1、考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子汇总之考研英语看图作文范例点评拔苗助长等10个话题含中文对照考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子篇一：考研英语看图作文范例点评拔苗助长中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。拔苗助长者改为“, which is generally”)read by adults.the(首字母大写) drawer aims to reveal a symbolic meaning that parents should cultivate children according to his(改为their) aptitude,inst
2、ead of blind notion of education.In contemporary society,the number of students who suffer from cram school(改为schools) and the pressure of their parents(句子层次混乱，建议加“, which改为定语从句”)has increased at an alarming rate.Careful deliberation of this phenomenon has illustrated me on why this should be so(表达不
3、准确，改为There are numerous reasons why exists this phenomenon, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here).Fierce competition,in the first place,constitues(拼写错误，改为consists) one of the primary reasons.According to a recent survey made by sina,there are one million students choose to
4、pursue a master degree after graduation.Attending cram school(改为schools) will lay a foundation for future development.Convergent thinking existing in the society is also the breeding ground for this trend.This undesirable general mood of society will eventually result(改为results) in being devoid of i
5、nnovation.If there is no compelling interference to revease(拼写错误，改为reverse) this trend,our country is bound to be influenced adversely.To be specific,It(小写) will lack innovative talent,be short of the motion to accelerate,(改为be short of the motivation to promote the development of economy)and ultima
6、tely be detrimental to building up a suststainable(拼写错误，改为sustainable)development society.In terms of my personal experience,It(小写)is urgent and imperative to take counter measures.For one thing, the public media should advocate and propagandize the notion of divergent thinking,which will be conduci
7、ve to ones personal growth and core competitive power.For another,students should foster a desirable life philosophy.If we can implement as the above mentioned,the promising future can be well guaranteed.总体点评的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，加强句子成分的分析。写完之后定要认真检查，减少失分点。参考分数(满分20分)12和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。篇二：考研英语看
8、图作文范例点评手机依赖症中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。手机依赖症What a thought-provoking picture. (!)In the picture, although setting(sitting) on(改为around，用on意为“坐在桌子”) the same table for dinner, people are completely absorbed in their mobile phones, and they are communicating with others through QQ, pl
9、aying games and purchasing in the online shop(汉式思维，改为shopping online).Undoubtedly, the drawer(painter，drawer是“抽屉”) of the cartoon reveals a common phenomenon that mobile phones in our life is becoming so important that people generate the increasingly serious emotions of dependence on it. (首先，可以直接用t
10、he cartoon reveals;其次，so important that后面的句子语法错误，语句不通。可改为the cartoon reveals a common phenomenon that mobile phones are playing a more and more important role that people cant live without them.)Various reasons result in the problem. On one hand, with the Price of cell phones declining(语序错误，with the
11、 declining of cell phones price), the majority of people have (加the) ability to purchase mobiles phones. For example, everyone in China possess(单三，加es)a phone. On the other hand, with the development of technology, the function of mobile phone is becoming very strong(中式思维，改为powerful), and more and m
12、ore people are fascinated with its diversion(应为“消遣功能”，加function) .And above all, modern people are always too boring and exhausted, and they need somethings(something)such as cell phones to relieve pressure. Ultimately, many people are becoming salves(slaves，salve是“药膏”) of phones.In my opinion, mobi
13、le phones are making people in hazard(用在这里不合适，夸大了手机对人们造成的影响。可改为mobile phones are harmful to people in some respects). People always waste lots of time on mobile phones, which can not only impact the health of people but also make people ignore the real reality. Therefore, people must learn to develo
14、p the awareness of using mobiles properly.总体点评章有的地方是中式思维，不够地道，如“sit on the table”，需多背诵模仿些经典佳句，使表达更加精准。参考分数(满分20分)11和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。篇三：考研英语看图作文范例点评本分变“承诺”中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。本分变承诺者这句话是要表达什么内容?)Simple as the drawing is, the symbolic meaning behind ti(改为it) is as deep as ocean(注
15、意句末标点)Honesty is not only necessary, but also indepensible(拼写错误，改为indispensable).As the old Chinese proverb says:Honesty is gold. However,in no country other than China, it has been said that, the problum(拼写错误，改为problem) of opposite the pormise(拼写错误，改为promise) more serious(句子逻辑关系不明确，改为the opposite o
16、f the original promise is more serious),and people fail to attach attention to the gold. Individuals and organizations can make money, take porfits(拼写错误，改为profits) and even obtain wealth by attend promise.To be honest can also have added (改为add) benefit of increasing ones knowledge, giving us a new
17、perspective of outside world. According to a survey conducted by China Acadmy(拼写错误，改为Academy)of Science(CAS),honesty can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problums(拼写错误，改为problems)as depression, stress, isolation and solitude(注意句末标点)All in all,obtain(改为obtaining，句话中只能有个谓语动词)the pro
18、mise plays a key role in our daily life.The unhonest(改为dishonest，表示“不诚实的”，没有unhonest词), in view of the complexity of such issue,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally.with(首字母大写) a proper law, an up-to-date solution, a right perspective and alert public,it will be a matter of time bef
19、ore the problum(拼写错误，改为problem) becomes things of the past.(最后段缺乏逻辑关系，建议重写)总体点评章。参考分数(满分20分)11和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。篇四：考研英语看图作文范例点评志愿者中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。志愿者宾语，而sportive为adj.，表示“运动的”).Simple as it is,the picture reveals an exciting phenomenon that more and more people are willing t
20、o be volunteers. As the society developments(改为develops，此处应该使用动词形式), our material comforts are considerably enhanced, thus, we are capable of the time and energy to help others. At the same time, with(去掉，若使用with，句子则无主语) the moral climate is getting better, which is under everybodys efforts,(加and，两个句
21、子之间应该用连词连接)the members of these volunteering organizations are mostly never asking for any rewards either on fame or money,so that the organizations can survive easily. It is hopeful that we will enjoy a more harmony(改为harmonious，more后面应该跟形容词，且后面的society为名词，应该用形容词修饰) society in the future,if the thi
22、ngs develope like this.Therefore,when we are eager to show our kindness,it is really necessary to keep our mind clear. For one thing, one should never give up once he begins to be a volunteer. For another,volunteer work is also a (去掉a，responsibility为抽象名词，不能用不定冠词修饰，)responsiblity(拼写错误，改为responsibilit
23、y) (建议改为volunteer work also needs responsibility), just as our normal work, so do try our best.总体点评水平不断提升。参考分数(满分20分)12和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。篇五：考研英语看图作文范例点评山寨文化中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。化为“首先，其次，”解释时，前面不加定冠词) first ,was(句子无主语，改为it is) the low moral consciousness of business and producter
24、 (汉语式英语，改为that businessmen and producers have low moral consciousness),(加连词and,两个句子之间应该用连词连接)they want noting except(改为but，nothing but为固定用法) money that careless(可改为needless to say) consumers. the(去掉the)second, from consumers(改为consumers) options, they choice(改为动词形式choose) the low price something(改为t
25、hings) compare with high price(可改为they would like choose the low price things rather than choose high price things), and the most of copycating(拼写错误，改为copycatting, 后加products) attract consumers by low price .the (去掉the) last as supervision department(加逗号，然后加主语they) didnt enhance supervise.In my opin
26、ion there are some ways that defending (改为to defend)the phenomenon of copycating (拼写错误，改为copycatting),primary (改为Primarily,) is(去掉) as consumers we are dong (改为should not)buy the copycating(拼写错误，改为copycatting),the (去掉the)second ,surpervision(拼写错误，改为supervision) department take serious methods attack
27、(改为to against) copycating(拼写错误，改为copycatting,再加products) producters(删掉) good people do noting that like help bed tings so we all should join in the campaign that defend copycating(拼写错误，改为copycatting) (整句话改为and we should make joint efforts to boycott copycatting products)总体点评章。参考分数(满分20分)9和点评，希望大家有思考
28、，有提高篇六：考研英语看图作文范例点评招聘条件中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。招聘条件者的写法，应该在failed之前加but，用来连接两个简单句，且将failed改为fail) as a consequence of inadequate height.The clear message is that we should get moving to launch a war against those irresponsible companies. Just as rejecting those duty-shrinking cor
29、porations, making complaint to administrator as long as we meet this situation.(整句话没有谓语动词，且administrator使用不当，本句话可改为To reject the duty-shrinking corporations, we should report the situation to the relevant authorities) More significantly, the authorities should charge with the obligation of laying do
30、wn associate-effective discipline which seems appropriate in the light of current situation. By these methods, we will surely get through this tough period before long.总体点评即可。其余时间可强化自己的基础知识，锻炼自己的语言组织能力。参考分数(满分20分)12和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。篇七：考研英语作文万能模板些外国留学生将要来你的大学，以学生会的名义给他们写封email,1表示你的欢迎2为他们在这里的校园生活提供些建议
31、请写100个字左右，请不要在信的末尾写你的名字，用笔名代替，不要写地址。Dear students,First of all, allow me, on behalf of the leaders of our school teachers and students are warmly welcome to come to you, welcome to our school and life.Campus life is different in different countries, in order to make your life more comfortable, the f
32、ollowing I will describe some of the proposals in my school life.First of all, cannot call the teachers name in China, because China is a ritual of ceremony, Chinese used to call the expression of respect for teachers.Secondly, I hope you cherish the time studying in China, take the initiative to increase opportunities for interaction with Chinese people, so that both can improve your Chinese language level, can understand Chinese culture.Finally, if you encounter difficulty in living and learning, to communicate with us in a timely manner.Wishes you to study
