1、Writing Pattern：（批驳分析类） 1） With the arrival / birth of , sth. is becoming more and more in our life.2） Hit / Affected with this trend, some / many people come to believe / contend that .（错误观念）3） But their viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.（作者的立场） 4） It is true that sth. is a ke
2、y ingredient in ones （让步法分析）5） On any scale of , in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth.6） If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it isnothing but （批驳分析I）7） . （进一步阐述）8） And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one to , as can be easily seen in the cases of （批驳分析II） 9） T
3、herefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth.10） On the one hand, （正确看法I）11） On the other, . （正确看法II）12） In sum, sth. means but not to our life. （结论句）Reference Writing: What Attitude Should We Take to Money1.社会上对金钱的错误观念。2分析批驳其错误所在。3给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。 1） With the arrival of market-bas
4、ed economy, money is becoming more and more important in our life.2） Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life.3） But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind. 4） It is true that money is a key ingredient in ones struggle towards happ
5、iness, without which, for example, there would be no way to go to college or form a family.5） On any scale of ones daily worry, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than money.6） If we see it in its true colors, however, money is nothing but a means to an end.7） Money can buy us food, but not ap
6、petite; medicine, but not health; diplomas, but not knowledge; and days of joy, but not the whole life of happiness.8） And moreover, laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it, as can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials. 9） Therefore, it is necess
7、ary to take a correct attitude towards money.10） On the one hand, money is vital to our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you to spend not where you may save.11） On the other, money is something to be plowed into something more important, so it is better to spare not where you must spend.12）
8、In sum, money means something but not everything to our life. Pattern 22Effects of Sth. On Sb. / Sth. Else1分析某事物的正面效应2分析某事物的负面效应3给出怎样对待该事物的建议 Writing Pattern：（分析建议类） 1） As is known to all, sth. does bring a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else.2） First, it can greatly strengthen , thereby changing for
9、 the better.（正面分析I）3） Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to （正面分析II）4） And best of all, it can help sb.（正面分析III） 5）But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about.6） If, as a succession of scientific studies reveal
10、s / implies / suggests, there are more chances that （负面分析I）7） In addition, the more ., the worse. （负面分析II）8） And worst of all, （负面分析III） 9） Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth.10） On the one hand, （建议I）11） On the other, . （建议II）12） In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. el
11、se good or harm, all depending on （结论句）Reference Writing：The Effects of Exercise on Our Health1分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处2分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处3给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议 The Effects of Exercise on Our Health 1） As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health.2） First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts,
12、lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3） Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us.4） And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life. 5） But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to
13、 the negative effects exercise brings about. 6） If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured.7） In addition, the more exercise those on a fa
14、t-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get.8） And worst of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death. 9） Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise.10） On the one hand, our physical e
15、xercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity.11） On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own.12） In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it. Pattern 23A Letter to the College Preside
16、nt1. 就学校的某些变化给校长写封信2. 分析变化主要表现在哪些方面3. 提出（进一步）改进的意见 Writing Pattern: （分析建议） 1） I am delighted （distressed） to find there have been favorable（unfavorable） changes in （议论的主题） since I came here.2） From my angle of view, these changes indicate that what you have done is in （out of） line with .（作者的态度）3） I
17、n the long run, they will produce more positive （negative） effect on .4） Such desirable （undesirable） changes can be found in the aspects as follows.5） First, 分析I） 6）Second, . （分析II） 7） And best（worst） of all, （分析III）8） . （进一步阐述） 9） But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for f
18、urther improvement in （that there is little you can do about ）10） Instead, to enrich （reverse）, a richer variety （a better health） can be added to （建议I）11） And meanwhile, . （建议II）12） It should be born in mind that （结论句）1就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。2分析该变化表现在哪些方面。3提出进一步改进的建议。 A Letter to the College President 1）
19、 I am delighted to find there have been favorable changes in our campus life since I came here.2） From my angle of view, these changes indicate what you have done is in line with the interests of undergraduates.3） In the long run, they will produce more positive effect on our growth.4） Such desirabl
20、e changes can be found in the aspects as follows. 5） First, our dining conditions have turned for the better, thus ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy our hunger.6） Second, your faculties have paid as much attention to our emotional world as to our intellectual growth, which in turn len
21、ds much warmth of family to our life.7） And best of all, we find the campus a more pleasant place to live on.8） As a result of your efforts, we now have more places to go to for recreation, such as cafes, net bars, fitness centers and reading rooms. 9） But all the foregoing does not mean that there
22、is little room for further improvement in our college life.10） Instead, to enrich our life here to the fullest, a richer variety should be added to our spare time as well as our curriculums.11） And meanwhile, we should be allowed more access to scientific research, social practice and the frontier o
23、f our own fields.12） It should be born in mind that the purpose of our college life is to prepare us for the different needs of tomorrows society. Pattern 24How to Do Something1某一事物的现状2分析该事物的重要性（或危害性社会意义等）3怎样对待该事物： 1） Much to our distress / delight / surprise, these years have seen the popularity /
24、worsening / much improvement / a widespread neglect of sth. （议论的主题） in society.2） According to a recent / official report / survey / opinion poll, .（佐证陈述）3） If this current is allowed to run its course, things are bound to turn for the better / worse. （Para. 1） 4） The importance / harmfulness / sign
25、ificance of sth. to sb. / sth. else, （however）, can be seen from the perspectives as follows.5） In the first place, （分析I）6） In the second, . （分析II）7） And above all, （分析III）8） To sum up, . （归纳总结） （Para. 2） 9） So the most pressing for us / basic problem now is how to10） In my opinion, the first step s
26、hould be focused upon （建议I）11） Then, greater efforts must be made to . （建议II）12） In one word, where there is , there is （结论句） （Para. 3）How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today1我国爱国主义教育的现状。2分析爱国主义教育的重要意义3如何在青少年中开展爱国主义教育 How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today 1）
27、 Much to our distress, these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society.2） According to some official reports, many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of our national heroes have g
28、iven way to todays pop stars in youths minds.3） If this current is allowed to run its course, I am afraid, things are bound to turn for the worse, with less and less sense of patriotism left in the youth. 4） The significance of patriotic education to our society, however, can be seen from the perspe
29、ctives as follows.5） In the first place, the patriotic education can make youth more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation, thus building up their sense of pride as Chinese.6） In the second, the patriotic education helps youth value todays hard-earned life so as to hold dearer thei
30、r golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge in peace.7） And above all, the patriotic education can push youth to draw upon more of their capabilities in order to make tomorrows life better than todays and leave behind themselves more highlights for the nations culture.8） To sum up, patri
31、otic education is a key ingredient in the all-round development of youth. 9） So the most pressing for us now is how to effectively inculcate patriotism in the youth of today.10） In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon giving fuller play to the potentials of patriotic education centers instead of running them for the purpose of making money.11）
