1、关于高考英语,书面表达,英语书面表达常见错误,（一）,3,错误类型一:汉式英语错误,4,误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary.正:或误:Good good study,day day up.正:,It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary.,If you study hard,you will make progress every day.,The dictionary cost him five yuan.,5,正:It is suitable to grow vegetables here.,误:There
2、 have many students in the classroom.,正:There are many students in the classroom.,误:Here is suitable to grow vegetables.,6,误:We are very like English.正:,We like English very much.,7,(6)误:The price of the computer is expensive.正:(7)误:The population of China is many.正:,The price of the computer is hig
3、h.,The population of China is large.,8,(8)误:Recently our village have taken place great changes.正:,Recently great changes have taken place in our village.,9,(9)误:That factory broke out a fire last Sunday.正:(10)误:This building likes a school.正:,A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday.,This build
4、ing looks likeis like/is a school.,10,(11)误:I will by bus to Beijing tomorrow.正:,Ill go to Beijing by bus tomorrow.或Ill take a bus to Beijing tomorrow.,11,(12)误:His friends are few.正:,He has few friends.,12,错误类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误,13,一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一起
5、，也不能只用逗号隔开。,14,误:There were foreigners came to our school.正:或:误:Without a friend will feel lonely.正:,There were foreigners who came to our school.,Without a friend one will feel lonely.,There were foreighners coming to our school.,15,（3）误:The book was interesting.I read it rapidly.正:正:,The book was
6、interesting;I read it rapidly.,The book was interesting,and I read it rapidly.,16,（4）误:The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher.正:（5）误:I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.正:,The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.,I cant imagine what lif
7、e would be like if we have not any TV sets.,或：I cant imagine what life would be like if there are not any TV sets.,17,（6）误:The sun gives off heat and light,this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow.正:,The sun gives off heat and light,which makes it possible for the plants on the ear
8、th to grow.,18,错误类型三：重复累赘,19,有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某个单词，而学生基本功夫不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。,20,(1)误:We hope to improve our work better.正:,We hope to improve our work.,21,(2)误:Yours class was interesting.正:,Your class was interesting.,22,(3)误:Personally I think he is a good student.正:,I think he is a good stu
9、dent.,23,（4）误:Mary married with John.正:（5）误:I returned back the book to you yesterday.正:,Mary married John.,I returned the book to you yesterday.,24,（6）误:The teacher repeated the sentence again.正:（7）误:My most favorite song is“Hand in Hand”.正:,The teacher repeated the sentence.,My favorite song is“Ha
10、nd in Hand”.,25,（8）误:The train is entering into the tunnel.正:,The train is entering the tunnel.,(9)误:Its a story which is interesting.正：,Its an interesting story.,26,错误类型四：语法、词法错误,27,许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。,28,误:In the bedroom there are a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.正:误
11、:He closed the door and hurries away to class.正:,In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.,He closed the door and hurried away to class.,29,（3）误:In order to learn English well,I should increase/raise the method of study.正:.（4）误:Tom was in such a hurry that he forget his schoolbag on t
12、he bus.正:,In order to learn English well,I should improve the method of study,Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.,30,错误类型五：拼写错误及注意标点符号,31,考生出现单词拼写错误的原因：一是因为发音错误导致拼写错误，如：strick（strict）；二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的，如：teached（taught）等。标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解不同标点符号的用途或英汉标点差异
13、，结果出现错误。,Dear neighbour,Im glad to tell you that your child is very lovely and energetic.He can play until midnight.But he bothered me.,（扯闲话，兜圈子）,Dear neighbour,I was once again waked up by the noise from the ceiling above at the middle of the night.That was the time you returned home,(开门见山，直奔主题),We
14、 have just had a class meeting on the topic of“saving money”.As we all know,money is very important in our life,but it isnt the most important.I think the most important thing is friendship,love and so on.,（下笔千言，离题万里）,（二）作文句式的多变性 恰当使用复杂句型,（1）改变时态,例：The bell is ringing now.,(一般),There goes the bell.,
15、(高级),（2）改变语态,例：People suggest that the conference be put off.,It is suggested that the conference be put off.,（高级）,(一般),(一般),（3）使用不定式,例：He is so kind that he can help me.,He is so kind as to help me.,（高级）,（4）使用过去分词,例：She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.,（一般）,Followed by many stu
16、dents,she walked out of the lab,（高级）,Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.,(一般),Once seen,it can never be forgotten.,（高级）,Not until I finished the work did I go to the cinema.,（5）使用强调句式和倒装语序,例：I didnt go to the cinema until I finished my work.,（一般）,It was not until I finished my work that I went to the cinema.,（高级）,（高级）,But for(Without)your help,I couldnt have passed the examination.,（6）使用虚拟语气,例：Because of your help,I passed the examination.,41,Thank you!,
