1、集训11 购物类活动解析版高考英语一轮复习题型集训之话题写作2021年高考英语题型集训之话题写作11购物类活动1.假定你是李华, 你在国外某网上书店购买了一本英文原版小说Gone with the Wind, 货到后你发现了一些问题。请用英文给该书店写信, 内容包括：1. 包装不完善导致封面有破损和污渍, 书有缺页；2. 要求调换新书, 尽快发货。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；3. 信的格式已给出, 不计入总词数。【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I purchased a book Gone with the Wind in your onli
2、ne bookshop for its convenience and goods service. I was very glad to receive it yesterday. However, when I opened the package, I was sorry to find something wrong with it.Firstly, the cover of the novel is broken and there are some dirty spots on it due to the poor packaging. In addition, some page
3、s are missing, which makes it impossible to read.I would like you to change it for a new one and post it to me as soon as possible. Please do check the book and be careful with the packaging before hand this time. I hope you can live up to the expectations of your customers.Looking forward to your e
4、arly reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某网上书店写一封信，告知购买的书的问题及要求换新书。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍背景 2.介绍相关情况 1）书的质量问题。（something wrong with the book） 2）要求调换新书。（to change it for a new book） 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be glad to; due to; would like s
5、b to do; as soon as possible; be careful with; live up to; look forward to 第三步：连词成句1. I was very glad to receive it yesterday. 2. I would like you to change it for a new one and post it to me as soon as possible.3. Please do check the book and be careful with the packaging before hand this time.4. I
6、 hope you can live up to the expectations of your customers.5.Looking forward to your early reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In additio
7、n As well as, not onlybut (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容
8、完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：In addition, some pages are missing, which makes it impossible to read.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如due to; live up to; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2.假定你是李华，三个周前你从网上订购了两条裤子，今天才到货，且包装破损，尺码不符。
9、 请就此事向网店客服写邮件投诉，要点如下：1.介绍购物情况；2. 反映存在问题；3. 提出解决方案。注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,_Looking forward to your reply.You,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am one of your customers. I ordered two pairs of trousers on your website three weeks ago, but I didnt receive them until t
10、oday. To my great disappointment, the trousers were so poorly packed up that the cover of them was torn. Whats worse, they are of the wrong size.I am terribly sorry to have received such poor service, and I, therefore, ask you to deal with this problem as soon as possible. I hope that you either ret
11、urn my money or deliver new ones to me. In addition, rd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，三个周前你从网上订购了两条裤子，今天才到货，且包装破损，尺码不符。 请就此事向网店客服写邮件投诉，要点如下：1.介绍购物情况；2. 反映存在问题；3. 提出解决方案。第
12、2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：customer(顾客)；one of(之一)；trousers(裤子)；website(网站)；receive(收到)；to my great disappointment(令我大为失望的是)；poor service(差劲的服务)；deal with(处理)；as soon as possible(尽快)；eitheror(要么要么)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要
13、的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如To my great disappointment, the trousers were so poorly packed up that the cover of them was torn.运用so.that引导的结果状语从句；I hope that you either return my money or deliver new ones to me.运用that引导的宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩
14、。3.假定你是李华，你的好友Mike用花呗购物成瘾，购物金额常常超出其所能偿还的能力范围，这给他的生活和学习带来了困扰。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 过度消费的危害；2. 提出合理的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：蚂蚁花呗Ant Credit Pay_【答案】Dear Mike,Learning that recently youre bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Ant Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment,
15、Im writing to offer some suggestions.Honestly, I totally disapprove of overspending. Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus. If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.I sincerely h
16、ope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于表达建议的应用文，要求考生按提纲内容写一封不要过度消费的建议邮件。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 表达获悉你的现状：好友Mike用花呗购物成瘾，购物金额常常超出其所能偿还的能力范围，这给他的生活和学习带来了困扰。2. 表达过消费的危害。3. 表达你对此的看法及提出合
17、理的建议。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）Learning that；youre bothered by；the addiction；to purchasing with Ant Credit Pay；a heavy financial burden；in repayment；Im writing to；offer some suggestions；Honestly；totally disapprove of；overspending；Not only does it；drive us to buy；unnecessary things；but also distracts our attenti
18、on from study；your present focus；budget reasonably；devote myself to study；I sincerely hope；take my suggestions into careful consideration；Best wishes。 第三步：连词成句1.Learning that recently youre bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Ant Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, Im writ
19、ing to offer some suggestions.2.Honestly, I totally disapprove of overspending. 3.Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus. 4.If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.5.I sincerely
20、hope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration. 6.Best wishes!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlyb
21、ut (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，
22、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus. 这句话运用了not onlybut also引导的并列从句还使用了定语从句，如which should be your present focus. 另外使用了现在分词作状语后面又加上宾语从句，如开头第一句：Learning that recently youre
23、 bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Ant Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, Im writing to offer some suggestions.其中learning that是现在分词作状语，that后面引导的是宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如Learning that；youre bothered by；the addiction；to purchasing with Ant Credit Pay；a heavy financial burden；in r
24、epayment；offer some suggestions；disapprove of drive us to buy；unnecessary things；distracts our attention from study；your present focus；budget reasonably；devote myself to study；take my suggestions into careful consideration。等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4.假定你是李华，你九月三日从某
25、国外网店订购了10本书，到货后发现包裹中有9本书，且只有6本书是你订购的。请给该网站客服写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明情况；2.要求对方解决问题。注意：1.词数不少于100词；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,Im Li Hua. Im writing to you to complain about a problem with some books I ordered from your website.On 3rd Septembe
26、r, greatly delighted, I ordered ten books from your online store, hoping to read all the books within three months. However, hardly had I seen those books when disappointment quickly struck me because only nine books were lying in the parcel. In addition, what annoyed me more was that only six of th
27、em were what I had ordered while the other three were delivered here by mistake. Therefore, could you please arrange for the rest of my order to be sent to me as soon as possible? Otherwise, please give me a refund. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【
28、详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你九月三日从某国外网店订购了10本书，到货后发现包裹中有9本书，且只有6本书是你订购的。请给该网站客服写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明情况；2.要求对方解决问题。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：complain about (投诉)；website(网站)；delighted(高兴的)；online store(网上商店)；hope to do sth.(希望做某事)；disappointment(失望)；parcel(包裹)；In addition(另外)；by mistake(错误地)；arrange for(安排)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较
