
ModelAnswer1:
Thereisplentyofevidencetosuggestthatchildrenareoverweightandthesituationisgettingworse,accordingtothemedicalexperts.Ifeelthereareanumberofreasonsforthis.Somepeopleblamethefactthatwearesurroundedbyshopssellingunhealthy,fattyfoodssuchaschipsandfriedchicken,atlowprices.Thishascreatedawholegenerationofadultswhohavenevercookedamealforthemselves.Iftherewerefeweroftheserestaurants,thenchildrenwouldnotbetemptedtobuytakeawayfood.Thereisanotherargumentthatblamestheparentsforallowingtheirchildrentobecomeoverweight.Itendtoagreewiththisview,becausegoodeatinghabitsbeginearlyinlife,longbeforechildrenstarttovisitfastfoodoutlets.Ifchildrenaregivenchips,icecreamsandchocolateratherthannourishingfood,orarealwaysallowedtochoosewhattheyeat,theywillgoforthesweetandsaltyfoodseverytime,andthiswillcarryonthroughouttheirlives.Parentsdecidewhattobuyandlettheirchildreneatandmanyparentsknowandfeelthattheirchildrenareoverweightandyetletthemeathighcaloriecontainedfoodslikefastfoods.Ifparentstrytomaketheirkidsunderstandthatthosetypeoffastfoodsarenotgoodfortheirhealthanddrawarestrictiononhowmuchtheirkidsareallowedtoeatthentheproblemcanbesolvedpartially.
Thereisathirdfactor,however,whichcontributestothesituation.Childrenthesedaystakeverylittleexercise.Theydonotwalktoschool.Whentheygethome,theysitinfrontofthetelevisionortheircomputersandplayvideogames.Notonlyisthisanunhealthypastime,italsogivesthemtimetoeatmorejunkfood.Whattheyneedistogooutsideandplayactivegamesorsport.Thetwoviewsdiscussedplayanequalroleincontributingtotheproblem,butIthinkwehavetoencourageyoungpeopletobemoreactive,aswellassteeringthemawayfromfastfoodoutletsandbadeatinghabits.Weneedtohaveabalancedapproach.
360words)(Thismodelanswerhasbeenpreparedbythesitedeveloper.However,pleasenotethatthisisjustoneexampleoutofmanypossibleanswers.)
AlternativeAnswer2:
Anincreasingnumberofoverweightchildreninmanydevelopingnationsisamajorproblemwhichisalwaysopenforadebate.Thisisatopicalquestionnowadays.Regardingthisissue,somepeoplethinkthatproblemisduetoriseofthenumberoffastfoodcentreswhileotherspointoutthatparentsareresponsibleforlackingcareonchildren'shealth.Istronglyopinethatfoodhabitsarecompletelytransformedwhichneedtoberectifiedimmediately.Ononehand,differenttypesofforeigndishesarespreadthroughouttheworld.Aschildrenaremoreinterestedinthesefoods,theychoosethemwithoutknowingconsaboutthem.Consequently,adevelopingcountrycannotdenytheentryofforeigntradeswhichaffectseconomicconditionofanation.Theingredientsusedtoprepareaniteminthefastfoodoutletsareoflowqualitybutrichinfatcontentsandotherelementswhichaffectachild'shealth.Factorsbehindincreasingdemandsoffastfoodcentresinclude-lowcost,instantavailability,andfinally,theirdistancefromworkplacesandourhome.Fastfoodshopsarelocatedineverycornerofthestreetsandpeoplearebeingattractedbythevarietyofdifferenttastyyetdetrimentalfoods.Ontheotherhand,parentsaremoreblamedduetothisproblem.Therearemanyfactorsrelevanttothis.Inthischallengingworld,bothparentsarewillingtohaveajobtoadoptposhlifestyleandalsotoshowtheirstatus.Consequently,theirvisiononthechild'sfoodhabitplungedtothelowlevelandthusresultsinunhealthyfoodhabits.Otherreasonslikehormonalimbalanceorgenetransferfromparentstochildrenresultinobesity.Inthisurbanlife,familiesprefertolateparties,restaurantfoodsetc.Thesenewinterestsdevastatedhealthyfoodhabits.Finally,inshortconsumptionoffastfoodsshouldbereducedgraduallysimultaneouslyparentsoughttopaymoreconcentrationonchildrenhabitsandalsoforcethemtodoexerciseswhichkeepbodyit.
(Approximately300words)(byKalyanChakravarthy.)
AlternativeAnswer3:
Allaroundtheworld,thelivingstandardsarebecominghigherandallmoresimilartowesternsociety.Thischangingintheeverydaylifebringsalsoitscontradictionsanddrawbacks,likethedramaticincreasinginthenumberofoverweightpeople.Thisproblemisevenmoreworryingifweconsiderthenumberofoverweightchildren,whichcauseswillbetreatedinthisessay.Oneofthereasonslotsofpeoplethinkisthecauseofsuchaproblemistheexponentiallygrowingnumberoffastfoodoutletsindevelopedcountries.Fastfoodsoriginallywereplaceswheretoeatamealinfewtimes,butnowhavebecomealsotheeasiestandcheapestsolutiontohavelunchallovertheworld.Consequentlymillionsoffamiliesprefertoeatinfastfoodswherethefoodisappealing,thankstothehugeworkonadvertisements,andthecostisreasonable.Therefore,parentsbringtheirchildrentothefastfoodoutlets,wherefoodisn'torganicatallandthedimensionsofamealarecompletelyover-proportioned.However,parentsareresponsiblefortheirchildren'sdietandhavetolookaftertheminordertoavoidtheybecomeoverweightorevenobese.Parentshavetofindtimetopreparehealthyfoodforchildren,forexample,freshvegetablesormeat,thatdon'trequiremorethanhalfanhourofcooking.Moreover,parentshavetofreetheirchildren'sdietfromsweets,exchangingthemwithfreshfruit.Inconclusion,bothfastfoodsandlackofparentalcontrolarecausesoftheincreasingnumberofoverweightchildren.Consequently,achangeinfamiliareatinghabitsandinfastfoodoutletsmenuscouldpreventtheriskofafutureworldwidespreadobesityproblem.
(Approximately280words)(byLucaBrotto.)
AlternativeAnswer4:
Istronglybelievethatbothcomponentsmentioned:
thegrowingoffastfoodcountersalongwithparent'sattentiondeficitovertheirchildrenhealthcouldbeblamedforthecausesofoverweightyoungpeople.
Intermoffastfoodcounter,itshouldnotbesolelypointedasthecontributionfactortowardthismatter.Theincrementofcowmilkconsumptionintoddlers,inachangeforbreastfeedingmilk,isalsoinchargeguilty.Researchconductedonthishadproventhatobesityiscommonamongbabywhoweregivencowmilkinsteadofbeingbreastfed.Fastfood,ontheotherhand,containshighfatsandunsaturatedfattyacids,whicharehazardousforwellbeingnotonlyforchildrenbutalsoforgrownuppeople.Whereas,parents'lackofattentiontotheirchildren'seatinghabitsmustbetakenseriouslyaswell.Theymustbeacknowledgedtheimportanceofintroducingnutritiousmealstochildren.Childrenunderfiveyearsofage,forinstance,isbestgivenhighproteincontainsfood,whichaccountsforbraindevelopmentandboostingtheircognitiveability.Andasforobesity,onemustbealertedonitsimpactonchildren'shealthstatusforithadbeenrecognisedasoneofthemajorfactorsresultingincardiovasculardisease,diabetesandstroke.
Inconclusiontothisessay,parents'knowledgeinahealthylifestyleandearlyintroductionofahealthylifestyletothechildrenmustbegivenmoreemphasistohelpanticipatetheincreasenumbersofoverweightyoungpeople.Inaddition,agovernmentalongwiththesocietymustalsoholdfullresponsibilityforthechildren'swellbeingingeneral.Itmightbeagoodideatocreateapolicycontrollingfastfoodoutletsopeninginmanycities.
(Approximately270words)
SampleAnswer5:
Itistruethattheproblemsofobesitychildreninadvancecountrieshavegrownrapidlyinthepastrecentyears.Agroupofpeoplebelievethatitisduetotheincreasingnumberoffastfoodrestaurantsintheareas,whileanothergroupthinksthatitisduetotheparents’mistakes,astheyhavegivenfewerattentionstothechildrenthesedays.Althoughthegrowingnumbersoffastfoodoutletsdoaffecttheproblem,butIalsoagreethatthelackattentionsoftheparentsalsogivesignificantimpactontheobesitycases.
Ontheonehand,itisundeniablethatthesignificantgrowthsoffastfoodoutletshavetrulyaffectedthecaseofoverweightprobleminchildren.Inmostpublicplacessuchasinthemeparksorshoppingmalls,fastfoodoutletsrestaurantdefinitelyexist,andtheyoffervariouskindsofthingswhichattractthechildren.Forinstance,McDonaldregularlygivesadditionalbonussuchastoysforthechildren’smealpackage.Asmoreandmorechildrenareattractedtovisitthefastfoodoutlets,theexistenceoftheoutletshavegrownrapidlynowadaysandtheyhaveoutnumberedthehealthyones.Asaconsequenceoftheincreasingtrend,thechildrenhavemoreoptionofoutletsthattheycanselect,andtheprobabilitiesofthechildreninconsumingthefoodsaregettinghigher.
Ontheotherhand,Idobelievethatparentsarealsoresponsiblefortheproblemaswell.Inthemoderndays,therolesofwiveshavechanged,asmostofthemhavebecomecareerwomenthesedays.Sincetheyarefocusedontheircareers,theyhavelesstimeindoingthehouseholdactivities,whichincludepreparingmealsfortheirchildren.Instead
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