四级作文真题解析及范文.docx
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四级作文真题解析及范文
2013年12月四级作文真题解析及范文
2013年12月英语四级作文题目一
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashorteasyonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyoureasywithabriefaccountoftheincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeandthenexplaintheconsequencesofoverusingit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
Peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingsticksinordertosee.
例文1
TheOverusingofCellPhones
Asthedrawingpresents(描述图画内容),thereisamanwalkingacrossthestreetabsorbedlyfocusingonhiscellphonewithoutnoticingthesurroundings.Thissortofphenomenonisnotuncommonandrareinsomemetropolis,especiallyamongtheyoungsters.
Whatthepictureillustratesistheprevailingsituationthathaslongexistedintoday'sChina.Thatisthemobilephoneobsession.Withtheadventofinformationage,peoplearebecomingincreasinglyfascinatedontheelectronicproducts,especiallythecellphones.Notsurprisingly,youcouldeasilynoticethatmostofusareobsessedinsendingmessages,playingonlinegameswiththeirmobilephones.Itcannotbedeniedthatthisphenomenonmaynegativelyimpacttherelationshipamongpeople,andthereforetheywillbecomeestrangedandisolated.
Personally,inviewoftheoveruseofmobilephones,Iholdthatweindividualsshouldraisethenecessaryawarenessthatgoodrelationshiparereinforcedbysincereandface-to-facecommunication.
例文2
Thispictureportraysanironicsituation(描述图画内容):
ontheroad,standsaman,whoiscompletelyconcentratingonhiscellphonewhereasusingastickfordirection,whichimpliestheunprecedentedpopularityorevenoverusingcellphonesnowadays.
Exaggeratedasthepictureis,thephenomenonbehinditisratherthought-provoking.(图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵,想表达什么用意)Withthedevelopmentofhigh-techequipment,especiallysmartphones,peopleingrowingnumberstendtobecomeaddictedtotheexcessiveuseofthem.AccordingtoasurveycarriedoutinChinaDailyseveraldaysago,almost47%ofcitizensexplainthattheywouldexperiencecertainkindofanxietywithoutcellphonesathand.Meanwhile,theoverusingcellphones,firstlywouldexertdetrimentalimpactonthehealthofus.What'sworse,itwouldperformanegativecharacterininterpersonalrelationshipsincewehavelesstimetocommunicate.
statistics
Judgingfromtheevidenceabove,certainmeasuresshouldbetaken.Firstly,certaininstitutionsinChinashouldlaunchrelevantcampaignstolimittheexcessiveuseofcellphones.Moreover,we,ascollegestudents,shouldputemphasisonitrightfromourselvesasastart.
例文3
Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethat(描述图画内容)therearemanypeoplecrossingthestreet.Insteadoflookingattheway,theyarestaringattheircellphonesandusingwalkingstickstosee.Itisobviousthattheyarefascinatedwithcellphoneswhileevenignoretheirsecurity.
Welearnfromthecartoonthatcellphoneshavebeenincreasinglywidespreadinpeople'slife.(图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵,想表达什么用意)Cellphonesareofgreatbenefittoallofus. Oneofthemostobviousadvantagesisthatwecancontactwithourfriendsandrelativesmoreconvenientlythaneverbefore.However,itismobile-phones'advantagesthatleadsomepeopletooveruseorbeaddictedtothem,whichtendstoexertanegativeimpactonourlife.Forexample,oversusingcellphoneswillreduceface-to-facecommunicationamongpeople.Itseemsthatmostofusenjoytheconvenienceofcontactattheexpenseofinterpersonalrelationships.Moreover,entertainingelectronicgames,magnanimousinformationandabewilderingvarietyofsocialnetworkingtoolsinmobilephoneshaveoccupiedmuchofourtime.Informationdistributiontoolsandsocialnetworkingtools,inparticular,haveattractedallofourattention,whichtemptsustokeepoureyesonthescreenaroundthecornerofeverysecond.Then,donotexpectustotalkwiththepeoplearoundus,wedon'thavetime!
This,hasresultedinaphenomenonof"alienationbetween
生化,陌生人的熟悉化"!
科技和现代工具应该是提高我们生活质量的"天使",而不应该是影响我们正常生活和沟通的"魔鬼"。
设想一下,如果过一天没有手机的生活,你会放松?
还是会焦虑?
2013年12月英语四级作文题目二
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
破题解析:
本次四级作文形式仍为漫画题,探讨因特网等现代信息技术对人们交流模式的影响。
话题贴近日常生活,难度中等。
题目要求简述网络的影响,并解释“电子通讯能否替代面对面的交流”,考生需要明确给出正面或反面的观点。
如选择“可以替代”,可考虑从信息技术先进程度、交流方式多样化(文字、语音、视频)等方面举例论述。
如选择“不可替代”,则可强调信息技术无法实现的方面,如面对面情感交流、文字信息内容传达的不完整性,或是网络技术的不稳定、不可靠等方面。
例文1
Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethattherearetwopeopleinfrontofacomputer.Withhiswifestandingbehind,themaniswritinganE-mailtotheirsonwhichstates,"DearAndy-Howareyou?
YourmotherandIarefine.Webothmissyouandhopeyouaredoingwell.Welookforwardtoseeingyouagainthenexttimeyourcomputercrashesandyoucomedownstairsforsomethingtoeat.Love,MomandDad."WelearnfromthecartoonthattheInternethasexertedagreatimpactonthewayofpeople'scommunication.(图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵,想表达什么用意)
Peopleusedtocommunicatefacetoface,makecallsorwriteletters.Whileinmodernsociety,peoplearemorepronetocommunicatevia,asthecartoondepicts,InternettoolslikeE-mails,QQormicroblogs.Peopleholdthatthesewaysofcommunicationaremoreconvenientandareabletosavethemanenormousamountoftime.Herecomesaquestion,“whetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact?
”Definitelynot.Whenenjoyingtheconvenienceofofelectroniccommunication,peoplehavebegantorealizethatittendstoweakentheaffectionbetweenpeople,reduceworkingefficiencyorevenbringaboutsomemisunderstandingsorfrictions.Moreover,communicatingthroughelectronictoolswillbelikelytomakepeoplesolitaryorevensufferfromcertainmentaldisorders.
Whatthecartoondepictedcanbetragic:
thefamilycouldhavecommunicatedfacetofacehappilywithoutE-mail.Butnow, afamilylivingtogetherseemstobeathousand-mileapart.Perhaps,weshouldtakeamomenttothink,"DoesanyonetherewanttofallvictimofconvenienceoftheInternetandelectroniccommunicationtools?
" (275words)
Gotoextremes/moderate/sensible/reasonable/positive/optimistic/takemeasures/proper/appropriate/
Actionsshouldbetakentodo…
参考译文:
通过这幅所给的题目,我们观察到有两个人在电脑前。
男子的妻子站在后面,而男子则正他们的儿子写邮件,并说到:
"亲爱的安迪,你好!
你妈妈和我一切都好,并且很想你,也希望你一切都好。
我们期待下次在你电脑崩溃或者是下楼取东西吃的时候再次见到你。
爱你的妈妈,爸爸。
"
我们从这幅图画得知互联网对人们的沟通方式带来了巨大的影响。
人们过去习惯于面对面的沟通、电话沟通或者是书信沟通。
而现代社会,人们更倾向于像图画所画的那样,用诸如邮件、QQ或者是微博这样的互联网工具进行沟通。
人们认为这样的沟通方式更加方便,节省时间。
现在,就由这样一个问题了:
"电子交流是否会取代面对面的沟通呢?
"答案是否定的!
人们在享受电子沟通带来的便利性的同时,也已经开始意识到了这会削弱人与人之间的情感,降低工作效率有时候甚至会带来一些误会和摩擦。
再者,电子沟通也会使人变得孤僻甚至是产生更加严重的心理疾病。
图画中所描绘的场景,是可悲的:
如果没有互联网,此刻他们可能其乐融融的在一起聊天呢。
然而现在,同处一室的家人,正式因为互联网的便利性,却变得相距千里。
或许我们应该花点时间想一个问题:
"有人想成为互联网和电子沟通工具的便利性的牺牲品吗?
"
例文2没有描述图画内容,因此不符合图画作文的要求,
Themoderntechnologyhasgreatlyalteredthemodeofcommunicationamongpeople.WiththehelpoftheInternet,peoplecaneasilycontacteachotheranytimeanywhere.However,thesideeffectisthatmanypeoplehavebecomeover-dependentontheInternetandneglectedface-to-facecommunication.
AsfarasI'mconcerned,electroniccommunicationcannotfullyreplacethedirectcontactamongpeople.Althoughitseemstobringeveryonetogether,itactuallyestrangespeopleanddecreasestheeffectivenessofcommunication.Atypicalexampleisthat,traditionally,peopleworkinginthesameofficesimplywalktoothersandtalk.Today,however,co-workerstendtosende-mailsorinstantmessagesthroughtheInternetevenwhentheyaresittingnexttoeachother.Aswordscanneverconveythefullmessage,itusuallytakesmuchmoretimeandroundsofconversationthanface-to-facecommunication,inwhichpeoplecandiscussmoredirectlywithlesslossofinformation.
Toconclude,theInternetenablesmoreeffectivecommunicationinsomesituations,butover-dependenceonitactuallypullspeopleapart.
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