1、What makes a good passage尉惠玲WhatWhat makes a good passage?1.Beautiful handwriting2.Beautiful language(correct spelling,grammar and punctuation)3.Usage of complicated or advanced words and sentence patterns1.4.Well-organized structure of an article(Including all the points required)5.Usage of connect
2、ing words,such as adverbs,or conjunctions 外在美一篇优秀的书面表达首先是一件艺术品。书写清楚，字母大小匀称，单词间距适当，使人赏心悦目。词汇美Group11.Theworkishard/difficultforus.Theworkchallengesus.2.In 2015 China made great contributions to protecting the environment.2015 saw/witnessed Chinas great contributions to protecting the environment.3.Ih
3、avenomoney(cantafford)tobuyit.4.Finallyhesaw(caughtsightof)theyoungmanslightovercoatinthedistance.5.Wehadbetteruse(makeuseof)somethinginexpensive.6.Theproductsareverygood(ofhighquality)andaresoldeverywhereinChina.7.Wealllivein(share)oneandthesameplanet.8.Wecanlookat(view)theprobleminmanyways.9.Jacki
4、sveryclever.Heoftenthinksof(comesupwith/putforward)newideas.Group21.Asastudent,Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.2.Theactivity,whichisintendedtopromotefriendshipandencourageeconomy,ishighlypraisedandsupportedbytheteachersandstudentsinourschool.3.Thestrongwindblewandtheyell
5、owleavesfellonthegroundhereandthere.4.BothyouandIhavechangedalotinthepast20years.5.Thesituationlookeddesperate,buttheydidntgiveuphope.6.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhopetomakeimprovementsintheoperatingsystem.7.Shoulditraintomorrow,wewouldntgoswimmingintheriver.8.Itwaswhattheheadmastersaidatthemeetingthatreall
6、ysurprisedus.9.Anawfulaccidentdid,however,occurtheotherday.10.Sheisunwillingtotellmewhatitisthatistroublingher.11.Thefootballmatch(being)over,crowdsofpeoplepouredouttothestreet.12.Allthepeopleinvitedtothepartyareyoungscientists13.IdpreferitifIdidnthavetodosomuchwork.14.Ithinkitshightimethatshemadeup
7、hermind.1.What do you think of Beijing?How does Beijing strike/impress you？2.Otherwise,your efforts will have no results Otherwise,your efforts will make no sense.3.While crossing the road,you must be careful.While crossing the road,you cant be too careful.4.After many attempts,the plane took offAft
8、er many attempts,the plane managed to take off.句式美5.Never does he speak Never does he speak about his own family.6.Last year the factory produced twice as many cars as it diddid the year before.7.Some students thinkwhile others arguesothers argues8.Rome was not built in one dayRome was not built in
9、one day.9.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boyAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.10.He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man.He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man.Group 21.Jim didnt pass the exam.It surprised everybody.Jim didnt pass the exam,which surprised
10、everybody.What surprised everybody was that Jim didnt pass the exam.It was surprising that Jim didnt pass the exam.2.She was very happy and she began to prepare for the trip.She was so happy that she began to prepare for the trip.3.He tried very hard but he couldnt open the door.Try as he might,he c
11、ouldnt open the door.4.Kangjie Middle School was founded in 1945 and its well-known in Shanxi Province,even in China.Founded in 1945,Kangjie Middle School is well-known in Shanxi Province,even in China.5.I hurried to the station but they told me the train had left.I hurried to the station only to be
12、 told the train had left.6.If weather permits,we will have a picnic.Weather permitting,we will have a picnic.7.We returned home ,we were tired but were also happy We returned home ,tired but happy.8.Because many eyes were fixed on me,I was nervous.With many eyes fixed on me,I was nervous.9.We were g
13、lad to see crops and vegetables growing well.How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!10.We didnt find the correct way until dark.It was not until dark that we found the correct way.Not until dark did we find the correct way.11.When we climbed towards the top,we found the view more
14、wonderful.The higher we climbed the mountain,the more wonderful the view was.结构美合理的段落层次，条理清晰1.开头引人入胜。2.中间内容充实饱满。3.结尾干净利落。假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：1.表示赞成。2.提出你喜欢的栏目。3.简要说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右。2.新的开头和结尾已为你写好。3.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.参考栏目：栏目columnDearMr.Green,Iamveryexcite
15、dtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazinetogether.Thatsoundsgreat!AndIdefinitelyagreewithyouonthat.Someofthecolumnswhichyoumentionedintheletterarereallymycupoftea.Say,“cultureexpress”givesusabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldhavedifferentvalues,itsnecessarytolearnfrom
16、eachother.Thiswillofferawonderfulchance.Apartfromthat,“blurtout”isprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimproveoralEnglish.Lastbutnotleast,“entertainment”issocool!Thepopularsingers,actorsandcelebritiesaresocatchyandattractivethatyouabsolutelycantmissit!Teenagersarejustfondofthetrendythi
17、ngs.Well,Icantlistmore.Ireallycantwaittoreadthatmagazine!Yoursfaithfully,LiHua衔接美作文中的连贯表达作文中的连贯表达Make Coherence引出话题tobeginwithtostartwithgenerallyspeakingasweallknowasisknownasaruleinonesopinionitisknowntoallthat.asthesayinggoes补充说明补充说明 whats more,besides,moreover,furthermore,also,in addition,in add
18、ition to,apart from as well as,similarly表示转折意义表示转折意义 but,however,yet,instead,instead of,rather than on the contrary,in contrast nevertheless,otherwise,though,although,despite,in spite of even if/though,except for/that,after all while,whereas陈述个人观点inmyviewinmyopinionpersonallyasforme,astomeasfarasImc
19、oncernedasfarasIknow 表表示因果关系：示因果关系：因为，因此，因为，因此，所以所以since as so thus because(of)therefore,consequently as a result(of),as a consequence so that,so that,such,that due to,thanks to 表表示条件关系：示条件关系：如果，只要如果，只要 if,unless as/so long as on condition that suppose/supposing that providing/provided that 表示时间关系：当
20、表示时间关系：当时候，不久，自从，等等时候，不久，自从，等等 when while after before until as soon as later afterwards soon lately recently since from then on from now on immediately instantly the moment/the minute no sooner.than/hardly.when it 时间段时间段.since/before 表表示特定的顺序示特定的顺序关系关系above all first of all firstly(first)second(sec
21、ondly)next then in the end finally lastly last but not least on(the)one hand on the other hand for one thing for another 表示举例、表示举例、说明说明for example for instance takefor example like such as in other words,that is to say 用于陈述和强调事实用于陈述和强调事实：实：实际上，跟你说际上，跟你说实话实话actually as a matter of fact to tell you th
22、e truth in reality in fact ;in deed in particular,especially namely 表表并列关系并列关系 or,and,also,too,as well not only but also,as well as both and,either or,neither nor表比较表比较similarly,be similar to in contrast,compared with/to just like,just as in the same way the same as 表目的表目的 for this reason,for this p
23、urpose,so that,in order to/that so as to表示情感态度toonesamusement/annoyance/astonishment/relief/disappointment/displeasure/happiness/horror/joy/puzzlement/regret/sorrow/surprise/satisfaction表示强调indeed,aboveall,especially,themostimportantofall,certainly,infact,surely,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,atleast
24、,obviously,atthemost,motatall,whatonearth/intheworld,afterall,makesure,whateverthecost 表表总结、总结、归纳归纳in a word,in short,in brief in conclusion,all in all,on the whole generally speaking,in my opinion,as far as I know,as we all know,to sum up in summary practice根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。1.你
25、给了我许多帮助，也给了我许多鼓舞。总之，没有你我不能成功。Yougavememuchhelpandencouragement._,Icouldnthavesucceededwithoutyou.In a word 2.总的说来，你的回答不太令人满意。总的说来，你的回答不太令人满意。_ _ _,your answer is not so satisfying.3.一般说来物理比数学难学得多。一般说来物理比数学难学得多。_ _,physics is much more difficult than mathematics.All in all Generally speaking 4.令我满意的是
26、，他数学考试得了满分。令我满意的是，他数学考试得了满分。_ _ _,he got full marks in the mathematics exam.5.这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。This bike is really very beautiful._,I have no money to buy it.To my satisfaction Nevertheless 6.令我高兴的是，我终于说服她改变了主意。_.Ifinallypersuadedhertochangehermind.7.一开始他反对我的计划一开始他反对我的计划,但最后他支持我的计
27、划了。但最后他支持我的计划了。At first he was against my plan,but _ _ _ he was for it.To my joyin the end8.I do not trust them._,they are lazy,_ they are unreliable.我不相信他们我不相信他们,一方面是他们懒惰，另一方面是他们不可信。一方面是他们懒惰，另一方面是他们不可信。9.Certain textbooks are in short supply;_ French dictionaries are urgently needed.某些教科书供应缺乏，尤其是法语
28、某些教科书供应缺乏，尤其是法语词典。词典。10.I dont want to see him again,hes got no manner and doesnt know how to dress properly._ _ ,my mother doesnt like him!我不想再见到他，他没风度，不知怎么得体着装。再有就是我妈我不想再见到他，他没风度，不知怎么得体着装。再有就是我妈也不喜欢他！也不喜欢他！For one thingfor another in particularWhats more11.Mike is hardworking,cheerful,and _ honest
29、.Mike勤勤奋，活泼，最重要的是忠实。奋，活泼，最重要的是忠实。12.They told me it would be cheap but _ it cost me nearly$500.他他们告诉我这便宜，但事实上它花了我们告诉我这便宜，但事实上它花了我500500美金。美金。above all in fact13.Mary is looking after her sisters children _ her own.玛丽在照看她妹妹的孩子，也照看他自己的孩子。玛丽在照看她妹妹的孩子，也照看他自己的孩子。14.The plan is not well-designed,_,it woul
30、d have been too expensive.这个计划设计的不好，再说花费也太大。这个计划设计的不好，再说花费也太大。15.Id like to eat out,but _ I should be trying to save money.我也喜欢出去就餐，可是另一方面我还得设法省我也喜欢出去就餐，可是另一方面我还得设法省钱哪。钱哪。in addition tomoreoveron the other hand16.The London Marathon is a difficult race._,thousands of runners participate every year.伦
31、敦马拉伦敦马拉松是一种艰难的长跑竞赛，然而每年有成千上万的选手参松是一种艰难的长跑竞赛，然而每年有成千上万的选手参加。加。17.My remark was intended to comfort her but _ it upset her even more.我的话就是想安慰她，结果反而更让她不安了。我的话就是想安慰她，结果反而更让她不安了。18.It wasnt a good thing;_ it was a huge mistake.这不是什么好事，相反是大错。这不是什么好事，相反是大错。insteadon the contraryNevertheless行文逻辑训练行文逻辑训练阅读短文
32、，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空。first,whats worse,in my opinion,besides,now_1_manymiddleschoolstudentsarefatandtherearereasonsforit.Someeattoomuchmeatandtoomanysnacks.Somesittoolongbutseldomexercise.Gettingfathasquiteafewdisadvantages._2_,beingfatmakesitdifficultforonetowalkormoveasothers.Now First _3_,tobefatusually
33、meanstobeweak,anditiseasyforafatpersontosufferfrommanykindsofdiseases.Atthesametime.Afatpersongetstiredeasily,whichdecreaseshisstudyefficiency._4_,tobefatisnotagoodthingforusmiddlestudents.Weshouldtrytoeatlessmeatbutmorevegetables._5_weshouldtryourbesttotakepartinallkindsofsports.Ifso,wearesuretoloseweightandstayhealthy.Whats more In my opinion Besides RewriteI will tell you the change of my life.
