1、届高考英语短文改错专题特效卷5短文改错 11、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除 :把多余的词用斜线 ()划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意 :1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。Last month our class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,wh
2、ich run through Hebei,Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At thatmoment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher ed the s help, I usequipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then,I used t
3、he data I hadcollected it to analyze the pollution of the water. Finally,I write a report on the pollution of theriver to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we mustmake small changes to protect our water resources.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有
4、 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill everynow and then because of they are not healthy or strong
5、enough However ， we should takeexercise regularly to improve our health First of all ， taking PE classes seriously In PE classes we can build up our bodies with thecareful guidance of PE teachers Secondly， it is of great important to make it a routine toexercise after class or during breaks In addit
6、ion ， it was also a good idea to join a sports clubthat you are interestedAs the old saying go ， The first wealth is health Lets do more exercise to live a better andhealthy life 3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜
7、线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：3. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；4. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。When I first reached junior high school without my parents, I was very happy. Then I sawthem getting further away from school gate. I started crying because of the thought of not oftenseeing my parents drove me crazi
8、ly, I was then taken to my dorm in that I found other childrenvery happy. I was sick because I hated eating the school food. I failed to concentrating in class. AllI could think of was being at home with my family. As time gone by, I gradually adapted me to theschool life. Thank to my parents, I fin
9、ally learned to be independence and control my emotions.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除 :把多余的词用斜线 ()划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意 :1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。One Sunday, I was reading my boo
10、k while it suddenly occurred to me that it was my motherbirth day the next day. However, I forgot it complete. I was worried that I didn t prepare anypresent to her. At that moment, idea of online shopping came to my mind. I clicked the mouse andsearch some famous shopping websites. Having compared
11、the price of many dress, I chose onewith a reasonable price which I supposed my mum would appreciate it and bought it as soon aspossible. The next day I received the dress as expected without get out of my room. You see,online shopping is very convenient that it has made our life colorful.5、假定英语课上老师
12、要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线 ()划掉。修改:把错的词下划一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:5.每处错误及其修改均匀仅限一词 ;6.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My father and I stayed at the south lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. Itis in the
13、 downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the freehigh-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also sharedfor my friend many photos taking
14、in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, andwe enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把
15、多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：7.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；8.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起)不计分。Yesterday we took part a tree planting activity organised by our class. Early-in the morning,we set out for Bantou Reservoir in Xiamen, When we were arrived there, we began to workimmediately. Firstly, we dug hol
16、es that are slightly larger than the root balls. Next, we gentleplaced the trees into- our new homes. After that, we refilled the holes use enough soil to supportthe root. Finally, we watered the trees. Three hours passed by after we knew it. Tired as we were,we felt exciting, talking and laughing a
17、ll the way home. How an unforgettable experience!7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线 ()划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意 :3.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ;4.只允许修改 10 处,多者 (从第 11 处起)不计分。In most schools, boys and girls learn toge
18、ther in a same classroom. Some private schools arefor boys and girls only. Every province has official course that students will be taught in eachgrade. Schools lend textbooks their students. You will have to buy school supplies like pencils andpaper for our children. Students can get help if they h
19、ave special needs included physical ，emotional，behavioral and so on. Children got a report card several times during the school yeartells you about their progress. Children must go to school every day. If they are absent fromschool because of they arc sick or for personal reasons, you may inform the
20、 school.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意 :9.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ;10.只允许修改 10 处,多者 (从第 11 处起)不计分。My classmates and I decide to do something for our coming graduation. After the heat
21、eddiscussion, we agreed on making a video to record their school life experiences.Material collecting took us a whole week we interviewed our teachers or took pictures ofalmost every aspect of our school life. Edit the interview videos and pictures were tough. Wedebated about what to put into the vi
22、deo. Some compromises and arguments were unavoidable,but the video turned out to be perfectly. Several days later, when the video played at thegraduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers had a great time. That surelygave us a great sense of achievements.答案以及解析1 答案及解析：答案： Las
23、t month our class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,whichrunrunsthroughHebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to mydisappo intdisappo int ment, I found the river wasseriousseriouslypolluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First,tounderwithmyequipmentsteacher s hel
24、p, I used theequipmentfrom the school lab to test the quality of the riverwater.ButAndthen,I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the water.Finally,Iwritewrotea report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave apresentation in class where I suggested
25、that wemustshould(或删去 must)make small changes toprotect our water resources.解析：第一处 :考查时态及主谓一致。句意 :上个月 ,我们班组织了一次沿着潮白河的徒步旅行 ,这条河流过河北、北京和天津。河流的走向是一种自然现象 ,所以用一般现在时 ,which 指代的是潮白河 ,所以用单数第三人形式。所以要把 run 改为 runs。第二处 :考查名词。句意 :令我十分失望的是 ,我发现这条河受到了严重的污染。固定短语 toones +disappointment 意为 “令某人失望的是 ”应, 该用名词 disappoi
26、ntment 做介词 to 的宾语。所以要把 disappoint 改成 disappointment。第三处 :考查副词。 句意:令我十分失望的是 ,我发现这条河受到了严重的污染。 此处是副词修饰动词 pollute,seriously 是副词 严重。所以要把 serious 改成 seriously。第四处 :考查不定式。句意 :在那时 ,我决心尽我所能保护它。此处是动词不定式作目的状语 ,所以加 to。第五处 :考查固定短语。 句意:在老师的帮助下 ,我使用学校实验室的设备检测河水的质量。 介词短语 :with my teachers help 意为 “在老师的帮助下 ”所, 以要把 u
27、nder 改成 with 。第六处 :考查名词。句意 :在老师的帮助下 ,我使用学校实验室的设备检测河水的质量。句中equipment 是不可数名词 ,所以不与 s连用。所以要把 equipments 改成 equipment。第七处 :考查连词。句意 :接着我使用收集的数据来分析被污染的水。根据上下文语义可知应该是顺接关系 ,应该使用 and。所以要把 But 改成 And 。第八处 :考查句子结构。 句意:接着我使用收集的数据来分析被污染的水。 关系代词 that/which指代先行词 date 在定语从句中作 collect 的宾语 ,可以省略 ,原句中的 it 是多余的。 所以要删除i
28、t。第九处 :考查时态。句意 :我最后写了一篇关于这条河的污染报告给当地政府。本文讲述的是过去的事情 ,全文都是还有一般过去时 ,所以要把 write 改为 wrote。第十处 :考查虚拟语气。 句意:在班级里我做了一次陈述 ,在这次陈述里我建议我们要做出改变来保护我们的水资源。动词 suggest引导的宾语从句用 should+动词原形 ,should 可以省略。所以要删除 must。2 答案及解析：答案：Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to variousreasonreasonsand some students fall illeve
29、ry now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough.HoweverThus / Therefore, we shouldtakingtakeexercise regularly to improve our health. First of all, taking PE classes seriously. In PEclasses we can build up our bodieswithunderthe careful guidance of PE teachers. Secondly, it is ofgre
30、atimpor tan tinpor tan ceto make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks. In addition, itwasisalso a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested in . As the old sayinggogoes,The first wealth is health. Lets do more exercise to live a better andhealthyhealthierlife.解析： 1.reason 改为reasons考查名词复数 reason是可数名词，其前有various 修饰时要用复数形式故 reason改为reasons2 去掉 of考查词语用法 because意为因为，是连词，连接两个句子构成原因状语从句； because of 意为因为，是介词，接名词或代词此处应是前者故去掉 of3 However 改为Therefore/Thus 考
