四级作文评分标准及样卷1满分15分2分5等2分条理不清思路.docx
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四级作文评分标准及样卷1满分15分2分5等2分条理不清思路
四级作文评分标准及样卷1.满分15分2.分5等2分:
条理不清,思路
四级作文评分标准及样卷
1(满分15分.
2(分5等
2分:
条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分:
基本切题。
思想表达不清楚,连贯性差。
有较多的严重的语言错误。
8分:
基本切题。
思想表达比较清楚,文字尚连贯;但语言错误较多,其中有一些是严重
错误。
11分:
切题。
思想表达清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分:
切题。
思想表达清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本无语言错误或仅有个别小错。
注:
如题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句,均不得计入所写字数。
样卷分析:
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同
3.我认为。
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Currently,campusesofmanyfamousuniversitiesarebecomingoneofthepopulartouristattractions.Itisreportedthatmoreandmorepeopleenjoytheirholidaysbyvisitingfamousuniversities,suchasTsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.
Thisphenomenonhasexertedheateddebatesconcerningwhetheruniversitycampusshouldbeopentotourists.Theyindicatethatpeople’sopinionsvaryinabigway.Somepeople
believethatitisagoodthingtoopenuniversitycampusestotouristswhileothersarguethatitisnot.
Personallyspeaking,I’minfavorofcampustourism.Foronething,touristsmayderivelotsofenjoymentfromthebeautifulscenesoffamousuniversities.Foranother,thestrongacademicatmospheremaymotivatetourists,particularlystudents,toworkhardperseverewiththeirdreams.Moreover,forfamousuniversities,beingopentotouristsmayserveasaneffectiveapproachtoattracttalentsfromalloverthecountry.Inshort,campustourismwillnotonlybenefittouristsbutalsodeveloptheuniversities.
2.
Atpresent,alargenumberofpeoplechoosetovisitfamousuniversities,suchasTsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.Asaresult,famousuniversitiescampuseshavebecomeoneofthetouristdestinations.
Butshouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?
Astothisquestion,peoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkthatuniversitycampusesshouldbeopentotouristssincetouristscanlearnalotofknowledgefromthem.Othersthinkthattheyshouldnotbeopenbecauseuniversitiesareplacesforstudyinginsteadoftouring.
I’moneofthememberswhoobjecttoopeninguniversitycampusestotourists.First,ifuniversitycampusesareopentotourists,theenvironmentoftheuniversitieswillpossiblybecomedirty.Besides,manybadpeoplewillenterintothecampusesandthatwillbringdanger.
3.
Famousuniversitiescampusesarenowbecomingthetouringplaces.Lotsofpeoplevisitfamousuniversitiesintheirholidays.Soshouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?
Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.Forexample,somepeoplethinkuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotourists.Othersthinktheyshouldnotbe.
HowdoIthinkofthisquestion?
Ithinkuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotourists.Universitiesarenotonlytheplacesfortheirownstudentsandteachers.Theyarepublicsources,too.Sopeopleshouldhavetherighttovisitthem.Manyuniversitycampusesarebeautiful.Touristswillenjoythem.Returnbackfromtheuniversities,studentsworkhardtogointotheuniversities.SoIthinkuniversitiesshouldbeopentotourists.
4.
Nowpeoplelikevisitfamousuniversities.Sofamousuniversitycampusesbecomesthe
tourists’hotplaces.
Shouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?
Persondoesnothavesameideas.Some
peoplethinktheuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotourists.Somepeoplethinktheyshouldnotbeopento.
Ithinktheuniversitycampusshouldnotopentotourists.Becausetouristswillmaketheenvironmentofcampusbad.Theyharmstudentsstudying.Somehavebadpurpose,theydobad
things.Thoughsometouristscanlearnsomethingfromtheuniversitycampus,butIdon’tthink
thatisthepoint.SoIthinkitisnotgoodtobeopentotourists.
真题作文分类解析
一、原因分析型
第一段:
描述现象;
第二段:
解释这种现象产生或存在的原因;
第三段:
提出解决问题的建议或总结观点。
模板一
Nowadays/Recently,__________.Asaresult/Thus,__________.
Therearevariousreasonsaccounting/responsiblefor__________.Foronething,__________.Foranother,__________.Inadditionto,__________.
AsfarasIamconcerned,__________.Ontheonehand,__________.Ontheotherhand,__________.Inaword.__________.
模板二
Asisknowntoall/everybodyknows,__________.Peopleseemtogetaccustomedto__________.Infact/Asamatteroffact,__________.
Thereasonof__________liesinseveralaspects.Firstly,__________.Secondly,__________.Thirdly,__________.
Astome/Inmyopinion,__________.Firstofall,__________.Besides,__________.Therefore,__________.
真题范文2010.6
DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling
1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2.出现这种现象的原因是。
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3.为了改变这种现状,我认为。
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Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofstudentsseemtoattachlessimportancetospellinginEnglishlearning.Thus,numerousmisspellingappearintheirpapers,andwhat’sworse,a
well-organizeessayisthereforetotallyimpossible.
Therearevariousreasonsresponsibleforthisembarrassingsituation.Foronething,much
morestudentsgiveprioritiestooralEnglishatthecostofdoinglessspellingexercises,letalone
manyteachersputsomuchemphasisonreflectonwhattheylearnedtheotherday.Foranother
communicationandgrammarinteachingthattheyseldomhighlightspelling,andoccasionallyworsestill,theythemselvesarecaughtinspelling.
Tochangethissituation,Iholdtothebeliefthatstudentsandteachersshouldworktogether.
Ontheonehand,studentsshouldstopcomplainingaboutspellings,andtheyshouldrealizecorrectspellingisamustinlearningEnglish.Ontheotherhand,teachersshouldpaymore
attentiontospellinginteaching,forexample,focusingonpronunciationandwordformation.Onlyviajointeffortcanstudentsgainmuchgroundinspelling.
二、对比选择型
第一段:
提出要讨论的主题,说明人们对此看法不一;
第二段:
分别论述人们对此事物或现象的看法及原因;
第三段:
表明自己的观点并给出理由。
模板一
Nowadays,thereisahotdebateon__________.Asforsuchquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.
Somepeoplebelievethat__________mainlybecause__________.Whileothersarguethat__________.Forinstance,__________.
Asforme,Iaminfavorof__________.Foronething,__________.Foranother,__________.
模板二
Inrecentyears,whenitcomesto__________.People’sopinionsvaryfrompersonto
person.
Somepeoplebelieve/think__________mostlybecause__________.However,otherpeoplearguethat__________.Firstofall,__________.Second,__________.Inaddition,__________.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Igivemysupportto__________.Ontheonehand,__________.Ontheotherhand,__________.
2008.6
RecreationalActivities
1(娱乐活动多种多样
2(娱乐活动可以使人们受益,也可能带来危害
3(作为大学生,我认为。
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Abundantrecreationalactivitiesareavailableforpeopletoreleasetheirstrainandstress,rangingfromsportstoonlineactivities.Thereisahotdebatearguingwhethertheyaregoodfor
thepublicornot,especiallyforcollegestudents.
Asforsuchaquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.Somebelievethatrecreationis
helpfulifwewanttokeephealthyphysicallyandmentally.Whiletherealsosoundsanoppositevoice,whichclaimsactivitiesbringmanyproblemsmeanwhile.Forexample,someyoungpeopleareeasilyaddictedtothevirtualworldonline,whichaffectstheirstudybadlyandmayleadtoworseconsequencesaswell.
Asforme,Iholdabeliefthatrecreationalactivitiesdomoregoodthanharm.Theydogiveusagoodchancetorelaxandbuildgoodpersonalrelationshipswithothers,too.Aslongaswecan
arrangeourtimereasonably,theywilldefinitelyprovidemorebenefitsforus.
三、观点论证型
第一段:
引出话题,表明观点;
第二段:
给出论据,解释观点;
第三段:
提出建议或重申观点。
模板一
Duringrecentyears,__________hasarousedwidely/considerablypublicattention.Undoubtedly,/Thereisnodoubtthat__________
Asweallknow,__________playsanimportantrolein__________.Foronething,__________.Foranother,__________.Meanwhile,__________.
Consideringtheabovesituation,measuresshouldbetakento__________.Firstofall/Inthefirstplace,__________.Furthermore,__________.Onlyinthiswaycanwe__________.
模板二
Nowadays,stillmanypeoplethinkthat__________mainlybecause__________.However,Ibelievethat__________.Thefollowingreasonscansupporttheargument.
Inthefirstplace,__________.What’smore/Moreover,__________.Forexample,
__________.Inaddition/Besides,__________.
Allmentionedabovetellusthat__________.Therefore,weshould__________.
真题范文2009.12
CreatingaGreenCampus
1(建设绿色校园十分重要
2(绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境。
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3(为了建设绿色校园,我们应该。
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Duringrecentyears,thetopicofagreencampus,whichhasarousedwidelypublicattention,isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Undoubtedly,agreencampus,theindispensablepartfor
thedevelopmentofcollegestudents,hasaprofoundimpactonbothindividualsandsociety,foritssignificancecannotbeneglected.
Agreenenvironment,ratherthananythingelse,playsadecisiveroleinthegrowthofcollegestudents.Meanwhile,itshouldalsobementionedthatagreencampusincludesnotonlythe
placeswherethestudentslive,butalsothementalenvironment.Withoutgreensurrounding,thesoulofstudentswouldbenotaspureaswewish.Inthatcase,innoplaceotherthancampus
shouldweattempttomakeagreenatmosphere.
Duetotheseriousnessofthesituation,itiscrucialforustotakeeffectivemeasuretocreateagreencampus.Inthefirstplace,it’sessentialthatlawandregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedbythegovernmentandauthorities.Furthermore,itishightimethatweenhanced
theawarenessofthestudentsthemselves.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetsatisfactoryresults.With
thesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatagreencampuswillbeachievedinthenearfuture.
四、说明利弊型
第一段:
说明某现象或实物带来的好处/弊端;
第二段:
说明该现象或事物可能会带来的问题/利
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