1、修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。（一）How time flies! A week have passed before I noticed it. Looking back on the things that happening last week, I found the life here full with happiness and interests. I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. I came
2、 to my bedroom by myself. When I opened a door, I saw a girl with short hair seating in a chair with a book in her hand. She must be a quiet girl who liked reading, I thought myself at the time. After we said hello to each other, other girl came in with a big noise. Her name was Rose. She was so out
3、going and humor that both Cherry and I couldnt help laughing at her words. Then we had studied and had meals together, and became good friends. I cant forget the day when we spent together no matter where we are in the future.（二）Dear Li Hua,I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand how sad
4、you are as they have to transfer to other school. But everything will be fine when you adapt to your new surrounding. In your letter, you asked me about my first school. In my memory, my first school was very large with each classroom beautiful decorated. There was a big square lies in the center of
5、 the schoolyard. And I could have good view of the square from my classroom windows. My favorite teacher was my English teacher which was patient with me. Besides, I had met my best friend Peter in the school, to whom I still keep in touch even though we are in different schools now. I hope you will
6、 make new friends but enjoy your time in the new school.（三）In a couple of week,we will say goodbye to our school.How the time flies!I will never forget the past three years that I have enjoyed a wonderfully journey with all of my teachers and classmates.To make the journey fruitful,our teachers devo
7、ted his time and energy to us.Thanks so much to your help and guidance,my dear teachers!I really appreciated it.Before long,well start a new journey,and there may be a lot of difficulties in do everything in the future.I know there are no end to the things that we can accomplish,and tomorrow is the
8、beginning of the hardest part of our life.May you happy and successful all the time in your new life!（四）My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go to work in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a ri
9、ver nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save m
10、y little brother,that moved all the people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.（五）Last Friday,1 was standing near a subway exit, tried to call a taxi. But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi-booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cell-phone. Soon i
11、t came, and l stepped in, feeling pretty proudly of my high-tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app. So later,1 was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cell-phone to get the next order. It was just then when I began to worry about my safety. Whats bad, the drive
12、rs informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi-booking app the next time.（六）Dear Mr.Green,Im very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together.That sounds great and I definitely agree yo
13、u on that.Some of the columns you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea.“Cultural Express”give us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different part of the world have different values,its necessary to learn from each another.Besides,it is pretty good for Chinese students t
14、o learn English idioms and improving oral English.“Entertainment”is also cool! The popular singers,actors or celebrities are so attractively that you absolutely cant miss this part.Teenagers are to fond of popular things,too. Well,I really cant wait to read this magazine. Yours,Li Ming（七）One of the
15、most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe I can learn English well and become En
16、glish teacher.”It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didnt do very well in all my English exams. Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to accept this reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confiden
17、ce than before.（八） Last weekend I visited my best friend in London , which was supposed to be excited . Melina , whom I have not seen for three years , offered to take me on a sighting tour by car . Unfortunate , she ended up doing everything but that ! First , she showed me around the building wher
18、e she had gotten her first job . Then she drove me to the caf where she had met first boyfriend . Before I could say everything , she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her . I was very disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car
19、! Besides , she kept talk about herself all day long ! I was fed up with it , but I couldnt make her to stop . When she finally decides to call it a day , she turned around and found me asleep !（九）A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations
20、can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have everbeen to, and accidents have happe
21、ned now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.（十）Keeping a dia
22、ry in English is the effective way to improve our English writing ability.First, it takes little time to finish a diary than other writings.By keeping English diaries, we can easy form the habit of thinking about in English.Second, we can practice use English idioms and useful structures in our diar
23、y-writing.If we have difficulty finding suitable words or phrases to express our opinion, we can turn in English dictionaries or teacher for help.This is also a kind of learning.If we can keep on doing this, we would gradually learn how express ourselves in English freely.In a word, it was of great
24、benefit to keep diaries in English. 短文改错专题 参考答案及解析1.have改为has，主语是a week故用has.2.happening改为happened，时间状语是last week，用一般过去时。3.with改为of，或者full改为filled.固定短语：be full of或者be filled with 充满。4.door前的a改为the，当我打开门时，此处door表示特指，用定冠词。5.seatingseated/sitting考察后置定语.相当于定语从句who was seated或者who sat。故省略关系词变成seated/sitt
25、ing。6.thought后加to，think to oneself自言自语。7.第二个other改为another，此处指另外一个女孩，用another.8.humor改为humorous.outgoing and humorous并列，做表语，用形容词。9.去掉we后的had句意：然后我们一起学习一起吃饭。根据上下文，这里是一般过去时，故去掉we后的had。10.whenthat/which 或去掉when 本题考查定语从句。句意：如论我们将来在哪，我都忘不了我们一起度过的日子。定语从句we spent together需要关系代词that/which做宾语，或者省略，修饰先行词the d
26、ay，故whenthat/which 或去掉when。1. theyyou 考查代词。我能理解你多么难过因为你不得不转到另外一所学校。此处根据前后句意可知，是指你，不是他们，故用you。2. otheranother 考查代词。other后接可数名词的话，要用复数，此处意为转到另外一所学校，another表示“另外一个”，接单数，符合句子结构。3. surroundingsurroundings 考查名词。此处应用名词，因为前面有new这个形容词来修饰，而surrounding是形容词，surroundings是名词，意为“周围的事物”。4. beautifulbeautifully 考查副词
27、。此处为副词，修饰动词decorated，表示“装饰地很漂亮”。5. lieslying 考查非谓语动词。此处是一个there be句型，已经有了谓语，故再出现动词只能用非谓语，广场位于校园的中央，为主动关系，故用lying。6. good前面加a 考查冠词。此处为固定表达：have a good view of，意为“清楚的看到”。7. whichwho 考查连词。此处为定语从句，先行词是my teacher，是人，故用关系代词who，在从句中作主语。8. 删除had 考查时态。此处是指之前在学校遇见了好朋友，用过去式，而不用过去完成时。9. towith 考查介词。此处为固定用法：keep
28、 in touch with sb“和某人保持联系”，故用with。10. butand 考查连词。我希望你交到新朋友并在新学校过得快乐。此处根据句意可知，前后句之间是承接关系而非转折，故用and。1.week改成weeks.名词错误.句中有several修饰，要用复数.2.the去掉.冠词错误.句中time表示抽象的时间，不是特指，不用冠词.3.that改成when.连词错误.句中I have enjoyed a wonderfully journey with all of my teachers and classmates是修饰years的一个定语从句，从句结构完整，且先行词是时间，要
29、用when来引导.4.wonderfully改成wonderful.形容词错误.句中是修饰名词journey，要用形容词来修饰.5.his改成their.代词错误.句意指代的是复数名词teachers，要用their来指代.6.to改成for.介词错误.thanks for为某事表达感谢.7.appreciated 改成appreciate.时态错误.句意表达的是客观事实，要用一般现在时态.8.do改成doing.动词错误.句中do位于介词in后，作介词的宾语，要用动名词.9.are改成is.动词错误.句中no end是抽象名词，谓语动词要用单数.10.May you后加be.句型搭配错误.m
30、ay sb+动词原形，表示祝福某人怎样.短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等.解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心.看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.1. calling called根据dog是call的动作承受者，应用过去分词作定语。故calling called。2.go went根据上下文语境，应用
31、过去时。故go went。3. himself themselves 根据该句的主语my brother and A Bao判断反身代词应用themselves。故himself themselves。4. while when根据从句的谓语动词fell判断应用when，因为while在期间，引导的是时间状语从句的谓语动词只能是延续性的动词，fell为非延续性的动词。故while when。5.immediate immediately根据动词jump应用副词修饰。故immediate immediately。6. the a根据river在前文已经提到，应用定冠词，故have be。7. hearing后的about去掉根据hear sb doing听到某人正在做某事。故hearing后的about去掉。8. could后加to根据could后的动词do与主句的谓语动词一样，省。to save不定式作目的状语。故could后加to。9.that which根据which代替主句一句话的内容，引导非限制性定语从句。故that which。10.brave bravery根据his后应加名词形式，与and后的kindness并列。故brave bra
