1、高考英语复习指导书面表达精练一2014高考英语复习指导书面表达精练（一）专题 一 提纲类1 (2013 课标 | )假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot)。给开网 店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）象征意义价格注意：1.词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已为你写好。Dear Tom,How are you doing? Li HuaOne possible version ：Dear Tom，How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots
2、 for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in t
3、heir houses. They are only 12. 99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also，do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!2 (2013 重庆）请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。A mother said，“ My son is always on the phone，sleeping，out with his friends, or in his room.
4、 He never has time to talk to me. ”要求：（1)就此材料发表你的看法；紧扣材料，有明确的观点；词数不少于60。 写作提示1.本文属半开放类作文，建议使用第三人称，基本时态为 一般现在时。 2.内容要点：就材料发表自己的看法；紧扣材料，阐明自己的观点。One possible version ：442 5年高考3年横拟B版高考英语 Correction 41 第一句:life前加the此处为特指。2 第一句:shewho此处who引导非限制性定语从句。3 第一句:passer-bypassers-by此处应该用复数形式。4 第二句:recentlyrecent此
5、处是形容词修饰名词report。5 第四句:beforeafter此处意为“（时间）在之后”。6 第四句:and-4but此处表示转折关系。7 第六句:had4ias此处指从过去开始持续到现在的动作。8 第六句:hisher人称一致。9 第七句:a number后加of a number of才可以修饰名词。10 第七句:injuringinjured 表示“受伤的”用“injured”。Correction 5 第一句:haVehas此处的主语是burden,故谓语动词用单数。 第一句:fewlittle attention为不可数名词，应该用little来修饰。 第二句：touchedto
6、uching touching是形容词，表示“令人感动的”。 第三句:hisher代词指代她母亲，故用her。 第四句：whomwho此处关系代词在定语从句中作主语，应该用 主格。 第四句:have前面的to删除let sb. do sth.为固定结构。 第五句：thatwhat 此句 what my mother needs 作 to 的宾语，what 在宾 语从句中作needs的宾语，而that在名词性从句不可作句子成分。 第五句:在only之前加the only表“唯一的”，前面经常用定冠词the。 第六句preparingprepare prepare和前面动词do并歹系。 第七句:m
7、iichmore 此处需要用比较级，即 “.even more importantthan qCorrection 6 第一句:happenedhappen 此处是 see.do的结构。 第一句:去掉to home在此处为副词，前面无需加介词to。 第二句:whilevwhen 此处为 be doing.when 结构。 第三句:第二个and改为but前后为转折关系。, 第四句:herhis人称一致。 第六句:howwhat what + to do构成不定式的复合结构，其中what作 do的逻辑宾语。 第八句:reachedarrived reach为及物动词，需加宾语，arrive为不及
8、物动词，无需加宾语。 第九句：her后加to send sb. to sp.把某人送到某地。 第十句:policemanpolicemen one of后面加可数名词复数形式。10第十句:while后加he或去掉was while为连词，连接完整的句子； 在从句主语与主句主语一致且谓语动词含有系动词be的情况下，可 省略从句中的主语和系动词be。Correction 7 第一句:real-really此处副词修饰形容词。 第二句：decided后加to decide to do固定搭配。3第三句:locatinglocated be located in 固定短语，意为“位于 ”。 第四句:T
9、heA可数名词第一次出现，用不定冠词。 第六句：shopkeepersshopkeeper店主是一个人，单数即可。 第七句:去掉800前的for charge sb. some money意为“收取某人多少 钱”，不用介词。 第七句:thatwhich此处是非限制性定语从句，不能用that。 第九句:Choosechose这篇短文是在叙述过去的事，基本时态是一 般过去时。 第九句买自行车的是“我”。 第十句:sobut转折关系o Correction 81 第一段:hadhave文中用的是现在时态。2 第一段:disappointingdisappointed 形容人。3 第二段第一句:nat
10、urallynatural形容词在句中作表语。4 第二段第一句:histheir 呼应 people。5 第二段第二句:thingthings thing为可数名词，用复数。6 第二段第三句：Therefore However 根据上下文，应该为转折 关系07 第二段第四句:add后加to add to为固定搭配，意为增加。8 第三段第二句:删除which前面的in which在定语从句作主语。9 第三段第二句:beside-besides besides意为除之外。10 第四段第一句:theva never judge a person by appearance 为俗语，意 为不可以貌取人
11、。It can be learned from what the father said that her son never communicates with her because he is always occupied with what he likes doing. In myview, busy as children are, they are supposed to spare some time to talk with their parents frequently. Not only can it help them gain wisdom from their
12、戸肛已他 experience, but also it can promote their understanding. Undoubtedly, it will be of great significance to their healthy growth.3 (2013 天津）假设你是某大学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一 届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按 以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。个人优势介绍（如性格、特长等）；组织校内活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）；组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）； 表达当选的愿望。注意：词数不少于100;请勿
13、提及真实学校名称；可适当加人细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；开头、结尾已给出，不计人总词数。参考词汇：副主席 vice president 竞选 run forGood afternoon, my dear friends.My name is Li Jin. Thank you.Li Hua 写作提示本文可分三段。第一段开门见山，指出自己要竞选副主席一职； 第二段根据提示介绍自己的个人优势及工作设想；第三段介绍当选 愿望。人称-用第一人称，时态以现在时、过去时为主。参考短语:have strengths in，hold lectures。One possible version ：Good a
14、fternoon，my dear friends.My name is Li Jin. Its I who would like to run for the position，vice president of our school English club.As is known to everyone，I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management. In order to make our school lif
15、e more abundant and colorful，I can manage to hold some interesting lectures and English parties. Whats more，I shall hold some competitions ,such as a debate on how to study efficiently and an English speech contest to improve our ability to communicate with each other.Id appreciate it if I could be
16、chosen ； I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.Thank you.4 (2013 山东）假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom 周前 给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未 能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：未及时回信的原因；你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。注意=1.词数:120150;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Writing 10(2012 全国 | )假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你 写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：时间:周五晚8点至9点地点:学生
17、俱乐部内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等要求:备小礼物 注意:词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hi Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. 写作提示本文可分三段，第一段介绍未及时回信的原因，第二段介绍假期 计划，第三段介绍自己的希望。本文时态以现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。运用适当的连接词。One possible version ：Dear Tom,The final exam is coming and I have been busy preparing for it，which
18、 is why I delayed answering your email. I think you will forgive me. After the final exam，the summer holiday will come. My holiday plans are as follows.I have been working hard at my lessons for several months and now I need a break. I decide to go to Beijing. You know, Beijing is the capital of our
19、 country and there are many places of interest there，such as the Forbidden Cit- y，the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, etc. As is well known, the Great Wall is the longest wall in the world and it is also one of the seven wonders in the world. One who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a real hero. So
20、 I want to climb up the top of it and become a real hero.Looking forward to your coming to China. Lets climb the Great Wall together.Yours, Li Hua5 (2011 江西）假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicy- cles的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇:低碳生活（low-carbon life);节能（energy-sav
21、ing) 注意：词数:120词左右；演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles. ； Thank you! 写作提示本文要求写一篇有对比意义的文章，同时是一份演讲稿，所以通 常用第一人称。建议采用三段式:一段写利用汽车出行的缺点;一段写利用自行 车出行的好处;最后一段可以发出号召。写作要点:空气污染、交通阻塞、节能环保、有初健康等。4参考词汇及句型：with the improve
22、ment of sth. , low-carbon city, whats more0 One possible version：Good morning, everyone,Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”.As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing
23、 great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.How can we solve these problems then? As far as I，m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing，bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another,
24、bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.Therefore，lets take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come and join us!Thank you!精讲精练一、环境保护1最
25、近你班举行了一场关于“动物园里笼养动物好不好”的讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语将讨论的结果向某位中学生英语报投稿，并陈述你的观点（至少发挥一条）。注意：字数100左右。Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of college students have part-time jobs. During
26、 summer vacation, this figure will increase to 72 percent. College students are working as tutors, waiters or salesmen.Why do they want part-time jobs? First, they want to earn a little money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition. Second, they hope to be economically independent and
27、buy whatever they want.By doing part-time jobs, college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook. What is more, part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/ opportunity to know the out side world.2假如你是张华， 近日写信给某英文报的编辑，反映目前人们滥养宠物的问题，希望得到媒体的关注和支持。信的内容应包括以下要点：1.宠物过
28、多，噪音扰民； 2. 污染环境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤；4. 传播疾病。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.信的开头和署名已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear editor, Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they dont care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it. Yours faithfully, Zhang HuaDear editor, Nowada
29、ys some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they dont care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble re
30、sidents a lot. Whats more, its widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some disea
31、se and this has attracted much attention.Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it. Yours truly Zhanghua3最近，你是吴明，和笔友李华都很关注“可持续发展”的话题。现在你写一封信给他，谈谈江苏的省情，介绍耕地的使用及保护的情况。词数：150左右。信的开头号和结尾已经给出。必须包含以下要点：1、 江苏是我国经济发达的省份之一，位于我国的东部，人口多，占地少。人口：7000多万；土地面积：10多万平方公里。自然资源贫乏。2、 随着经济的发展和人口的增长，越来越多的良田被征用来建造住房和工厂。耕地面积逐年减少。3、 人
