1、英语 初中英语书面表达试题有答案和解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（江苏中考模拟）书面表达。为了创建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。倡导低碳骑自行车或步行上学，注意节约保护环境爱护花草，不乱扔垃圾 礼貌待人常说“谢谢”、“ 对不起”、“ 请”等礼貌语言帮助他人助人为乐，积极参加志愿者活动要求： 1.词数100个左右。2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。In order to build a
2、civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a low-carbon life. _. Second,_.Third,_.Finally,_.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well i
3、n our daily life.First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. Wed better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldnt buy anything we dont need.Second
4、，its our duty to protect the environment. We mustnt throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，its necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. Im sorry and Please” as often as possible.Fina
5、lly, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. Its important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写出中学生应从表格中的几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。
6、根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote to , learn from 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中使用了固定句型Its +形容词+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定
7、语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。2（陕西师大附中中考模拟）随着中考的临近，初三同学感到压力很大， 有些人由于学习方法不当，盲目刷题或连 续熬夜，导致上课时精力不足，考试成绩越发不理想。结合上述情况，请以 How to improve our study 为题写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们提出建议。写作要点：1.课前预习，课堂认真听讲，做好笔记，课后按时完成作业。2.制定学习计划，合理安排时间。3. 写作要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥。3.文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等；4.不少于 70 词，开头给出，但不计
8、入总词数。How to improve our studyDear friends，Im very sorry to hear that most of us have great pressure in study and dont perform well in the exams._Heres my advice. Thanks for your listening!【答案】How to improve our studyAs middle school students, it is important for us to improve our study. What should
9、we do to improve our study?First of all, we should get ready for new lessons before class. Whats more, we must listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. Besides, it is necessary for us to finish our homework on time after class. Last but not least, try to make study plans for ourselv
10、es and make good use of our time. Only by doing these simple things can we improve our study.【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，要表达如何提高我们的学习。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is adj for sb to do, on time, make good use of以及first of all, whats mor
11、e, besides和last but not least。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句
12、子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。3（陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达生活中总有一些事情让人觉得无奈，被人误解、考试失利、遭遇逆境等。请以“There is always hope ”为题，写一篇你的亲身经历及感受。 Whats your feeling? What did you learn from it?提示：词数不少于70词 可适当添加细节使行文更加流畅 文中请勿提及真实的姓名和校名。_【答案】There is always hopeAs
13、 middle school students, we have all taken many examinations and experienced failure as well as success. Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams.Some of us become low in spirits in the face of failure. Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they dont wan
14、t to make further efforts in their studies. As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on.Fortunately, I got the helps of my teachers. They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to become more confident so that I wont repeat the mistakes in my la
15、ter examinations.I believe there is always hope. So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as middle school students，as well as，in the exams，some of，l
16、ow in spirits，want to do，make further efforts，as a result，go on，spare no effort to do，so that，so long as，find out，make great progress，turn into等。Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they dont want to make further efforts in their studies. / They spared no effort to analyze the reasons
17、 for the failure and encouraged me to become more confident so that I wont repeat the mistakes in my later examinations./ So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，
18、使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4（陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：
19、1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款2. 时间：10月23日，星期六3. 路径： 学校市中心4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹的善款5万多元。5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为.注意：1. 报道必须把包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3. 词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）Walk for children in poor areasNot long ago, our school organized a charit
20、y walk to raise money for children in poor areas._【答案】It was on Saturday, 23rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard （tough） work. But during the walk, we supported and helped
21、 each other. With the help of many people, we raised over （more than） 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it wasan excellent chance to learn team spirit.【解析】【详解】本篇文章属于报道类，时态应该用一般过去式为主。重点词汇：（1）walk from to从步行到；（2）With the help
22、of many people在许多人的帮助下； （3）over （more than）超过；（4）in the end在最后；（5）raise money筹款。重点句型：Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. 步行之前，我们把自己分成四组，并计划好一切。Groupinto.把划分。Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
23、因为这是一次有意义的经历，也是学习团队精神的好机会。a meaningful experience一次有意义的经历；an excellent chance极好的机会。5（江苏中考模拟）写作81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。提示：1）Whats the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examp
24、les）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Its spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think its great to get close to nature. 【答案】Its spr
25、ing now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think its a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.There are many different ways w
26、e can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When youre outside, its better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻
