1、徐州书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析徐州书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents48.1%8
2、9%Kids think their parents understand them61%81.4%Kids have different ideas from their parents82.1%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because ofSchoolwork （65.4%）Pocket money （20%）注意事项：1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。【答案】How
3、 to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Heres my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far
4、fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and
5、 worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以How to get along well with parents为题，就中国青少年研究中心（CYC
6、RC）近日对中美两国亲子关系问卷调查的结果进行介绍，并结合自己的实际经历，发表自己的感谢。写作前，应仔细审题，观察所给表格，弄清楚表格中每一项的内容以及它的意义。然后结合自己的实际情况，对如何与父母良好相处，发表自己的看法。短文应主要以一般现在时为主，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。写作时应注意：内容应密切结合表格中所给的数据以及自己的实际经历，有叙述，有议论。合理安排各部分内容之间的关系，注意分清结构，表达要有条理。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语式思维逐词翻译，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用适当的单词、短语和句型表达。句式结构要完整，可以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句和复合句以及其他
7、复杂句式。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Heres my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，
8、所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、
9、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。2（河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
10、要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Es
11、pecially when making fried eggs, I couldnt control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didnt give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very p
12、roud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语
13、从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。结构清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓
14、语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldnt control the temperature of oil and got several egg
15、s burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。3（浙江中考模拟）书面表达61.针对运用微信投票越来越流行的现象，英语俱乐部就“是否愿意为别人投票选举”这一话题展开来讨论。请你根据提示，以“ I _ （am/am not） willing to vote for others” 为题写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，选择你认同的一种观点，并阐述自己的理由。Be willing to vote for othersBe not willing to vote for others投票方式有趣，
16、方便，免费可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜欢的人投票方式不公平浪费时间，无聊注意：1. 根据你认同的方式，将标题补充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相应内容，省略号内容必须补充完整2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，词数：80-1003. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。I _ willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people havedifferent ideas. _【答案】I am willing to vote for
17、 othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if
18、we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. Whats more, its a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.In a word, I think its a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.【解析】【详解】本篇是一篇议论文，首先要要题目补充完整，说明自己的观点是赞成还是反对。文章分为三步走：
19、第一段摆出自己的观点；接下来第二段陈述自己的观点，即说明自己的理由；最后一段对自己的观点进行总结。本篇文章观点明确，在陈述自己观点时，用到BesidesWhats more.等使文章很条理性和连贯性。最后In a word, I think.对自己观点进行最后总结。非常好的一篇文章。4（江西中考模拟）健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。同样，对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。提示：1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处；2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现；3. 对养成好的学习习惯
20、的建议（至少提三条建议）。要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以，适当发挥；2. 90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but its not easy._【答案】How to Develop Good Study HabitsEvery student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. Howe
21、ver, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you arent feeling sleepy
22、. Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, youd better ask for help when having trouble studying.Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then youll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。【详解】考生要根据提示的3点进行发挥
23、。在内容方面，首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处，也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯；其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯；最后提出自己对养成好的学习习惯的建议；在语言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，简洁无错；在规范方面，注意单词拼写，标点防护好的正确使用。5（山东中考模拟）写作现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a
24、difference,environment,suggest,reuse_【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think
25、 its my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And wed better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will
26、 be a better place【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通
27、顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合
28、理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。6（广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。观点理由一些学生有必要1. 培养兴趣, 并获得更多的知识；2. 提高生活技能另一些学生没有必要1. 浪费时间，对学习没有帮助； 2. 给学生带来很多压力你提示语：develop ones interests; get more knowledge; improve ones life skills; a wasteof time; cause a lot of stress要求：1. 短文应包
