1、英语名校长征中学九年级上学期一模备考讲义之作文专题S长征中学2019年九年级上学期一模备考专题之作文讲义课程主题长征中学2019年九年级上学期一模备考专题之作文学习目标1、把握该校过往考试动向；2、明确本次备考方向及重点；教学内容 Read the passage and fill in the blanks with proper words(在短文的空格内填入适当的词，使其内容近顺，每空格限填一词，首字母已给):(14分)Cellphones have become a part of everyones life. And every month, new models (81) a_
2、in the stores. They offer exciting new features(特点 )like cameras, MP3 players and even the ability to (82) c_ with the InternetBut what can we expect of the phones that we will see in stores in the future? Well, it is said that cellphone users will be able to do more on the Internet than ever before
3、. They will be able to do all the things on their cellphones that they can now do on their laptop(笔记本电脑) computers. (83) M_, cellphones will have (84) v_ recognition software, so people will not even have to use the buttons on their phones. They will be able to simply tell their phones what they wan
4、t to see or do.One problem with cellphones is that they have small screens. However, this problem could be (85) s_ in the future by building phones that project pictures and movies onto a wall or asheet of paper. Cellphones will also be used with e-paper (large screens that can be folded andeasily s
5、tored and carried) as well as personal video screens that look like (86) p_ of glasses.As you can see, the cellphone has a promising(有前途的) future, and its features will change in (87) w_ that we cannot even imagine.81.a_ 82.c_ 83.M_ 84.v_ 85.s_ 86. p_ 87.w_（试题来源：2019学年长征中学初三上10月月考试卷） （出处:英语外语频道）30/1
6、5020/150音标，名形动代词等8/150词性，固搭8/150名词，副词，形容词等转换14/150否定句，同义句，连词成句50/150阅读，完型，首字母，回答问题20/150注意语法，拼写，立意等作文考点概述作文评分标准1.内容分8分（前提，最重要）:内容切题 ， 意思连贯， 表达清楚完整2.语言分8分:用语规范 ，表达准确 ，无或少见语法错误 ，词汇拼写正确 ，句型使用恰当3.组织结构分4分（前提是内容分和语言分达到15/16分才有加）:使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分写作的基本步骤 审题立意结构安排语句组织文采润色检查修改【知识梳理一】审题立意及文体写作记叙文：审题：审什么1.
7、 审文体2. 审要求简单要求：把这些问题用完整句回答再加上适当的上下连接就可以成为一篇比较合格的作文想要让文章出彩，就必须对它进行精雕细琢注意有无“短文需包含下列要素”之类的要求。3. 审时态4. 审人称立意：要有新意和高度建议不要成为控诉大会，投诉信要有健康的立意。可以反题正写，比如，我讨厌浪费时间，我讨厌不诚实.【例题精讲1】 Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned to be_through a school activity” 【以“通过一次学校活动我变得.”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。】提示：初中四年你一定参
8、加了不少学校活动，也从中学到了不少东西，请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息。）【分析】看到这篇作文，首先需要审题立意。 审文体：根据提示：初中四年你一定参加了不少学校活动，也从中学到了不少东西，请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文可知该作文应以记叙为主，议论为辅，所以问题为夹叙夹议。 审要求：主要是通过自己经历过的一次活动见证自己的成长，所以该作文应该是一般过去时，人称为第一人称。（试题来源：2018-2019普陀区一模试卷）（出处：组卷网） 议论文1.由论点论据论证三方面组成2.使用名言警句，议论为主，辅之以记叙，说明和描写等手法3
9、.写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，根据题目要求，有时要从正反俩面来论述，可增强论证力度，最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机整体。4.写作时常以三段式形式展开议论中考英语作文万能模板：解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 问题现状 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(说明的现状)Second, -(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series o
10、f effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, -(解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, -(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that -(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is waiting for us because -(带来的好处).中考英语作文万能模板：说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往
11、往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测） 说明事物现状 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） 你对现状（或前景）的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(的优点之一). Besides -（的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One o
12、f the important disadvantages is that -(的第一个缺点)To make matters worse,-(的第二个缺点)Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweight the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的看法)(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reaso
13、nably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, -(对前景的预测)中考英语作文万能模板：议论文的框架(1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目_. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think
14、that _ _观点一_. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, _原因一_Furthermore, in the second place, _原因二_. So it goes without saying that _观点一_.Some People,however,differintheir opinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _观点二_. In their poin
15、t of view, on the one hand， _原因一_. On the other hand, _原因二_. Therefore, thereis nodoubtthat _观点二_.As far as I am concerned, Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _观点一或二_.It is not only because _._, but also because ._. The more ._, the more ._.（2）利弊型的议论文Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue th
16、at)_作文题目_. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _优点一_. And secondly _优点二_.Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, _讨论议题_ is no exception, and in another word,
17、 it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺点一_. In addition, _缺点二_. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_.中考英语作文万能模板：图表作文的框架as is
18、shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthe table(graph/picture/pie/chart), _作文题目的议题_ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from._ in _._ to _._ in _._. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it
19、goes without saying that ._.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _. Ontheonehand, _._. Ontheotherhand,_._ isduetothefactthat _._.Inaddition, _._ isresponsiblefor _._.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow _._.Butitis generallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasons arecommonly convincing.AsfarasIa
20、mconcerned,I hold the point of view that _._. Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.【例题精讲2】 94.write at least 60 words on the topic my opinion on getting pay for doing housework【以“我对有偿做家务的看法”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】提示:一些家长为奖励,你怎么看这件事?可以为了鼓励孩子参与家务活,请结合自身的经历阐述观点和给予孩子一定的报酬作为孩子承担家务的理由。(注意:短文中不得出现任
21、何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)（试题来源：2017-2018普陀区一模试卷）（出处：组卷网）【分析】看到这篇作文，首先需要审题立意。 作为一个训练有素的学生，在开写这篇文章之前，必须做好审题这个基本任务，主要从三方面进行审题。1.审题材：看似议论，却要有记叙，可以先给出自己的观点，再结合自己的经历来写。2.审时态和人称，文章考查的是你的观点，可用一般现在时。在结合自己的经历部分，可以采用一般过去时，也可以是一般现在时。3.审要求：文章要的是你的看法，对有偿做家务的看法。其次，要结合自己的经验。【知识梳理二】 作文美化技巧 文章写完之后，可以再思考能否有进步的空间，这一部分往往会涉
22、及作文的美化。作文美化可以从不同方面一一来说。1. 磨字词，将一些常见的字词替换掉，取而代之的是一些更地道更高级的表达。E.g.I think=personally speaking/as for me,I hold the belief that./as far as I am concerned Want to do=desire to do或be eager to do/decide to do或make a decision to do/make up ones mind to do Easily=have no trouble doing/have no difficult doin
23、g/without any difficult2. 修句型，使用多种句型，比如宾语从句，强调句型，目的状语里的so. that/enough.to/too.to,d定语从句也可以适当使用，或者非谓语，介词短语结构。3. 创新句，使用一些固定的短语。E.g.众所周知：as is known to all,+句子/毫无疑问:there is no doubt that./不可否认：there is no denying that./之所以.的原因是.the reason why.is that./形容词最高级+完成时(.have ever known/heard)4. 巧逻辑。适当使用一些逻辑词，
24、使文章更出彩。E.g.顺承关系:for one thing.for the other thing/on one hand.on the other hand/to begin with/last but not least递进关系:besides/moreover/furthermore/in addition/as well/whats more/whats worse转折关系：but/however /yet/instead因果关系:as a result/therefore/so that总结关系：on the whole/in short/in brief/in a word/in
25、conclusion/to conclude5. 熟谚语。在作文中使用一定的谚语，能够增强说服力。E. g.1.Knowledge is power.知识就是力量2. Time is money.时间就是金钱3. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧4. Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩5. Its easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难6. It is love that makes the world go round.爱使世界更美好7. Where there is a will,there is a
26、way.有志者事竟成8. Where there is life,there is hope.有生命就有希望9. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情10. Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知6. 美框架。注意首尾呼应，既要龙头又要凤尾。结尾一般使用感叹句，反义疑问句，和祝愿句。紧扣主题，避免重复 【例题精讲3】 94.Write at least 60 words on the topic ”My favourite activity at the School (Science/Art/Englis
27、h.) Festival” 以“学校 （科技/艺术/英语.）节中我最喜欢的一项活动”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。 为了给学生提供更多学习和展示的平台，学校每年举行各种活动，例如，科技节、艺术节、英语节等等，请选取某一个活动节中你最喜欢的一项活动，可以结合你最近的一次经历，谈谈你在该项活动中做了什么，以及你喜欢这项活动的理由。【参考范文】My favourite activity at the School Art FestivalLast month our school held the first Art Festival. There are colorful and
28、 diverse forms in the the festival. I took part in a lively activity with my best friends. we organized a team of dancing. For being a better dancing show, I spent some time practicing and contributing to the show. From the process, It can do good for everyone communication and stimulate our potenti
29、al, personality, and cultivate the interest and the aesthetic appeal. From the long time, the festival aimed not only to better students of cultural and artistic level, but also for a review of the education quality.Through the performance, we strengthened the construction of campus spiritual civilization, created a good atmosphere of learning.（试题来源：2016-2017普陀区一模试卷）（出处：组卷网）【分析】该文章字词方面使用的不错，但句式结构还可以再改进一些，尤其是被动句，从句。逻辑词也可以适当使用，再使用一些固定搭配，谚语就更好了。【优化后】94. Wri
