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Sample1(156)
NoAlcoholicBeveragesonCampus
Alcoholicbeveragesshouldbebannedfromcampusesfortworeasons.Thefirstreasonisthatdrinkingcancauseacademicfailure.Ifstudentsdrinkbeforeclassorhavehangoverfromdrinkingtoomuchthenightbefore,theywillbeunabletoconcentrateontheirschoolwork.Theymaymissclasses,failexamsandmissterm-paperdeadlines.Thisbehaviorcouldforcethemtodropoutofschool.Forexample,lastsemester,myfriendDan,wholikedtopartyeverynight,droppedoutofschool.Hefailedorganicchemistrytwiceandbarelypassedotherclasses.Therefore,hisparentsrefusetopayforhiseducationanylonger.Outof90casesreported,65percentdroppedoutbecausetheyhadfailinggradesduetoexcessivedrinking.Therefore,itistruethatdrinkingcaninterferewithcollegesuccess.
这篇文章通过举例和数字统计,较充分地说明了校园内应禁酒的原因。
Samples:
Sample2(P119)(专四)
Peoplehavedifferentviewsontheenvironmentpollution.Whatisyourviewonit?
MyviewonEnvironmentPollution
It’swellknownthattheworldweliveinisgettingworseandworsebecauseoftheincreasingenvironmentaldestruction.Forexample,manypeoplearecuttingdowntreesforfuelorsale,butdeforestationresultsintheincreaseofglobaltemperatureandunpleasantchangeofclimate.Besides,humanbeingsarebeingbotheredbywaterpollution,airpollutionandnoisepollution.
Governmentsofmostcountrieshavetakensomemeasurestostoptheenvironmentfrombeingfurtherdamaged.Manypeoplearetryinghardtofindwaystopreventthepollutionfromgoingon.Lawsconcerningenvironmentalprotectionhavebeenputintoeffectandsituationinmanyregionshaveimproved.
However,theproblemofenvironmentalprotectionisfarfrombeingsolvedcompletely.Ontheonehand,environmentalpollutionanddestructionaregettingworsewiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.Ontheotherhand,manypeoplehaverealizedtheurgencyofsolvingtheproblem.Inbrief,wehavealongwaytogobeforewecanmaketheearthabetterpeacetolivein.
本文所用方法以及关联词:
1.举例法:
forexample,forinstance
2.比较和对比法:
Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand,however,
3.表示进一步说明或强调的关联词:
Besides,furthermore,inaddition,whatismore,inparticular
4.表示总结或文章结尾常用的关联词:
Inbrief,insummary,thus,onthewhole
Advantagesoverweighdisadvantagesinthefollowingthreeaspects:
Sample3:
(P153)(专四)
Generationgapisacommonsocialproblemeverywhere.Whatdoyouthinkaboutitandwhatisyoursuggestionforit?
OnGenerationGap
Generationgapreferstothelackofunderstandingbetweengenerationscausedbytheirdifferentattitudesandexperiences.Itisacommonphenomenonthatexistseverywhereandhasagreatinfluenceontherelationshipbetweengenerations.
Peopleofdifferentgenerationsarelikelytohavedifferentviewsandresponsesonthesameissues.Owingtodifferentexperiences,theyoungandtheoldhavemuchtodisagreeon.Youngpeopleonaveragefavorchangesandnewideas,whileoldpeopleareusuallyconservative,stickingtotraditionalprinciplesandoldideas,andlookingdownonyoungpeople’sinnovativebehaviorsandradicalideas.Thisoftencausesobstaclesbetweenthem.Theyhavegreatdifficultyinreachinganagreementwhilearguingonsomething.Thisoftenoccursinmostfamilies.Differentopinionsbetweenparentsandchildrenusuallyendinquarreling.
Generationgapmayresultinsomenegativeinfluenceunlesswedealwithitproperly.Theyoungandtheoldshouldfindmorethattheycanshare,andtheyshouldunderstandeachotherratherthancondemningtheweakpoints.Thusthegapmaybecomenarrowerandhavelittleeffectontheirworkandrelationbetweengenerations.
文章首先给出代沟的定义,然后说明代沟的具体表现,最后提出对代沟的态度。
1.定义法:
文章第一句用定义法引出话题,说明代沟的概念,即回答Whatisgenerationgap?
让读者首先了解代沟的概念。
2.对比法:
采用对比方式说明不同代人的分歧。
对比法是很有效的说明方式。
本文涉及经历对比,爱好对比,观念对比常用的关联词:
whereas,while,however,ratherthan,ontheotherhand等。
Sample4:
四六级优秀作文点评(P247)
CampusActivities
Campusactivitieshavebeenorganizedinmanyuniversitiesandcolleges.Theseactivitiesrangefromacademictorecreational,suchasacademicreports,socialconsultingservices,speechcontests,poet’sclub,paintingclubs,singinganddancinggroups,etc.
Theseactivitiesprovidestudentswithtwomajoradvantages.Firstofall,theyplayapositiveroleinimprovingstudents’studies.Duetotheirheavyschedules,studentsareoftenbusythemselveswithtextbooksandseldomexposethemselvestoacolorfullife.Butthevarietyoftheactivitiesprovidesopportunitiesforthemtorelaxthemselvesandenrichtheirmindsandknowledge.Inaddition,theactivitiesalsoserveasabridgelinkingstudentstosociety.Ordinarily,collegestudentslivinginthe“ivorytower”havelittlechancestogetintouchwithsociety.Nowtheactivitiesopenthedoorforparticipantstoleavetheirclassroomsandgettoknowsociety.
Allthisoffersanimportantmeansforstudentstobroadentheirhorizons.Theybelievewiththerightkindofguidanceandhelpfulcampusactivitieswillcontinuetogrowandflourish.
Frameworkofthewriting:
I.Introduction:
TS:
Campusactivitieshavebeenorganizedinmanyuniversitiesandcolleges.(组织校园活动)
DS:
Theseactivitiesrangefrom…etc.(举例说明活动内容)
II.Body:
TS:
Theseactivitiesprovidestudentswithtwomajoradvantages.(校园活动给学生带来益处)
DS:
1.Firstofall…knowledge.(用关联词说明益处之一)
2.Inaddition…knowsociety.(用关联词说明益处之二)
III.Conclusion
TS:
Allthisoffersanimportantmeansforstudentstobroadentheirhorizons.(开阔视野)
DS:
Theybelievewiththerightkindofguidanceandhelpfulcampusactivitieswillcontinuetogrowandflourish.(首尾句:
坚信未来)
Sample5:
四六级优秀作文点评(P259)
LosingWeight
Therearemanypeopleinthisworldwhowanttogainweightandthereareevenmorepeoplewhowanttoloseweight.Thelattergreatlyoutnumbertheformer,especiallyinthedevelopedcountriesandsomeofthedevelopingcountrieslikeChina.
Whydopeoplewanttoloseweight?
Thereasonsvary.Forsomepeople,theyfeeltheyarealreadyoverweight.Theyaresimplysettingthingsright.Someotherpeople,forinstance,youngladies,theyarenotreallygettingridofextrafat,butrather,tryingtobethinnerandthinner.Forthem,thethinnerthebetter.Theytakethinnessasasymbolofbeauty.Thelastgroupincludesthosewhosufferfromonekindoranotherofillnessrelatedtooverweight.
Theyadoptedvariousmethodsoflosingweight.Somepreferexercising,namely,physicaltraining.Othersliketogoondiet.Andstillothers,theydependoncertainmedicineorspecialfoodandbeverage.Inaword,peopleliketokeepfitbothphysicallyandpsychologically.
Frameworkofthewriting:
1.Introduction:
(减肥的人数众多)
Therearemanypeopleinthisworldwhowanttogainweightandthereareevenmorepeoplewhowanttoloseweight.Thelattergreatlyoutnumbertheformer.
2.Body:
(减肥的原因)
TS:
Whydopeoplewanttoloseweight?
(用设问句引出原因)
DS:
1.Forsomepeople…thingsright.(原因1)
2.Someotherpeople…ofbeauty.(原因2)
3.Thelastgroup…tooverweight.(原因3)
III.Conclusion.(采取的方法)
TS.Theyadopt…losingweight.(采取多种方法)
DS:
1.Someprefer…physicaltraining.(体育锻炼)
2.Otherslike…goonadiet.(节食)
3.Andstillothers…beverage.(依赖药物)
4.Inaword…bothphysicallyandpsychologically.(段落总结)
Practice1:
EconomicDevelopmentAndEnvironmentalProtection
Framework:
I:
Introduction:
TS:
Somepeoplethinkthattheurgenttaskistodevelopeconomyonalargescale.
DS:
(1)…
(2)…(3)…(reasons:
supportingdetails)
II:
Body:
TS:
Ontheotherhand,manypeopleinsistthatenvironmentalprotectionisatoppriority.
DS:
(1)…
(2)…(3)…(reasons:
supportingdetails)
III:
Conclusion:
TS:
Inmyopinion,…
DS:
(1)…
(2)…(3)…(4)…(5)(detailedsuggestion)
Sample6:
四六级优秀作文点评(P264)
TelecommunicationBringsConveniencetoModernLife
Modernlifewouldbeunimaginablewithouttelecommunications.Telephone,fax,andTVarealreadyhouseholdwords.NewtermslikemobilephoneandE-mailareenteringourdailylifeatarapidpace.Telecommunicationshavepenetratednearlyeveryaspectofmodernlifeandarefastchangingthewaywelive.
Itisnoexaggerationtosaythattelecommunicationsbringhugeprofitsandgreatconveniencetoourdailylife.Forinstance,thetelephonemakesitpossibleforpeopleindifferentplacestotalktooneanother.Mobilesphoneenablesustomakeaphonecallregardlessoftimeandplace.Comparedwithordinarymaildelivery,orevenwithexpressairmaildelivery,electronicmaildeliversmailsmuchfasterandatasurprisinglycheapprice,nomatterwherethereceiveris.Surfingtheinternetisalsoaby-productoftelecommunication,whichprovidesuswitheasyaccesstoawealthofinformation.Furthermore,thankstotherapidgrowthoftelecommunications,businesscorporationscanmanagebusinessaffairsfarmoreefficientlythroughphone,fax,andon-linecomputer.
However,therearedisadvantagesbroughtaboutbytelecommunications,suchasphonebillsforunnecessarytalks,thedisturbanceofunwantedorwrongcalls,andtheattractionofhot-lineservices,etc.Yetbyandlarge,telecommunicationsbringmorebenefitsthanharmtoourlife.Byshorteningdistance,telecommunicationsenhanceefficiencyinourcommercialactivities,savetimeandmoneyinpromotinginterpersonalrelationsaswellasinacquiringknowledgeandaccumulatinginformation.Telecommunicationshavechangedandwillchangeourwayoflife.
FrameworkoftheEssay
I.Introduction
DS:
1.Modernlife…telecommunications.(电信在现代生活中的重要性)
2.Telephone…rapidpace.(列举电信产品)
TS:
Telecommunicationshavepenetratednearlyeveryaspectofmodernlifeandarefastchangingthewaywelive.(进一步阐述段落主题)
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