1、英语中考英语书面表达及答案经典2020-2021年英语中考英语书面表达及答案经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。比例计划原因50% 去国内外旅游1.放松;2.欣赏美景30% 多读一些书1.增长知识；2.培养兴趣20% 参加社会实践1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友你的计划? （至少一个）？（请你补充）注意：（1）邮件应包含所有要点（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任
2、何个人信息，否则不予评分注：社会实践 social practice activitiesDear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today._Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half
3、 of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in so
4、cial practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. Im going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningfu
5、l summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.
6、和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2（题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，
7、它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） 3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all
8、of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them
9、by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. Whats more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.Im sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a mor
10、e comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，Id like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot
11、show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽
12、可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, devel
13、opYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid developmen
14、t of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, its necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldnt give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can gi
15、ve students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Lets call on
16、more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing，its necessary for schools to，we shouldnt，They can raise，it is of great importance to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代
17、词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of， in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4书面表达某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，不
18、必逐字逐句翻译。过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。.（适当发挥一至两点）现在环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人有自己的汽车；生活舒适。交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。将来希望（两点）要求：1. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot o
19、ver the years.In the past, _【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the poll
20、ution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country ev
21、ery year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题
22、目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章是按照时间的顺序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。文章中语言得体，
23、语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thou
24、sands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。5 书面表达共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势1.随处可见，出行方便2.有益健康，减少污染 3.费用不高，负担得起存在问题1.未及时归还2.占道挡路 你的观点我认为（考生自拟，至少2点）注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意
25、思连贯。2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用23句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They c
26、an be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people cant return shared
27、bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】这篇作文要求我们给21世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内
28、容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三
29、段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so littl
