1、3）洗澡间和厨房都很好。 the bathroom and the kitchen are good.b. the bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.在表达要点时，b句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。二、结构造句与众不同在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。1）唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。 there was
2、a strong earthquake in tangshan in the 1980s.b: a terrible earthquake hit/struck tangshan in the 1980s.大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是b句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。2）你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。i received your letter which was written on august 15th this morning.（多数人使用的方式）b:
3、your letter of august 15th reached/ got to me this morning.（与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁）2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：3）阿福救了我妹妹。 ah fu saved my sister.（一般句式）b: it was ah fu that saved my sister.（强调句式）4）我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。 we were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.（一般陈述句）b: how glad we were to se
4、e crops and vegetables growing well.（感叹句）3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中a句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而b句就有自己的特色（请同学们自己分析）。5）这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。 its a flat of 25 square metres. there is a bedroom in th
5、e flat. there is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. in the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.b: its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.三、布局谋篇独具匠心在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各
6、要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，nmet2002范文堪称典范。请看：opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. they believe a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees w
7、ill no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. the
8、y suggested, however, fees should be charged low.1）该文使用opinions are divided.作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句（见黑体字部分），使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。2）在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：they suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。3）范文使用了and, what is more, however等连
9、词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand（说明前后两个观点是相悖的），这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。4）范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。初中英语作文写作方法：一、掌握常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词at first;
10、at last; in the endthen / next/ after thatwhen / while/as soon as/not untilat the same time; at times; once in a while;so thatto ones surprise/joyluckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyin a word/in all议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also;表示递进的：besides; whats more; whats w
11、orse; （moreover）;表示原因的：because; for; because of; thanks to; （for the reason that）;表示结果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore;表示目的的：so that; in order that; （in order） to;表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;表示转折的：however; but;表示举例的
12、：for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last;表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb. benefit from sth. affect; have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱
13、的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;表达个人想法的：i think/believe; （as） for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally;其他：in general; generally speaking; to be s
14、hort; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way;二、记住作文万能句式i will work hard to make my dream come true.i hope your dream will come true one day.it takes sb. +时间+to dosb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ （in） doing sth.its important/necessary/useful/useless/common（for s
15、b.） to vits nice/kind of sb. to v.its time for sb. to do sth.its a waste of time toits years/days since sb. +vedits great fun to do=sb. have great fun doingits a pity thatits an honor toim/were not allowed to im afraid of making mistakesthere be doinggreat changes have taken place insth is/are well
16、worth v-ing.it seems/seemed thatit seems （im）possible to vit is said thatas the saying goes, and . are different in many ways.too + adj./adv. to dothere are many differences between and i have made up my mind to i am sure thati am not sure whether/ifi would rather . than it doesnt matter ifthank you
17、 for v-ing.if everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.have/look for a chance to dodo outdoor activitiesbe/get used to （doing） sth.learnfrombe proud of/ take pride inplay an important/active part/role inagree with sb. to do sth.with the help
18、of sb.=with ones help（反义：without ones help）be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth.pay attention totake good care of make friends withget on/along well with wish you successful/successas time goes bygraduate fromlooking back to the past three years,（用现在完成时态）pass the （final） examstick to doing
19、keep you mind on your goalsmake up ones mind to do sth. （on sth.）make a decision to dowork hard at englishonce in a while/ at times/ now and thenfrom then onin the future（将来）/ in future（从今以后）increase our knowledgein fact/as a matter of factin the beginning/ at firstfeel like giving uphave trouble/di
20、fficulty in （doing） sth.have （no） time to dohave experience in （doing） sth.follow ones advice/suggestionsmaster some basic skillsbe required to doask sb. for helpcant wait to dobe supposed to doencourage sb. to dodeal/do with work out/solve the problemsall sorts/kinds ofat home and abroadone of be f
21、ull oflearn sth. by oneselfcome up with good ideasbe surprised at sth.（to do sth.）in order tokeep healthy/fita good way to vkeep （on） tryingworry about/ be worried aboutin ones spare/free timebe kind/friendly tobe strict withhelp otherssay thank you tohave fun/enjoy oneself/have a good timeplenty of
22、 +c/uworry about/be worried aboutask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for helpbe popular withshare sth. with sb.know little/much about 作文万能短语do/try ones best to vbe/feel sorry forhelp sb. （to） do sth./ with sth.in/during classbefore/after classteach sb. to do sth.wish you successful/succe
23、ssas time goes bygraduate fromlooking back to the past three years,（用现在完成时态）pass the （final） examstick to doingkeep you mind on your goalsmake up ones mind to do sth. （on sth.）make a decision to dowork hard at englishonce in a while/ at times/ now and thenfrom then onin the future（将来）/ in future（从今以
24、后）increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabularyin fact/as a matter of factin the beginning/ at firstfeel like giving uphave trouble/difficulty in （doing） sth.have （no） time to dohave experience in （doing） sth.follow ones advice/suggestionsmaster some basic skillsbe required to doask sb. for helpcan
25、t wait to dobe supposed to doencourage sb. to dodeal/do with work out/solve the problemsall sorts/kinds ofat home and abroadone of be full oflearn sth. by oneselfcome up with good ideasbe surprised at sth.（to do sth.）in order tokeep healthy/fita good way to vkeep （on） tryingworry about/ be worried a
26、boutin ones spare/free timebe kind/friendly tobe strict withhelp otherssay thank you tohave fun/enjoy oneself/have a good timeplenty of +c/uworry about/be worried aboutask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for helpbe popular withshare sth. with sb.know little/much about do/try ones best to
27、 vbe/feel sorry forhelp sb. （to） do sth./ with sth.in/during classbefore/after classteach sb. to do sth.三、熟悉写作步骤：1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节;2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容;3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点;4 复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题;2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称;三思：词汇短语句式;三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）
28、综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题;（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3 个方面，每个方面最多2句话;（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。四、学会列作文提纲：例一：利弊型作文microblog的利与弊para1: （综述）with the development of internet more and more popularpara2: （利）first, convenient, anywhere, any time; second, share with; last, express views free, money-freepara3: （弊）ho
29、wever, one coin has two faces. on the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; on the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelingspara4: （个人）as a student, make good use of it.例二：计划安排型作文谈假期安排para1: （综述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holidaypara2: （正文）firstly, study comes first. make prepa
30、rations for the first senior year; secondly, visit tourist attractions; last but not least, do sports to build up my body.para3: i am sure ill have a meaningful holiday. （im looking forward to the coming holiday.） （i cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.）例三：图表、数字比例型作文（提出讨论或调查的事实）last week, our class had a class meeting on （how to） here are the results.（表达出不同看法或观点）most students think while 20% of them choose to. another 15 believe there are also some saying that （表达个人看法） as a student, i ag
