1、专题04建议信备战高考英语书面表达体裁分类必背Type 04建议信1.gve/offersb. someadvice(on) 给某人提建议2.asksb. foradvice 向某人征求意见3.asfollows 如下4.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview 在我看来5.find.helpful/useful/beneficial 认为有用6.takepartin/participatein. 参加7.follow/take/adoptonesadvice 采纳某人的建议8.takesth. intoaccount/consideration 把考虑在内
2、9.with regard to 关于；就10. put forward 提出11.inthisregard/inthisrespect 在这点上/在这方面12.sharesth. withsb. 与某人分享某事13.withtimegoingon 随着时间的推移14. Be faced with 面临15.takesth. seriously 重视；认真对待 第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：1. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite nor
3、mal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. Im writing
4、to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5. Im very
5、glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6. Im very glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何
6、在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因套语： (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起During the aft
7、ernoon, well.together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teach
8、er, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。Im sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分：提出建议套语：我建议Id like to suggest thatMay I
9、 suggest that?In my opinionI would like to make a recommendation thatI am writing to adviseIf I were you, I would第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语：1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。2. I hope these suggestions will
10、 be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会
11、非常高兴看到情况改善。5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。
12、如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。模板Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to_, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _(建议的内容).I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you
13、to further details.Good luck with your_(祝愿).Yours Sincerely,Li Hua模板Dear_, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to _. Then, it also helps to _. Besides, it should be a good idea to _. You can also _.
14、(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)As to _, I suggest _(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _(其他的建议). Im sure _(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).I hope _(表达愿望)。Yours Sincerely,Li Hua 1. 建议信写作注意事项 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。2. 写作方法 首段：a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；b. 说明目的，注意语气。 主体：a. 提出具体建议；b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我
15、，否则容易跑题写成议论文。尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。3. 写作流程图说明写信目的介绍详情、说明原因提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复典例01（2017北京卷）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次
16、，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【范文赏析】Dear Jim, Im happy to receive your letter
17、and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.
18、 Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua典例02（2020黑龙江哈尔滨三中月考）假定你是李华。你的美国网友Eric打算寒假期间到中国来旅游。最近，他来信向你询问来中国旅游时的注意事项。请你用英语给他回封邮件。内容包括：1.
19、 交通工具的选择；2. 购物付款方式；3. 天气、饮食和住宿。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求为写一封电子邮件；你的美国网友Eric打算寒假期间到中国来旅游。最近，他来信向你询问来中国旅游时的注意事项。请你用英语给他回封邮件。内容包括：1. 交通工具的选择；2. 购物付款方式；3. 天气、饮食和住宿。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：glad to（高兴做某事），some tips （一些建议），By the way（顺便说一句），high-speed railway（高速铁路），d
20、istinctive and delicious（独特而美味）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【范文赏析】Dear Eric,Im glad to know youre coming to China to travel in the winter vacation. Here re some tips for you during your stay here.You can take the plane if you travel to
21、a faraway place. By the way, high-speed railway, which is fast and comfortable, is very popular in China today. While shopping, you can use your credit card or cash. But theres a new and interesting way of paying called Alipay or WeChat pay. As for the weather, its cold in winter here. So do wear th
22、ick and warm clothes. Hotels are easy to find and the Chinese food is distinctive and delicious. Im sure you will enjoy yourself here.Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Li Hua典例03（2020云南昆明一中高三开学考试）假定你是李华，你校外教史密斯先生想学习中国书法(calligraphy),请你给些建议。请根据所给提 示，给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 练习书法的技巧；2. 学习书法的意义；3. 给他鼓励
23、和信心。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,_Yours,Li Hua【范文赏析】One possible version:Dear Mr. Smith,Im delighted to learn that you are interested in learning Chinese calligraphy. I feel honored to offer you some practical suggestions.Actually, you may feel it hard to write with a writing brush
24、in the beginning, so its a good idea to learn some basic writing skills either from a Chinese teacher or from teaching videos on the Internet. Besides, paying attention to the use of excellent calligraphy models always counts. Last but not least, just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. Pr
25、actice with patience and youll make progress in time. Meanwhile, youll gain a better understanding of Chinese culture and history by learning Chinese calligraphy. I hope my advice will be of some help to you.Yours,Li Hua典例03（2020上海黄浦格致中学高三月考）Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words a
26、ccording to the instructions given below in Chinese.你是启明中学李华，看到电视台有报道说很多超市有大量临近保质期的食物，针对这些食物如何处理想征集观众意见，你很有感触遂写信给电台表达想法，信件内容包含：1. 对如何处理这些临近保质期的食品提出建议；2. 提出这些建议的理由。【写作指导】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你校外教史密斯先生想学习中国书法(calligraphy),请你给些建议。请根据所给提 示，给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 练习书法的技巧；2. 学习书法的意义；3. 给他鼓励和信心第二，人称为
