1、,大学英语四级写作,Review,漫画作文写法,第一段：描图，第二段：对图画所反映的现象进行解释，第三段：个人就此发表看法或提出观点。,第一段：描图：对图画的内容进行具体的描述好句子）,1.What a vivid cartoon it proves to be!2.The underlying meaning embodied in it can not be underrated,in that the cartoon reflects a not uncommon social issue,from which we can clearly observe that3.How impre
2、ssive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children.,第一段：描图：对图画的内容进行具体的描述好句子）,4.The authors real purpose is not the drawing itself,but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture.,第二段：阐述具体的现象或原因好句子）,1.It is a universally-held vi
3、ew that the above-mentioned cartoon deeply illustrates a social issue which is catching more and more attention from the general public currently.2.And then,What prove to be the reasons leading to it?Admittedly,3 reasons stated as follows can be taken be accountable for it.3.First and foremost,（阐释具体
4、的现象或原因）more importantly,（阐释具体的现象或原因），last but not the least.,第二段：阐述具体的现象或原因好句子）,4.What are the reasons for it?In the following sentences,Ill venture to explore the reasons.,第三段：结论好句子,1.According to my personal perspective,some strong and effective measures should be implemented to put an end to this
5、 issue,（如果是不好的社会现象就用这句话），2.（some effective measures should be implemented to be in support of it（如果是好的现象就用这句话）.3.On the one hand,organization concerned should do their best to make rigorous laws and regulations,4.on the other hand,the society as a whole should enhance their public awareness,only by
6、taking these measures,can we have it resolved completely.,重温模板,Para 1 How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children.Lets take a closer look at the drawing,the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of he
7、r mothers choice with pride.The authors real purpose is not the drawing itself,but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture.,Para2,The cartoon deeply illustrates a social issue which is catching more and more attention from the general public currently.What prove to be the reasons leading
8、to it?3 reasons stated as follows can be taken be accountable for it.First and foremost,（阐释具体的现象或原因）more importantly,（阐释具体的现象或原因），last but not the least.,Para3,According to my personal perspective,1.some strong and effective measures should be implemented to put an end to this issue,（如果是不好的社会现象就用这句话
9、），2.（some effective measures should be implemented to be in support of it（如果是好的现象就用这句话）.On the one hand,organization concerned should do their best to make rigorous laws and regulations,on the other hand,the society as a whole should enhance their public awareness.Only by taking these measures,can w
10、e have it resolved completely.,破题思路：第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。第二段：分析该现象的原因。第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。,This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer in the whole day even when he falls asleep at night.What the cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on people.New products
11、are being invented every minute of every day,all of which will hold sway over people in some respects.,However,in all these technologies and products,computers have exerted the most important influence on people.Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful,while some p
12、eople believe that computers have made life easier and more convenient.Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time.I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages.For example,if I have some trouble studying，I can surf the internet to find more helpful infor
13、mation.However,Internet can make some problems at the same time.,In a word,in spite of the fact the computer appears to have made life more complex and stressful,I feel that the advantages are more obvious,which have become an integral part of everyday life.,New lesson,作文模板：图表类,写作步骤1.直观描述图表内容.2.具体分析
14、图表，提出问题或现状.3.提出解决办法或自己的观点.,based on基于 category种类，范畴chart图表 graph图表table表格 figure数字data数据 statistics统计数据indicate表明 reveal表明suggest表明 imply暗指rank列为，排列rate比率respectively分别地 amount数量，数额,有代表性的词汇,表示上升趋势 lncrease增加 grow增长rise上升 surge猛增soar猛增 rocket迅速增长go up上升 jump暴涨leap飞跃 shoot上涨climb to上升 mount增长ascend上升
15、on the rise上升spiral upwards螺旋上升 swell增大experience an explosive growth迅猛增长,针对不同的图表有不同的描述方式，比如：泛指一份数据图表一般用a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table、饼图用pie chart、直方图或柱形图用bar chart/histogram、趋势曲线图用line chart/curve diagram、表格图用table、流程图或过程图用flow chart/sequence diagram、程序图用processing/procedures diagra
16、m。,1.直观描述图表内容.,而常用的描述图表内容的句式类型很多，考生可以重点记忆一些常用的但是又不失新颖的句式，例如：As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures，table/chart/diagram/graph figures(that)It is apparent from the figures/statistics、According to the table/chart diagram/graph等等。,描述完图表的内容以后，和其他类作文一样，考生需要从图表中总结出图表想要传达的信息，存在的问题、现状、观点等等
17、，在描述这些内容时通常会用到一些对比分析的词汇和句式，例如：数据在某一个时间段固定不变用fixed in time、在一系列的时间段中转变用changes over time、波动用fluctuate/rebound/undulate/wave、稳定用remain stable/stabilize/level off，最常用的两种表达形式是动词+副词形式或者形容词+名词形式。形容数据变化的重要词汇大家也可以记住一些典型的，比如：dramatic/dramatically戏剧性的，生动的，sharp/sharply锐利的、明显的、急剧的，steady/steadily稳固的、坚定不移的，slig
18、ht/slightly轻微的、略微地，rapid/rapidly迅速的、飞快的、险峻的。,2.具体分析图表，提出问题或现状.,考生最主要需要掌握的就是分析图表时需要用的一些特定句型，例如：the table shows the changes in the number ofover the period fromto、the graph provides some interesting data regarding、this is a cure graph which describes the trend of、over the period fromtotheremained leve
19、l等等，这些句式大家在写作时完全可以直接套用，既能吸引人眼球又能省时省力。,提出解决办法或自己的观点在作文的结尾段，考生需要对文章内容有个总结，并由此得出自己的观点或者解决这个问题与现状的方法，这个时候考生平时练习的提纲型作文模板的尾段也可以放到这里用，当然这一部分在描述得时候也有自己常用的词汇与句式模板，例如：the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that等。,表示下降趋势decrease降低，减少 fall下降drop下降 decline下降go down下降 slide下滑reach the bottom of 降到底
20、部 on the decline 处于减少趋势slump暴跌 take a nose dive迅速下降wane变小，衰落 reduction减少,表示平稳趋势consistent一致的 steady稳定的stable稳定的 hardly change几乎不变level off变平，稳定 remain constant保持稳定stay the same保持一致 maintain保持表示波动趋势swing摇摆，摆动 fluctuate波动，涨落fluctuation 波动，起伏,表示程度 dramatic剧烈的 drastic急剧的slight轻微的，微小的 somewhat稍微，些许sudden
21、ly突然地 substantial重要的considerably相当地 sharply锐利地，急剧地steep急剧升降的 rapid迅速的，飞快的,作文模板：图表类 As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart),_作文题目的议题_ has been on rise/decrease(goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasi
22、ng from_ in _ to _ in _.From the sharp/marked decline/rise in the chart,it goes without saying that _.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _.Ontheonehand,_.Ontheotherhand,_ isduetothefactthat _.Inaddition,_ isresponsiblefor _.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow _.Butitisgenerallybelievedthat
23、theabovementionedreasonsarecommonly convincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,I hold the point of view that _.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.,What is shown in the chart/graph/diagram/table above indicates that in recent years,more and more people pay attention to _.The number of those who _ has in
24、creased _,and furthermore,_.There are two factors responsible for the changes.In the first place,_.Moreover,_.Yet,it is noticeable that _.From the analysis,we can safely draw the conclusion that_.It is possible that in the future,the tendency will_.,作文模板：图表类,According to the bar chart/pie chart/line
25、 graph displays the changes in the numberof_(图表整体趋势).There was an increase in _(图表细节).At the point of _,_reaches its peak value of _(数据或变化).What has caused these changes?There are mainly three reasons.Firstly,_(原因一).Secondly,_(原因二).The number of _ increased overthe period._ rose by _ from _ to _.And
26、there were_.Finally,_(最后一个原因).In conclusion/We can safely draw the conclusion that _(结论).Therefore,_(进一步谈论更多个人想法).,作文模板：图表类,Para 1The past years have witnessed a mounting number of Chinese scholars returning from overseas.As is lively illustrated by the column chart,the number of returnees climbed f
27、rom a mere 69.3 thousand in 2008 to over 272.9 thousand in 2012,at an annual increase rate of around 50%.,Para 2A multitude of factors may have led to the tendency revealed by the chart,but the following are the critical ones from my perspective.First and foremost,along with the development of Chine
28、se economy and society,the number of Chinese studying abroad has been soaring in the past years,which has provided an expanding base for the number of returnees.In the second place,the government has enacted a series of preferential policies to attract overseas Chinese scholars back home.Last but no
29、t least,the booming economy,science and technology in this country have generated more attative job opportunites for scholars returning from overseas.,Para 3The waves of returnees will definitely contribute to this nations development,since they have brought back not only advanced science and techno
30、logy but also pioneering concepts of education and management.With more scholars coming back from overseas,and with the concerted efforts of the whole nation,we have reasons to expect a faster rejuvenation of this country.,new lesson,应用文 应用文中的信函，也是四级作文设计的试题之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定的场景，试题要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封
31、短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。文章所设及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。书信的类型可能变化万千，如邀请信、申请信、感谢信、道歉信等，但是万变不离其宗，只要掌握了英语书信的格式，并应用恰当的句式和语句，就一定能够写出好的文章来。,建议信 投诉信 拒绝信 祝贺信 道歉信 申请信 求职信 邀请信 感谢信 慰问信 倡议书 活动海报,实例1-2002年1月真题Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:A Letter to
32、 the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.You should write at least 100 words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。,January 12th,2002Dear Mr.President,I am a student here.I write you
33、this letter to say a few words about the dining halls in this university.First,the food in the dining halls is not delicious enough,either too salty or too watery,especially in Dining Hall 3.Second,the prices in dining hall are very high and usually we cannot afford it.Third,the dining halls are always very crowed and we can seldom find seats if arriving there not early enough and the tables are n
